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Reviewer: bba628 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2014 3:59 AM Title: Southern Deviled eggs

CRUSH REALLY ?? OMG ONLY THE SEXYIST DMB SONG SINCE  Space Between. You are so brillant I pray you are still inspired and still writing this holiday season.  Check out Trufano 79 she still updates regulary and pimped your fics.  I am reading the Quiet storm series also SKIP RULES!!!! Happy Holidays from Beth in Arizona

Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2014 4:08 PM Title: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

What a great story! Loved it! Most definitely a favorite of mine. Thank you! :o)

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 11:23 PM Title: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

GREAT STORY!!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!

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Date: 08 Jun 2014 2:23 PM Title: Lingerie and Lasagna

Ha, ha great story, they are such nerds. Love it

Reviewer: ChecheCarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 5:44 AM Title: Run this town

So far i like. Im still use to you mobboss Edward. I like to see where this Edward goes.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 9:33 PM Title: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

Loved it!! I laughed so hard during parts of it. Can't wait to read more

Reviewer: twilover123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2013 3:44 PM Title: Complications

We share a birthday!!!!! Lol

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 10:29 PM Title: Baby Baby

Good chapter, keep on writing

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Date: 27 Oct 2013 1:50 PM Title: Love Game

I like it so fsr

Reviewer: stacyo72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2013 7:44 PM Title: Long Beach Island

I saw the name of chapter 47 and squeeed out loud. I'm from LBI! Yay. okay going to read it now. I love love love your stories!

Reviewer: Shiko Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2013 8:04 PM Title: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

good story. I just hope CC isn't gay or experiencing problems with that goth style of his. It's really weird. 

Reviewer: twigirl84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2013 12:11 AM Title: The blue box blues

This is really good. I've read your storm series and loved them so i decided to read your other stories. By the way, my husband has also named his gps "wanda" lol 

Reviewer: Cassie1550 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 10:05 AM Title: Jenna's

The closest we had to this bachelors party was when my hubby flew halfway around the world to meet my parents and that night my dad dragged him out for a beer with the boys....many hours later they came home bombed out of their minds and my then fiancé proceeded to dance and sing while stripping his way and staggering upstairs while my dad passed out on the front porch furniture LOL. Boy did they have hangovers the next day!

Reviewer: Cassie1550 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 7:15 AM Title: Crawl inside you

Lmao...ahhhhhh for those days when the period was anxiously awaited and dreaded at the same time! Lol

Reviewer: Cassie1550 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:07 AM Title: Revelations

When I was first dating my hubby, my ex refused to let go and in our last confrontation hit me and left bruises across my face. It was terrifying being hit by someone who had only ever touched you with love before and you wonder how it all went so wrong. ,

Reviewer: Cassie1550 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 4:32 AM Title: Run this town

I think I want a cigarette now too and I haven't had one in over a decade! Sigh! This story is making me do bad thoughts lol!

Reviewer: Cassie1550 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 4:25 AM Title: Love Game

On behalf of womankind I think we kinda all wanna ride Edwards disco stick...=blushes and runs away=

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2013 5:25 PM Title: Big Day

Holly shit! Why did I almost piss my pants laughing so hard when Bella went into labor and Edward was going nuts. I was dying. That was sooo funny and when he was crying because he thought her vag was ruined. Great chapter!

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2013 5:08 AM Title: My turkey leg

I don't believe that this was Edwards fault. Bella lied to him. She withheld something from her husband that she knew would eventually come out and she twisted it around to make it his fault why she lied. James doesn't exactly know boundaries and is always interfering with their relationship. That is why Edward reacts the way he does to James. I would act the say way to. When they were discussing their past relationships, Bella should have disclosed that the man that she is shoving in her man's face took her virginity and just explain the situation. Lying only made the situation worse and now they will never have that relationship that she wanted. I don't even know why she is slapping Edward. She was in an abusive relationship so she should know better than to raise her hand to her partner, her lover, her HUSBAND! The man who defended her at all costs and never laid a hand on her in a negative way. Total BULLSHIT!!!!!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2013 7:41 PM Title: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2013 6:07 PM Title: Somethings never change.

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2013 2:15 AM Title: Out of Character.

Loved it!

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Date: 23 Jan 2013 8:08 PM Title: Quagmire and the hag

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2013 2:13 PM Title: Complications

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2013 12:50 AM Title: Long Beach Island

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2013 9:32 PM Title: Sliding into home

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2013 3:12 PM Title: Rounding Second

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2013 1:53 PM Title: SinSation

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2013 12:20 AM Title: Alistair Scott MD

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 4:01 PM Title: Flirting, Gossiping. Memories.

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2013 3:13 PM Title: Don't mess with the Jedi

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2013 11:40 AM Title: Southern Deviled eggs

Loved it!

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Date: 16 Jan 2013 12:03 PM Title: Tulips that bloom at Christmas time

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 9:21 AM Title: Mom Jeans

Loved it!

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Date: 16 Jan 2013 7:31 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Loved it!

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Date: 16 Jan 2013 5:02 AM Title: The proclaimers

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 3:11 PM Title: Big Day

Loved it!

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Date: 15 Jan 2013 7:08 AM Title: Baby Baby

Loved it!

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Date: 14 Jan 2013 4:33 PM Title: Lake George Escape

loved it!

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Date: 14 Jan 2013 2:22 PM Title: Maxwell's silver hammer

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 7:10 AM Title: My turkey leg

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 3:32 AM Title: Colonial Williamsburg

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 12:08 AM Title: Lingerie and Lasagna

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2013 2:06 PM Title: Ice Ice Baby

Loved it!

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Date: 13 Jan 2013 1:29 PM Title: The reception

Loved it!

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Date: 13 Jan 2013 12:53 PM Title: The Wedding

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2013 10:05 AM Title: I'm too sexy

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 3:53 AM Title: Jenna's

loved it! Edward is funny when he's drunk!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 6:35 AM Title: Post traumatic stress

Loved it! poor Bella!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 6:13 AM Title: Aftermath

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 5:06 AM Title: Take a bullet for you

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 4:27 AM Title: Maria

Loved it! Maria is crazy!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 4:15 AM Title: What really happened

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 1:16 AM Title: Unemployment

loved it!

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Date: 30 Dec 2012 12:18 AM Title: Following her lead

loved it!

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Date: 29 Dec 2012 9:03 PM Title: Ode to Joy

loved it!

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Date: 29 Dec 2012 7:20 PM Title: As time goes by

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 3:16 AM Title: Crawl inside you

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 12:59 AM Title: Thanksgiving

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 11:29 PM Title: The green eyed monster

loved it!

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Date: 28 Dec 2012 10:06 PM Title: The empty bottle saloon

loved it!

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Date: 28 Dec 2012 9:16 PM Title: Moody's mood for love

loved it!

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Date: 28 Dec 2012 2:01 PM Title: Picking up the pieces

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 12:46 PM Title: Revelations

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 11:36 AM Title: Mac N Cheese

loved it!

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Date: 28 Dec 2012 11:03 AM Title: The blue box blues

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 6:15 AM Title: eXfactor

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 4:14 AM Title: Don't feed the bears

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 2:17 AM Title: SSDD

loved it!

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Date: 28 Dec 2012 12:50 AM Title: Run this town

loved it!

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2012 2:41 AM Title: Long Beach Island

This chapter is HILARIOUS!!! I dont want to review each chapter individually yet. I am enjoying the story tremendiously!

Reviewer: scubaks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 2:03 PM Title: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

I just started and finished reading this over the last three day (I couldnt put it down and even called in sick one day to finish it). What an amazing journey. Thank you so much for sharing this incredible story. I just found your other stories and am so excited to start reading them. Your humor and characterizations are amazing. So glad to see you are still writing.

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:10 AM Title: Love Game

loved it!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 9:54 PM Title: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

ROLMFAO!!! I absolutely LOVE this story!! I laughed so much!!!

You are an outstanding writer!! I love all that you write!!! I love

these characters so much! Thank you for sharing!! Loved 

LOved LOVED it!!!! ;-)

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 8:31 PM Title: Somethings never change.

Lol loved it all!!!!

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 7:13 PM Title: Out of Character.

Loved it!!!

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 10:50 AM Title: Quagmire and the hag

Lmao!! The condom broke!!!! Lol

Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 9:55 AM Title: Complications

I loved it all! But Edward should have seen his son. But at he same

time I can understand why he wanted to wait. 

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 9:25 AM Title: Long Beach Island

LMFAO!!! I loved it ALL!!! Irina is just a lost cause and

she doesn't deserve to have Bella in her life. Telling her 

that she would ruin the wedding pics as a reason for not being

part of her wedding is not something a best friend would do!!

No excuse for that at all!!  Loved the chap!! 

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 6:19 AM Title: Sliding into home

Lmao!!! I love Carlisle and Esme!!! Awww Edward is sweet 

with EJ!! And he can put me to bed anytime!! Lol

Loved it!!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 4:13 AM Title: Rounding Second

Lmao!!!! Loved it!!!!

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 3:14 AM Title: SinSation

Loved Tanya's POV!! Very proud of Al for resisting!!

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 2:16 AM Title: Alistair Scott MD

Awww I love Al!!! Someone needs to put a hurtin' on Mckenna!! Lol

Loved hearing Al's POV! 

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 1:00 AM Title: Flirting, Gossiping. Memories.

Oh Edward when will you learn? Lol

Loved it!!!!

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 8:58 PM Title: Don't mess with the Jedi

Poor Edward!!! Damn Al has some balls!!! I hope they 

have a girl this time!!!  Loved it!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 8:19 PM Title: Southern Deviled eggs

Lol!!!! Charlie knew what they were doin'!!!! Lol 

Loved it!!!

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 7:44 PM Title: Tulips that bloom at Christmas time

Lmao!!!! My son thinks I'm crazy!! I kept laughing while

reading this chap, and kept looking at me then said " Mom

are you ok?" with that do u need the men in white jackets look!!

Lol loved it!!!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 10:19 AM Title: Mom Jeans

Ha ha I KnEW IT!!! Poor Alistair! I would love to have Edward 

cuffed to bed!!! Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 9:39 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Lol. I bet Bella is the girl that Alistair was talking about!! Poor Edward!! Lol

 

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 8:54 AM Title: The proclaimers

Lmao!!! Fav line...  "We make a great team, you just saved me from daddy and his magical rectal sizer." loved it!!!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 8:30 AM Title: Big Day

Lmao. I cried more then hubby did about my vajayjay!!! 

Loved it!!!

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 7:45 AM Title: Baby Baby

Lmao!!! I knew he would tell her he wanted to watch if Bree

kissed her again!!!! Men!! Lol. Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 5:29 AM Title: Lake George Escape

Loved it!!! 

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 1:14 AM Title: Maxwell's silver hammer

That is so funny about Edward and Carlisle!!! I would so

laugh my ass off!!!!!  Loved it!!!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 12:33 AM Title: My turkey leg

Loved it all!!!!

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 11:25 PM Title: Colonial Williamsburg

That was hilarious!!! I love going to the Ren Faire in Los Angeles!

Its a lot of fun to dress up!!! Loved it!!!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 10:26 PM Title: Lingerie and Lasagna

Lol!!! My dog ate my strawberry shortcake ice cream while I was

preggers and I burst out crying and he licked my tears away! 

I couldn't stay mad at him!!! Hubby went and got me another one

And Lucky laid on my lap while I ate it and gave him little pieces! 

I swear he gained like 15 lb while I was preggers!!! Lol

Loved the chapter!!

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 8:57 PM Title: Ice Ice Baby

Damn that is one strong little bebe!! Loved it!!!

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 8:15 PM Title: The reception

Absolutely loved it!!! That sucks that fell asleep on their wedding night!

 

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 7:33 PM Title: The Wedding

Haha!!! I knew she was preggers!!! Loved it!!!! Beautiful vows!!!!

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