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Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2022 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 31: New Flavours

This story as with all is a total blast!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2015 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 32: Combating Worry

Just finding this story  after  reading  "Dove . "  Very impressed  with  your  writing  and your  language  research ! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2015 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 6: Perchance to Dream

Fabulous  writing ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! And thanks so much for reviewing. <3

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 2: Arrival

The way they talk to each other is so playful.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 2: Arrival

I loved how Edward was atttentive to her in this chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm glad. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Gran6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 50: The End is the Beginning

I am thoroughly enjoying these stories.  I can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! I do hope you enjoy them. :)

Reviewer: montanagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 50: The End is the Beginning

Thank you so much this was a beautiful Story



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Chandrakanta Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 28: Surfin' Brazil

I love this story. The whole series, in fact. Will you ever complete it here on TWCS? I much prefer reading here, or any of the other fan fic sites, to FFn.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your praise and support, Chandrakanta. I'd like to put all my stories up here, but it's very time consuming. It takes me about an hour per chapter and I just can't spare the time right now. Perhaps in the summer I can put it up a chapter per week, if things work out well. We're waiting for word as to when my son will have his next open heart surgery. Might be this summer, might be further away. Thanks for asking, I'll do what I can.

xoox Jess

 

Reviewer: sokapela Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 28: Surfin' Brazil

Pleaseplease post mord! I love this serie



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I've been too busy to back up my stories here. This story is complete on ffnet and I have many more stories there. Please come and visit me. :)

 

https://www.fanfiction.net/~jmolly

Reviewer: Chaila Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 2: Arrival

Oh...just found this story and I love it! Bella and Edward they are so confident with each other, no angst just pure love and life.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much :) Health has been an issue lately and I haven't been able to upload more chapters here. All my stories are on ffnet if you'd care to read more. I'm so glad you like my Bella and Edward. Happy reading!

Reviewer: babesbraves Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 28: Surfin' Brazil

Fantastic story I hope you did a follow on book!!!!! You rock as a writer!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. The rest of the story is posted on ffnet under 'jmolly'. I haven't had a chance to post the rest of it here, yet. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope you'll read more of my stories there.

xo

Jess

Reviewer: Zaura Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 7: Rising Up

My favourite chapter. Loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you. It's one of my favourite chapters, too. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 28: Surfin' Brazil

Great story and great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you! I now have all the stories uploaded here. Enjoy!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 28: Surfin' Brazil

I so love this story........please keep writing ;-)



Author's Response:

Thanks! The rest of the story (and series) is available here now. Enjoy!

Reviewer: izhavo Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2012 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 25: Heightened Senses

Excellent!

Thank´s!!



Author's Response:

I've missed being notified for a bunch of reviews. Thanks for reviewing! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. All my stories are now uploaded on this site. Enjoy!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 9: Honesty Bites

Love the interaction between Edward and Bella in your story, they actually talk to each other.  Wish the books had, had more of this.



Author's Response:

I've missed being notified for a bunch of reviews. Thanks for reviewing! That was one of my pet peeves about the original books, too.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 6: Perchance to Dream

Just Wonderful!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2011 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 21: Unleashing the Modern Manpire

Wow, that is some talent that Bella and Edward have.   Very unexpected, but very cool, nonetheless.



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm glad you like their talent. It will be important in the future of the series. 

 

Hope you continue to enjoy the story.  You're just starting to get to the good parts :)

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 18: Pregnant

Oh man - their antics sometimes make me want to ROTFL!! :-P



Author's Response:

Glad to make you laugh :)

Reviewer: docevampiro Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 16: Hunting

Só um vampiro para vestir um sweater no calor do Rio!



Author's Response:

Hello :)

 

My Portuguese is weak, excuse me.  If I get your meaning, you want to know why Edward brought a sweater to Rio.  Well, it is winter, and the temperature rarely goes above 60 degrees F.  So he would stand out amongst US tourists if he did not have one.

Obrigado :)

 

Reviewer: docevampiro Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 2: Arrival

Parabéns pelo português, impecável! E foi a descrição mais realista que já li sobre o Rio.

*Bella sambando, haha...esta eu quero ver!



Author's Response:

My friend Sarahhalliwell translates the Portuguese for me.  I''m glad you are finding it good.  I would like to answer you in Portuguese, but it would probably be incomprehensible, haha.  My friend is unavailable to translate your review for me, but I bet you either speak English or know someone who does.

Wouldn't you love to watch Bella Samba? I would!

I hope I have captured Rio for readers. I was very disappointed with the original novel, that she only spent 6 pages describing the honeymoon.

Please  PM me and tell me where you are from. My friend is from Curitiba and I have another friend in Colombia.

Ate logo :)

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 17: Sated Thirst

So, what is the next part?



Author's Response:

Hon', I am just so behind posting here thanks to RL.  IHFYT is not complete, but posts regularly on ff net. Please check me out there if you want more, because I just can't spend the time posting here atm.  Hoping to do a posting blitz one day, but I know it won't be soon.  Thanks for the interest.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 13: Conversations

Happy to see the faith growing. Always knew it was there.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 12: Human Moments

Amazed at how much he remembers about his human years.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 11: Bond, James Bond

Fabulous day. Bond, James Bond



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your lovely reviews. Due to family circumstances my posting here has been put on hold.  If you want to read ahead, please find me on ffnet under the same pen name.

 

Regards,

 

J

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 10: Hot and Cold Suitcases

Nice surprises. Great hide and seek.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 9: Honesty Bites

Grrrr!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 8: Mendicant

Love this family. Things that could be normal but they make so funny. Kids have a tendancy to forget that their parents have a sex life too. Doesn't end just because you have kids.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 7: Rising Up

So he smells she's pregnant?



Author's Response:

Sure. Her blood is different. lol

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 6: Perchance to Dream

Gives Bella a better idea of the demon within too.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Cove

Vampires really get tired?

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 4: Hunger Assuaged

Great. Oh, forgot to ask last chapter, this Edward needs to shave?



Author's Response:

Yes, my vamps aren't canon.  They shave & cut hair and nails, feel temperatures (although they tolerate them) and feel pain.  They do not crumble like marble either.  They aren't thoroughly 'dead'.  You might say they are more like mutants, with new cells that each function like separate circulations.  Ah, it's complicated. Ch44 on ffnet explains.

 

xo

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 2: Arrival

Wow, hot. Tickelish and Sex crazed. Great!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: Departure

Like this side of them

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 17: Sated Thirst

mean place to stop

great story



Author's Response:

Sorry, family circumstances have interfered with posting here. You can read more on ffnet under my same pen name. I posted ch44 yesterday.

 

Thanks for reviewing:)

Reviewer: oopsadaysey Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 17: Sated Thirst

I'm giving you this review now I have caught up - I only discovered the story yesterday - BLOODY BRILLIANT-

I love the whole concept keep on rocking and I love your OCD



Author's Response:

You are too kind!  Thanks so much for the lovely review.  I haven't had time to post more to this site, but the story is up to ch 42 on ffnet.  Will catch up here when RL gets more accommodating.

 

Thanks again,

 

Jess

Reviewer: badrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 4: Hunger Assuaged

I really, really need Edward for more than just next weekend.  Can we make a deal?  I really need him for a week.  I will be forever in you debt.



Author's Response:

Dang! B says 'no'. She can't go without him for more than 24 hours. xoox

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 17: Sated Thirst

Hi, I just came here to see the posted banner. Nice. You know, if you want you can post photos (of places and of characters) in all chapters. It is fun. I am doing it for Eros and Psyche here (not that it gets me reviews), and will do it also for The Parachutist. I have an impressive collection now, war photos, photos of period objects, I even found my perfect Egon (the one that triggers Edward's repentance) complete of ring...

I reread this chapter, by the way. The pee scene is really nice, endearing and very understandable. No gross at all.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)  I'm so happy to have the banner.  Read counts are up already.

 

I like to draw, and I haven't had time or energy.  I'm hoping to actually add illustrations.  I'm so excited  to hear you have photos for the Parachutist.  I'd love to see the one of Egon and his ring, if you'd send it to me.  Send it to my home mail as usual, if you do, not to the one on this profile.

 

I actually find that scene very cute.  He's like a young boy sometimes.  lol

 

xo

Reviewer: Bcullen1026 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 17: Sated Thirst

haha...it's about time they figured it out! Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you *bows*.

 

More soon, in the continuing saga of "As Bella Turns".

 

xo

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 17: Sated Thirst

Oh, I so love this story and am happy that they now in tune with the pregnancy.  But they aren't going to be happy to find out that the rest of the family knew about it except them.    Oh, that conversation will go over well - NOT!!



Author's Response:

Well, I can't have them all being perfect, can I?  Where would the fun be in that!  Yeah, you'll see the response.  More soon.

 

xo

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 17: Sated Thirst

Well I do love this story!!! Update soon I am on pins and needles....



Author's Response:

Thank you:)  Must take time to write, however, so you'll likely see the next instalment in a week.  Thanks for reading:)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Cove

oh my gosh i hate u sooo much just then!!! When r u posting again?? Ok sooo I think he is hibernating from being over sexed LMAO 



Author's Response:

Well, I posted lots more, just for you. Lol

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Cove

oh my gosh i hate u sooo much just then!!! When r u posting again?? Ok sooo I think he is hibernating from being over sexed LMAO 



Author's Response:

I've missed being notified for a bunch of reviews. Thanks for reviewing! LOL! I hope you enjoyed Ed's nap. All my stories have posted now. Enjoy!

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 4: Hunger Assuaged

IOlove the lemons in this... it was nice and not raunchy or anything .. ok soo humor me.. I think that Edward is changing in to a diff type of vamp and i think that maybe thier bond will give bella powers before she changes.. thats coooooll LOL-cant wait to keep reading

 

SN: Would love to have a lap dance from Edward :-)



Author's Response:

you're going to love me.  Seriously.

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 2: Arrival

imi excited ..i have already read thisfromthe beginning.. Ifelt like i was therewith them ur such a great writer.. cant wait to cont reading!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  More in about a week.  Keep on reading:)

Reviewer: dr3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Cove

You're a great storyteller. You've kept the characters flavor and all is exactly written as it should be... Filling in, expanding the depths ... of all things Twilight. Marvelous. You rock! This is total enjoyment.  and Yeah, how could you end the chapter here.  Write-on ;)  And yeah, I'm totally Edward obsessed.  



Author's Response:

Wow, you're swelling my head terribly.  You can do that anytime:D  Thank you!

 

I never claimed not to be mean.  Will try to find time by the weekend to upload a few more chaps.

 

Yeah, I love Edward too.

 

xo

Reviewer: dr3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: Departure

Hot. hot. hot. It's so interesting to see what I've been missing (an knowing it's never too late to be...). Glad I found your stories on this site.  Guess, I'll be reading .. rest of this story sitting in a bathtub full of ice cubes as this chapter is just the beginning of Hot. (imagine men being so sexy & affectionate). Oh yeah, Edward is so, so, so..., Ah wait, wait, wait... I just had an IAN. 



Author's Response:

ROFL!!!  Glad you're enjoying it.  If you think he's hot now, wait 'til you read chapter ...

 

*snickers*

 

xo

Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Cove

omg let edward be ok



Author's Response:

He has to live.  There's a lot more book left.

 

xo

 

ps- he can't die, because I love him.

Reviewer: katees Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1: Departure

Yes, please do more ridiculous and undigmified things.

I really like your series! And super glad you update so fast :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kate.

 

You will find a lot of fun ahead.  I'll post more chaps by the weekend.  Just need time to get them uploaded.

xo

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Cove

Ugh, what's going on with Edward?    And Alice said that the rest of the honeymoon would be fine.    Bella has got to be freaking out!!!   There's nobody there to help them. 



Author's Response:

Stay tuned for more.  All I need are a couple of hours to update.  I'll try to post more on the weekend.

 

xo

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Cove

nice story so far :) love the cliffhanger!  keep going!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)  I'll keep posting, you keep reading:D

Reviewer: bwen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Departure

Thanks for the answers, they make logical sense. Can't wiat for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Glad you are happy:)  I look forward to your next review.

 

Hoping to post more this weekend, as I have a lot of chapters to upload.  But first, I want to spend some time writing.  Have not done that all day, and now I'm in withdrawal.

 

Keep in touch!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 2: Arrival

Well your 60 hours of hard work produced an amazingly well written chapter!!!! Kudos for the romance and site seeing the scenes were so vivid and the emotions so palpable, well done!!

The best part though is the dialogue between Bella and Edward that shows that electric connection they have, and the depth of the trust and love that they have for each other.

The sense of fun was inspiring, but 2 things bothered me, why is Edwards beard growing? and does Edward telling Bella the key pad number herald problems in the future?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:D

 

Your first question:  this is something from my canon, based on what I find logical.  It's kind of gross, but did you know that human hair and nails continue to grow after death?  That's a fact.  Additionally, I always thought, 'what if the vamps got in a fight, and somebody pulled their hair out?'  They'd be afraid to damage themselves, and I can't see hairs reattaching themselves one by one.  So I thought, logically, hair should be able to grow.  And yes, they can cut it.  It's no coarser or stronger than human hair.  Otherwise, how would they fit in, in human society?

The next logical question is, 'is their skin marble-hard and freezing cold?'. No, it isn't.  In my canon, it's pretty impermeable and does not damage like a human's, and it's cooler than a human's, but the vamps are not mobile rocks.  Imagine bumping into a statue in the school hallway, or letting marble-Carlisle take your pulse. Say Em and Jazz bump fists, with a sound like grating rock.  They could never blend.

My vamps are durable.  They repair easily, and it takes a lot to injure them.  They can however, feel pain and discomfort.  If they could not feel pain, they could not logically feel pleasure either.

As to the keypad number, I can't give away all my secrets now, can I?

Thanks so much for the reviews, and the rating.  I hope you enjoy this book.  I'm a bit obsessed with it, myself.  LOL

xoox

 

 

 

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: Departure

Amazing chapter so many discoveries and so much love and lust, great writing!! The visuals you ceated were vivid amusing and arousing. Loved it!!!!!



Author's Response:

For some reason, my asnwer to this just refuses to post:)  So I'm trying for the 4th time.  LOL

 

You are so welcome for the chapter.  Hope you're continuing to enjoy the story.  Lots more to come:)

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