Date: 27 May 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 40
You have RACKED MY LAST DAMN NERVE with this story !!!!!!
But I have loved every minute of it !!!!!!
I am EAGERLY AWAITING the next sequel .... they have both been
Thanks muches for sharing another wonderful story with me....
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
Date: 05 Jan 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 39
Ok, I hope I won't get burned for saying this. I read Here we go Again and I liked the storyline very much, the pace was good, the chapters well written, building just enough tension to keep you reading but not too much too make you just close the browser and never be bothered with it again. All in all a great story with great possibility to envolve into more as you showed with Flightless bird. The one thing that bothered me however, and the only thing that makes me stop reading, is the relationship between Bella, Carlisle and Esme. I understand the way you bonded those three but I don't think the level in which the 'love' each other is healthy and to tell you the truth, the whole time I was reading the story I was ignoring that small but still very important aspect of the characters. In Here we go again Edward, even though he had his moments, was pushed entirely into the background and besides the few dates, he and Bella had no time to build their relationship and help it grow into what is from one to into the other a strong love. Carlisle was always there to do what Edward should be doing for her. I understand it to a point, since they've been through so much together. But I started reading this story as a romance between Edward and Bella, not Bella and everyone else. This chapter, Bella and Edward's wedding, was just too much. Bella's dance with Carlisle, though I'm not saying they shouldn't dance together, was too much.
Thank you for the honest review. I know Bella's relationship with both Carlisle and Esme is different, but it's how I saw it when writing this series. I do appreciate your honesty.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 38
this is once again a great story and if I could have voted for you I would have but I was to late, but I still think you are awesome author and I hope you do writ a sequel to this story.
Author's Response: Thank you:) I appreciate it:)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 36
Hmmmm. Quitting? I wish Esme would help her see that it's more like "a need to change jobs and environment". Quitting is giving up and sitting at home; changing jobs is just that - doing what she does best, but in a different way and different environment. The affects of her torture would impact her ability to perform in the field, and everyone should understand and respect that. The other characters should reflect that if THEY had been receiving the torture, would THEY have just been able to return to the job and carry on as if nothing happened??? Nope. They shouldn't expect that of Bella, either. Hopefully one of the characters will have enough common sense to point that out to the other meatheads when they start giving her a hard time about leaving the team.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 35
I liked the chapter. I'm not really sure about B just quitting like that but your the author so I'll leave it to you. But I've got a petition to make I would really love to read the reactions of everyone and maybe for them to feel a little guilty about how they treated B, but that's just me.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 35
She has to do what is right for her! Not what everyone else wants. And any person who tells you they understand what a rape/torture victim has gone through by reading the reports is kidding themselves. It's like the male GYN doctor who says the speculum doesn't hurt, ask him if he'd like to have it shoved up his you know what and watch him change his tune.
Teaching folks to think outside the box seems to be the ticket.
Author's Response: lovely analogy!! I like that:)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 35
I understand how she feels. She wants to make a difference. To do so she has to affect more than one person. If she can teach officers how to do a better job then those officers in the field will make quicker arrests, thus stopping the violence.
I know this is just fiction, but this goes on in real life. Leaving the bureau is hard for her but yet I think she wants a change as well. If she ever wants children she can not be in harms way. Edward needs to think AHEAD of his next orgasim.
He could have lost her forever. Part of her now is lost. He hasn't figured that out yet.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 35
I must say that Bella quitting FBI in first minute seems to be way out of character for her. I know - big trauma and situations like she was put through can do it to you, but I thought she was stranger than that. More stubborn. More ambitious and driven. More determinate.
then I thought abut Her love ones - Edward, Carlisle, even Esme. I don’t think she has any more to give in this job in this moment and in her current state of mind. Maybe she just needs some perspective, some time out. My bet is - three months without a gun but with husband and best friend running around with guns and she will be coming back to FBI quicker then you an say “sequel”:)
Hmm, interesting theory:)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 35
I don't know why she thinks it will be easier at the police academy. She should at least work at the FBI academy. She won't loose all of her tenure.
True but the FBI academy is in Virginia and they would not leave Seattle after everything they have been through.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 33
With as many stitches as she has in her, I can't figure out how she is able to get around let alone able to wear any shirts. Not to mention being carried anywhere. I am so looking forward to happier chapters.
It would be hard. They coverd the stitches with guase to keep them from getting infected. With everything she had been through, going through that little bit of pain would be worth it to her to be with Edward:)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 34
I am happy for Rose and Emmett. They will be great parents. Bella and Edward will heal with time. I think Bella realized this time that her actions have consiquences that are far reaching. She needs to think of more than herself and the case. She has to think of her family.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 32
Poor Bella. I can understand Emmett's and Jasper's issues, but really I think Bella has had a lot more to deal with and that they need to get their heads out of their asses.
Edward continued support is beautiful, but I wonder if Bella can ever be truely fine after everything she has experienced.
Very emotive writing, it definitely draws you in to their world.
Thank you so much. No, Bella will never be 100% but then again, she never was after the first story. I guess I'll have to see what Bella has to tell me:)
Date: 09 Sep 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
Haha I did not see this update and skip it so I had to come back.
So we see just how bad Demetri is treating Bella. He made a comment that threw me off did he know they were undercover FBI agents when they were doing the scene underground or he just brought it up to see if he could get a reaction out of her...
He brought it up just to get a reaction from her. THank you:)
Date: 01 Sep 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 26
I understand the need for Diplomatic Immunity logically. However, I thoroughly believe some need to have their teeth kicked in. If there is enough evidence the offender can be 'asked' to leave our country. Here is where a couple of very big goons with masks would come in handy.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 25
Once again Bella thinking she know it all gets her in trouble. Bella has a godcomplex. It is very sad. She has all these people who love her, but she won't let them all the way in. Bella was way out of line.
Thank you :)
Date: 27 Aug 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
She finally lost it and said so much crap to Carlisle that once she has some time to cool down I'm sure shell regret it.
Looks like we are almost at the prologue. Cant wait to see how long it takes them to notice she was taken.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
Intense ending. Can't wait to see if get any more info on the parents actions and motivations.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wait what I thought Heidi was demetri sub but she lives with Sean I'm so confused lol. Can't wait to see what is up with them..
You're right. I messed up. I went back to check while writing this chapter but missed it. I'm fixing it now:)
Date: 13 Aug 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
This is a really good story. I wish you would post weekly. I had to reread several chapters to get back into it. I am with Swan BDSM is sick.
Thank you:) I try to post weekly but this story has been difficult to write.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow bella is really having a hard time with everything and it seems like she holds Edward a bit responsible for what happened underground. I hope she talk to Bella soon cause it seems like she losing it and quick too.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
Bella thinks she always has to be in charge. She needs to let go and let Edward in or it will kill them. Edward did nothing wrong. He did not want that assignment. Bella wanted him to do it. She needs to remember that.