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Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2019 12:45 AM Title: Changing Tides

Damn, Bella's a better woman than I would've been in that situation. She gave up almost all of her child bearing years to that cheating asshole and now she's willing to help him raise his Bastard kid. I guess I'm a terrible person.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2018 1:29 PM Title: What Could Have Been

It was so refreshing to see Edward get what he deserved.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 10:30 AM Title: What Could Have Been

I'm not sure which ending Edward deserves. Bella deserves the best one.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 19

This is one of my many times reading this so I'm getting a glass of wine before I continue.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 4:40 PM Title: What Could Have Been

i have enjoyed this story so much due to its content. i loved that bella didnt take edward back right away. when someone is betrayed like that, it takes a long time to heal. trust cannot be won back right away besides having to deal with self worth questions. so you did well in all that. too many fanfics just gloss over these and bypass everything too quickly. the ending is an issue with me. not sure first of all that i can take back a man and help raise his mistress' child. bella is better than i in that regards. when you killed off edward, it was a complete shock. you made his mistress get everything while bella got....nothing but his memories...tanya got his first born plus his millions which would prob go to the child hence his mother, tanya. it almost made it seem like good girls finish last. be a bitch, cheat on your bf, steal another girl's bf, have his child(she prob punched holes in the condom) and you will come out the winner in the end. the last chapter...it was funny and prob would have liked it better if it was more plausible. the last chap was prob just for entertainment only and not reality even in the fanfic world.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 8:25 PM Title: What Could Have Been

2-26-2016

This is my favorite ending.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

Bella's a better person than I would've been. I could forgive but I wouldn't forget.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2015 4:35 AM Title: What Could Have Been

I think after the way their actual story ended, that this is a really warped out take and I am sorry I even skimmed it.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2015 4:25 AM Title: The Dance

OMG, I can't believe after going through all of the heartbrak and work to find their way back to each other that Edward died.  At first I thought it had to be a bad dream.  So sad

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2014 4:13 AM Title: What Could Have Been

I liked the story, but hated the last two chapters.. 

 

Chapter 21 was like it was written by  teenage girls... badly written I should say.

I dont get it, that was a crappy end to a good story

Reviewer: cebell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:35 PM Title: Signature

I wonder what's he up to? She should question him. And come up with her own conclusions, then wait him out. He'll slip up again.

Reviewer: cebell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:23 PM Title: Weird

Imilimg the story so far.  I do agree that bella shouldn't go for drinks with a single guy when she isn't. But edward is acting weird.

Reviewer: maipigen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 8:03 PM Title: What Could Have Been

loved the story, i have my favorite ending but liked them all - very well done!

Reviewer: Jess641 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 8:33 AM Title: The Dance

Just found this story. I can't believe you had Edward cheat on Bella with a dumb excuse, then got the fucking slut Tanya pregnant. So let me get this straight. Bella and Edward are together for 9 years and NO children together, then he sleeps with that trash and got her pregnant. Then Bella forgives him and that asshole dies. How fucked up is that!!! So Bella ends up with absolutely nothing, but yet that slut gets his child? that is SO wrong. You should have made that kid Jame's child in the end or at least killed Bella off. He got off the hook fast where as Bella suffered the most from his mistake and is still suffering now. He should have been the one suffering for life for his mistake. Bella was dumb to take that asshole back anyways. Having to live with his reminder of what he did to them over a fucking fight? which made her have to deal with that slut too. Tanya's the one who got everything she wanted which was Edward and now she got his kid too(she should have gotten nothing!), and Edward as well since he got to cheat and had a kid with someone else and still got Bella to take is ass back. While the one who deserved more got absolutely Nothing!! Why did you right it that way? Then the other alternative was funny but not believeable at all. Bella getting with his dad and him living in a tralior park. Come on, He told her chapters ago he wouldn't be with Tanya, Not to mention he had a good job and Tanya did as well working at the hospital.

Reviewer: iconquer Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 11:24 PM Title: What Could Have Been

I'm so confused. I thought Edward died... now Bella is married to Carlisle? Will someone please explain to me what just happened?

Reviewer: jan319 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 3:34 AM Title: The ER

Why didn't Bella ever get pregnant but yet his mistress does? That so effing messed up. Bella should have her child first!! Edward, you're such asshole...

Reviewer: cejsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2013 5:00 PM Title: What Could Have Been

Oh wow!!!  I just devoured your story this morning. Cried a lot, I guess I smiled a lot with this last chapter. You handled a very difficult situation very well. I loved that Bella realized her ways, that she didn't just take him back, that she made him make his choices and I must admit I'm happy that they ended up together. It must have been so hard with the baby as the reminder which is a further testament to their bond. Loved it!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 2:29 AM Title: What Could Have Been

yeah this ending much much better!!! that would be the way to go!!! hahah

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 2:24 AM Title: The Dance

yuk!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 19

not sure i would be able to forgive so easily and his betrayal would be in your face all the time i guess i am not the type of person who could be like bella

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 2:03 AM Title: Confessions

okay i know she is going to take him back but that was a lame excuse really lame!! if you wanted to break up with her you should have just done it not cheated on her... lame really lame!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 1:47 AM Title: Family Consensus

you really suck ed!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 1:25 AM Title: Eyewall

boy you just let bella get f-ed from both ends.... damn you better find a hea for her!!  ed you are a sank and james you don't fall too far from the tree.  she is right the 3 of them should get together!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 1:14 AM Title: What She Said

okay Ed is a f-ing asswipe!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 12:50 AM Title: Weird

oh ed what is up?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 12:44 AM Title: The ER

oh yeah james....

Reviewer: iluvej Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 9:55 AM Title: The Dance

may be you should have taken the ending to a more genteler level, becuase the end was just fast and harsh! but the other stuff was awsome!

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 8:42 PM Title: What Could Have Been

that was good i liked how you wrote lot of different endings   i liked it thanks

 

Reviewer: rubicon_queen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 11:05 PM Title: What Could Have Been

So freaking funny. Just sayin'.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 10:22 PM Title: What Could Have Been

That is horrible.  Plenty of people make a mistake - it does not mean they deserve to live in misery and have every bit of salt imaginable thrown on them.  I'm sorry Carlisle and Bella are trashy for what they did.

Some things should never be done taht is one of them.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 2:11 PM Title: What Could Have Been

how sad for them all. 

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 2:04 PM Title: What Could Have Been

Now thats what you want to see happen in an Edward cheats on Bella story.  

Reviewer: Kaytlinjane Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 1:56 PM Title: What Could Have Been

i'm so confused

Reviewer: chrisnor Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 10:25 PM Title: The Dance

That ending suuuuccckked!!!!!

Reviewer: shaqbarcalis Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2010 2:31 PM Title: The Dance

Very sad ending!! I wanted to scream at you for killing Edward off but it fit in with the story LOL!!! AWESOME STORY!!!

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 10:54 PM Title: The Dance

Hey TO:

 

Hope your move went well. Loved your story. Even though Edward's reasons for cheating were sort of lame. I get it. I enjoyed chapter 19 more than I did chapter 20. I guess I sort fo wished Tanya had been killed so Edward and Bella could have their time and raise Parker together.

Thanks for sharing this story and I hope you will continue to write.

 

=-)

 

PLV on the Twilighted forums.

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 10:32 PM Title: The Dance

I loved the story.  You did a great job with it.  Good luck with the Hidden Star Awards. 

Kat

Reviewer: sweetremembreance13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 8:35 PM Title: The Dance

so you really killed him just wrong

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 5:50 PM Title: The Dance

ok I really liked the story but I really hated that he died,  I am jsut a happy ending sucker.  I really liekd the story on how to over come so much and heal and stuff but I can not get over how the Bella you wrote about could not seem to catch a break ever.  very well written story and thank you for sharing it and it is worth reading. 

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 5:16 PM Title: The Dance

I was so happy when they worked things out even though Edward's reason's were idiotic.  It's just so sad that he had to die before they could really start their new life together.

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 12:55 PM Title: The Dance

WOW!!!! i can't believe the story ended like that... it was so SAD you made me cry!!!! That was some good writing though you were able to bring those emotions out of me just by reading this so  GOOODDDD JOOOOBBBBB!!!!!!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 6:29 AM Title: The Dance

Oh my gosh, I loved both endings, but this one was just so sad.  I cried when i realized what was going to happen.  A part of me wants to beg you to write another chapter to go along with this last ending.  Just to have it all be a bad dream that Bella woke up from.  :(

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 4:56 AM Title: The Dance

Well if that didn't just play out like a Alantis Morrisette song.

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 4:23 AM Title: The Dance

great story liked the orig ending way better thanks

Reviewer: bellaroxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 19

i posted in other ending  too..as i read that one first.....and jumped to conclusions........sorry for that....

i liked this one better....

but whole story was good....liked it a lot

Reviewer: bellaroxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 4:17 AM Title: The Dance

oh...god...

is it really the end???????

i am crying.....

yyyy..u killed him??????? everething was going on fine?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 4:04 AM Title: The Dance

ok  dont like that ending.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 19

awwwwww

Reviewer: deazucar Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 3:41 AM Title: The Dance

Ya know, I think that the first ending was indeed the first ending. But hey, I could be totally wrong. I loved the first ending best though. This one seemed, idk. It just didn't fit as well as the first one. So yeah. :)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 3:06 AM Title: The Dance

Don't even know how to review this shit. You never explained why Edward fucked Tayna to begin with and now you kill him so we will never know. Guess it is your way of having a mind fuck...



Author's Response:

First,thanks for reading. Secondly, in chapter 17 I did answer the "Why did he cheat." Here is the excert. 

"I've asked some of these before I want to see you when you answer them."

"Okay."

"Why?"

He looked confused. "Why did I cheat on you?" I nodded. "In short, I was scared."

"Scared of what?" I questioned.

"Scared of us." He started. "We were together for so long and things between us were so good and I just knew if I didn't make a commitment to you that you would leave."

"So you cheated because our relationship was too good?" What kind of sense did that make?

"No. I cheated because I guess subconsciously I sabotaged our relationship. I didn't want to break your heart and I didn't think I'd ever be able to commit to you like you deserved."

"That makes no sense Edward."

"I know it makes no sense. It wasn't you though. It was nothing you did. Deep down I was scared of our relationship. I was so scared it was all going to fall apart if I didn't propose to you and I thought if you left me, you could find someone better for you."

"That's dumb but whatever."

"I always loved you though."

"You have a great way of showing it. You should have just talked to me about what you were feeling and we could have worked it out

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 2:55 AM Title: The Dance

ok that was so sad i loved the other end better i hate to think of them not together and him dead

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 19

i loved it that was the perfect end to this story iam so happy they are together

Reviewer: bfk1122 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 10:08 PM Title: Changing Tides

She shouldn't have taken him back.  I think the child will always be a reminder of what he did.  I wouldn't take him back if I were in her shoes.

Reviewer: SouthernBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 10:03 PM Title: Changing Tides

I simply adore this story!! This has been so much fun watching everything unfold. I REALLY hope you plan to update soon bc I'm offically obsessed w/ this story :) It's FANTASTIC :) xoxo!

Reviewer: deazucar Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 6:27 PM Title: Changing Tides

This was an amazing chapter! I can't wait to read the endings. I wish the story didn't have to end, but if the endings are as good the chapters, then I really can't wait! :D Even if there's a possibility that I might hate both or whatever :p

Reviewer: eitak Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:00 PM Title: Confessions

Wow. Great chapter, I think we all needed those answers. I feel like Bella is a much stronger woman now, able to stand on her own two feet rather than being half of a couple. If she gives Edward a second chance, I think she'll be in a much better place to have a relationship.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 11:50 AM Title: Changing Tides

I'm glad you made their relationship develop back over the year.  It would've been so realistic if it'd been any quicker.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: jenn6231 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 6:42 AM Title: Changing Tides

i love cheatward stories...but yours is definitely one of the best that i've read.

most stories have bella and edward back together like nothing ever happened in no time, but yours is very true (i think) to how it would turn out if this had really happened to somebody

i still hate edward just a little bit though

more soon please

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:06 AM Title: Changing Tides

I am happy with this chapter.  I know it is all very hard, but I am glad that Edward got joint custody of Parker.  He deserves both parents equally.  Yes his Dad screwed up, but he is trying to do the right thing. 

What Edward did was wrong, but what Tanya did was wrong too.  She went after a man that taken.  Yes he fell for it and made stupid decisions, but he was taken at the time.  Did she really believe they would be a family.  He never loved her. 

I love it.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:48 AM Title: Changing Tides

i loved his pov and iam glad they are going to try to be together

Reviewer: loveofjasper Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 10:29 PM Title: Confessions

the man should be forgiven  please  he reasons sucked but he does regret it and if he can make a commitment to her then she should take him back

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 1:48 PM Title: Confessions

LOL @ Edward's nomination for the "what an asshole" award!  This was a fabulous chapter.  I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 5:44 AM Title: Confessions

hmm, i could never make it work with my ex after he cheated but our situation was very different.  I think they'd need to be friends again first.  Especially since she doesn't trust him and he has a constant reminder as she stated.  A son that resulted from infidelity.  I don't know if i'd be strong enough to do that myself.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 3:08 AM Title: Confessions

i loved it.i m happy that bella let him explain everything to her and she got the answers to her questions i do hope they can work things out i know he was wrong and it will take alot of time but i think when you love someone you can work things out

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:55 AM Title: Confessions

I am so glad Bella agreed to see Edward.  No matter what they had to talk and see each other.  It seems the weekend went pretty good.  I can't wait to see what happens between them.  I still have hope they can make it back to each other.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: butterflywinter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:44 AM Title: The ER

Okay...I just cant see Bella wanting to be with Edward anymore. I understand she still loves him, but I know I couldnt be with a man who fathered a child with another woman while he had an affair. The child would constantly be a resentment reminder and remind Bella about Edwards betrayel. Any way you look at it Edward doesnt deserve another chance (in my opinion). Tanya will always be around and Bella doesnt deserve that type of torment. Bella deserves a good man and their are plenty. Great story, but heartfail Parker doesnt deserve to grow up in that type of enviroment.

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:25 AM Title: Confessions

Good chapter- I liked how Bella stayed strong, because I can imagine how hard  it  is to have a person in front of you that you deep down love more than anything, but has betrayed the shit out of you. Hard balance. I think Edward is a punk though... I hate the "I tried to sabotage our relationship" line. If he were  a real person, I probably would have punched him. So excited to get more updates this week!

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:14 AM Title: Confessions

thanks for the extra chapter :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:11 AM Title: Confessions

glad they are talking at least.   sorry that the kid is his though.   That means Tanya will always be around at least some.

Reviewer: deazucar Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 1:56 AM Title: Confessions

Noooo! This story can't be wrapped up! Bella needs to forgive Edward (or not, but it'd be cool if she does ;p ) and have his baby! It's the least she deserves!

Ha, if it were me, if I did take my...'partner', 'significant other, 'boyfriend' back, I'm very sorry to say that I'd 'like' Parker, even 'love' him somewhat, but I would never treat him as he should. It's not very Christian of me I know, but I'm human and I can tolerate only so much. I mean, how fair is it that Bella wants to have a baby and marry Edward so bad and instead Edward cheats on her and has a child with his mistress. Not effing fair.

Anyway, this has been a great story :D btw, is there going to be a sequel? Because this story is a 'sequel-y' story. I don't know why, it just is. Thanks for writing an awesome piece of fanfiction! :D

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 1:55 AM Title: Confessions

finally she is growing up.

Reviewer: devonmaid Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 1:48 AM Title: Confessions

Damn so he is the daddy, and he what expects Bella to forgive him and accept his son, the child he concieved whilst cheating on her? He seems awfully blase about fathering a child with another woman.

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 1:46 AM Title: Confessions

I can't believe he has the nerve to ask her to give him another chance! WTF Edward?! What a fucking coward, instead of talking to her, he fucks the skank?  I wouldn't take him back.  I don't think Bella could handle seeing Parker being reminded that he cheated on her and hurt her so much.  He made his bed, it's time for him to lay in it.  I'm glad he's miserable. 

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 10:42 PM Title: Family Consensus

I'm glad Bella got her point across in the email.  She needed to ask why.  Why did he even cheat?  Why did he bring Tanya and baby to the wedding?  So it seems Parker is Eddie's baby.  I wouldn't even consider getting back with him.  It would crush me everytime I had to see him and be reminded of the affair. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 9:28 PM Title: Family Consensus

Glad she emailed him finally.   I sure hope eddie asked for a paternity test though.

Reviewer: Vampsarelovee Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 9:07 PM Title: Family Consensus

will there be a HEA ?

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 8:00 PM Title: Family Consensus

UHG! This story is so good and so bad both... Is Edward still with Tayna? If so, why? He must know Bella would never give him a chance to make up if he is still with Tayna. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: InLovewithEric Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 7:26 PM Title: Family Consensus

oh can't wait for the next chappy!!!

 

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 6:01 PM Title: Family Consensus

good story thanks please keep updating :)

Reviewer: devonmaid Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:59 PM Title: Family Consensus

Wow, Bella gets shat upon from a great height and everyone of her support system feels sympathy for fuckerward. I'm glad that Bella is getting her closure with Edward but am not sure I can see a HEA between B & E. It looks more and more likely that Edward is the daddy.

And Malice is still a two faced bitch glad that Bella has said her piece and cut ties with her.

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:44 PM Title: Family Consensus

Well does she end up with Eward??  :)

Reviewer: alwayslaura Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:34 PM Title: Family Consensus

I am still holding out hope that Parker is really James's but Alice was making me rethink it in this one, lol.

I can't tell you how excited I am that you are planning on updating daily now. I love when updates for this one come in!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 12:19 AM Title: Closing A Door

such a sad story is there any happiness in her future?

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 4:03 PM Title: Closing A Door

Another great chapter! So when does she find out that the kid is James?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 4:00 AM Title: Closing A Door

james is still a wanker

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 3:33 AM Title: Closing A Door

i still think james or someone else is the father of tanya's baby

i can't wait for the conversation between bella and edward coming up long time waiting

leah story how sad almost sounds like bella's with out the dying

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading my little story.  Here is the James interview.  Enjoy!

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Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 2:16 AM Title: Closing A Door

I'm glad Bella is finally stepping up and getting the answers to her questions about what happened.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading my little story.  Here is the James interview.  Enjoy!

docs(.)google(.)com/fileview?id=0B1g9WHUcp1A9ZDQ2MWNhMzgtZjdiNC00YjFlLWI3ZGUtMzA1YmE4N2M0MDhh&hl=en&authkey=COfs5ZMO

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 2:08 AM Title: Closing A Door

So all that's left is to comfront Edward...I'm dying to see how that goes. Another good one. ;)

Reviewer: InLovewithEric Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 2:00 AM Title: Closing A Door

more more more please.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading my little story.  Here is the James interview.  Enjoy!

docs(.)google(.)com/fileview?id=0B1g9WHUcp1A9ZDQ2MWNhMzgtZjdiNC00YjFlLWI3ZGUtMzA1YmE4N2M0MDhh&hl=en&authkey=COfs5ZMO

Reviewer: devonmaid Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 1:20 AM Title: Closing A Door

So we now know who the mystery woman is, I have to say I was convinced it was Edward's bio-mum.

Love that Bella got closure with James one arsehole down one to go!

 Loved it! Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:29 AM Title: Music

glad she is taking time for herself.   wonder if the kid is really eddie's

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 2:00 AM Title: Music

i am thrilled that she has finally listen to his messages. i have always thought she will never get closure until she hears him out completely. at least she is trying to deal with it all be she still needs to know all of it. she needs to hear him explain whether she wants to or not. is the baby really his? part of me doesn't think it is. part of me thinks he stayed with tanya trying to think he wanted a ready made family because he is so scared to have it with someone you love. scary, his upbringing screwed him up. can't wait to see what she does next. love it

Reviewer: InLovewithEric Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 12:55 AM Title: Music

fab story.  I have to ask - what is fictionators?  Thanks

Can't wait for the next chapter - it looks like from the setup you have Edward and Bella getting back together?  Am I mistaken?

 

Reviewer: loveofjasper Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 12:11 AM Title: Music

she just has to talk to edward, the man has begged her, let him have a time to speak. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading my little story.  Here is the James interview.  Enjoy!

docs(.)google(.)com/fileview?id=0B1g9WHUcp1A9ZDQ2MWNhMzgtZjdiNC00YjFlLWI3ZGUtMzA1YmE4N2M0MDhh&hl=en&authkey=COfs5ZMO

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 11:40 PM Title: Music

Ok I can understand completely about being upset and not wanting to deal with the person who caused it, but months of avoiding really doesn't help anyone.  Its time to take a stand and face it.

Reviewer: deazucar Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 9:37 PM Title: Music

Beautiful, amazing, inspiring, tear-jerking awesomeness! :D I cried so much! I really loved the lyrics, they're all songs that I like (the country songs more so :p). Can't wait for the next update! ;D



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Thanks for reading my little story.  Here is the James interview.  Enjoy!

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Reviewer: courtney1022 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 6:23 PM Title: The ER

R E and T living togerther??   R they still in a relationship??? FILL IN THE BLANKS PLEASE

Reviewer: courtney1022 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 6:19 PM Title: Music

Ok I m lost is this baby eddwards?????



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Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 2:09 PM Title: Music

Glad to see her getting her life together.  I'd love for her to talk to Edward just because I want to hear what he has to say.



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Thanks for reading my little story.  Here is the James interview.  Enjoy!

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Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 1:12 PM Title: Music

The songs are very sweet and I am not saying Bella shouldn't read his letters, listen to the music, even talk to him for closure but that should be were it ends. Once a cheater, always a cheater. I mean if she is willing to have an open relationship I guess Edward would be a good choice but how could she ever trust him to be faithful to only her??? He has already proven how good he is at lying. I think there is a huge difference between forgiving someone and setting yourself up so that person has a chance to wrong you again. That is like repeatingly touching a hot stove... Thanks for the update. :~)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading my little story.  Here is the James interview.  Enjoy!

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