Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 10
he can burn them with a flame thrower? yeaaaa thatll be soo badass.... sexy edward with a flame thrower....shirtless... pantless!! yay *droolsss*
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
plz plz plz i need sum bella/edward interaction...preferrably with jacob too
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh hell, that was short and sweet!!! I wondered where he had been. I was beginning to really hate him for not calling her back. Chief Swan has issues that he needs to work out. By the way...I hope Edward does not decide to take care of those babies anytime soon. Not with Sir Swan stalking him. That could be bad!!!
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Thank you for sharing. Take care and be safe. Bg24
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter!!! Poor Edward being harassed by Charlie!!! Wonder what Bella will think now if she found out the reason Edward hasn't called her??
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
I had a feeling the chief was on his ass. I was worried he found his greenhouse though...THAT would have been bad. I feel kind of bad for him. What will he do for money without his 'business' lol. I just wish Bella didn't have to be so upset by it all. Charlie's not being fair in the slightest, but then again, even in the books he wasn't exactly capable of dealing with emotional issues or carrying on a serious conversation. Anyway, I"m glad to see an update:) Looking forward to the updates on the others!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
i love that picture of him at the top, hes so hot!!
im confused now is this an e/b or j/b story? because jacob and bella actually seem good together right now.
update soon!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
That was amazing! Where is Edward's pov? More plz!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm liking the story ladies. Will we be reading more of this one soon or is it on hiatus for a while? I haven't seen any updates, but I'm dying to read more!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story but I need an update soon!! Pretty Please
Date: 09 Mar 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like the story so far. But please find a beta. And if you've got one, find a better one. Just take a look at the first paragraph.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
im sad :( where is edward?
Date: 05 Mar 2010 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 6
Cant believe him...that's just crazy.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy fuck!!! It was a pleasure reading this!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
please let edward show up sometime and rescue bella from jacob
Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
Jacob drives me crazy with all of sayings. He can be such a tool. He has Charlie so fooled. He is not all innocent. It is not that he isn't a nice kid, but he is a little sneaky.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
where's edward?????????????
Date: 01 Mar 2010 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
ooo virgin pussy for the boys...we shall see? hahaha
Date: 27 Feb 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love love this story! i just got time to finally sit read and catch up and REVIEW!!
But please tell me JACOB dies in freak car accident and Bella meets Edward at the funeral where he says he loves her and she makes up him.. and they make whoopie and have tons of babies!
just kidding! i love it..
xoxo--FunkyD.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
oh dear lord, I want a date with that hottie too!!!!
I'm just like months older than him so it shouldn't matter hehehehe
damn
love ya!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hmm, things are heating up with Jake . . . how far will they go?
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad her date went well...
Date: 18 Feb 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm missing Edward.
I don't like the way her father is so insulting of her character. Seems kind of abusive to me.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
... so Bella and Jacob having fun, but what`s up with Edward?
What will come next?
Greetings from Germany
Bussy
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
update soon
please
i like jake but where's my Edward?
Date: 18 Feb 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
It seems like Charlie and Jake treat Bella like she is a complete fuck up sometimes. It was a sweet date but I wish Bella thought more of herself.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update i need to know what happens next and when edwards back!!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
That date was so sweet ! Very nice chapter ! When will Edward come back around Bella ?
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh boy what has she gotten herself into now. This is a great story and I cant wait to see what you have instore for us next.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
so sweet! Did you guys actually write this? Just kidding, love your stuff...all of it!!!!!!!!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
Awww, that was sooo cute... I almost want jakey and belly to be together <3 but when edward comes back to the story and acts like a dick... hell there aught to be a WWF smackdown fuh reallll... lol wth is up with me and violence? oh lord....
Date: 16 Feb 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 9
S.O. & Foot
Great first date there girls!!!! (two thumbs up!!)
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!
Cory
Date: 16 Feb 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 9
That was a cute date and Jacob was being a gentleman, but I really don't want her with Jacob. Though this could make for an interesting love triangle. Maybe seeing Bella with Jacob will cause Edward to actually go after Bella.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
Charlie is definitely going overboard with his punishment. She messed up once and he's still holding it against her. And then Jacob calls and Charlie thinks he's the perfect influence for her since she's such a delinquent. I think Jacob has a hidden agenda and is maybe going to cause more trouble for Bella.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm not sure if I like Bella wanting more from Jacob. Let's bring Edward back into the mix and get something exciting going.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh no he did not say that to Bella at the end. If I were Bella I would make him pay for that comment that next time. lol. Good chapter. Is there going to be something between Bella and Jacob? What about Edward?
Date: 15 Feb 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
no Jacob is bad very bad !!!!!:( I missed Edward
Date: 15 Feb 2010 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 9
Nice first date, but I do miss Edward ;-)
Date: 15 Feb 2010 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
Nice.............but he's no Edward
Date: 15 Feb 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
nawwwwwwww howww cuteee is jacobb
that was the sweetest date ever
i want my own jacob now!!!!
UPDATE SOON!!
awesome chapter
but how come you havnt updated on fanfiction.net yet?
Date: 15 Feb 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
awww jakey is being all cute ..hope it lasts..
Date: 15 Feb 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 9
I like where you are going with getting Jacob and Bella. I think love triangles are fun.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for letting me know a new chapter was up. I guess I am not surprised with all the crap going down with FF. Such a disappointment. But I love this new site! And I love the latest chapter! I wonder what Edward's going to think when he hears B&J are together? And I wonder what's up with Jake's temper??? I feel he is hiding something! Great post!
LindyP :)
Date: 15 Feb 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
update soon....
Date: 15 Feb 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter, I loved it.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ohhhh - so now she wanting more of Jake!!!
I would too - but with that shirt off (all the time & never let him out of the bedroom!!! LOL)
Loved the date... perfect!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well, Jake certainly was acting different than Leah suggested he would.... Hopefully, he's not acting nice. I really like sweet Jacob. Thanks for the update, Ladies. I do so love this story and all of your work ;)
Date: 15 Feb 2010 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well, one of two things: if Jacob is a smooth player, I'm going to want to kick his ass, because Bella can't deal with another blow to her self esteem right now, after what Edward and her father did to her, and of course I want Edward and Bella to end together; but IF Jacob is sincere in his feelings towards Bella, I'm going to feel bad for him because he treats her nicely and she ends up with Edward eventually, who as of right now is a complete idiot; I don't know which of the options is better...
Please hurry with bringing Edward and Bella to interact in the same scenarios, I'm dying to see the sparks (of attraction and/or irritation) fly between those two.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great update but I wanted E to see them out...I'm sure you have something better planned!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
THATS IT? AHHHHHH
Date: 14 Feb 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love this story! But when is there going to be another Edward Chapter?! I love his pov!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
There could have been all sorts of things to interupt the date, but nothing did. It was a sweet first date and a perfect contrast to Bella's night with Edward. I wonder how far things will get with Jacob before Edward comes back into the picture. Speaking of which, what's going on with Edward? Em, Rose, Jas, and Alice all seem to be moving right along. Where has this left Edward?
Date: 14 Feb 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh no! Where the hell is Edward? It's time for him to get his head out of his ass!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story... Update soon!!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
OK that was very sweet but what is up is Jacob in to the starodes or something like that???? Where the hell is Edward? Need more
Date: 14 Feb 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter... I want to see what happens when Edward finds out... Will he get jealous and try to contact Bella?
Date: 14 Feb 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my well Bella is certainly coming into her own...lose Jacoob tho...give me some Assward...or throw in Badsper!!lol
Date: 14 Feb 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
hmmm thinking sis know better and Jake is acting a part. Dad is an idiot if he thinks Jake is a saint
Date: 14 Feb 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
Damn, I like this Jacob! But I think there's something up with him: "He seemed genuine in his apology, but there was something there that I was missing. just couldn't focus all the kissing and the shirtless chest all around me." Hmmm. Looking forward to the rest of it!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
hahahaha... great chapter. Wonder how long this'll last..
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
I am really enjoying your story so far. I really appreciate the pictures you put in the stories-nice touch!
Date: 10 Feb 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm hoping Edward catches them on Friday and it lights a fire under him
Date: 10 Feb 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
This was an interesting chapter.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow that was a jack ass move on Edwards behalf. seems like he quite pleased about fucking over Bella
Date: 09 Feb 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow Bella is definitely being forward with Edward, but it sounds like he doesn't respect the girls who give it up so easily
Date: 09 Feb 2010 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow Edward is a dick... anxious to see how their first met goes
Date: 05 Feb 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
S.O. & Foot
Don't have a flipping clue how I missed this story!!!! (Cory slaps her head)
Can't wait to see where your muses take us in this one!!!!
More when it's ready please!!!!
Cory
Date: 03 Feb 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
I liked the way Jake acted with Bella, completely assertive and that way he got what he wanted... but I still think he's expecting something more from Bella and/or has a hidden agenda, let's see if I'm right.
I hate the way Charlie is treating Bella, because he really is treating her like a slut and not like a teenager that messed up and needs boundaries as well as supervision, but I think he's going way overboard. I understand he's sad and angry ant the same time and he loves his daughter, but still...
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow I bet it is nice for Bella to know that if she messes up once her Dad will hold it against her for the rest of her days!
Date: 02 Feb 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
it was good
but iv never been a jacob fan
I can just see them running into Edward there for some reason
and thats when edward pulls his head out of his ass and fights for her
love it even though she did kiss Jacob
post more soon
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
Jake always did have Charlie wrapped around his finger. I was so hoping she would tell Jake about being drugged. Why is she keeping that to herself
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love the library & love the story! Great chapter, poor Bella - when is Charlie going to talk to her again & now Rachel has a job.... AND Mike's creepy - oh no!
You guys so rock :)
Congrats on so many readers joining the library in such a short time *jumping for joy*
Date: 02 Feb 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wahhhhhhhhhh! I want Edward...........even if he is a jerk for not calling after their hook-up :)
Date: 02 Feb 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well, well, Jake sure does go all out when he feels the iron is hot, doesn't he? I really feel for Bella with respect to Charlie. She has gotten a whole lot of heat, shame, embarassment, and isolation because she trusted the wrong people one night. I wish she would have a heart to heart with Charlie, tell him the truth, and how he's making her feel, not with the grounding, but the way he treats her.
Date: 02 Feb 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hmmm...interesting. So Charlie doesn't mind her being out with a guy. He just doesn't want her with Edward. Why does that not surprise me? The date ought to be interesting. Maybe they'll even run into Edward???
Date: 02 Feb 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
ok so really not liking daddy. cause if he think jake wont be trying something, he is sorely mistaken..
Date: 02 Feb 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow, that was unexpected, but nice. I love that she is goign to spend time with Jake. Getting good. Keep it coming!
Date: 02 Feb 2010 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
I can just imagine the look on Bella's face when Charlie agreed to let her go out with Jacob. Unbelieveable. I hope Charlie will start being a little more understanding. I can say that because my teenager has not done that. I think I would kill her if she did. I definately would not be pulling the silent treatment on her.
Date: 02 Feb 2010 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
This is what Twilight would be like if she didn't include vampires and werewolves. I love it!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
Some parents can be so dense!
:)
Date: 30 Jan 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
please post more soon! even though i can't stand mike i'm willing to read chapters with him in it then read no chapters at all.
Date: 30 Jan 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
edward is an ass. he should have thought about the affect it would have on bella (her dad knowing).
i cant believe he hasnt tried to contact her, and yet emmett and jasper are going out with rose and alice
and i hate how rose and alice have totally ditched bella! i thought they were better friends than that...
Date: 28 Jan 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hey wasn't it Emmett breaking Edwards stones for poss.liking Bella. What does he do(E & Jazz) they go and start dating their one nighters as well. Edward is an ass for not attempting to contact Bella. By pissing the Chief off he never thought how this would be on Bella. Selfish ass he is. Now look at her, once angela is working she is stuck with Billy, yah fun.NOT,
Date: 24 Jan 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella should just tell Charlie she was drugged. Why protect Tanya? I could kick Edward's butt. Why does he have to be such a prick? He is going to be sorry down the road when he wants to be with Bella. I hope she gives him a hard time and makes him prove himself.