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Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 6:31 PM Title: I'm too sexy

Lol loved it!!!! What did Antonio say in Italian at the end 

that pissed off Edward?? I love an Italian speaking Edward!!yuuuuummmmm

 

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 6:05 PM Title: Jenna's

Lmao!!! That was hilarious! Plus, Edward passing out with his cock in

his hand!! Priceless!!! Lol loved it!!!

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 5:29 PM Title: Post traumatic stress

Finally!!! She is dealing with it all! Edward is such a dork!!! Lol 

Going to find the last name Cock!! Lol hilarious!! 

Loved it!!!

 

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 10:35 AM Title: Aftermath

At least Jake owned up to what he did. Is a good thing Carlisle

didnt walk in 1 minute earlier!! Lol loved it!!

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 10:05 AM Title: Take a bullet for you

Holy shit!!! Loved it! Gotta go read what happened! Not time to chat!!!!!!  Lol

 

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 9:38 AM Title: Maria

She's a freakin' psycho!!!! 

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 9:21 AM Title: What really happened

Holy shit! Maria and Jake plotted together? But he almost killed her! 

She's flippin' nuts!!! Edward better tell Bella what happened!

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 9:18 AM Title: Unemployment

Damn Jake has lost it!!!!!!

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 4:29 AM Title: Following her lead

That sucks!!!! Poor Bella. But going back to school will be 

an awesome opportunity for her! 

Loved it!!!

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 4:04 AM Title: Ode to Joy

Awww I loved how he proposed!!!! I want that!! L

Loved it !

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 3:07 AM Title: As time goes by

Jake is freakin' crazy!!! That's creepy!! Edward needs to tell Bella

soon!! Loved it!

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 2:42 AM Title: Crawl inside you

Now that's a happy period!!! Lol

Loved it!!!

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 9:52 PM Title: Thanksgiving

Hot hot hot!!! Lol

Loved it!!!!

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 9:26 PM Title: The green eyed monster

Thank god I was wrong about James!!!! Lol

Loved it!

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 9:09 PM Title: The empty bottle saloon

Uh oh! I think James got divorced and might be interested in 

Bella!!! Jealousward is comin' out!! Lol

Loved it!!!

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 8:48 PM Title: Moody's mood for love

Damn I need to find me an Edward!! Lol oh and umm, I need to change

a certain piece of clothing!!! Awesome chapter!!! Lol

Loved it!

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 8:13 PM Title: Picking up the pieces

Awwww so sweet!!! I like how u had the men drooling over Bella,

instead of women all over Edward, like most stories do! Lol 

Loved it!

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 7:50 PM Title: Revelations

Aww I reeeeaaalllly love Edward!!!! Lol

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 7:37 PM Title: Mac N Cheese

Oh Bella!!!! I hope Charlie kicks the shit outta Jake!

Loved it!

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 7:21 PM Title: The blue box blues

Ruh roh!! Jake is about to get a beat down!! Lol

Loved it!!

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 7:08 PM Title: eXfactor

Loved it! Jake is gonna cause trouble!!!

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 6:53 PM Title: Don't feed the bears

I absolutely love this Edward!!! He is such a geeky nerdy hawty!!! Lol

Loved the chapter!!

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2012 6:48 AM Title: Ode to Joy

yes yes yes  i love this story.bella gets her man and edward gets his queen

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Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:14 AM Title: Crawl inside you

she got her period but could she still be pregant some wemen have them when pregnant

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2012 4:40 AM Title: Thanksgiving

absolutely amazing and totally exciting the bedroom scene was throughly enjoyed

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Date: 12 Aug 2012 2:54 AM Title: Moody's mood for love

that was hot and i mean  H O T  perfect

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Date: 12 Aug 2012 2:17 AM Title: Picking up the pieces

awsome this is just perfect

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 10:51 PM Title: Revelations

edward is an angel he truely cares so much for her. they are so right for eash other .he knows that she doesn't needs words to confort her just hold her close

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 10:28 PM Title: Mac N Cheese

oh poor bella he had almost raped her scared her to death

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 9:55 PM Title: eXfactor

smoking hot!!!

i love protective doc edwAtrd my girl he could posess bella easily

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 9:41 PM Title: Don't feed the bears

wow he is out of his element

 

his egarness to see bella and date her with a kiss he could own any woman young or old

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 8:16 PM Title: Love Game

oh yeah he's hott and she is too (both ways)

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 6:58 PM Title: Quagmire and the hag

HA HA HA  ooopsie! hehe

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 6:12 PM Title: Complications

Rough as hell. I had Pre-E with my last and ended up in a similar situation to Bella. I never ever want to go through that again! :( Great chapter as always hun :)

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 5:46 PM Title: Long Beach Island

OMG, thie girls of that family need to get bitch slapped by Bella, Rose and Alice! grrrr

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 7:28 AM Title: Sliding into home

Awww, so sweet!

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 9:47 PM Title: Rounding Second

lmfao, Amy Winehouse!

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 9:21 PM Title: SinSation

Loved it, as always :)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 8:59 PM Title: Alistair Scott MD

His POV was great! :)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 8:39 PM Title: Flirting, Gossiping. Memories.

Hmmm, Edward needs serious help or he really will push her away :( xx

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 8:04 PM Title: Southern Deviled eggs

Hehehe, brilliant!

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:28 PM Title: Tulips that bloom at Christmas time

Loved it! :)

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:10 PM Title: Mom Jeans

ha ha ha OMG, Bella OWNED that chapter! hehehe

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 6:50 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Love Grey's and loved this chapter too :D

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 6:28 PM Title: The proclaimers

 HA HA HA oh god, so funny!

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 5:12 PM Title: Big Day

funny and beautiful :D xx

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:46 AM Title: Baby Baby

Sex when pregnant can be effing awesome, but towards the end, awkward as friggin hell! lol

 

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:26 AM Title: Lake George Escape

Sooo good! High Edward is funny lol x

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Date: 08 Aug 2012 7:49 PM Title: Maxwell's silver hammer

Rose needs to hit her mother in law good and proper lol

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Date: 08 Aug 2012 7:28 PM Title: My turkey leg

Loved it, as always :)

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 4:35 PM Title: Colonial Williamsburg

Hehehe, loved it!

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Date: 07 Aug 2012 9:55 PM Title: Lingerie and Lasagna

So funny lol. :)

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Date: 07 Aug 2012 9:38 PM Title: Ice Ice Baby

I didn't find outI was pregnant until I was 21 weeks gone. What a shock that was to find out lol

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 9:10 PM Title: The reception

Such a beautiful and funny chapter, all wrapped up into one and Bella's pregnant! :D

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 3:50 PM Title: The Wedding

SO beautiful!

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 7:35 AM Title: I'm too sexy

Brilliant! Loved every bit of it :)

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Date: 07 Aug 2012 7:18 AM Title: Jenna's

Love it, Love it, Love it!

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 7:13 PM Title: Post traumatic stress

Poor Bella :(

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 6:58 PM Title: Aftermath

You made me cry!!!!!!!!! but such a good effing chapter lol x

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 6:30 PM Title: Take a bullet for you

HOLY SHIT!

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 5:56 PM Title: Maria

Oh yeah, that woman has a bloody screw loose!

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 5:54 PM Title: What really happened

Oh wow, what a nut job!

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 5:10 PM Title: Unemployment

So intense! Brilliant though :D

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 10:32 PM Title: Following her lead

Wow!

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 9:33 AM Title: Ode to Joy

oh God, so bloody amazing! :)

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 9:16 AM Title: As time goes by

Just a tad freaky me thinks lol

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 8:49 AM Title: Crawl inside you

Brilliant chapter :D

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 8:34 AM Title: Thanksgiving

Hot! :D

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 8:08 AM Title: The green eyed monster

Yay, they're cool :)

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 7:53 AM Title: The empty bottle saloon

Ouch! Edward hit with a blast of jealousy.. eek!

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 7:23 AM Title: Moody's mood for love

I am here, I pormise. Damn kids and work wouldn't let me read, but you have me all day today :) I am loving this story, and Edward... Gah! He is the ideal and perfect man! Love it!

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 8:53 PM Title: Picking up the pieces

Aww, he's such a sweet heart!

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 8:17 PM Title: Revelations

Wow, loads of info here, but sooo good! Edward does have it bad, doesn't he? lol

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 8:09 PM Title: Mac N Cheese

Holy shit!

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 7:09 PM Title: The blue box blues

Aww, their first dinner together! (even if it only mac and cheese lol). Loved it :)

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 6:54 PM Title: eXfactor

Edward to the rescue :D Great chapter xx

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 6:15 PM Title: Don't feed the bears

Aww, poor nervous boy. I should feel sorry for him, but he's too funny lol

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 6:02 PM Title: SSDD

It's great to see Bella with a strong family network, even if they do hound her about her personal life lol

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 4:57 PM Title: Run this town

Hehe, Dr Cullen is an Ass man :D love it!

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 1:54 PM Title: Love Game

Finally I get the chance to start this fic :D

Can't wait to see how it all pans out for them.

True x

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Date: 01 Aug 2012 5:41 AM Title: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

Best fucking epi I have ever read!  Just fucking awesome.  EJ and CC as teenagers, brother not a year apart,  are fully fleshed out characters! They couldn't be more different yet alike in so many ways. In my teens, I would have gone for CC over EJ....Their knock down drag out fight just typical of brothers. So precious! All the characters were so well written that I felt like I was watching a movie, not reading a book.  What a great end to this story. Or is it the end? This was written a long time ago, as I am reading it now so it is probably done. I see you've written a sequel.  That's probably where your outtakes and extra epis went, huh? I am quite satisfied with this and am not surprised at all at how good your first story is.  It holds up against any of your others and most all else I read. Thanks Lexi!

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Date: 01 Aug 2012 4:31 AM Title: Somethings never change.

I love this story.  I have enjoyed every minute, every word, of it.  All the sexy times, the hard times, the silly times; all the drama and pain and joy.  Every bit.  Thank you so much!

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Date: 24 Jul 2012 7:15 AM Title: Out of Character.

i have nothing but good things to say about this chapter. it was fun and funny. and yes, Bella is a 25 year old so why wouldn't she be curious about X?  It is sad, however, to see their family members still into that at their age every weekend.  Our E and B have a very different life and just wanted to see how their rich city cousins lived.  I believe they did and that was enough!  It was funny how Edward thought he "broke" Bella's vagina! Three hours of solid fucking will make any vagina hurt!!  LOL!

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Date: 24 Jul 2012 6:19 AM Title: Quagmire and the hag

love this chapter. what a fucking riot! alice revealing all the family "quirks", edward losing his temper then the making up later, esme and her pill purse, all those kids in their house at once....geez i'm glad that those days are over for me....but I loved this chapter

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Date: 24 Jul 2012 5:42 AM Title: Complications

what a ride!  i understand Edwards desire to wait to greet his new son until Bella could be there so they could do it together for the first time.  family who thinks they know what is best for you can be a pain. i get that.  i'm so glad Bella is ok.  wonderful drama, optimum outcome. wonderful heartwrenching story!

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Date: 23 Jul 2012 8:21 AM Title: Long Beach Island

Chelsea and Heidi deserved everything they got. Women like that are the reason I never had many friends when I was younger.  I hate that kind of catiness between women.  Throwing the butter was the least they deserved!  These kinds of family interactions are just like what happens in real life. This story has a real life feel to it and has me totally interested and engaged!

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Date: 23 Jul 2012 7:33 AM Title: Sliding into home

this sounds like almost the end.....it's a lovely  and quirky story!

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Date: 22 Jul 2012 8:49 PM Title: Rounding Second

kind of a filler chapter, didn't you say that?  but nice to see events from different characters' POV.  I hope the girls' talk with Mary about sex did her some good.....it really can be great if she loosens up a bit and also if she and Al do love each other.  Enjoyable chapter, all in all. 

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Date: 22 Jul 2012 8:06 PM Title: SinSation

Yeah, I have a tiny crush on Alistair too....He's really sweet, the kind of guy that I never seem to meet....I don't blame Tanya either....she was hurting and wanted to lash out.  Alistair was right, revenge never makes one feel better for long and worse in the end. Nice chapter!

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Date: 22 Jul 2012 7:36 PM Title: Alistair Scott MD

I liked seeing things from Bambi's POV....he seems genuinely nice and I'm glad he and Edward cleared the air.  I hope it works out for him and Mary....

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 9:43 PM Title: Flirting, Gossiping. Memories.

oh dear....one day that jealous streak, that insecurity, will get him into real trouble.  it's not about her, or what she does, it's about him and how he feels about himself....says Dr. Judy..LOL!  We need to find Alistair a woman of his own and soon!

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 9:16 PM Title: Don't mess with the Jedi

I love these guys.  The Jedi cape thing was very sexy....love the role play!  Irish twins for the Cullens! That will be a handful! Great story, fun chapter! I laugh a lot while reading this....

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:46 PM Title: Southern Deviled eggs

cockblocked by daddy the cop!  too funny!!  Edward's mood swings earlier gave me whiplash.....j/s....but it all worked out so well....makenna the ho must have been irritated...can't wait to see if she says anything about it....great story!

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 6:44 AM Title: Tulips that bloom at Christmas time

Another hilariously riveting chapter!  You write complex and interesting characters.  I still am amazed that this is your first fic. 

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 6:10 AM Title: Mom Jeans

What a riotous chapter!  First the Bambi thing, then the fuckhot sex....I love it all. You are a tease and a helluva writer!  Thank you dear!

 

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 6:13 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night

those interns were cruel to Bella!  she would have torn them a new one if she'd heard them talk!  Edward just got them back....he seems to be a good instructor...good description of the chaos of the hospital!!

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 5:46 PM Title: The proclaimers

being a new parent is the scaries thing I have ever done!  I was 20, he was  19, and we knew nothing!!  i love the humor, as always, in this chapter and especially relate to the attempt at anal!  my ex and i tried it once, long ago, but he didn't know what he was doing and didn't prepare me first......needless to say that attempt did not succeed!! great description....

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 5:26 PM Title: Big Day

how funny that only a man would say something like, "my vagina is ruined" during the birth of a baby!!  i hope he doesn't tell Bella that!!  and Carlisle knowing exactly why he was crying only to reassure him that, "it goes back to normal"....just fucking hilarious!  great story!

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 3:57 AM Title: Baby Baby

Edward is such a man.....asking if he can watch!  I know he was making a joke, but what if Bella had said yes!  No, I really don't think she would have....Just having a little fun here.....I do feel bad for Bree. It's no joke what her ex wants to do by taking her kid.  That's just wrong!  Love the office loving by our irrepressible duo....

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 3:26 AM Title: Lake George Escape

Edward and the praying mantis were the funniest thing about this chapter.

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