Date: 17 Jul 2012 9:36 PM Title: Maxwell's silver hammer
The vibrator incident had me howling! So funny what with Edward getting all jealous at hearing her from the street when he got home... just fucking hilarious!! Rose's mother-in-law is just unbelievable! This is really true to life stuff here. My dad was his mother's only child and drove my mother crazy. They had a her-or-me confrontation when I was little that I still remember....My grandma was lovely to me, she lived in a little house out back, and was my emotional salvation as a kid.... I love the warm, fuzzy feeling of this story....
Date: 17 Jul 2012 9:00 PM Title: My turkey leg
married people fight. they jus do.....she should have told him, but I see her point, I guess. Jared and Irina are a hoot!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 7:45 PM Title: Colonial Williamsburg
i just got a picture of Edward licking the turkey leg juices off her boobs.....LOL! Great chapter! The adventures of Dr. Edward and pregnant Bella....I laughed and giggled out loud all the way through the chapter. Loved Bella pouring cold water on Emmett in the shower! It served him right! I do remember being affected a lot by smells and tastes while I was pregnant....you're dredging up distant memories here! Fun stuff! I'm enjoying the hell out of this story!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 7:17 PM Title: Lingerie and Lasagna
My pregnancies were long ago so it's hard to remember details. I remember being very comfortable pregnant, at least with my last one. I didn't have to try to hold my stomach in to look thin anymore. What a thing to remember!
These 2 are the cutest thing ever! They can't keep their hands off each other, no matter what. That must be the best feeling in the world to be that in love. The kit kat story is so precious! I do remember the mood swings and that I was told that the first thing to go when I was pregnant was my sense of humor! I probably ripped a new one on the person who said that to me!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 6:53 PM Title: Ice Ice Baby
she's gonna have a baby!!! they're gonna be parents!!! beautiful and scary all at the same time! Edward is a geek...Geeks can be beautiful too!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 6:23 PM Title: The reception
loved it all....is she going to tell him soon? I very much enjoy your turn of phrase. You might think about writing a book, if you're not already. I mean, all these stories you write are for your own and our enjoyment, I know, but seriously, you could make a living!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 8:06 AM Title: The Wedding
that was a wonderful chapter. i feel warm all over. I love the porn DVD they have from Rose's office! I love the humorous tone of most of the chapter. I really love that she is pregnant and almost didn't fit into her wedding dress. I thought it was from the birth control pill substitution and didn't know that antibiotics can nullify the pills' effectiveness! Anyway, I think Edward will be happy even though this was totally unplanned! This is it for me tonight. I need to sleep. The reception will have to wait until tomorrow....I do love this story!!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 7:40 AM Title: I'm too sexy
oh oh. Bella's little nonchalant pill substitution caught my eye....is she pregnant? that would explain the moods and the nausea.....and the horniness....the bachelorette party was fun. someday i want to experience that, maybe....i never have yet....I am enjoying the fun aspect of the last few chapters after the angst of the shooting and its aftermath.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 7:17 AM Title: Jenna's
wow i'm impressed with the medical term definitions. the bachelor party was a hoot. drunk Edward waving his dick around....what a picture! the rehearsal was cute. sweet. i never experienced any of that so is that how most of them go?
Date: 17 Jul 2012 6:53 AM Title: Post traumatic stress
i don't think it was filler at all. it was necessary to show how a real person would react to having experienced a traumatic event. PTSD the call it, I think, or PTSS. It may take most people more than one visit to a cemetary to get through these feelings but you did a good job showing the basics. so lets move along to the wedding....
Date: 17 Jul 2012 1:02 AM Title: Aftermath
well that was intense! thanks for the technical term explanations. and yes, although the hospital sex scene was a bit over the top, I loved it and it certainly fit their usual mode of behavior! Loved that you had Carlisle walk in on them! LOL!! It doesn't surprise me that Bella didn't want to read Jacob's letter but I 'm glad he repented and got sober.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 12:39 AM Title: Take a bullet for you
love how you used the line from Twilight there at the end of the chapter....Bella must have been shot in an artery for her to spurt blood. who else got shot? Edward? Maria? Maybe the police made it there in time to save Edward. Great drama...
Date: 17 Jul 2012 12:20 AM Title: Maria
no shit! she is one sick bitch! she twisted everything that happened to fit what she thought was reality! she needs some serious help. doesn't Edward see that she is a danger to Bella? I hope it won't be too late when he does realize what she is capable of.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 12:08 AM Title: What really happened
OMG Maria is as crazy as Jacob! What a thing to find out after just having returned for a lovely vacation!
Date: 16 Jul 2012 11:45 PM Title: Unemployment
poor Maria. I hope she will be ok. Something tells me we haven't seen the last of Jacob. Is it me or does Edward seem the slightest bit controlling? Probably my issues....but....Love love love Butch!
Date: 16 Jul 2012 11:08 PM Title: Following her lead
the ups and downs of a regular couple....i'm still waiting for the Jacob shoe to drop....
Date: 16 Jul 2012 10:53 PM Title: Ode to Joy
She gave Maria her new cell phone number....is Maria playing her? Did she get the number so Jacob could have it? God, I hope not. The proposal was wonderful and romantic!
Date: 16 Jul 2012 8:53 PM Title: As time goes by
Jake is not through bothering Bella, is he? The look-alike girl thing is just creepy. I love the present Edward got Bella for Christmas. Things are moving quickly and she hasn't told him about James being her first, either. Keeping secrets always ends badly....
Date: 16 Jul 2012 8:29 PM Title: Crawl inside you
it is a good chapter! they talked and got thing out in the open, mostly. I wonder why she didn't tell him that her first was James....i know what she said but maybe she is holding something back? I'm glad they decided to move in together. their relationship is new but they are ready for this, I think. the tone of the overall chapter was happy and positive. good work!
Date: 16 Jul 2012 8:10 PM Title: Thanksgiving
so she is wary of them moving in together....i can understand that. after all it has only been a couple of months and after what she gave up for jake...she is just finding herself and she is so young....BUT...love is a powerful drug! something tells me that they will be going through some more shit before they end up happy together...
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:37 PM Title: The green eyed monster
I hope Edward's jealous reaction to James doesn't put Bella off...hope he learned his lesson! i am awaiting the next lemon....!
Date: 16 Jul 2012 6:41 PM Title: The empty bottle saloon
so....jealous Edward and hot rough dance floor intimacy! i'm glad she didn't take that dive apartment over the bar, even if they have to sneak around a the parents' houses for a while longer. James didn't mention his family...is he still with them or does he maybe want Bella now that she's all grown up and not available....
Date: 16 Jul 2012 6:21 PM Title: Moody's mood for love
I love how they publicly displayed their affection for one another at that dance they went to. Your description of their lovemaking was flawless. This is your first fic? Really? You're a natural, my dear.
Date: 16 Jul 2012 8:45 AM Title: Picking up the pieces
this is a very romantic story, with the exception of Jacob, so far. I am truly enjoying their courtship. I had to giggle at Renee's behavior. Always borderline inappropriate...
Date: 16 Jul 2012 8:27 AM Title: Revelations
will there be a conflict since Bella is Carlisle's scrub nurse? that won't stand in their way, I don't think....feelings are growing quickly if thoughts like children are entering his mind already....they are so sweet....
Date: 16 Jul 2012 8:14 AM Title: Mac N Cheese
ok that was scary. jake has lost it. Maybe now she will consider that restraining order! E and B's time, however, was sweet and sexy.
Date: 16 Jul 2012 8:00 AM Title: The blue box blues
they are getting close quickly. i like that. who is in the rabbit? Jake?
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:52 AM Title: eXfactor
Jake evidently can't take a not so subtle hint....Edward comes off a bit arrogant but insecure...how can he be both? Bella is young, a bit shy, and a sexy freak waiting to happen, right? oh you tease and make me wait for the lemons.....i know you write outstanding ones, so i will wait not so patiently....
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:42 AM Title: Don't feed the bears
yep. good stuff! they seem to like each other and are compatible. geez what a boring review....i hope they have hot monkey sex soon and that you describe it in graphic detail!
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:22 AM Title: SSDD
thanks for the background on Bella! so she is early 20's? and Edward is mid to late 20's? i see also that Mike Newton is his usual annoying self....not much else to say this chapter...
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:04 AM Title: Run this town
he's a man, what do you expect? and a gorgeous ass man at that! hmmmm....reminds me of a certain actor I have heard of....lusting after her bubble ass in chapter 2! outstanding! I read on, my dear....
Date: 16 Jul 2012 6:54 AM Title: Love Game
so this is your first fic, huh? I wanted to read another completed fic so I picked this one....you never disappoint so here goes...
Date: 08 Jul 2012 2:18 AM Title: Southern Deviled eggs
Hot chapter!
Date: 05 Jul 2012 11:18 PM Title: Maxwell's silver hammer
Poor Rose & her mother-in-law. At least Emmett stands up for her.
Can't wait to read about the camping trip. Sounds like fun!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 10:23 PM Title: Sliding into home
Loved it. But let's not put Edward in an apron, that is just...........wrong.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:05 AM Title: SinSation
Wow! I totally respect Al. My opinion of him has changed! I hope he finds love soon.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:26 AM Title: Ice Ice Baby
Truly a miracle baby. loved Edward's reaction
Date: 13 Jun 2012 2:42 AM Title: The Wedding
She's definitely pregnant! Beautiful wedding
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:39 AM Title: Aftermath
Glad that Bella has made it back home.
sure glad that it was Carlisle that walked into the hospital room and not Charlie... that would have been really awkward.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:45 AM Title: What really happened
What a crazy & sick woman Maria is.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:50 PM Title: Ode to Joy
Well Edward's original plans didn't work out, but he still proposed on New Year's Eve! Great proposal.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:14 AM Title: The empty bottle saloon
Jealous Edward = hot edward
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:02 AM Title: Picking up the pieces
Bella has so much support.
They are falling for each other & fast!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:24 AM Title: Don't feed the bears
Am enjoying this story. Can totally see a little kid copying her father when she called her uncle names.
Bella & Edward are really a lot alike in how they both have internal conversations and are shy with the people that they find attractive. Look forward to seeing how the relationship develops
Date: 03 Jun 2012 9:37 AM Title: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.
Loved this story. Running over to read the sequel.
Thanks for sharing.
Date: 30 May 2012 12:46 AM Title: Maria
Looks like Jake wasa the least of their worries.
Date: 17 Apr 2012 4:41 AM Title: Tulips that bloom at Christmas time
Another fine chapter. This thing with Edward and Bambi is sooo funny!
Date: 16 Apr 2012 7:29 AM Title: Mom Jeans
Whew whew!! What a chapter! This was one of the funniest chapters I've ever read. Later in the chapter, it was so funny and so hot!! Thanks for writing.
Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:17 AM Title: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.
That was a wild epi, I loved how you expanded on the characters & at the same time kept them the same, EJ, coc-blocker extraordinare, and lucifer jr incarnate. Haha
I hope there is a sequel, I thought I saw one, if not that would be a great idea,IMO.
Thanks so much for writing this, it's been a joy to read:-))
Date: 30 Mar 2012 1:19 AM Title: Somethings never change.
I adored this story just like all of your stories so far!!
cant wait to read more and this weeks up update of 'WtS'. Woohoo!
Thanks so much for writing.
Did you read the cover & story on Entertainment weekly, one of our fanfic heroes made good (EL James), & I can imagine that being you one day if you ever aspired, IMO.
Date: 29 Mar 2012 3:00 PM Title: Out of Character.
I'm glad to read your AN that the drug use for them is done. When Bella couldn't completely recall & had remembered having a great time, I was a little worried about her future. No worries, great chapter!
Date: 29 Mar 2012 1:29 PM Title: Quagmire and the hag
Damn, they can't get a break. Oh wait, they did get a break, just not the kind they wanted;-))
Great chapter.
Lim starting to get a little bummed -- there's not many chapters left.
Date: 29 Mar 2012 5:41 AM Title: Complications
Liked it?, loved it is more like it.
Date: 29 Mar 2012 4:30 AM Title: Long Beach Island
I think this might of been my favorite chapter yet. Cracked me up & very adorable scene of Bella and Edward sitting in the waters edge cuddling & holding onto each other for dear life, really sweet & great visualization with your writing, I wanted Ca hous to take pictures or a video of them, titled 'love' and the funny parts are too many to mention, but I gotta mention a couple. The comment Bella made about the burgers and not being an animal & willing to wait till it was cooked. Also Jasper when Jasper told Olive Oil, Chelsea to keep it moving the feelings were mutual was classic. Love Jasper's wit ie yours;-))
Date: 29 Mar 2012 1:42 AM Title: Sliding into home
Okay,you had me laughing so out loud that I had to read the XYZ jokes to my husband who now thinks I have some sort of penis obsession {& I do of course} but that is beside the point and then in the next chapter I was crying with that sweet baby serenade. Great chapter, as always.
Date: 28 Mar 2012 5:52 PM Title: Alistair Scott MD
Great chapter. You are a great comedy writer, crack me up
Date: 28 Mar 2012 6:01 AM Title: Southern Deviled eggs
Haha, cute & sweet
Date: 28 Mar 2012 5:13 AM Title: Tulips that bloom at Christmas time
Great chapter. Okay, I have to admit I was a little anxious about E feeling emasculated with the 'you're my bitch' talk, but what could I of been thinking, that man is too much man to be emasculated.
Fun read. Can't wait to read about New Years bash.
Date: 27 Mar 2012 6:12 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night
Oh my, watch his dream girl be Bella. That would be too funny & you know what they say, 'it's a small world.'
Date: 27 Mar 2012 4:00 PM Title: The proclaimers
I love that song, one of my fav's;-))
Date: 27 Mar 2012 3:16 PM Title: Big Day
Awe, my 1st born son was born December 15th, it was such a great Christmas present, best ever.
Great chapter, I can't believe guys actually look at delivery & think like that, I've seen so many deliveries & each one beautiful & moved me to tears with the beauty of it;-))
Date: 27 Mar 2012 2:25 PM Title: Baby Baby
Great chapter, love how much B & E are head over heels with each other. Adorable, I like adorable;-))
Date: 27 Mar 2012 1:25 PM Title: Lake George Escape
Yeah, great chapter, definitely brings back memories of good times!;-))
Date: 26 Mar 2012 2:04 PM Title: Lingerie and Lasagna
They are a totally cute couple. How adorable will it be them running around dressed in period clothes? Haha
Thanks for writing!
Date: 26 Mar 2012 4:49 AM Title: Jenna's
Being a nurse, I can't seem to get enough of the medical stuff either;-))
Great chapter, I'm starting to wonder if she got pregnant while on antibiotics after the shooting, what with all the horn dogness going and is due to pregger hormones (technical term)or if something else is going on besides a healthy sexual appetite, not that there's anything anything at all wrong with that:-))
I absolutely love reading completed stories but thanks for updating regularly on your wip
Date: 25 Mar 2012 12:34 AM Title: Following her lead
Awe, great chapter, I'm with Edward, what if he was the one who lost his job, she'd want to help him not have him move out.
Date: 24 Mar 2012 12:46 PM Title: Crawl inside you
I loved the chapter.
Date: 23 Mar 2012 11:43 PM Title: The empty bottle saloon
Wow, no cock block a ily block.
So we got a new guy in the picture & there was no mention of his wopife on his arm or anywhere in sight,hmmm
Date: 05 Mar 2012 3:40 AM Title: The blue box blues
this is definitely one of the better stories I have read in awhile. I have been thru some real stinkers lately. how refreshing to hit a winner!
Date: 05 Mar 2012 3:20 AM Title: Don't feed the bears
The baby calling Edward a pansy was hysterical. I totally LOL'd because I can see a kid doing that!
Date: 19 Feb 2012 10:47 AM Title: Lake George Escape
Camping is one of those things that sounds better than it really is and is more trouble than it should be, but always makes memories for a lifetime.The weed storyline was hillarious.
Date: 17 Feb 2012 8:25 AM Title: Colonial Williamsburg
Funny chapter. I haven't been to Williamsberg since I was a kid. Makes me want to go.
Date: 17 Feb 2012 12:37 AM Title: Lingerie and Lasagna
The story is cute. And hot. And the mispelled "STARED" is still making me crazy. But, I still like the writing. How come I never got to work
with a surgeon like Edward? It would have made a low anterior a whole different ballgame.
Date: 30 Jan 2012 2:51 AM Title: Following her lead
I am really liking your story. Good plot and it moves along well. It is fairly accurate OR action. I liked that you included the "time out". Emergency c sections in a small hospital can be scary. I did one in the ER one time, it
was aweful.
Do you use a beta? I noticed you have some minor but consistant spelling errors. (Ex. Not starred at me but stared.) Minor, but you don't
want the silly things to distract from the story.
I am looking forward to the rest of the story. Thank you for you time and story.
ps. I'm an OR RN that scrubs.
Date: 27 Jan 2012 1:23 AM Title: Aftermath
do you by any chance work in the medical field? ive wondered that for a while because most fics i read that are medically based have no idea about the procedures and medical jargon and such so its nice to be able to read this and not want to scream in frustration about ppl writing what they dont kno just throwing around big words. great chapter, great story, on to the next chap
Date: 18 Jan 2012 2:12 PM Title: Quagmire and the hag
I 'm good depression pills.. It just levels you out.. But I say your right about Emmett.. You still have some down time too. But that life..
oh I want to say sorry about my review about the handcuffs. I love all that stuff to read. It just I don't read or skimm thou stuff that is hurt full or even what bella did. even if edward liked it at the end. he is a masicascs.. That even goes the other way around. But that do to my own life problems.. So just want to let you know. That I was not putting it down..
I should have know they all are taking somthing. haha. Their just a normal family.. haha.
Date: 18 Jan 2012 1:19 AM Title: Mom Jeans
I just want to let you know I skip the last half.. I don't like domix.. She is a bitch.. You just provied it right again. He stop when she asked. but no bella keeps going.. don't do anything for me but get me mad.. that why I don't read them.. But I am only one reader. and Like I said I skimmed it.. The rest was awonderful..
Your a great writter and I have had fun reading your story for the last few days..
Date: 07 Sep 2011 3:14 AM Title: Don't feed the bears
Alright, so this is a really cute story! Edward and his inner monologue is awesome as is Bells and her inner monologue as well. Love how you have brought all our favorite characters into the story as well. I will keep reading becuase I am liking the story a lot!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 4:54 AM Title: Quagmire and the hag
I was thinking after the last chapter that CC could be called carbon copy for a nickname lol
Date: 23 Aug 2011 6:39 PM Title: Alistair Scott MD
I didn't picture Al with such an interesting flair ... I learned a bit from his POV ... Thank you for giving it to us as I think it adds to the dimensions of the story.
Date: 20 Aug 2011 12:53 AM Title: Aftermath
wonderful chapter well parts were and parts made me cry ... one thing antibiotics nullify the pill so they weren't pregnancy protected in the hospital! With Edward being a doctor he should have known that lol
Date: 19 Aug 2011 10:10 PM Title: Unemployment
Great story so far ... I would like to make a small correction, if I may, Alice would have to be the Matron-of-honor as she is married. ... a maid-of-honor is a single lady.
Date: 19 Aug 2011 7:05 PM Title: Crawl inside you
Awww I was hoping that there was a leaky condom in their past ... lol
Date: 31 Jul 2011 10:22 AM Title: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.
wow what a story:))
Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:56 AM Title: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.
omg have laughed so hard and cried real tears during this story am certain this and the sequel should be made into a romantic comedy starring rob and kristen would be perfect! you r excellent at this!
Date: 25 Jul 2011 6:30 AM Title: Colonial Williamsburg
felt the same way about corn dogs when i was pregnant with my first child i would be waiting at the bus stop after work and could swear that someone within a half mile radius had a hand dipped corn dog ate them evry meal for 2 weeks straight this is soo funny and the thinking of food and sex at the same time is right on target lol
Date: 22 Jun 2011 10:13 PM Title: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.
lol, great ending I have been reading this over the last couple of days and I love how most of the stories is after they are married. A lot of ff stops after thier married and 1st baby then haven the last chapter skip years. Looking forward to the sequel now,
Date: 21 Jun 2011 9:56 AM Title: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.
I love this story :D I LOVE all your stories, your a great writer :D
I remember 'Doorways in America', I was going to read it later on and when I came back it was gone :(
Date: 08 May 2011 3:47 AM Title: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.
i love the familiy dynamics... the are real with each other. I hope thta i could have open talks with my kids like that.... looked this look into future
Date: 08 May 2011 1:02 AM Title: Out of Character.
we all (well, many of us) 'try' things at some point in our lives.... there are worst things taht could have happened other than E breaking B's vajayjay
Date: 07 May 2011 11:30 PM Title: Tulips that bloom at Christmas time
edward is a big geek...jealous of sweet carlisle. but nice way he handled al
Date: 06 May 2011 8:10 PM Title: Ode to Joy
how sweet was that!
Date: 06 May 2011 7:00 PM Title: Crawl inside you
I actually wouldnt have been upset if they had a baby on the way! But am happy they are moving forward with what's right for them. cant have a timeline on love!!
Date: 05 May 2011 9:57 PM Title: Mac N Cheese
oh my, jake is a little crazy, huh. Bella please use peep whole next time!
Date: 05 May 2011 7:30 PM Title: The blue box blues
jake's a stalker
Date: 05 May 2011 4:32 PM Title: eXfactor
Time? I never asked him for time, I asked him to leave me alone.... Bella is a funny one
Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:32 AM Title: Aftermath
HOSPITAL SEX TOO MUCH??? naaahhhhh ive done it before.. once i was hospitalized with a severe case of pheumonia, and my beloved boyfriend, wouldnt stay away.. to say I was in pretty bad shape is an understatement. However, i made it through and 2 nights before i was discharged we couldnt keep our hornyness on check... and those hospital gows DO MAKE IT SO EASY!!! LOL... it was hot.. hmmm yeah... ;) Naughty patients rocks! and they do heal faster than normal patient does! yay to us! :))
As I said before... I love this!!! see u later! ;)
Date: 23 Mar 2011 12:21 PM Title: eXfactor
as I told you in your last one-shot "the stepfather" i was going to read this... AND I LURVE IT!!!!!! ;) i need to sleep, but i cant help myself! this is too good! who needs 8 hrs of sleep anyway? :)
Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:44 PM Title: Lake George Escape
I have been reading this as much as possible every day and enjoying the heck out of it! I havent review but I just have to say that this is probably my fav chp. as well! Hilarious!!! I have done the 'tent on ground no tent' camping and I prefer the camper type myself...indoor plumming! Carlisle's a hoot! Edward is just so funny too! He is different than from many I read but he is still the same protective, loving, sexy character as well. This story is so enjoyable and I am loving it immensely. I know it's complete and all but I just wanted to let you know that I am reading and it is great!! I really need to go do some housework and go to the store but I can't put it down! HA!
Hugs, Stephanie