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Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 22

Great loved it

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 22

Such a great little story, glad to see things turned out great for everyone. Great job

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 22

thanks for the story!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 21

wow interesting flip for the james character.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 20

okay that was a quick wrap up of the problem

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 19

cool

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 18

preger sickness YUK

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 17

she forgives him everything... and he offers little or no explanation

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 16

Pregers!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 15

you sure are a wild child bella

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 14

okay...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

alrighty then

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 12

not cool rose you are such a B

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

ooh i was wondering when the drama was going to start again!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 10

oh boy wild girl!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 9

wow moving fast.. jacob you are soo sweet

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

she seems to only do things for jasper.. is that really a healthy relationship and we still do not have answers!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

okay he is very commanding....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

okay moving quickly... there still isn't really an explanation about why jaspser didn't come except that he thought she was dead why did he stop writing?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 5

okay poor bella...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 4

hum... they must have given her money to give it to jasper, but i don't buy it he could have came to see for himself but he was all up in the money and living in luxury

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 3

okay.... that is a twist....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

poor bells.. you broke her heart jas!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

humm.. i wonder why she is in witness protection... you sparked my interest i am all in!

Reviewer: jlou10dun Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

Alice is dumb. she can't use Bella's parents or even Esme as a way to track if the baby is boy or girl. Men decide the sex

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this story, but personally I felt the ending was a little rushed. 

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

So I was right about Ms. Cope, but James not being a total jerk was a pleasant surprise :)

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 8

I like how everyone is there for Bella, especially Jasper.  Major brownie points :)

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 6

I like how Bella is the one with the scars here and not Jasper.  It's just a different twist :)

I still want to knwo what happens next and am glad that I do not jhave to wait for updates yet :)

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh, I am such a Team Jasper fan and the dance scene at the end just made me swoon :)

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 4

Hmm...perhaps Ms. Cope was being paid off by Aro or Caius...

 

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 3

Haha, I actually breathed a sigh of relief when I found out Alice was engaged to Edward hahahaha :)

I KNEW it!  Ms. Cope needs to be throttled...oh, wait.  That is probably what she really thinks because Bella is in witness protection.

I like this story more and more :)

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh, no...my heart is in my throat, because I know she is going to see Jasper again and I am just dying to know what happens...

I also have a feeling that Ms. Cope never mailed those letters to Jasper...

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the introduction to this story.  I really like how you didn't just jump into why Bella is in Witness Protection.  The single sentence you have that mentions it is enough to make me want to read more :)

Well, I am glad that at this point I do not have to wait for updates and can immediately click 'next' :)

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 13

Just read all 13 chapters and am enjoying this story immensly... Cannot wait until your next chapter!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2011 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loving this story so far!! Can't wait to read more! :)

Reviewer: bb120 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 11

oh my !! .... that was unexpected !! .... can't wait for the next chap !!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story has caught my attention

Reviewer: sprazinko Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

really good so far

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