Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:40 AM Title: Epilogue
This story is FUCKING AMAZING !!!!!
Date: 24 Jul 2010 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am extremely disturbed..... but so can't stop reading...hehehehehe well done
Date: 24 Jul 2010 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
oh dear... it the cd going to be a good thing or a bad thing.... mmmmm
Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
very easy read great chapter thanks
Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
hmmmm naughty matt.... like it good job
Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great first ch.. going to read more now
Date: 14 Jul 2010 4:19 PM Title: Epilogue
awww... after all the hell u put bella and us readers through, it was worth it. Good job.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 2:45 AM Title: Epilogue
that was good i liked it
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2010 3:05 AM Title: Epilogue
great story, I'm sad to see it end, but I guess it must happen eventually to all stories.
Author's Response:
I am sad to see it end as well, but you're right it had to happen eventually. Sigh...Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2010 11:49 PM Title: Epilogue
great story and I look forward to reading more of yours.
thanks for allowing me on this wonderful journey of yours.
Until next time :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:31 PM Title: Epilogue
I am adding you as we speak.. I really enjoyed this story.. I am a sucker for the happy ending, and you didn't disappoint. Thanks for the wonderfully creative ideas.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! It really makes my day to hear that people enjoy my story...I know I loved writing it!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2010 1:17 PM Title: Epilogue
I was happy to see the snippit of 20yrs. Not happy for Charlie's death, only that it was addressed. I had wondered what had happened to him when Bella went missing.
I love the HEA you gave these two. If anyone deserved a happy ending, it was Bella. I love how Emmett, being as huge as he is, still cowars away from Bella. That is pretty funny.
As much as I enjoyed reading this story, I think you gave it a very natural ending. I don't know if a sequal would do it justice. But you are the author so I leave it in your capable hands and look forward to reading more of your stories. Till then...
Oh, I have started posting an AH story of my own called "Use Somebody". If you get the time to check it out, I would love to hear what you think. :)
Author's Response:
Thank so much for your review!
I know Charlie kind of disappeared. I had other things running around in my head at the time and they all fell through so I had to do a little tidbit about him in the epi.
And yes...I had to put the episode with Emmett in there. It was just too funny to pass up.
I'm still unsure on the sequel. If I do one it will be awhile down the road so we shall see.
I will definately check out your new story. Thanks for letting me know!
Date: 26 Jun 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am so glad that things went well for them. Bella deserves all the happiness she can stand after the hell she has been through.
Author's Response:
This is very very true...thanks for the review!!
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
*panting* was it as good for you as it was me? lol nice
Author's Response:
haha...yep! Thanks!!
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 24
yayy.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved the chapter I look forward to the epilogue, though I hate to see this story end.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And I am also sad to see it end, but it had to happen at some point. I will be starting another fic that I adopted after I finish this one up, but I'll be sure to let everyone know in the epi what my plans are. Thanks again!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 23
i can't believe that Victoria & Matt died so peacefully in one paragraph.
Author's Response:
I know...I was really struggling with how I wanted them to go out and in the end I decided to try and keep as close as possible to SM's original characters and unfortunately the Cullen's just wouldn't drag out killing someone...no matter how much I tried to force it. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great story so far
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 21
Bout Friggin time someone slapped Edward. What an ass. (yeah, I know love him, hate him, hate him, love him...). But, hey now, it is time for some revenge hope at least Emmet & Jasper go with Bella to wield that revenge stick on each man that used her. And on another point... a few chapters back they gave Paul $5,000 for info on Bella's address.. when they should have plucked out his eyes. He knew a girl was being raped and tortured and didn't even go to the police. It's so time to kick ass! Yeah, so what... I'm a vigilante ...join me. This story is making me twitch.
Author's Response:
haha...thank you so much for reviewing. All I can say is I claim temporary insanity for the Paul thing...you are so very right...what was I thinking! haha...Thanks again!!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 24
LOVE IT... Thank god... they are going to be okay...wow.. this was one hell of a ride... whew.
Author's Response:
Thanks! It was a crazy ride, but it was a lot of fun, well fun might not be the right word, but it was great. And the response I got was amazing so thanks for reviewing!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 24
The wedding was simple and perfect!
Author's Response:
Thanks!! I was kind of nervous about how people were going to react to that, so I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm glad Matt and Victoria are dust, but I am sad that Bella didn't get to have a hand in destroying them. Not only that, but the Cullens should have tortured them just a bit.
Author's Response:
You are definitely not alone in that feeling. I felt that way too and I had originally written a longer chapter where Bella and the Cullens had some "fun" at Matt and Victoria's expense, but I just wasn't happy with it and then I realized it was because as much as I have played with the characters personalities the reality of it was that the Cullens would never torture someone, no matter how much they deserve it. So I wrote the one that's posted as was much happier with it. Hopefully you weren't too disappointed. Thanks for the review!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 22
Bella has skills!
Author's Response:
Ya it's about time...don't you think? lol... thanks for the review!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 21
As sad as that whole scene was, I think she was 110% correrct in calling the whole family out. They all left her. Edward was not the head of the family nor any of their mates, so he had no power to make them do anything they didn't chose to do.
Author's Response:
Well I'm glad you agree with me....thanks for reviewing!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
Poor Bella. Now she truely has no one. She can't go back to Charlie and doesn't feel like she can stay with the Cullens. Very said. :(
Author's Response:
She is definitely in a bad place...Thanks for the review!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
OH WOW.. this poor girl.. she is never going to be right in the head again.. lol.. well not really lol..but gosh..
Date: 16 Jun 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
OH GOD.. That was horrible..poor thing.. Please let someone see the bite mark. That would prove it right? GOSH.. This is breaking my heart.
HUM?? Do you believe in HEA...? Cause I don't think I could take it if this ended badly.. sniff sniff.
Great job though.
Date: 16 Jun 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great job on writing somthing so serious and not butchering it!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
YEAH...ALICE...and Molly...and Cat.. They are my new favorite people.
This is very addictive. You write so well. Thanks for the wonderful imagination you have.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I really enjoying hearing what people think. Also It's a huge confidence boost when people like it since this is my first story and all. So thanks again!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
Matt...Victoria...oh hell.. poor bella. WAKE up... get out of there.. quick..
ok.. much better.
THanks for the wonderful story.. I am loving it
Date: 16 Jun 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh gosh...MATT is a horrible person... COME ON EDWARD...WHERE ARE YOU!!...
Date: 16 Jun 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
OHNO...this could be good.. or REALLY REALLY BAD... I am scared to hit the next button.. Here goes...
Date: 16 Jun 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh this is sad and sweet. I like it already... Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank YOU for reviewing!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 23
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks@ Glad you're happy!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
wow... his original nightmare realized..with a bonus of a broken & tortured Bella before she turned.
Author's Response:
yep...what can I say...I'm evil sometimes. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 20
I noticed I skipped 3 chapters after reading 22 so I went back..
Author's Response:
Well I'm glad you realized it. Thanks for all your reviews!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
ooo bad ass Bella..
Author's Response:
Damn straight! It's about time Bella got a back bone...haha...thanks for reviewing!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
I had a feeling the angst was going to pop up again. I kind of thought it was good she didnt remember.. but it might of came back to her at a bad time anyway so..
Author's Response:
Ya Alice definitely had her reasons for doing what she did, which will be revealed in the next upload session...which will probably be later today. Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
awww..
Date: 15 Jun 2010 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
this is crazy..
Date: 15 Jun 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
well one thing good came of it when she saw his license.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
Can someone please give Matt what he truly deserves, I want that SOB to be tortured continually WITHOUT a break for months and months before you finally do him in.
Author's Response:
You are not alone in that feeling...Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 19
This is just all so painful. And I do hope that Matt is torn apart very, very, VERY slowly. No quick death or cop-out jail time. No turning the other cheek bs. Sometimes vengeance is just. And as we suffered with Bella we would appreciate a LONG chapter detailing Matt's and Victoria's ever so painful demise. *boy o boy, this story makes my head & heart ACHE!*
Author's Response:
There definitely won't be a cop-out jail time for Matt I can promise you that. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
oh my, very good indeed. but now i want more, I can't help it, i have to know what is going to happen, I will be waiting.
until next time ;)
Author's Response:
Don't worry new chapter should be up soon...probably today or maybe tomorrow, but soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
I knew it was too good to last.
Author's Response:
Yep...I can't let everyone off the hook that easily. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 18
So, she physically made it. But what about mentally?
Author's Response:
Mentally...well let's just say that it's a long road ahead. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
I wonder if she will survive the change?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ughhhh! I can hardly read this, but I can't stop either. It is like looking at a horrific train crash.
Author's Response:
I use that analogy all the time! haha...I'm glad you are sticking with it. Thanks!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am so glad they are on their way cause I am not sure how much more of this I could read. You should have called this story, "The Rape and Torture of Bella Swan". Is there any way for her to recover from all this damage?
Author's Response:
I know I'm a terrible person. Recovery won't be easy that's for sure. Thanks for the review!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
Here's hoping Bella gets her revenge.
Author's Response:
I would love to tell you, but that would give the story away...so keep reading! And thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great job on the story so far, interesting
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
WOW! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
Good, intense story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
this is very angsty and has me on edge..
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 13
I wasnt positive about it but I did have a feeling it was her.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh the pain..despair..sorrow
Author's Response:
Ya...sorry about that...but it's what I do best. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
who?
Date: 13 Jun 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
not to her lullaby!! oh man.. well its good shes was able to get away and screw Matt over.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
oh crap i hate this. He better pay for that. now i have to read on for retribution. I had a feeling you was going to let that happen.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2010 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great story so far I look forward to she its continuation
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
Death would be kinder than what Bella has had to endure. No matter what, she will always be damaged on the inside. She could live for a thousand years and never forget this...look at Rosalie.
Author's Response:
Very true. We will have to see how she deals with all this. Thanks!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
Fuck me! Can this seriously get any worse for her? You must really hate Bella.
Author's Response:
I don't hate Bella...well not really. I just have a lot of stress that I need to take out on someone and unfortunately Bella is the easiest target. Don't hate me!! Thanks for the review.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 12
Son of a bitch! That raping bastard found her?!?
Date: 13 Jun 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh shit! Come on? How much more can this poor girl take? Don't tell me, it's Victoria.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am so thankful that Bella got away, but I think she is stupid to go back to Charlie. That is the first place they will look for her.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
That son of a bitch!!! Please tell me he gets what he deserves in the end!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hate Matt and hope the entire family gets a chance to torture him.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad to see Bella is making a new friend. She really needs one.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is such a selfish bastard. He wasn't saving Bella by leaving her, he broke who she was. And to take Alice and the others away from her as well was just cruel.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
MAtt is a bastard and I hope Edward comes back and drains him dry!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
Pretty good, I hope you update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'll update as soon as possible...
Date: 13 Jun 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh crap, she is going to flip shit when she hears Edward playing again.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
Matt is a sick fucker.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
I wonder what it is about the piano that is helping Bella. She knows it isn't Edward playing it. I wonder if the patient is playing something that Edward played for her?
Date: 13 Jun 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sad beginning. Bella is truely broken. :(
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
Nope. TOTALLY didn't see that one coming. OMG. Did Bella hurt you in a former life? You are so cruel to her!!!
Another positively riveting chapter
Author's Response:
I know I'm a cruel person! But things will eventually get better I swear!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
This story just keeps getting more and more powerful!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm always happy to know people enjoy the story. More chapters will go up tomorrow. Thanks for taking the time to review!!
Date: 12 Jun 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
*huffing* maybe its the large cup of coffee I had that has me on edge. ;)
Author's Response:
haha...Thanks for the review! More chapters will go up tomorrow.
Date: 12 Jun 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
crap... im getting emotional.. i usually get depressed or anxious with these kind of stories but I cant stop reading on..
Date: 12 Jun 2010 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
weird.. at the end of this chapter... when she answerd Charlie.... i let out a.. dry light sob? You know, like you're on the verge of a cry? weird.
Date: 12 Jun 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
kinda gross? .. *shrugging* eh, what the heck i'll check it out.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
Interesting story, I look forward to seeing where you take it.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad to know that you like it. Look for more chapters tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
so far so good. you have me wanted to read more to see where this is going so I guess that is a good thing.
Until next time :)
Author's Response:
Wanting more is always a good thing. Happy to hear that you like it. More chapters should go up tomorrow. Thanks for the review!!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
ooh! I really like this, I can't wait to figure out who the girl is.. i have my guesses but i really want to know!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I should just let you know that I had big plans for the girl...but they fell through. That's not to say she won't show up ever again, but just don't plan on seeing too much of her. More chapters up tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
Please continue. I am reaay interested in where this goes.
Author's Response:
Thanks! The story is not complete yet...I have a few more chapters to write, but I have a bunch ready to post. So look for more tomorrow.