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Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2019 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 17

I picked this story because it was a completed story, and the story line is intriguing. I k ow your AN was a longtime ago, but don’t be discouraged by idiots who wish they had the courage to write. Grammar mistakes jump out at me, and hat hasn’t to me with your story. I mean that as a compliment, because I am very OCD about stuff like that. I like this story :)

Reviewer: wizardsrealm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 13

That was so sweet of Draco to take Hermione to the north pole to see that Santa was really real. I haven't read any other stories where the story teller incorperated Santa being real because he is magical just like the wizarding world. It was a nice touch.

Reviewer: AuthorKatla Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2017 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 22

I loved it, even though the pairing at first had me iffy. I just wanted to let you know I posted a review for this on TUmblr under "the-ice-goddess". I'll have tagged you if you have a known account.

Reviewer: TheMoreSmutTheBetter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 22

Lovely story.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)

Reviewer: TheMoreSmutTheBetter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 21

Very lucky lady.
;-D

Reviewer: TheMoreSmutTheBetter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 18

Lucky lady.
;-D

Reviewer: TheMoreSmutTheBetter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

Great srory. I'm enjoying how it is developing. Love the sensual yumminess between Hermione and her two stud-muffins.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)

Regarding the ungrateful sods that read your story and left awful comments... ignore them. Write what works for you and to He££ with those that, if they can't or won't say anything nice, have yet to learn to keep their comments to themselves.

Reviewer: TheMoreSmutTheBetter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love it!
;-D

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 22

Wonderful. I will miss this story as I enjoyed it so much.

Reviewer: tlmorris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 21

Haunted please

Reviewer: little red Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 19

GO ROSE!!!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 21

I imagine that Scropius has learnt his lesson.  Thank you for a awesome and very hot chapter.

 

Belated Happy Birthday.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 20

Welcome back and with such an enjoyable chapter.

Reviewer: Kageroudazu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 19

Moooooore please!!!!! I'm too wrapped up in the story for it to end here!!!!!! It's amazing and I love it!!!!! Please write some more!!! You're the best author!!!!

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2013 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 17

Don't let people get you down, more than likely those people have no imagination or lack the courage to write out their own ideas so they thrive on tearing down others to make themselves feel better.  Besides if they don't like the story then why the hell do they keep on reading no one forced them to they don't have to be nasty about it they could just leave the story and move on to something else.  I hope you continue with the story

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 19

Yay for Rose, Ron needed that kick to the bottom.  Wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: Aecarey Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2013 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 19

I'm glad you threw in this chapter.  I liked hearing from Rose!

Reviewer: manitou2422 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2013 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 19

Another great chapter.  Keep up the good work:)

Reviewer: faeriesquasher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 18

Well done. I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 18

I thought this was a wonderful chapter, we got to see how much Draco had suffered.  I am so looking forward to the next chapter where (hopefully) Rose causes Ron a lot of hassel. :)

Reviewer: redhotbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 17

Really like this story. I like the new spin you took with the veelan story line. I don't read many Draco and Hermione fanfics I am more of a Drinny shipper, but I do enjoy this one. I look forward to more updates, and please don't feel discouraged by a few people who don't know the difference between constructive criticism and being down right rude.

Reviewer: SatansDarkAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 17

I love this story can't wait for the next for Draco and Hermione bonding and belive me sweetie you are not a crap writer just ignore the people who are saying that to you, you just keep writing what YOU like and sod everyone else x

chin up chick :)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

All I can say about your flamers is some people are stupid.  This is a great story and if they do not like it they do not have to read it.  I really like this story and hope you can finish it.  Just remember it takes no effort to destroy but lots to build.  You are the builder.

Reviewer: Aecarey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 17

It is worth it.  Don't let idiots get you down.  I think there is plenty of conflict to keep the plot going.  Thanks for a great chapter with tender Draco.

Reviewer: CaptainDaniiKirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2013 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wow. This is amazing, such a weird concept but that's what makes it different and good. You are an amazing writer, and can I just say I would not mind being in her position at all ;) can't wait for the next installment :) 

Reviewer: CaptainDaniiKirk Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2013 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

This story is amazing! I would definitely like some Veela sex please ;) 

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2013 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 16

Looking forward to see how the rest of the story pans out

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2013 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 16

Love her kids!

Reviewer: ChocolateMuffin Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

finished reading it again as it is soooo great! please update soon=)

Reviewer: quende Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2012 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 15

hey it was wonderful! just perfect! don't worry. we are still reading!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 15

This is a wonderful chapter.  Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: illeatyerface Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh my God more please now! I LOVE this story. Have been following it for forever..just waiting for you to update again. THANK YOU SO FREAKING MUCH!! Not to be a perv...but do we get a Scorpius/Hermione/Draco scene? 

Reviewer: Selice Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love this story.  I am glad you have finally posted a chapter.  The pacing is bang on.  I can't wait to see what happens next with Draco in the mix. 

 

Please continue to update 

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 15

Happy birthday!  I enjoyed the mating scene.  Can't wait for Draco's turn!!!!  Update again soon please!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 15

wow-that was fantastic!!!!!!  now----time for Draco!!!!!!!

Reviewer: shadow_faerie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 15

Vary good "first time"!!! intence yet sweet. love it!

 

Happy Birthday!!!!

Reviewer: Dutch potterfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 15

I think this is your best story, i'm just said that we have to wait so long for an update and your other story (Blood Ties) wich i also read, is updated twice a week.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 15

I started reading Blood Ties when you first posted it, but I think it dragged on too long and lost itself. I think I stopped reading it when he turned her? I can't really remember. But I'm glad you posted on this one; I like this story. But I agree with you about shorter stories. They seem to be more focused with a short, self-contained story.

Reviewer: sdk124 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

When are you going to update this?



Author's Response:

I'm on vacation next week and I plan on sitting down and getting the next chapter written. Sorry it's been so long but this chapter is pretty important to the plot of the story and I want to make sure that 
I get it right. Hang in there, it will be up before you know it.

Reviewer: illeatyerface Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 14

NEED MOREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: shadow_faerie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 14

Cant wait for you to update this story again!!! i wasnt sure if i was going to like it at first but now im totaly sucked in!!

Reviewer: puglvr Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 14

Can't wait until the next upload.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 14

this helped alot with visualizing what is happening.....will be waiting anxiously for youe update!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 13

I love Christmas! What a great touch! You were right, we did need a little fluff! Now on to some serious business!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 14

Love the update!

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 12

More, please.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 8

"So, there’s nothing that we can do. We have to just stand back and let him win...I never realized what she meant to me and now she’s gone"

Ron is such a douche in this. Seriously? He never realised what she meant until now? After knowing her more than half his life? If that's the case, then he truly doesn't deserve her.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it. I didn't find it slow or anything, either. I thought it was needed. Just one little thing I thought you should know, because I'm finicky like that, is that it's 'per se' not 'per say'. It's Latin.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 4

I was not expecting that. At all. Completely and utterly shocked. I like how you've woven it in though, with the male veelas and all. But, if veela are naturally possessive creatures, what happens now that Hermione is mated to both Draco and Scorpius. Do they have like a time share or something? Weird.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 3

I wonder if he knows and condones what Scorpius is doing.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2012 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Creepy. Why is it that I find reading creeperfics so interesting?

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

ahhhhh I love Draco! He really is trying so hard......

Reviewer: anneryn7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 11

I'm addicted to this. -.-

Reviewer: anneryn7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

I wonder what Hermione will do. I can't picture her giving up Hugo and Rose without a fight. I wonder how Draco will react to it. Love it. Great chapter!

Reviewer: anneryn7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 8

Aw. I wonder if Ron and Harry will do anything rash. Good chapter, though. Hopefully the next chapter will have Hermione and the Malfoy duo. Hope you're able to update soon! =]

Reviewer: anneryn7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 6

Aw, poor Hermione. I get that it's fate and everything, but forcing her to give up her kids? That's just cold.

Reviewer: anneryn7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh, no he didn't. Lol. 

Reviewer: anneryn7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

Ooooh, love it.

Reviewer: anneryn7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

So.... Maybe Malfoy will help her....? Here's to hoping!

Reviewer: anneryn7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 2

I love how twisted this is! (It's a compliment; I swear.) =]

Reviewer: anneryn7 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Okay, so, question, is Draco going to find out about the abduction? I wonder how'd he react to it. He always had that tension with Hermione. Great start!

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 8

This is really good, please update soon Xx

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

Please continue this...It's great!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

luv the malfoys! great story!

Reviewer: brooklynsam3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 6

i actually love it. :) very detailed and we written. i like how you have draco and scorpius alike and yet so different. :)

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2011 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

I was so happy to see the update.  Will she get to see her children?  I can't believe there is only 18 reviews.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 5

I can't wait to see how this triad works out.

Reviewer: nml82190 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

I hope the malforys win that would be down right awsome

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

I must be twisted but I am liking the idea of Hermione,  as mate of Scorpius and Draco.  I hope they win. LOL

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

ha ha.  I love it and so might Hermione in the end. LOL

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

What a cliffy.  I wonder how Draco, will react to finding Scorpius had kidnapped Hermione?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow, poor Hermione, not only being scared witless but also finding she liked his kisses.  Oh boy is she in trouble.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

This very creepy but interesting. I cannot wait to see where you go with this.

Reviewer: DiamondEnchantress Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

loved the ending

good idea to fill in the background info as so many people just copy the first veela story

great

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh this is getting gooood!  I think it will be difficult to wrap your story up in 2 or 3 chapters...there are so many different directions that it can now go.  I usually enjoy a dark ending...I'm not much of a HEA kinda chick, at least not in ff.

Reviewer: acolao Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 4

sorry, I'm a sucker for happy endings, so that's my vote (if it isn't too late)

Reviewer: markia25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 4

you have to make more chapters. I would personally like a dark ending. Let's be honest they are who they are no matter what.

Reviewer: Biancarose123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

i love it hope for more soon

Reviewer: Gwenalina Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 3

stil we WANT TO KNOW MORE!!!^^ will draco help her get out... or on the contrary has helped his son to abduct her :P 'bitch slap' what a douchebag this draco malfoy have beena nd always will be :P

Reviewer: Saphira Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 3

I's think you the great writer, I's hope to read next chapter, I's like your story, I's think it's little bit creepy, but I's like it still. XD

Okey okey, i like your story and i wanna read next chapter soon, please. :D

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

This story is.. Creepy, but in a good way. :)

I can't wait to read more!

-Sofia

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

Hopefully Draco will want Hermoine away from his son, as much as she wants to be away from him.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

I gotta give the kid snaps for being a good kisser ;)

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good first chapter...can't wait for more.

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