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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 19

I am so glad that craziness ended. I hope Edward and Bella dye their hair back normal, so at least when they get home they kind of resemble themselves. Bella needs to have some sessions with Esme. Bella put Edward in a bad position, but I think he will be ok.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 18

great chapter



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Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 18

I'm with the families! Let's move this along and get the scum bags so they can get back to the families.



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Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 18

Wow Bella is having a really hard time adapting to being Amie the sub. Benajmin just gives me a creepy vibe especially after that look he gave Edward when he said they were leaving. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 18

Bella always has to be in control and in the playroom she isn't. I think they need to find another way to fight this case. It is taking too much out of all of them. It is too much of a cost.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 17

I am glad that Edward blindfolded Bella. She could forget she had an audience or at least try.



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Thank you

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 17

great chapter



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 17

that was kinda hot! cant wait till the next chapter hopefuly the ywill start to find stuff their looking for

 



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 16

I would in form Carlisle of the weirdos across the street as well. I feel so bad for Edward and Bella. Even if you like the D/s relationship not everyone likes to do scenes in public. But to be thrown into this lifestyle has to very hard.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 16

great  chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 16

ohhh underground...sounds interestin. Post again soon



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 16

Surprising they didn't notice being followed home. Both should know never to let their guards down.



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Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 15

great chapter



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 14

That was just creepy. I can appreciate the whole D/s relationship, but the leading on a leash is too much.



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Who was on a leash?

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 14

great chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 5

Well, Well finally a break on this case. I wonder what the DEA wants with Henry Rollins.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 4

Well that was quite the meeting in Carlisle's office. I am glad that they got the case because something tells me if the police department was on it the case would just go cold.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 3

Well this just got worse for all of them. The one person that they could get any information from is now dead.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 2

That is sad that something happened to Lauren's sister. I know it must have killed Lauren to go to them and ask for help but she knows that they won't stop until they find out what happened.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow that must have terrified Emmett and Jasper to go to Bella and ask her to marry her sisters. I am cracking up that Edward and Bella are stringing their parents along.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 4:17 AM Title: Prologue

Oh wow poor Bella gets taken again. I feel bad for her because they are always taking her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 13

This is so wierd. The different looks. Bella on a leash. I don't see her submitting.

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

Holy molely! Hell of a bunch braver than I.



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I know, right!

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 13

great chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 13

so many changes so quick...post again soon please



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 13

well at leat they are playing a married couple and they are now! cant wait till the next chapter



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

I am glad they got married, but I hate this assignment they are on. It is causeing them too much pain.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 12

great chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: BellaEdwardForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 12

Thank so much for fast update. I love it finally they get getting. after I read end at last chapter I guess right they go Las Vegas get married. I hope this sequel have HEA ending. I hate sad ending. when I read prologue you give me heart attck.  I just wonder are bella gonna have babies in this story? I hope they got boy and girl. boy who look like edward have green eye and bronze hair. Girl who look like bella have brown hair and brown. I hate read story author alway make them have girls that so boring. I hate it when they make bella and edward daughter who look like edward and their baby boy who look like bella that so gross and gay.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: BellaEdwardForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

I like your Bella character than other story I have read. author always make bella weak and she think she ugly. I like to read strong bella depend on herself. keep up good work.



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Thank you. I like a strong Bella too;)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

so sad...glad there getting married though. Post again soon please



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 11

great chapter



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 11

well that was very very emotionaly ! 



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For me as well. Thank you:)

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 11

Gotta to keep you eye on the prize. No matter how hard it is.



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Yep, thanks:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 10

This will be an intense assignment. Bella thinks about the victims, but she needs to think how hard this will be for Edward and her team as well. I am glad she finally agreed to marry Edward.



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Thank you.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 10

aww their getting married! cant wait to see what happens next 



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Thank you

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 10

great chapter

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 9

wow just like that he popped thequestion... loved it post again soon please



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 9

great chapter

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 9

awwwww i hope it comes out ok...



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Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

Really not what I was expecting him to say at the end of that chapter!

Great chapter



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Thank youL :)

Reviewer: fanpire19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 9

OMG you love cliffhangers right you've been leaving them since the prologue I hate you for that :D But Im loving the story It's great.



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I love cliffies;) But I try not to make you wait too long for the next  chap.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 9

well that was quick! i would marry him!! cant wait to see what she says



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 8

this is getting really good!!! i love it!!!

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Saphira Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 8

Ha ha haa, I can't stop laughing after reading this sentence: Any man who would kidnap a woman, much less a federal agent, needs his ass kissed. It was so good... XD

It's very good storey ang I love it. :D

Hope to read next chapter soon. :P



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 8

Edward is just going to love Bella going undercover in a club like Eclipse. He is going to be so thrilled.

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 8

If she only wants the team and nobody trusts Mike and Tyler why would they mention the name of the hotel while Mike and Tyler are in the room? Actually I'm just guessing at Tyler but Mike stood up which would indicate he was in the room when the hotel was mentioned.

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 8

great chapter

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Date: 04 Jun 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

great chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 8

just getting her into lots of touble

 

Reviewer: VampireEv Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 8

yay this chappie was great. your a great writer

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 8

ohhh undercover work...in a strip club no less, Edwards not gonna like that. Post again soon please:)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh, good hopefully they did not bring Mike or Tyler. Won't put it past them to be part of the drug/sex slave ring, or the very least being in the pay of the two scum bag DEA agents.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 7

Bella better calm her boys down or Sam is going to be dead.



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Reviewer: fallanydeeper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 7

Ok, I am officially pouting. See... -pouts-

Damn Sam for not wanting to harm Bella lol I guess I'll have to save the party for later on?

I like that Sam is in love with Natalie and I hope she is found alive so that the young lovers can be reunited.

Awesome update as always. I'm looking forward to tomorrow's. I can't wait for Edward's reaction.



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I promise you plenty of torture later.

Reviewer: fallanydeeper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 6

YES! Bella's been taken -does happy dance-

Absolutely awesome update once again. I'm liking the dodgy cops. I had a feeling in your prologue that the guys who had Bella were Feds and I'm hoping I'm not wrong. It seems that much more dangerous when the bad guys are law enforcement officers.

Can't wait for the next update but until then I'll be found packing a bag for Bella so she can enjoy her stay a little more.

-turns the music up and hands out the party poppers-

Bye bye Bella!!



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lol, not a Bella fan, huh?

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 6

great chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 6

well everythign just always happens to bella! cant wait till the next chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 6

How much drama can one person handle. After everything that has happened to her one would think a sixth or seventh sense would develope.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 5

Mike is an idiot. YOU never call a pregnant woman fat. You really never call anyone fat. That is just rude. Mike's momma should have taught him better.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

great chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 5

humm? well thats an intresting turn of events?



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 4

I hope they can keep their heads on together, since they are so close to the victim of this case. Lauren wasn't a friends, but she was some one they knew.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 4

this is really good...i cant wait to see how this comes out!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 4

great chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 6:22 PM Title: Prologue

YES!!! this is going to be good!!

Reviewer: fallanydeeper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 4

Firstly I would like to apologise for not reviewing sooner. I mostly read fiction on my iPhone and it doesn't like to review. (Trust me when I say that my phone and I have had several fights concerning this matter).

I first came across you when I read 'Here we go again' and I fell in love immediately. Such a perfect story and wonderously written. I love 'strong Bella' it is so nice to see her portrayed in this way, not having to be picked up off of the ground by Edward in every other paragraph.

I also really enjoy that they are all FBI agents and that it's not just about meeting and falling in love (and having lots of hot, steamy sex - which I love) I adore the fact that there is a story, there is a point to everything.

Your prologue has me intrigued and I'm being incredibly sick in hoping that it is Bella who is tied up (hehe - she's definately not my favourite character) I'm guessing that this scene is actually a snippet from later on during the story?

I am pleased to say that since favouriting you and your stories I now get an email alert every morning as soon as I wake up and my routine is to now wake up, read your update, smile and then go back to sleep for an hour and dream of an FBI Edward (Mmmmm)

Anyway, kudos... You are awesome... I look forward to my email tomorrow :P And I really hope you turn this into a trilogy... Or more?



Author's Response:

Thank you for the awesome review!!!! I loved it. I am so glad you enjoyed Here We Go Again. It is one of my favs just because Bella has a backbone in it. If you ever read any of my other stuff, you will see that Bella is usually stronger than she is in most stories.  As for the Proglogue, it was Bella tied up. It is roughly three months down the road.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

cant wait to see where this is going! 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Mizz Volturi Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 4:19 PM Title: Prologue

awesome chapter keep going:]



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Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 3

great chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

great chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

she needs to kick both their asses! great chapter ant wait to see whats next



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

Would have loved to see her let loose and not hold back. Would have enjoyed more if she got Tyler along with Mike. The sexist pigs!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: fanpire19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 3

Noooo!!! You are so mean updatting twice today and living it there. How can you do this to us? :s

P.S. I love the story is great



Author's Response:

Hmmm, Have I ever mentioned that I am evil and I love the cliffies??? No, well, I am evil and I love to leave clifffies ;) Thank you for the review. I promise more soon!

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

great chapter.... love how you made it 3 years ahead.... great so far



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

As usual to short. I'm the impatient type, I want it all, and I want it now.



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Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 12:24 PM Title: Prologue

ok i love the prologue for this story it has me intreaged already i cant wait to see what you come up with so please update soon



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 7:07 AM Title: Prologue

sounds like a great story... can not wait for more



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Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 4:08 AM Title: Prologue

Wow! You assume it's Bella being tortured but you never know. Like your style. Short chapters but frequent updates. Good for all!

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 2:37 AM Title: Prologue

Hot dog! The gangs in groove again.

 



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Thank you ;)

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