Date: 03 May 2016 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG no you can't leave it there. I need to know more. Such a good story so far.
Date: 03 Nov 2015 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!! WHAT was that last sentence??? he just mentioned 2 1 night stands before bella? are you going to extend this at some point? thanks for sharing on here ;D
Date: 24 Mar 2014 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
OH THIS COULD BE A GREAT STORY !!!!! HE A DIRTY DOG LOL
Date: 10 Apr 2011 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
WOAH. Now that's a big problem! Who the hell's his wifey?! LOL. xDD
Date: 29 Jan 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Holy Crap! I didn't expect that! That's just wrong! We don't want a sexyward one night stand to be married! That's just too hard a cliffie to take especially since it's a oneshot and we get no reprieve and what happens next! ARRRGGGHHH!!
But you did get a rise out of me anyway so good writing!!
Hugs, Stephanie
Author's Response:
Thank you :-)
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Crule. Very crule. Loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMFG... So flippin good. And that had to have been one of the biggest jaw dropping one liners I have ever read. I think you should seriously consider making a multi-chapter story just from this one-shot. I have to make a banner for this. It's so freakin good. Good job girly!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I am trying to make it into a longer story but I have too many ideas and can't settle on one. I would love for you to make me a banner.
Cheers Trish
Date: 29 May 2010 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
u should sooo carry this on it reallt good
Date: 28 May 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Aaaaaah!!! That ending is too mean! And hilarious...
Date: 12 May 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
That made me laugh a couple times :-) i think it was awesome.
Cant wait to read more from you <3
Date: 12 May 2010 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow i totally did not see that coming. you definitely should continue this!! :) :)
Date: 10 May 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
I swear I so did not see that coming, what a cliffhanger. Please continue, don't leave this as a one shot. As everyone hopes for a HEA, I can see this story moving into a really good plot with many obsticles to overcome and possibly and hopefully a great ending ...... please continue hanging by a stick, a positive stick .....
Date: 09 May 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Do you think you could turn this into maybe a short story? cause just leaving it like this is, really wrong.... But it's also intersting cause you can think of different ways this could turn out.
Date: 09 May 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks to everyone. I was nervous about posting the story as there are so many good stories on this site.
I made it a one shot but had thought of continuing on with it. Let me ponder it for a while. Thanks again for all your feed back. :)
Date: 09 May 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
ha that was funny! cant wait to read more big twist on the pregnant from a one night stand stories on here!
Date: 09 May 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was not expecting the ending omg not a wife. Are you going to contiue on with this
Date: 09 May 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wait, after reading the reviews a lot of them are treating this story as a one shot, Is this true? I would encourage you to continue as it was left on a cliff hanger with a lot of unanswered questions
Date: 09 May 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG I was not expecting him to have a wife! Holy shit. I'm excited to see were this goes. If I was Bella and found out that not only I had a one night stand but also got pregnant by a married man, I wouldn't need to blame the sickness on the pregnancy, I'd be puking my guts up and worried that if he could do that to his wife then he could certainly do that to me as well.
Date: 09 May 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
are you sure your not going to turn this into a story?
Date: 09 May 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please tell me your doing another chapter !!!!
Date: 09 May 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
yeah i agree you so can't leave me hanging with that!! this would be a great story. it could go so many different directions. please make this a story.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhh This would make a really awesome story!!!!!!!!
Date: 09 May 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
thats great....he has a wife, loved it...
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
aw come on .. u dont really mean to leave it there do u??? pls continue ... gr8er story in the making ... u've set the scene but there are so many unanswered ?s like where was his wife, how will bella react to hearing that he's married, how will the wife react to hearing that he is about to become a father??? is the marriage already experiencing difficulties .. that why he was drinking by himself in the bar ... did she not want to move to forks???? will bella end up with edward??? they obviously have chemistry
PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS FIC
Date: 09 May 2010 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh!!!!! Was not expecting him to have a wife! Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
loved it please write more this could be such a good story.
Date: 09 May 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really good, the end was the best. :)