Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:09 PM Title: Scared of something beautiful
Love the secret door in the closets! Alice will have a fit it she finds out. Great chapter..thanks so much!!!
Date: 25 Oct 2010 11:14 AM Title: Scared of something beautiful
well i cant wait till the wedding and bella is getting better about speaking up for her self! keep the chapters comming
Date: 25 Oct 2010 7:58 AM Title: Scared of something beautiful
I am glad that Bella stood up to Jessica that just shows how far she has come. That is funny that he snuck into his room through the closet.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 5:41 AM Title: Scared of something beautiful
I loved it he got to shave her kitty lol but no funny bussness poor guy. Jess is such a bitch I love to hate her. I cant wait for next Sunday the wedding she will remember.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 5:15 AM Title: Scared of something beautiful
"Why'd you let me fall asleep?" she mumbled sleepily.
"Because I'm an awesome husband. What did you dream about?"
"Lollipops and candy canes."
It's from an episode of Supernatural.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:13 AM Title: Scared of something beautiful
This was truly an awesome chapter! So cute! Go Bella for standing up to Jessica, and Go Edward for sneaking into Bella's room.
The quote is from Supernatural, I'm prety sure Dean asked ''So what did you dream about?'' and Sam replied, ''Lollipops and candy canes.''
If it isn't that one, I have no idea!
Date: 24 Oct 2010 9:53 PM Title: Scared of something beautiful
lol sneaky closet. gotta love it.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 9:40 PM Title: Scared of something beautiful
What a great chapter
Date: 24 Oct 2010 9:32 PM Title: Scared of something beautiful
Great chapter. Can't wait to see if Edward and Bella will get caught. Can't wait for the wedding.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 9:16 PM Title: Scared of something beautiful
Great job, thanks for writing.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 8:09 PM Title: Scared of something beautiful
i loved the shaving part and the shower so cute, can not wait for more!
Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:46 PM Title: Scared of something beautiful
you're a wondrful writer. Your always on the spot and stay in line with the updates! lovveeee this story! keep up the amazing work! :)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:40 PM Title: Scared of something beautiful
Wonderful chapter. From the picture in my head of Lily asleep on Edward's chest, I would say a CD needs to made for 2 special little girls. LOVED the handling of Jessica by the way.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:28 PM Title: Scared of something beautiful
:)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:25 PM Title: Scared of something beautiful
Loved it and you scared me with the something more It does not sound good update when you can thanks for sharing this with us....
Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:21 PM Title: Scared of something beautiful
YEA Daddyward!! I liked that chapter. Poor Edward got cockblocked twice! I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:29 PM Title: Scared of something beautiful
Great chapter, I cannot wait for their wedding. Also for when Emily arrives. Excellent job. ;)
Date: 23 Oct 2010 11:37 PM Title: Best birthday ever
Loved the chapter. I like your idea for the story as well, you gave it your own twist in my opinion. :)
Date: 23 Oct 2010 10:13 PM Title: Best birthday ever
love his birthday gifts! AMAZING Chapter !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 10:11 PM Title: A mother's touch
Great chapter. Good to see Renee is acting better with Bella. Loved it very much!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 10:08 PM Title: Stood up
Thanks as always awsome chapter. I'm excited to read more and can hardly wait for next Sunday's .
Date: 23 Oct 2010 10:03 PM Title: Surprise
That was perfect .Love this story.!
Date: 21 Oct 2010 8:21 PM Title: Best birthday ever
The quote is from Sweet Home Alabama. And I loved this chapter!! I was lucky not to have Braxton Hicks contractions when I was pregnant but I will say that going a month early I was not ready.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 7:23 PM Title: Best birthday ever
I remember braxton hicks contractions...they weren't too bad, but I can understand that if you didn't know about them you could be surprised.
Great chapter.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:57 PM Title: Best birthday ever
It was really nice........<3
Date: 19 Oct 2010 6:46 AM Title: Best birthday ever
I never fully understood that expression, but no, I'm not 'shitting' you. Rhank you so much for writing, I love the story.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 5:47 PM Title: Best birthday ever
I like Emma, she's so sweet!
I'm looking forward to your next update! I guess I'll have to wait untill sunday ;)
Author's Response:
Yeah, I enjoyed writing her ;)
Yes, you have to wait, but it's just a week ^^
xx
Gelix
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:49 PM Title: Best birthday ever
Nice chapter :) The picture hunt was cute. I can see why you said you had a lot of fun writing this chapter.
The quote in this chapter is from Sweet Home Alabama: "You're just shittin' me, right?" "I never fully understood that expression, but no, I'm not 'shitting' you,"
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:48 PM Title: Best birthday ever
"I never fully understood that expression, but no, I'm not 'shitting' you," I answered
loved the chapter as always
Date: 18 Oct 2010 10:10 AM Title: Best birthday ever
I absolutely love Sweet Home Albama
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:12 AM Title: Best birthday ever
love his birthday gifts and party then you had me scared at the end with the baby
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:57 AM Title: Best birthday ever
"I never fully understood that expression, but no, I'm not 'shitting' you." is from Sweet Home Alabama. I just watched it yesterday.
Great chapter. Can't wait until next Sunday.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:27 AM Title: Best birthday ever
Haha...you used the "You're shitting me" quote from Sweet Home Alabama! I LOVE that movie!!! Great chapter.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:18 AM Title: Best birthday ever
hmm wonder what rumor's tyler will be spreading.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but maybe he's not going to spread anything at all ^^
xx
Gelix
Date: 17 Oct 2010 11:25 PM Title: Best birthday ever
I loved her great idea for his bday, and I loved thebeach, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 17 Oct 2010 11:04 PM Title: Best birthday ever
Excellent chapter.
I never fully understood that expression, but no, I'm not 'shitting' you
From sweet home alabama
Date: 17 Oct 2010 9:24 PM Title: Best birthday ever
thanks another good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you!
xx
Gelix
Date: 17 Oct 2010 9:08 PM Title: Best birthday ever
She needs to do her reading how scarry. Love the B-day presents ;).
Author's Response:
Yes, she does!
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 17 Oct 2010 8:42 PM Title: Best birthday ever
I love Edward's birthday. I am also glad that Bella seems to be making progress with getting in the water and deciding to read the books. Great job as always...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:59 PM Title: Best birthday ever
Loved how Bella celebrated Edwards birthday with the pictures and the little notes..very clever! Edward with the car was just like a little kid in a candy store hehehehehe.
Thanks so much for the update!
Good luck with going back to school. I went back after 20 some years of being out. It's difficult but will be worth it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
Yeah, I've only been gone for 1,5 years, and it's only 'preparation' school until the real deal next fall. I'm still nervous, though ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:55 PM Title: Best birthday ever
I love them!!
Quote: Sweet Home Alabama!!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:10 PM Title: Best birthday ever
Great chapter, loved how she told him happy birthday, very original. As for the car, I knew Edward would love it. Excellent job. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:58 PM Title: Best birthday ever
Aww Poor Bella. she's scared out of her mind over her tummy moving. lol I love it and the quote is from Sweet Home Alabama. Love that movie. thanks again so much. bye for now
Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:28 PM Title: Best birthday ever
Loved it very much and I am with Bella I hated those books and all they did was stress me out more with the pictures and movies they make you watch update when you can thanks.....
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
I haven't actually witnessed a birth, nor have I been through one, but that stuff really freaks me out ^^
xx
Gelix
Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:27 PM Title: Best birthday ever
well she better get ready! cant wait till the next hcapter
Author's Response:
Yeah, she will! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 14 Oct 2010 2:05 AM Title: A mother's touch
Bella, you give me everything by just breathing.~ New Moon!!
Date: 13 Oct 2010 8:15 PM Title: Birthday
The puppy seems so cute, but I have to agree with Edward and Elsa does sound like a 100 year old women's name. But then again with all the wrinkles a pug has I guess it could fit.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 7:42 PM Title: The Past
OMG! To see Edward think that he was losing her, and to learn about Emily, I just can't believe all the pain that was here. You wrote it so well that it made my heart clench.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 7:30 PM Title: Time goes by
God Bella's mom is such a bitch... No wonder Bella has so many issues.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 6:34 PM Title: Vegas
Loved the latest chapter. The quote is from New Moon..."Bella you give me everything just by breathing"
Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:32 AM Title: A mother's touch
i'm finally caught up and just wanted to let you know, I LOVE THIS STORY!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 9:38 PM Title: A mother's touch
Loved it. Cannot wait for more(:
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:25 PM Title: A mother's touch
love it and how edward laid down the law with renee
Date: 11 Oct 2010 10:42 AM Title: A mother's touch
"Bella, you give me everything by just breathing." - New Moon.
Hi Gelix hope your well - story still fab and i'm loving the new one as well.
Take care laters - Debs.x
Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:34 AM Title: A mother's touch
How sweet is that man to do that so that she can get some sleep!! I know that music always calmed down my son or me talking to him.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:19 AM Title: A mother's touch
Tonight I told myself "no fanfic"--I have a project to work on. But when I saw you updated....well, of course I had to read it. Thanks for updating! Poor Bella, I can't imagine being kept up every night. Glad Edward was sweet enough to help out :)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:36 AM Title: A mother's touch
awww, edward is such a sweetheart taking such good care of bella and baby.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:10 AM Title: A mother's touch
Edward is so ridiculously sweet. I'm glad things went well over the weekend with Renee, but I'm still not sure I trust her. But at least she's trying.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:46 AM Title: A mother's touch
I just want to say thanks for such an amazing story; it reminds me of those awesome stories you first find when you discover fanfiction, and I hadn't felt that in a while, thank u and i can't for more! The quote was from eclipse right?
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:40 AM Title: A mother's touch
awww, very sweet!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:32 AM Title: Stood up
Poor Bella she got accidently stood up! I loved the nursery!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:21 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital
you have it backward... advil has asprin in it and you can't take that... tylenol only has acetametaphine in it... dr's advise you to only take that unless there's a perscription they want you to take. it's a really good story tho.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 11:00 PM Title: A mother's touch
write more!:)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 10:26 PM Title: A mother's touch
He is the sweetest! Again great chapter, glad Renee didn't make a scene. ;)
Author's Response:
He sure is! ;)
Thank you!
xx
Gelix
Date: 10 Oct 2010 10:17 PM Title: A mother's touch
I am glad they had a good visit with Renee and Phil. I hope Emily calms down on the kicking. I feel so bad for Bella. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 10 Oct 2010 9:44 PM Title: Stood up
I think the girls are going to be very supportive. I am glad that Bella let Esme be there for her and that she will be there when the baby comes. That is going to help Bella so much! Great job...thanks!
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:21 PM Title: A mother's touch
I could listen to Edward's piano playing all night *sigh
Thanks so much for the update!
Author's Response:
Yeah, me too! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:17 PM Title: A mother's touch
im glad that shes starting to forgive her mom and let others into whats goign on in her mind! cant wait till the next chatper
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:50 PM Title: A mother's touch
I'm glad I read both chapters together because Edward really upset me in the last chapter. He wasn't that great in this chapter either, except in the end but that doesn't make up for it. He told Bella that she should have said something about the date...maybe if he had called instead of sending a text he would have noticed she was disappointed. Didn't he think it was weird that she never answered his text? I'm confused about who he went out with. I thought him and Emmett worked together and they owned the company or am I confused? How come the guys didn't invite Emmett? A little strange if you ask me. Sorry about my little rant, but Edward isn't making me happy. He does have his sweet moments, but I think he still has bad moments. He should be nicer to Bella because she is so nice and forgiving, sometimes I wonder if he truly deserves her. He should spend more time doing nice things for her, like with the cd, than complaining about her moods. Maybe he will see how great she is to him when she gives him the car for his birthday. Looking forward to reading more soon. Hopefully I won't miss the next update. LoL.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Maybe Emmett said no.
I'm glad you read both chapter AND being honest about what you think! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:49 PM Title: A mother's touch
Great chapter. Good to see Renee is acting better with Bella. Can't wait to see Edwards reaction to his gift. I think the quote for this chapter is from New Moon the movie : "Bella, you give me everything by just breathing."
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:43 PM Title: A mother's touch
aww he is too sweet. At least Bella can go to sleep now. lol the quote was from New Moon and it wasn't cheesy but soo true. lol keep up the great work. I loved the sneaking around like teenagers. too cute. thanks again bye
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:27 PM Title: Stood up
Okay, so I started reading the next chapter and I was confused. Turns out I never read this chapter so I had to come back. Don't know how I missed this update. I'll leave my review with the next chapter.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:26 PM Title: A mother's touch
Glad Renee pulled her head out and decided to be a mother. Edward is just Amazing.
Author's Response:
He sure is! I'm in love *swoon*
xx
Gelix
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:02 PM Title: Babysitting
Loved the babysitting!
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:31 PM Title: A mother's touch
Loved it very much and so excited to see what will happen next I wonder if they will ever bumb into Kate again update when you can thanks.....
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :D
They'll sure bump into someone again, I'm just not telling who ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:22 PM Title: A mother's touch
awww sweet chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 10 Oct 2010 12:49 AM Title: Surprise
i loved the bay shopping i can't wait till thats me, and i was kind of confused with the dream, though!
Date: 09 Oct 2010 2:53 AM Title: New Body
Loved the shopping and babysitting!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 8:58 PM Title: Stood up
so i can find the quotes in almost every chapter but this one (i got a little behind in my reading) and i want the instructions for the noodles, please. love the story
Date: 08 Oct 2010 1:09 AM Title: Boy or Girl?
I love the name!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 12:49 AM Title: Blossoming Flower
Quote from twilight right? I loved lily and ems push gift!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 12:10 AM Title: Grandparents
I loved how Edward was there and loved and told Bella that she wasn't fat and was beautiful!
Date: 07 Oct 2010 9:18 PM Title: I forgive you
Loved it was the quote from remember me?
Date: 07 Oct 2010 7:14 AM Title: Boy or Girl?
Loved it very much and very excited to see what will happen next thanks for sharing this with us.....
Date: 07 Oct 2010 6:39 AM Title: Blossoming Flower
Loved it very much and He needs to chill what her body is doing is natural but some people can't handle it like others can thank you....ß
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:50 AM Title: Grandparents
Forget Renee she is a bitch loved the chapter and very excited to see what will happen next.....
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:16 AM Title: I forgive you
Ya that first 12 weeks is a bitch but the rest of the time don't get in the way of a pregnent women and her man loved it and thank you for sharing this with us I consider every update a gift.....ß
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:39 AM Title: Heartbeats
loved it very much and I hated my first pap thanks for sharing this with us....
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:17 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital
Lets see I was so horny my husband made a chart so he could have time to recover Which pissed me off and than one day I came home and found him jacking off to some porn that sent me over the edge I went out and bought a vibrator and told him if he didn't need me I didn't need him well the porn was gone in a week and we both enjoyed the vibrator LMAO thanks for sharing this with us.....
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:32 AM Title: The Honeymoon
OMG I hope shes OK Thank god I don't have to wait.....
Date: 06 Oct 2010 9:46 PM Title: Heartbeats
i am so happy for them!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 8:57 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital
yay she's preggaers, loved it, i am so happy and i just want to keep reading but i have so much to do! RL!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 6:50 PM Title: The Wedding
I like that Tanya is not the bad guy in this story.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 10:52 AM Title: The Honeymoon
I loved their free time and Bella must be preggers!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 2:51 AM Title: Husband and Wife
OMG! A pink mini cooper. Now I'm curious what shade of pink is it because in my head I see hot pink with black interior and accents.
And I can't believe that Bella is falling for him just saying he won't sign the divorce paper. Yes it may take forever, but in the long run she doesn't need him to sign. My ex refused to sign and after 19 months my judge forced his hand.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 2:48 AM Title: Road trip
I love that you had them play 20 questions in the car. It was so cute to see them get into getting to know one another. I also love how they go back and forth all the time with the sly comments.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 2:43 AM Title: Mrs. Cullen
That was sort of sweet in a messed up way.