Date: 17 Jul 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
Thanks for updating
Date: 17 Jul 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
LE SIGH!! ok .. so I read all the chaps in 1 day cuz I read the first chapter and got hooked. Teambella23 (mary) told me to read this a few months ago, and I finally got the chance... I wish I would have started earlier!!
Glad to hear that It will be wrapped up in a HEA bundle... :) I like those!
But I can't live without my angst!
love the story, love the chapter!
looking forward to the updates!
xo
jaime
Date: 16 Jul 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
Love this story
Date: 16 Jul 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
She can't leave Edwaaaaaaaard ;_;
Date: 16 Jul 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
How very new moon of them....he believed her lies so easily. And I don't blame her for wanting out...but why couldn't he come too! (I'm saying this in a very whiny voice that I hate myself for using) But as long as there is a HEA then I'm still with you:)
Date: 16 Jul 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
Welcome back! I thought already that you left us with a cliffie for good!
A little bit of angst? I think it was expectable. She is so exhausted emotionally! And Edward, poor lovesick Edward... and a lovefool! Men! Always prepared to believe in worst of their love!!!!!
Anyway, thanks for the chapter and I hope that you'll update soon (maybe the next hour or so)! :)
Date: 16 Jul 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
Wow... I never doubted Bella and deep down I think Edward might know she wasn't being honest but she definitely hit him with something that could have been a possibility before... I am glad she wants to fix herself and am hoping Edward doesn't revert back to old ways during this separation... either way I look forward to what you have planned next but am hoping that these two will take care of themselves so they can be better together!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
I swear this fic just owns me. every.word.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
Ok.. I think my heart has exploded.. Ugh. Too much to put into words. Damn. *sigh*
Date: 16 Jul 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
loved it hope edward goes after bella
Date: 16 Jul 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
Oh dear........... Bellaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! Edwarddddddddddddddddd!! ... I want to bang you both in the head!!! .... thanks for giving me peace saying you like HEA... I can't take anymore HF this week!! ... I was sooo happy to finally get an alert for the update!! ty!! Loved it!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
Every little girl needs to have a pillow that says, "I didn’t want to be saved. I wanted to save myself." And all Disney movies shouldn't be watched until later in life b/c they're effed up. :o)
Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
I am trusting you :) xoxo
Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
OMG! Bella is leaving.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
Well al least we know she didn't fuck james, even if she let Edward believe otherwise. Hope he realizes the truth soon and goes after her.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
Well crap-o-la! All necessary... Can't wait to see how you wrap it up for them. :)
Great chapter. Love seeing Edward sweat.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
So angsty!! Loved it!
Glad she punched James, good for her!
I'm mad that she's all alone tho, I mean A & J should've had her back at the party since she was there alone.
And why go to Seattle now? I know she's been wanting to leave for years, but couldn't it wait til after graduation? And what kind of place in Seattle? There's hardly a description! Makes me think she's going to a psych treatment center or something! LOL
I hate that she and Edward are fucking each other over. Thought they'd learn by now to THINK before they say or do something. They're still flying around all emotionally charged up all the time! *sigh*
Loved this chapter, tho. Can't wait for the next! I hope Carlisle and Esme talk to Edward and he LISTENS, lol. Who knows, maybe Edward will go after Jacob because Edward was the last to know she was leaving, which really was a compliment if he would just realize it.
Hope you get better soon, too! IDK what kind of intestine thing you got, but I've had Irritable Bowel Syndrome before. Not fun. Take care, get well soon!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
Wow...that was one hell of a gut punch that Bella gave Edward!!!!! Thanks for the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
My heart hurts for these two kids! I get what Bella needs to do for herself and why she felt she had to lie to Edward (veer New moonish) but still don't agree.
Good chapter!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
omg bella is such a fucking cunt stain!!!!!!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
I'm pissed. Edward could have totally gone with her.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
Grrrr, what the hell! Jen is not happy right now. Great chappie bb :)
Date: 16 Jul 2010 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
hmmm a new moon flip.... interesting. glad she didnt sleep with james.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
holy shit i'm so upset now.... damn! even knowing there's going to be HEA doesn't help! gaaaaaah
Date: 16 Jul 2010 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
So B had once upon a time been in love with James? I don't buy it though, if shehad been in love she wouldn't have gotten over it and him.. so was it just lust? Then why was she so broken up by the end of it.. was it more so a self-worth issue? Was it the idea of being in love?
How can B stand to leave Edward? If she's in love and crap. She's so selfish. I wish there wasn't a HEA and she had to suffer while E fell in love. But what I'm most disturbed by: Bella's comments on James and her reactions and behaviour:
-Why did she let him get so close? His breath there and hand up her shirt? Was she in shock? Edward and Bella's love can't be real if she expected herself to sleep with James? I don't understand that. If you love someone you can't even look at another whether you are finished- as E and B had fought- or not (that's why I don't buy that she was in love with James)
I'm still pissed that she was in my opinion cheating on E, rubbing up on all those guys.. and WTF, she would 'willingly' fall for James and into that trap just cause it was habit.. why would she want to? How could she when she has Edward?
Did B seriously expect herself to sleep with James as well? What does she mean 'why wouldn't I hace fucked James?' ? Is she thinking about the rep she has or is she legitly wondering "how come"?
If James' touch had the same power would she have seriously been able to sleep with him? And do that to Edward?
KikiBlue especially, please answer these burning questions.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
WHAT? there better be a HEA or there will be hell to pay.........lol I'm kididng. I actually loved that chapter. it was very NEW MOON but backwards. loved it. I hope she goes back or he finds her without giving up Harvard because right now that boy is hurt. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 16 Jul 2010 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
Oh My God..I never loved Bella like how i love her now.
"I didn’t want to be saved. I wanted to save myself. Leaving Forks was the only way."
She's right.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
oh i love it! should be sleeping right now but reading this seems more appealing right now ;)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Noooo! you cant leave it there! whats gonna happen! please update soon!!!! x
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Hi... I don't know why I don't get alerts... I just happened to check! ... why Bella???? wtf?? ... I understand that you are hurt.. but... wasn't Edward with you.. please, please... let it not be the truth... :( .. and.. E didn't say anything either.. so... I hope she doesn't ruin it by doing anything w/ James... can't wait for update.... and... I'm gonna check again how come I don't get them.... ¿? ... xoxo
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
loving this chapter. i hope she dont wake up in a hospital because she drink herself in coma. ed and her need too have some problems otherways this story will be finisht am not ready because i love your story??!!!! keep going
Date: 14 Jul 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
So, I just jumped into this story yesterday. The really fantastic thing about starting stories late is that you have no cliffies. THIS is my first cliffe of your storie?! I miight have to slam my head against a wall. Or go get a drink.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
Haha I just love how you used a pregnancy as a threat. I do really hate when authors put those into fics, they make them less exciting.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
This is an awesome story I am so glad I found it on here , because I had read it on FF and they suck.....LOL please keep updating this love it!
Thanks
Judy
Date: 13 Jul 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
this story is great
Date: 12 Jul 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
ugh I am dying for an update! I need to know what happens with drunk Bella and the ex-asshole that is keeping her from enjoying being in love with Edward.
Date: 05 Jul 2010 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Please update soon!!I hope James doesn't cause any trouble and that Edward didn't cheat on Bella even though i love angst!!!
Date: 04 Jul 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
I think rosalie is full of shit, there's just no way edward would do that in my eyes anyway. I'm really hoping edward will show up at this party because i have a feeling shit will be hitting the fan. James just can not bring anything good lmfao
P.S was eclipse not FUCKIN AWESOME or what???!!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2010 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
amazing story can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
ohhh snap! edward to the rescue? i hope so. still haven't seen eclipse...hopefully saturday is the day! ?.?
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
hmm... why bella? i wanna know! heh -_-'
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
lol i didn't need you to say 'aww', because i was going to say it anyway. AWWWW good for them! :D oh and i wanted to say that i love that you put in quotes from the books/movies into the story, totally genius!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
aw can't wait to see what happens next =]
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
aw edward... the little stalker =P
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
lolll i liked both since i'm team switzerland XD yayy! they are finally getting their heads and hearts out of their asses lol ^.^
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
geezeus... they do need to grow up. i bet edward but secretly hope it's jacob lol
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
awww i knew something was up with those two. ^^ jacob time!! oh, the last time i read about jacob, that night i had another dream about him..*sigh*
Date: 01 Jul 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
i understand that she thinks something is going to go wrong. i just hope she doesn't do anything stupid like cheat on him bc i'm pretty sure he's not cheating on him. i hope Edward shows up to the party and finds Bella before James does something to her. really great chapter, update soon!
Kristi
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
ohhhh man what a weird chapter lol NY is where i live... teehee
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
awww that is so... i can't even think of a word to describe what i'm feeling. relieved, happy, 'finally'? lol yes. but wait.... what about jacob!! NOOO XD
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
hmm i see now.. i feel for her and know what it's like..
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
lol getting bitten is hot, especially on the neck. ;) loved it
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
aww i loved this chapter. jacob is just absolutely adorable... and hot! *sigh* i wish i had a friend like him...
Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
U BETTER WRITE MORE ITS SOO GOOOD :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
ahhhh i'm at a loss for words. haha amazing. loved your end note =P
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
wow, i'm almost sweating over here. lol keep it up! oh, and mike is such an embarrassing fucktard XD
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
lol okay i have to say, your end note made me think of YoCrunch yogurt. the description on it says '...You deserve it.' =P thinking about high school, i wish that there was a edward-look-alike that did that to me! bahaha
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
holy fuck, that was hot lol haha edward...
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
omfg i loved this one so much! i'm also team jacob, so yeah, nuff said. he's 18 now, so no prison anymore lol XD
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
ha awesome. edward totally got owned lol can't wait to read more
Date: 28 Jun 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Lovin' it!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
lmao poor bella. edward sounds so fucking hot in the sauna... damn. and you are right, emmett is a total dork. lol fyi, your writing is fantastic! :D
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
lmao nice. this is some funny stuff. it makes me want to swear a lot too lol love it!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
wow, he's a douche. lol still, it is a little hot..
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
haha i love this story already. sometimes i think that would be my lifestyle if i had that 'i don't give a fuck' attitude. lol but i have a daughter and i do give a fuck...most of the time =P
Date: 26 Jun 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
I MISS YOU KATE.
and i fucking loved this chapter. i'm so happy bella wasn't happy about being happy. ya dig? like, you waaaant them to have a happily-ever-after but. knowing how bella and edward are, you know that they can't have that 'normal' relationship.
rosalie is a different story. i don't know what to think about that. on one side, i can see her saying all of that shit to bella because she's a fucking jealous bitch that likes drama and wants to mess with bella's head. plus bella DID just walk in on her with mikey. but on the other hand, i can see edward getting fed up with bella's bullshit. and because he thinks that maybe she's cheating on him at that party, or not even that.. maybe just the sole fact that she WENT to the party.. and he wanted to get even.
and with james. zomg. idk. rape? y/y?
anywho. i miss you. and i just downloaded AIM on my iphone. my screenname is motherchucker9. surprise, surprise. haha. i am on week 4 of my neverending vacation and then i am back for good. in case you were wondering why i've been MIA.
xoxoxo
i love your shit. it's hot as hell. i think i might go read some previous chapters and get off to it i mean what..? ;)
Date: 26 Jun 2010 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
:)
Date: 25 Jun 2010 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
Damn I would have used the showers at my high school if I thought there was ever a chance of something like this hapening. This chapter is hot! Not like the rest aren't but I totally didn't expect that to happen. I am still in love with this fic!
-Anna
Date: 25 Jun 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
WTF?! You can't stop there! Haha it's not fair.... So please please update soon! Talk about an addicting, amazing story. Read all of it today lol. So please update soon.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
No, I did not see that coming. WTF is right, with Bella & her self sabotage, hope she can keep some sort of morale or self respect going & not do James.
Lucky you with the MN tix, enjoy!
Can't wait for next chapter, great chapter, missing E's pov. I hope u can update soon.;)
Date: 24 Jun 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
hey my city.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
that was sweet and hot too.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
that was hot.. mossy sex..
Date: 24 Jun 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
I've been inhaling your fic! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed each individual chapter, but I was really enjoying reading. I love this story. Your characters are great, and I love you smutty twist on the SM's characters. This story is so much fun to read. Your end notes are great too. I'm so excited to keep reading.
-Anna
Date: 24 Jun 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
THIS IS SO FUCKED UP. i swear to fucking god, if bella thinks that edward is cheating on her, she doesn't fucking deserve him!!!!!!!!!!!!! dammit woman.
like she is RUINING THIS. so no cool.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
WHAT is wrong with her!!!!!!! damn if she ruins this, i am going to be PISSED! motherfucker!! they are sooo fucking cute together!!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
fucking so perfect! as always!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Oh Snap! This looks like 50 shades-of-fucked-up right here. So she loves a man that didn't say it back, wigged out on him, went to a party and got fucked up, and now you drop this bomb shell off a cliffy on us? YOU EVIL CLIFFY BITCH! Girl you getter hurry your ass up because I am living for the next chapter!
High Fives and Hand Jobs, Kris
Date: 23 Jun 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
It's okay, Chicky. I totally get Bella's behavior. I have been prone to do that in my youth as well. You expect it, and when it doesn't happen, you tend to push the boundaries to make it happen or make it happen sooner rather than later. Very good point on Bella's behalf. Shitty.........but understood.
No, I don't think Edward was with Rosalie. I think Rose is still pissed that Edward rejected her at the club and this is her way of "payback".
James??!!! I figured he would make an appearance, but now I'm a little scared! I just hope Edward rescues her in time!!!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
One question: If B hadn't run into James would she have cheated on E? Is she actually capable of that, whether she thought E was cheating on her or not? Is she actually wondering why she didn't gey in their first? (referring to the cheating). and if B really loved E how come she flirted with guys and grinded on them, did she kiss anyone? Flirting is cheating and I hope E finds out, dumps her arse and she commits suicide. I hate her. If she really loved E how was it possible for her to leave him, pick fights (knowing she was hurting him) and flirt with people that won't Edward? It should be impossible if it's not his face or body she grinds to or flirts with. How is it possible?
Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Heya!
Tonnes of questions:
-Is B's understanding of no happy endings stemming from James? Is she still at that place where she grieves for her unhappy ending with James? If she does it means she wants that happy ending with James which worries me as to her feelings for Edward?
-Why is it that B seems to have to force herself to kiss Edward? Why does she have to prove to herself that she cares for E? Why is she so unenthusiastic for a life with him?
-At the end of last chapter why was she worried about herself and not everyone else? Did she think she was going to fuck up?
-Relating to the thoughts about breaking each other and the tenses that you used them in makes me think that B breaking E is inevitable!?
-When B says she likes girls, is that in a romantic connotation? Is she bi? The threesome thing and James really has me worried for B leading E on and not really reciprocating his feelings.
-Why does B always lie to E or tell half-truths?
-When B says that thing about PDA's and thinks of James, what is the uncomfortable comparison she comments on afterwards?
-Why is it that she always thinks about James around E? Was she heartbroken because she was in love with James (if so is she still?) or because she cared for him as a friend and he was her first real relationship and it made her feel unworthy of being loved etc.? I really, really need to know the answer to that question the most.
I feel like B doesn't think E is special and it angers me for him :(
Looking forward to having things clarified, xo.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Awwww indeed. They are so cute. And you are such a fantastic writer. But you already knew that ;)
QUESTION TIME:
Isn't it an omen or something that neither of them seems to know whether they're together or not and that E has to give her a reason/label to tell other guys to fuck off a little more forcefully according to Jas? B seems to think they're casual while E thinks they are together (before the kiss at the end) or is B playing the game with a face? And shouldn't B tell guys to fuck off and be a bitch to them more than ever based on B and E's feelings alone? Why should there need a label and is B in love with E? She seemed genuinely shocked at A's question or is she in denial or something? And why didn't B push Emmett away? Does B honestly have no feelings for the guys she's slept with and same with E, but especially the ones they chill with? (Jas, Em, Ro)
XO.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
hi :)
great chapter as usual but i have a few q's:
-when B says she told E everything about J did that include the almost sex and why it stopped and E's part in that and etc.?
-'Edward had unwittingly taught me something about myself that I didn’t know. ' What did E teach her? She thinks that quote when she walks into his room and sees everything left as it was.
xo.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Ch 18:
'I was severely fucked, but, ironically, not as hard as I wanted to be.'
When B is thinking that after her almost sex with J and she realizes that E is everywhere for her, did she wanna be fucked by J or E? And did B find the short amount of time with J pleasurable and by feeling wrong, was that like it made her wanna throw up cause it felt wrong being with somebody but E or just a bad feeling? And what was B's motivation to seducing Jacob, in retaliation to what she thought was unreturned feelings with E?
Also, I'm so sorry but I didn't favourite this properly when you first moved here and I was never alerted consequently so could you please remind me about James? Did B love him? What was so bad that he did? Is that why she's a slut, did she lose her virginity to him etc.? The whole shebang!?
Thanks so much, xoxo.
Ch 19: At the end did she chase after him? I'm confused as to where the last paragraph sits on the humping timeline of this chapter?
Please reply. I need to know.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Aww Kiki, I feel so bad for poor Bella, who cannot allow herself to be loved. I fell also bad than Edward did not reply to her I love you, specially since he seems to know her well and must have thought that she had openned herself to him right at that moment. I hope nothing happens with James and that E is about to show up and take care of things.
Thanks for writing babe!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
I think Rosalie is lieing her ass off, I think James will try something with Bella and I think Bella is scaredof being hurt. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
LMFAO... BEST FUCKING LINE EVER
"Fucking bitch of a succubus from cock sucking heaven."
I can not tell you how much I am enjoying this story. It is witty, fun, sexy and everything + more. Your writing reminds me of another author who goes by Twighlit aka Bridget on the Twilighted website. She has a story called The Apple Doesn't Fall that seems right up your alley. I swear you guys could be sisters.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Uh oh. Please tell me she's not going to cheat on Edward!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
hey hey..
Date: 22 Jun 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
damn.. thats fnkd up.. what was hilarious was when Bella kept walking in on Edward. He had the upper hand on that one in the sauna though.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
iyayai
Date: 22 Jun 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
ha ha just from the 1st chapter I can tell this is the shit!! Especially with all those reviews.. I was debating whether to review or not since you have so many. :)
I was wanting to start reading it for a while so I just got started today and Im gonna continue.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
i really do hope that bella doesn't cheat. i like her and edward being together even if they do fight sometimes.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Rosalie is a lying whore! Please don't let Bella cheat on Edward. James is the one who has her so screwed up now. I hope she comes to her sences and leaves before anything happens. Great chapter. Thanks
Date: 22 Jun 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
I call the bullshit card on Rose... About james... That was an interesting twist! I can't wait to see reactions!
xoxo
marianne
PS: Where did you find midnight tickets?? COOL!!!!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
I'm really happy that you're back! It was great chapter! Thanks a lot!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Emo Bella is so depressing but i understand where she's coming from. But i hope bella won't f*ck this up. Please please PRETTY PLEASE don't f*ck up!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
If she f*cks James...she doesn't deserve Edward and I really could care less if they don't end up together...as a matter of fact if she f*cks James...I want you to please make Edward leave her for being such a slut. Thanks for the update.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
please please dont let what Rose said be true!! and dont let Bella do anything with James!! I thought Edward and Bella were just getting settled into boyfriend and Girlfriend. I am sad now!! Stupid Bella!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
haha. i guess i'm cool too. i, too have midnight tickets. OR we're both insane and our asses WILL be dragging at work the next day (as per usual) but it'll be worth it (as per usual). brilliant job with this chapter, getting into bella's angsty, hot mess of a paranoid mind. i don't criticize the character. i'm just here for the ride. write on, sister!
mj