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Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

This was an incredible story!! It has been 6 years since you posted anything else.  I hope one day you can write the sequel.  It really was AMAZING & HILARIOUS!!   

Reviewer: elke Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

Cute story.   So fun reading about Edward letting loose! And what a wacky family Thanksgiving.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

This was the first story I've read since returning to the fanfiction world in months.... Your story has to be one of the best I've read! It was beautifully written. It had everything, good suspense, romance, humor.. it was wonderful! I see this was completed about 2 years ago. I hope you wrote the sequel.. I'm going to look for it! :)

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 44-Not Again

not nice I love when the good couple gets pregnant  -- I went from OH YES!!!! to OH NO!?! in a matter of seconds :(

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 26-Second Chances

actually for Edward that was downright forward and not so slow and cautious

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 11-Damn AT&T To Hell

now do you really see him denying her to be study partners??

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 8-For Her Own Good

Oh Edward this is soo not a good move!!

Reviewer: hilndgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

I ran across your story as I was looking for something to read online and couldn't put it down until I finished. You made me laugh and you made me cry. Your story was really entertaining. I'm looking forward to the sequel.

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 20-Double Dating with Vampires

I like Sexy Bella!!!!!!

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 15-Bella's Toys

hahahahaha OMG this is awesome!!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 32-Halloween Horny Nights

yes !!!!  fist pump for edward !!!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 29-A Peach By Any Other Name...

uh oh.    pissed bella

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 26-Second Chances

well i agree with Missypooh, this is great !!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2011 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 23-Reconnections

sos, so glad he knows now, she was able to tell him with a gentle nudge. now they just need to get rid of julian, is there a runaway bus anywhere???

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 22-Would you Give Me the Honor?

yes yes yes give me the E train ride tooplease !!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus

omg i am laughing so hard my stomach hurts

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 18-One Step Forward, Two Steps Back

hmm tanya showing up don't know wheter that is good or bad, i will admit i am not a big tanya fan

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 16-Research

omg too funny, loving the edward is taking baby steps with Bella

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 12-Julian Meets The Cullens

oh holy bdsm batman......   ding ding ding Emmett is a smart man but what the heck

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 9-Since When Does Bella Use the F Word?

gotta love advice from alice jasper and emmett

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 8-For Her Own Good

hmmm sounds like a bomb ticking waiting to go off

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 4-Incapacitate...Don't Decapitate

oh holy crap !!!!!!  i understand maybe bring tied up, but the black ski mask really....  thank goodness alic eand the crew are on the way.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 3-Edward Meets Julian

very intriguing. Julian huh. hmmmm

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind

wow, very powerful first chapter, lots of promise, can't wait to see where this goes

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

Beautiful

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

great story and I am glad you are continuing it

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 42-Something is Up With Bella

I love mincemeat but Esme's will be disgusting

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 41-Safe Car Sex

great

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 35-Time

but wasn't it Julian who wanted the 24/7 sub contract and Bella didn't so how was it Bella's forcing him?

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 28-At Last

and an excellent smut peddler you are!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 26-Second Chances

you are a cockblocker in this one

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 23-Reconnections

have I mentioned I love this story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 22-Would you Give Me the Honor?

all aboard!!!!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus

Oh this one goy me laughing so hard I had teas in my eyes

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 17-Fall

got to spice it up when you have eternity or even if after 30 years it only seems like it ;p lol

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 14-The Road to Hell....

this is turning out to be a great story

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

awesome story love it.glad edward and bella got back together.update soon.

Reviewer: marmite2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 5-WTF?

 This is gonna be funnier than I thought.

Reviewer: marmite2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 4-Incapacitate...Don't Decapitate

Fucking hell, how embarrassing.

Reviewer: lcnel Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus

okay this has me laughing now.......I wonder if younger siblings really go through this stuff?   I bet they do.........



Author's Response:

Glad it tickled your funny bone. Thanks for giving the story a try.  Hope you enjoy the rest.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 28-At Last

I love it!!!!  I have been laughing at Edward's expense I have to say, but this is awesome!  I am sorry I have not been able to review.  I have been reading from my iphone and I can't review on there...at least I have not figured out how to do it yet.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you Amwine. I'm glad you are enjoying it and it's tickling your funny bone.

Reviewer: cullenetc Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus

Ok, I wasn't sure about the story at the beginning.  I have to say that I am really enjoying it.  It is very funny and I love that everyone in the family is helping plot to get Bella back (even Tanya).  I think that it is great that they are getting down to business helping Edward with the sex thing.  



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you stuck with it.  IMHO, It's typical Cullens, supporting Edward no matter what.  Whether its fighting an army of vampires or helping him make a play for Bella...they all stand behind him.  Please let me know what you think about future chapters.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind

Wow...I love it!  Great job...thanks!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for giving the story a chance!

Reviewer: sleepy_s Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

So glad you are doing a sequel, I have reall enjoyed this Edward and Bella

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

Yay, a sequel.    I have loved this story since it started and am so happy to see that Edward proposed.   They've both certainly come a long way since the beginning, where Bella didn't even want to be in the same room with him, but I'm glad that all that is behind them.  

Reviewer: wuogkat Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

Love it, babe.  ;-)

 

Reviewer: wuogkat Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 42-Something is Up With Bella

Oh no! nononononononooooooo...   ;-)

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

I hate seeing a story ending, even wend it has a sequel, but I really look forward to seeing the sequel, I hope it's soon



Author's Response:

Thanks Jad. Check on the forum and I will post ETA on the new chapters and post some teasers there too over the next few weeks. Thanks for giving this story a chance !

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

Beautiful proposal amongst the broken eggs.  Loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks Nic! Please stay tuned for the sequel...

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

Not bad.  I look forward to more.  Don't keep us waiting, don't lose the momentum and fans you have now, or you will lose some of it.  Just a little advice.



Author's Response:

Thanks...I do plan to start posting soon after a short break.  Please stay tuned...

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

Nicely done on Edward's part. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so March for being such a loyal reader and reviewer!

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

what is going on??   this is like the fifth or sixth story that I've read/ing which had been in progress for a while... then when I finally 'discover' it  or get around reading a story I've looked over a few times (but havent gotten around to reading) .... and get all caught up... then  BAM... its coming to an end.  Did some1 put a curse on me in fanficdom?

WTF?  lol   Well @ least this is a "semi" ending haha.  so yeah...  I've enjoyed Edward's blossoming into the sexcapades that you kindly gave us the pleasure of reading. ;)



Author's Response:

LOL. No conspiracy...just the natural ending of this installment.  Please stay tuned for the sequel. I will  be posting ETA on the new sequel and teasers on the forum on twilighted if you're interested.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

thanks good chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks Seeker!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

See my reiview on FFN. *Cockney accent* Great job dearie!!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 47-The Proposal

It was a  funny story - Esme and the um thanksgiving dinner were hilarious.  Julian was a putz.

I love to see happiness.



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know you liked the story Lisa. I hope you will give the sequel a chance and let me know what you think of it :)

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 46-Bad Company

lol

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 46-Bad Company

thanks good chapter i liked the ending



Author's Response:

Thank you Seeker.

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 46-Bad Company

great chapter

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 46-Bad Company

OME!  I was dying when Edward said, "Don't ever stop... Unh. Fellatio... So good."  That was the funniest damn line!  I am so glad that you have snuck in an extra chapter before this ends.  I love this story and am really going to miss it!



Author's Response:

Nic: Thank you so much for your kind words. Typical guy--a little BJ makes him totally incoherent...lol

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 46-Bad Company

Any chance of a sequel!? Pretty please with sugar on top?!



Author's Response:

Noble:  Probably not.  But I do hope to explore some other alternative storylines in twilight.  But thanks for showing interest.  That is so encouraging!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 46-Bad Company

hmmm  cant wait for him to explain that one to her.



Author's Response:

lol...you whack off one time in a public restroom and no one will let you forget it!

Reviewer: LaTuaCantante4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind

Oh so good. I'm already hooked. Can't wait to keep reading.

Author's Response:

LaTua: I hope you enjoy it! Please let me know :)

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 46-Bad Company

That really was embarassing!!!   I mean, Bella was right in the middle of...., Edward is right, they really need to call first instead of just barging in.   I mean, Emmett knew what they were doing.    Ick.   I'd be blushing, too, if I were Bella.



Author's Response:

I suspect there may have been a little revenge factor going on.  No privacy in that Cullen family! LOL

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 46-Bad Company

Aww...Emmett. I suppose Edward's siblings have some what of a score to settle with him. As much as Edward never wanted to see their intimate moments in his mind, he still has seen them. I wonder if Emmett had walked in on them on purpose. One doesn't enter someone else's bedroom without an invitation. If your knock is unanswered, you walk away. Or, maybe, Emmett is just clueless and walked in on them.

Poor Bella. I know she is open about sex but she was caught on her knees by Emmett. She will never hear the end of this. It will be a topic brought up repeatedly for centuries to come.

Author's Response:

Duchess:  I suspect Emmett had an inkling of what was going on.  Lots of teasing in that Cullen family...lol

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 46-Bad Company

I absolutely love reading each chapter of this story! You bring out such humor from Edward's sincere attempts to woo and seduce Bella. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad y ou have enjoyed it.  The new outtake was just posted if you're interested...

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 46-Bad Company

"I have found it. I have found the cure for vampires' bloodlust." LOL.

Men. They're all the same, aren't they? LMAO



Author's Response:

LOL.  Yes, they all think a good BJ can cure anything!

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 46-Bad Company

Hahaha :D

Love the chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thank you Apple!

Reviewer: Urs Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 45-Aftermath

This story is fantastic. I couldn't stop reading it, and I just started it. Rosalie trying to buy the baby was so damn funny. Em asking about vibrators was hilarious. I cried I was laughing so hard. Great job!

Author's Response:

Urs: Well, I am so glad you gave the story a chance ;).  Thanks for your kind words.  I love that!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 45-Aftermath

love it and can't wait for more

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 45-Aftermath

Ahhh, I am so glad Bella is better and is getting everything back on track.  My favorite line was, "When you're ready, I will happily change you and I promise I will spend the rest of my existence, making sure you don't regret that decision.”  I love that Edward has finally embraced changing Bella.



Author's Response:

Nic:  Thanks so much.  I don't know why but I always think Edward commiting to change Bella IS so romantic. 

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 45-Aftermath

I am really enjoying this story. Edward is truly obsessed with his feelings for Bella. Thankfully, Edward has finally offered the one gift that Bella wanted...to be changed. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying it.  I think the over all theme of the story is Edward will do ANYTHING for his Bella...lol

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 45-Aftermath

I'm glad that Julian is now out of Bella's life and Edward and Bella are going to start the second chapter of theirs - with no obstacles, nothing holding them back.   And it was only a matter of time before Edward changed his mind on the "change" for Bella; he's probably been thinking about it for awhile, it just took her illness to make him realize that it is what he needed to do.



Author's Response:

I agree--it was inevitable. Only the timing is at issue.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind

Yeah, I forgot.... *facepalm*

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 45-Aftermath

I hate to see this story drawing to an end.  I have really enjoyed the adventure.  I'll be looking for the remaining chapters and any new projects that you start.

Kat

 



Author's Response:

Thank you Kat. I do appreciate all of your encouraging words.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 45-Aftermath

Aw - fluffiness!! Good update - but I think Bella is letting Julian off a little too lightly... I mean, JESUS - if you're not prepared to commit to someone, at least DON'T tell them THAT WAY!!! WHAT A JERK!! :-( A+.



Author's Response:

Noble:  Bella forgives Julian for his faults because she understands his pain...Bella was always so forgiving you know :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 45-Aftermath

nice chapter...and looking forward to a great ending :)



Author's Response:

Thank you Heart...I think its good times ahead.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 45-Aftermath

hmmm we gonna get an outtake of her conversation with julian?



Author's Response:

Prob not.  I can tell you that Julian bowed out gracefully

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 45-Aftermath

loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you Mora for the review and the coffee cups :)

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 45-Aftermath

Well I look forward to the next chapter, though I am sad to see this end so soon, at least for me. I hope it ends well



Author's Response:

Jad:  Can't you feel Edward's happiness.  I think good times ahead.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 45-Aftermath

thanks



Author's Response:

you're welcome!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 45-Aftermath

This is nice - overall he story was quite amusing.

I am glad to see Julian gone :)



Author's Response:

Julian Yates:  May He Rest in Peace...lol

Reviewer: anjsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 44-Not Again

Loved it great twist!! Keep 'em coming!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you anjsmom.  I hope you enjoy Chapter 45 which was just posted.  Please let me know.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 44-Not Again

I wonder if this illness is going to force Edward to change her ahead of schedule.  I love what Carlisle said to Charlie about no one being strong enough to keep Edward away from Bella.  Very sweet.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much nickey for reading the entire story and leaving so many reviews.  I love that!  More to come soon.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 43-Don't Talk About My Mom's Pie

I knew it!  I knew she was prego!

Ok, that was freakin hilarious especially when Emmett questioned Julian's pie tasting qualifications.  Too funny!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 42-Something is Up With Bella

ROFLMAO!!!  I wasn't familiar with the traditional pie, but when I saw beer and terrigone I knew this wasn't going to be good.  Is Bella pregnant???  It would explain her symptoms and late period.  Oh shit!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 41-Safe Car Sex

The car job was very nice!  The family's comments at the end were funny.  I can only imagine what they were thinking when E&B came in smelling like sex.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 40-Thank You Alice

Make up sex really is the best kind.

I love the date that Edward set up for Bella.  It is very romantic.  I love how he has the internal battle over wanting to fuck her against his car.  Maybe next time. ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 39-Harlot

Seriously, you can't blame Edward for doubting her a little.  He is after all  a 17 yr old guy and his girlfriend is living with her ex who she hasn't officially broken things off with 100%.  You can only ask so much of a guy.  But I am glad that they are making up.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 38-Hanging On

Ugh!  I am so frustrated with Bella, but there is a part of me that understands why she is doing this.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 37-And It All Comes Tumbling Down

Poor Edward.  I really hope that Bella is going to stay with Julian to take care of him.  That would not be fair to him or Edward.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 36-Goodbye Orlando

Oh shit!  That was too funny the way Edward flipped out on Tanya and then to learn it was just a coincidense.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 35-Time

Well I am glad that they took care of two major elephants in the room: her being changed and her love of kink.  I love that Bella is making Edward admit his fantasies.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 34-The Morning After

The shower sex was hot!  I am really liking this new Edward!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 33-Fear No More

That was outstanding!  I love the part where Edward realizes that the instincts that might kill Bella are actually the same ones that would not allow him to hurt her.  Perfect!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the smut! LOL.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 32-Halloween Horny Nights

Holy shit!  He actually spanked her!!!  That was totally hot.  Bad Bella is a lot of fun.  She may not test him anymore, but that doesn't mean she can't tease him a little.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 31-Bella's Real Fantasy

I wonder if Edward will ever give in to Bella's ultimate fantasy?  It is pretty hot!  I am glad Bella has the balls to stand up and speak her mind on the whole biting and changing thing.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 30-To Spank or Not To Spank

I love the idea of the nipple ring charm.  Very sweet and very hot.  I love Bella pushing him with the 'dirty talk'.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 29-A Peach By Any Other Name...

He is so busted!

I don't get where Bella gets the nerve to be upset with Edward if he had been practicing on Tanya.  To be jealous is one thing, but to be angry about it is another.  E&B had no committment to each other then.  But the peach was pretty funny and creative.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 28-At Last

Damn, Edward has some skills!!!  I am sure he is thanking Emmett for all his teaching.



Author's Response:

He's a fast learner!!!!!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I"m really enjoying reading them.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 27-Welcome to Orlando, Now Strip!

I loved when he was singing to her.  That song is an oldie but a goodie and was perfect for that moment!

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