Date: 29 Oct 2015 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
AWESOME!!! story ;) i still enjoyed reading it a second time ;) thanks for sharing this with us on here ;D
Date: 10 Feb 2014 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
This story was amazing. I loved every bit of it and your Edward, definitely one of my favorites.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
love it
Date: 17 Oct 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
Enjoyed reading your story. So touching. :-)
Date: 14 Oct 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
Awesome epi, it couldn't of been more lovely some tragedy and a whole lot of love;-)
Date: 14 Oct 2012 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
Wow, this has been an awesome story. It was all so well woven together with their individual histories it just flowed into a lovely tapestry of life.
Thanks so much for writing it.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
Oh, that Lucy part got me crying crocodile tears.
Date: 13 Oct 2012 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
Aghh, don't freak out, that's impossible. I'm scared about Roy & James. He has no way of protecting them from those guys since they have weapons, and he's to damn stubborn to ask for help from Charlie or Carlisle.aghh
Date: 13 Oct 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
Great date!
Date: 13 Oct 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
Ok, is anyone else freaked out that this would be the smartest place for Alec to go to find Bella? And also for it to be the most likely place to run into him if he was after her?
i also want to say I'm a huge fan of your music choices, love Ray LaMontagne & Black Keys, Robert Pattinson etc
Date: 12 Oct 2012 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me
Ya think? Lord poor thing is going thru PTSD.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
one of the best stories i ever read. and i've read a lot. im getting ready to read "exposed". but i hoped you know how great of a writer you are.
Date: 30 Aug 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
i must tell you, never have i read a more amazing story as this .i cried alot and was upset when things happened to them that was so unfair .but you made it perfect with a happily ever after when they married had kids . you have written a story that is so beautifully written lots of readers will throughly enjoy.
It's A M AZ I N G!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked
is she bella not a drunk
Date: 17 Jul 2012 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 8 Secrets
I have just found this story and am loving it is complted so I can finish reading it tonight. I love the way you write I can completley loose myself in the story. xx
Date: 15 Jul 2012 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become
I love this story so much! You're a great writer :)
But I'm a little confused about Sam/Jacob... Is the real Sam...real? Haha.
When Edward talks about SAM is he only talking about Jacob's other personality?
Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
Absolutely beautiful story! Thx for writing and sharing!
Annie B
Date: 27 Jan 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
I loved this story. Beautiful epilogue.
Thank yuo for writing it... :-)
Date: 25 Jan 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
beautiful
Date: 24 Jan 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
AWWWW - I LOVED IT!!! Thank you.
Date: 24 Jan 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
I just want to let you know I have spent the last few days reading your story.. I have cried, laughed, was anger.. all the emotions were intense.. I felt like I was a ghost watching Edward and Bella and the family.. .
You did a wonderfull job on this story.. I have seen and been close to what your story is.. You have done a amazing job..
With the right help and caring people like Mrs E.. and Charlie and the Cullen family.. Most people can come out of situtions like that if want too.. I know one thing just like Edward and Bella you can get it if you want it .. You have fight hard and it will hurt.. but in the end is always happiness and pride of yourself.. while I am rambling on.
But your story was true and Beautiful..
Hugs Hugs Leona
Date: 24 Jan 2012 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
I am so happy for these two and so sad for there loss of Esme but they are there for each other and it is good that Jake is there and living life
Date: 24 Jan 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
Perfect ending!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
Loved the story and loved the ending! I'm going to miss this story, it really was great! Im glad after everything they had been through they got their happy ending.
Date: 23 Jan 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
It was nice to see a glimpse into their future. I'm glad they were able to deal with their issues enough to have kids.
Date: 23 Jan 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
loved this story <3
Date: 23 Jan 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
:)
Date: 23 Jan 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
Wonderful story. I am so glad things turned out well for our couple. Maddie is too cute for words and how Emmett is taking on his role as godfather. I am sure Edward is thrilled to be having another baby to love.. until next time
Date: 23 Jan 2012 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
aww so sweet
Date: 23 Jan 2012 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
i love this epilogue ..so beautifully done .. but they deserved it i know for sure..:)
Date: 23 Jan 2012 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
i loved it. so good. poor esme, carlisle and em and rose. it was really great to see jake working through his illness and everyone supporting him. i love that alice and jasper had children together even though seth was so freaking cute lol. until next time. sorry for the text my cell wonkt correct on this site
Date: 23 Jan 2012 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
great ending to this story!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
Sweet Epilogue. Thanks for sharing. Love that they ahve a little girl
Date: 18 Nov 2011 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked
HI KDC,
I started to read this story on twilighted. and was impatient for updates. Imagine my surprise when I came here and found the compleated story!!! I am so glad i found this. I loved this story from the get go,..
Keep up the good work!
Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
French. Google Translate.
J'ai lu votre histoire la semaine passée avec mon iPad et je ne pouvais pas laisser de review sur twcs. Je fais mes devoirs aujourd'hui, lol, avec mon portable!
J'ai vraiment adoré votre histoire, c'était PASSIONNANT! Merci à votre bêta qui m'a permis de lire facilement avec Google Translate. merci, merci.
Montréal, Québec, 23:48
Author's Response:
Hello!
I'm so glad you liked it!
Thanks for reading :)
Katie
Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
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Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl
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Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
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Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 28 The Best of You
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Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 26 The Only Exception
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Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
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Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 19 The Church of What's Happening Now
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Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling
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Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
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Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become
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Date: 07 Nov 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence
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Date: 07 Nov 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand
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Date: 07 Nov 2011 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked
début prometteur!
Date: 04 Nov 2011 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
I loved it. it was perfect everybody got wrapped up plus it was funny. wtg I truly enjoyed this fic and your writing hasn't let me down and I wantto thank you for the entertainment and your skill. sometimes i read it because I needed to read about a fictional struggle I could relate to. other times I needed to know you are not your past and you gave it to me no matter what kind of day I had. not to get all sappy but thank you for putting this story out there honestly I appreciate it so much. until next time.
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks so much for your support throughout this story and your kind words. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it!!
<3 Katie
Date: 04 Nov 2011 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 34 Karma Police
i'm glad alec is dead or is he? em cracked meup these last few chaptershim and seth. i'm glad jasper is back in the mix. i think the not knowing the fates of those that helped bella is going to mess with her. i hope that's not riley in the car i hope he got away but he and vannessa are probably dead dayum. until next time. i loved it as always.
Date: 04 Nov 2011 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 33 Worker Bees
I loved it especially the seth red car thing aw. this fic is awesome. until next time.
Date: 04 Nov 2011 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
I fucking knew it was alec dayum alice you're a douche magnet for real. my bf's lil bro when he's drunk tells everybody he loves them and hugs us too much lol. We know he is drunk when he is spreading the love and hugs around. anyway I liked this chapter a lot. edward has a shiner uh oh and poor bella I hope they find alec. wait poor alice too thank god alec did not meet seth just saying.
Date: 04 Nov 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl
loved it funny.
Date: 03 Nov 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 30 Dancing
excellent chapter and yes I cried again. Damn you and your excellent writing lol. until next time.
Date: 03 Nov 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
this chapter made me cry it felt the pain, joy and other emotions. I really love this fic. Sorry for not reading this earlier but my driod phone had problems with the layout so I'm on my kindle and it still annoying stop zooming in you know anyway I should catch up real soon. I'm glad school is going well. Until next time.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
Thank u so much for ur beautiful story. I really really loved it.. I am so happy for ur Edward & Bella....
Date: 07 Sep 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become
Oh fuck! Poor Jake is nuts! I was glued to this chapter.
Date: 25 Aug 2011 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
thanks for the great story i really enjoyed it!!!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 34 Karma Police
yeah he is gone i hope he suffered a great deal.. and still is in hell!!!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 33 Worker Bees
i hope they catch him and see ed everyone loves you
Date: 25 Aug 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
i knew it was going to be him... alice man you are a looser magnet!!!
Date: 22 Aug 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
What a beautiful beautiful story. Simply loved it.
Date: 20 Aug 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
A wonderful ending to a wonderful story I loved the ending and I would like to know about there future did they have kids. thank you very much and I cant wait for your next story.
Date: 19 Aug 2011 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 34 Karma Police
I am so happy that the slimy bastard was torchered and very glad they put a bulit in his head. I think Bella is taking things very wee all things considered. I cant bellieve that is the last chapter this has been a great story and look forward to every update thanks so much.
Date: 19 Aug 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
i'd love to read what alec was thinking when he saw bella with edward!
Date: 19 Aug 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
Aww such a great story & I love how it ended! I'd love to get little glimses of them on their wedding day (of course) but ESPECIALLY when they have a baby (finding out & the birth), I can see that being such a happy time for them. Great work! :)
Date: 18 Aug 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Aug 2011 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
i love this story:))
Date: 18 Aug 2011 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
I loved this story and am very attatched to it. I'm so sad to see it go, but Im happy that Bella got her happy ending (and Edward too!). I think it was a perfect ending.
Have fun on yoru vacation!
Date: 18 Aug 2011 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
Grate story..... I will be sad that it is done. :)
Date: 18 Aug 2011 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
AMAZING story, absolutely loved it from start to finish, bravo xxx
Date: 18 Aug 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
Thank you for sharing this beautifully written story. I really enjoyed reading it. The ending was perfect.
Date: 18 Aug 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
wonderful ending. Glad Jake is going so well and MrsE. Aww for thier own little house. Thank you for writing and sharing with us all.
Date: 18 Aug 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
great job well done
Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dosed
im glad taht they got their happy ending
Date: 16 Aug 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 34 Karma Police
love them all!
Date: 15 Aug 2011 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 34 Karma Police
So glad edward is doing well at work with no favoritism or anything. Awww Torture and gunshot. Couldnt have happened to a nice guy. Muhahahaha
Date: 15 Aug 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 34 Karma Police
Thank goodness. I was afraid that the people who killed Alec would be looking for her, but it looks as if all of the bad ones who had anything to do with this kind of thing were arrested. Great chapter.