Date: 17 Nov 2016 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 51
Wow I have to say this story was far more than I was expecting especially after the first few chapters. I have neglected all of my housewife duties today to read this straight through, I just couldn't put it down and thankfully it's on my iPad so I could refill my coffee and pee without having to!
This is a phenomenal story with enough of each emotion that when finished you are left in awe and not in wanting. Don't get me wrong I'm a sucker for a great sequel but this story truly doesn't need anything else. I've laughed, sobbed, smiled, been angry, hurt, confused, anxious and of course angsty and it is rare to find a story that can truely keep me on the edge of my seat. This would be a very good story to publish.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 51
really good story. Interesting plot. I loved the characters
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 51
thank you so much for completing this AWSEOME story and continuing it when you thought it should end because the end was perfect ;D
Date: 06 May 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 40
that was a fun chapter ;) im so glad you explained the script and that we didnt miss any of the story because of it ;D
Date: 06 May 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 36
well darn!!! it happened again!!!!its so frustrating!!! ;(
Author's Response:
Honestly, I haven't touched the story in many many months. I have no idea what is happening!
Date: 06 May 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 35
the computer code text appeared again!!! how much of this story am i missing?????;(
Date: 06 May 2014 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 34
i was so enjoying this chapter when the text went into computer code again???? ;(
Date: 06 May 2014 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 32
im loving this story ;) but in this chapter it seems that the text has gone into computer code about a quarter of the way down?????? ;(
Date: 06 May 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 28
wow !! i think the ?pov is laurant though :)
Date: 05 May 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
PLEASE have a hea to this story!!!!!!!!!! i love it but ive already cried and its only just the beginning!!!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 51
I have just completed the whole of uprising it took me just 6 hours as I couldn't stop reading. I have never cried so much at any fiction I have read. it was well written and had plenty of body to the story. Just brilliant
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I have written a couple of one-shots since, but nothing ate at me like Uprising did. I hope another plot grabs me soon; it was quite an experience. I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
oh boy here we go are they going to get away?
Author's Response:
sorry I haven't responded to any of your reviews, but I have been on vacation. I hope you are enjoying the story.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
oh boy i am not going to give into the hope just yet!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
that just sucks ass!!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
i sure hope that doesn't happen poor everyone! james is a sick bastard
Date: 18 Oct 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
is she going to take it? hummm!?
Date: 18 Oct 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
oh boy at least she got that time with him because i have a really bad feeling about what is going to happen.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
not good your "good" luck is going to run out!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow that is scary!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh boy doesn't sound good... how did they get there?
Date: 11 Oct 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 51
Great story. Thanks for writing.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2011 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 51
GOD! this was just beautiful, I'm actually a little choked up...can't wait to read anything that you write next, you're awesome!
Author's Response:
wow...thanks!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 51
loved the ending
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 51
I have enjoyed your story, so very much! Thank you for not ending when you thought you might. This ending (although had me bawling) was PERFECT. Can't wait for more of your stories, if this one was any indication. Will be sure to add you to my favorite authors so I can watch for them. Thank you for this wonderful story! Cheri
Author's Response:
Bawling, huh? Wow, that is great praise; it is very rewarding to know that you cared about my characters so much. I have always considered an author's ability to get me invested in the characters as the mark of a great story, so your comments mean a lot to me. Thank you so much. I'm working on a fluffier story right now; getting away from angst a bit for a little while. I hope to begin posting it within a few weeks.
Date: 10 Oct 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 51
OMG.. I just started reading this story and couldn't stop reading!! It was amazing and I thank you for writing it =)
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 51
I loved the ending. It was perfect. I could not have asked for a better ending to this story. I am sad that laurent died, but it was his choice.
I do hope that you write something else. Thank you for the update and finishing the story.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 51
When there was a long break in the updates I kinda let this one drift off from my memory then when you began updating again it came back all of it .. the emotions the laughter all of it..that is saying somthing about your writing (IT"S GREAT) somtimes when an author takes to long to update I have to go back and reread the story to remember what was going on but not this one I recalled it all because it was so touching. I cant wait to see what you have in store for us in the future. thank you for the sharing of your talent.
Author's Response:
I can only read completed stories; I can't keep up with dozens of Edwards and Bellas and their storylines. I think it's amazing that you can, and am incredibly flattered that my story could remain clear in your mind a year later! I really can't compare to many of the authors that I have read both here and on fanfiction, but thank you so much for your praise.
I have many other storylines in my head, but one in particular is being more persistent.
Date: 10 Oct 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 51
AMAZING!Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 51
It was beautiful & full circle! I lived hearing from Edward & how he felt!
I especially loved the Dop references & how Bella didn't care the gf. I have to agree - others see sweetness...I see fake! Hecandobettersten all the way!!
I'm so glad you wrapped it up the way you did. It gave closure without the feeling of being rushed or ending just to end.
A wonderful story of horror & hope! Bravo!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, Jay. I saw you were online and KNEW you'd be one of the first to read this last chapter! Yea, due to the rules here, I didn't even know if it would be ok to use a first name, so I used Bill and Masen to help identify him :) I thought everyone could figure it out :)
And yeah, I see fake... she just seems too worldly to his sweet, too hard to his gentleness... well, naught I can do about it. Too old, too ugly, and too unknown...sigh...
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 51
Wonderful ending. Glad to see everyone is doing well and they are (almost) all still together. Glad Irina has her son and everyone still has a piece of Laurant running around.
Thankyou for writing and sharing. lemme know when you start your next story
Author's Response:
Thank you. Well, I just posted a one-shot. Now, to decide which multi-chaper story to work on next!!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 50
Yay Seth!
I loved how Bella explained how much Edward was loved & needed. Those who sacrifice themselves "think" they are making things easier for those left behind but in reality, they are the ones who have it easy. It's the ones who live that suffer. Glad Bella was able to make Edward see that!
Reunited....and it feels so good...!
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 50
woo hoo for the reunion. LOL for her cooking for him.
Date: 09 Oct 2011 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 50
well im glad that hes forgivin
Date: 08 Oct 2011 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 49
EAGERLY ANTICIPATING BELLA'S REACTION
MAN, THAT WAS A SIMPLY SUPERB SAVE OUT THERE-BURUNDI,WOW!
I NEVER GUESSED
GREAT WORK
Author's Response:
Gosh, thanks so much! I really didn't know how I was going to accomplish the save; I actually did research into extradition treaties, LOL!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 49
I put my money on Seth. I think Bella will be relieved that Edward is safe that she will just smile & kiss & then bring the babies.
Great chapter.....thank goodness no extradition!! If Royce or his cronies got a hold of Edward, he'd be dead!
Thanks for the DL tidbit! Gotta live those southern girls (even if I'm from Hawaii) - we still have the hospitality!!
Author's Response:
You are so welcome! I didn't really give Louise that much thought until you mentioned her, and then I couldn't help but give her a little background for you :)
Date: 08 Oct 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 49
im glad he wasnt able to go thru iwth it!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 49
Woo Hoo going home and no charges!!!! Awww and Tanzania loses the mine and the land...not
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2011 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 48
WHAT!!! nooooooo, what's gonna happen now!?!?!?!?!
Date: 07 Oct 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 48
cant wiat till the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 48
hmmm james? no he died didnt he?
Author's Response:
Dunno... did you see a dead body?
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2011 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 48
Jasper, right? Jasper came to kick his a$$ into shape & bring him home?!
Martyrward.....pisses me off!!
Loved the flight attendant reference 'cause, that's right...I'm a Delta fa. Assuming it was DL he was
on since he went through ATL.
Great chapter....thanks for not making me wait too long
Author's Response:
You smart girl! Yes, 'Louise' is with Delta :) She lives in an Atlanta suburb with her devoted hubby of 28 years, and her 2 beloved cats. She sings in her church choir; her faith runs deep. She could retire, but she loves people. As she couldn't have children, she 'mothers' her passengers, especially poor lost souls like Edward. She will never forget him, and does pray for him daily. Louise keeps a necklace... it's a bit like a rosary, except it is loaded with charms. She adds a new charm for every 'lost soul', and runs the necklace it through her fingers while she prays for them. She began with a bracelet, but her heart is too big, and her hubby replaced it with the necklace one year for Christmas. In her opinion, it's the best gift she ever received.
The charm that represents Edward is a chinese symbol for 'father', containing 2 tiny emeralds, one for each child, in the color of his eyes.
I hope to post a chapter every evening until the story is finished.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 47
personally, I would squeeze him around the neck, it's a punishment and a hug!...why is he such an amaizing man??
Author's Response: Simple. It's fiction... the only place where I personally have found any truly amazing men.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2011 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 47
marytrward.Indeed. woo hoo for babies. coolnames.
Author's Response:
thanks. I kept the same initials; I figured twins should have the same monogram.
Martyrward. Poor self-sacrificing bastard. He can't realize how much he hurts others by doing things like that.
Date: 06 Oct 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Does this story have a HEA for Bella and Edward? Please let me know if this is a dark story with violence against Bella so that I can make an informed decision about whether or not to continue reading.
Author's Response:
This story does have dark parts, and from what I am told, will definitely bring tears sometimes. There is violence against Bella... but yes, I am planning a HEA.
Date: 06 Oct 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 47
looking forward to bella beating his ass looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 06 Oct 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 47
Ass.....sorry but he is.
Hope he comes to his senses soon ir do do Eli js it into him!
Author's Response:
Edward is such an emotional creature, isn't he? But you gotta hand it to him, he loves fiercely.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 46
so so happy to see you and your awesome story again. I hope your RL problems solve themselves soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I am so flattered that you think my story is awesome. RL sucks sometimes, and doesn't always have a HEA, unfortunately. But I will trudge on, and better things will come.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2011 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 46
Welcome back!!! Glad the restaurant is going well. Ya need to get some of the blackmail attempts on tape. Embarrass the hell out of the country.
Awww for new bodyguards.
Date: 05 Oct 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 46
totally love this story and excited to see an update!
Author's Response:
thanks. I'm sorry you guys had to wait so long for an update. I was ecstatic when I found the memory stick; it contains Uprising, as well as other stories I have under construction.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hmmm I wonder what Edward has planned for James.
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome!
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter =) I'm s'cited to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2011 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter! I wonder if the plan will work.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
loved it!
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
OMG! *speechless* That James is such a monster! Ugh! I hate him! Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
loved it !
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 6
OMG! James is such a monster!!! Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved everything!!! I'll be back for some more later =)
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2011 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
The lemon was amazing! So hot!
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hmmm... Alice has a bad feeling
loved it!
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
So different love it
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! very interesting!
Date: 30 Dec 2010 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Is there going to be an update soon? I was so trapped in reading the story that I just couldnt stop and then I ran out of chapters and you havent updated and now I am sad. So...Please update soon!
Date: 31 Oct 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
Whew, OK, a ray of light in this torture-fest of a story! OK, I have faith again you can see our characters to safety soon, before I have panic attack reading it. I know Edward can pull off a pretend breakdown, if it means escape!
Date: 31 Oct 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
Harsh? I consider myself a tough chick, but this chpt. reduced me to tears. James needs to be put down, and quickly. Someone has to step this freak, the Bastard. Do you believe in HEA, or did I pick the wrong story, damn :) . Powerful writing.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
Fork, you are killing me. I never, ever want to go on a safari because of this story, you've got me thinking twice about leaving the country. James is a sick S.O.B. I wish Edward could take an axe pick to the side of his head and shut his mouth permenately. So glad Em and Jazz are there for him.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
That. Was. Hot. Lemonade. I feel so sorry for them, being slaves in that situation, having to suppress love to his own wife!! Emotion was pouring off the page, (and out of Bella!).
Author's Response:
Thanks; it's my first lemonade, and I'm glad you liked it. I thought it would be an interesting twist on how horrible slavery could be, depending on the variety of sadism the master leans toward. I am getting back to Uprising now, after a personal tragedy. I hope you will continue to read when I begin posting again.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well Damn! Way to scare me stiff in my own home, Nice writing. Royce King, now that's a interesting twist. Can't wait to read more. Oh, now I get it, you mentioned the master and his friends raping Rosalie last chapter... just like our beloved Eclispe :) .
Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. SO many questions:) ! Can't wait to find out how they all got in this horrible perdicament.
Date: 07 Oct 2010 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
I truly love this story and have for a while.
It's been in my favorites list for a long time now and it's one of those fics that when it updates, i almost squeal.
I noticed though that it hasn't updated in a while (2 months may not sound like much to some but considering this story used to update every few days...)
I'm not posting this to rush you or anything but i truly hope that this break is no more serious than just a case of writers block.
I know i'm not the only one out there who loves and supports this story so please let us know that everything is ok :)
Author's Response:
Hi Kate; I appreciate your words. I had quite a tragedy strike in August, and was just numb for many months. I just couldn't think, let alone write. I have not even poked my head in here for a long time. I am looking at Uprising again now, and hope I can finish the story soon. It is difficult to get the words to flow, but I need to try. Thank you for being so patient, and I am sorry that I have made you all wait so long.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 45
Ugh. That bites.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 44
oh dear.... dont like the sound of the cliffie
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 45
Aw c'mon!! It's not like those mines were built to any special codes for safety or something, is it????? It can't be the hand of God? Fine then, how about Karma running over their evil asses and making THEM pay for all the shoddy work they didn't do to protect the people???? Gurrrrr.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 45
OH DAMN!!!!!!
good chapter still luvin this story ,but am so afraid for Edward now
Date: 16 Aug 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 45
thats not good ! cant wait till the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 45
weel, that was expected I guess, even Edward thought that the "mine collapsed with every bad guy inside" was strange and now is the time to show his inner strenght, I think, because it would be MORE fishy if the public accepted the murder-juste or not- only because of the circunstances
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 45
What I am confused about is why they would all be so worried about the crime they commited in Africa? Isn't it customary that the crime has to be trialed where it is commited? There was no crime commited in the states there for I'm not sure how they could be punished for them there...just a thought! Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 45
Another good chapter. I am glad that Bella's pregnancy is coming a long well and that they are having a boy and a girl.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 45
Hate those who have negativity when they should be shocked, relieved & grateful that all these escaped alive.
Hope Laurent makes it.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 44
Maybe repercussions from Africa? They've been through so much and all the "refugees" want is an opportunity to reacclimatize to their new lives.
There will always be those who will be envious and will be jealous. I hope the drama won't be too bad.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 44
I'm kind of scared for what is to come, but I've come to trust you with this story, so I'll just wait for the next update
Date: 13 Aug 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 44
My guess would be that the mine with the guards was discovered or someone survived?? I am glad that Emmett realized that something is wrong or bothering him and that he was brave and strong enought to ask for help.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 44
Could it be Laurant getting really sick from his cancer maybe? I cant wait to read more!!!!
Date: 13 Aug 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 44
hummm I think it will be a health thing not a unhappy thing : (
oh plz dont let them lose anyone close...... i love them all so much
Date: 13 Aug 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 44
My only guess would be that the mine filled with the guards has been discoverd...And if I am right when should I expect Edward? I want to look nice ;). Just kidding...Update soon!
Author's Response:
You are so close that I am going to declare you the winner! So... Edward wants to know what your weekend looks like, and if you prefer to have lotion or none.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 44
It won't be the baby... hmmm.... tough call. Laurent dies? But that seems sort of ways away maybe.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 43
OMG I LOVE Bill.....he is a freadking hoot!!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 43
sweet chapter - like all the coming home chapters of sweet cheeks friends.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 43
Aaaawwwwww.....l want an Edward, too!!
He really is toq good to be real!
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 43
i love bill !! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 10 Aug 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 43
I love Bill. Too bad he is gay. Why oh why do I always fall for the gay ones.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 43
awwww bill is cool
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 42
Very sweet re Laurent & Irina.
Had a spotting scare myself but was told the same thing re color. Glad the babies are okay.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 42
well thats good they need the happyness cant wait till the enxt chapter
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 42
ooo so sweet .. I Love this story.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 41
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!