Date: 08 Jan 2023 4:23 AM Title: The Apology...
So who paid this Teresa to say her baby was Edwards? I read it all and that question is not answered.
Date: 07 Jan 2023 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 21
I don't know how she is doing this
at least she acknowledged the discrepancy between he's behaviour and his I love you.
I would want to dig Into that
and I don't buy that a woman can get in to his exclusive aprtment like that
if what he says is true.
Date: 07 Jan 2023 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
I don't know how she is doing this
at least she acknowledged the discrepancy between he's behaviour and his I love you.
I would want to dig Ainto that
and I don't buy that a woman can get in to his exclusive aprtment like that
if what he says is true.
pure bs
Date: 07 Jan 2023 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 20
I don't know how she is doing this
at least she acknowledged the discrepancy between he's behaviour and his I love you.
I would want to dig into that
and I don't buy that a woman can get in to his exclusive aprtment like that
if what he says is true.
pure bs
Date: 25 Feb 2017 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 39
:) loved this story
Date: 31 Aug 2016 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 39
Yes! Loved every bit of it! Please continue!
Date: 18 Apr 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 39
I like it I fisnish it in a day, yes I dont have a life jejeje
Date: 18 Apr 2016 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 37
Holly shit soo soon? That's. It smart!
Date: 25 Feb 2016 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 39
Wonderful ending!
Date: 25 Feb 2016 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 37
I did enjoy this, but was a little confused as to where it fits in with the last chapter of the story.
Date: 25 Feb 2016 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 35
I so love that song by Adele.
Date: 25 Feb 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 34
So glad Charles apologized.
Date: 25 Feb 2016 5:26 AM Title: EPOV with Caleb
You made me cry, great job!
Date: 21 Feb 2016 5:57 AM Title: The Apology...
I really love the way their family is coming together.
Date: 21 Feb 2016 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 31
Well, that was solved quickly.
Date: 21 Feb 2016 5:15 AM Title: The Birth
Glad Charles finally woke up.
Date: 16 Feb 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 27
So glad she liked the house.
Date: 16 Feb 2016 5:06 AM Title: Charles POV
I enjoyed reading Charles' POV.
Date: 16 Feb 2016 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 26
What a surprise, the old man maybe has decided he can't manipulate everyone to his bidding?
Date: 13 Feb 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 25
I was so afraid that Charles was going to find a way to kidnap Edward so he couldn't marry Bella and she would think he had stood her up at the altar.
Date: 12 Feb 2016 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 24
I'm so glad Edward didn't turn off the phone and she was able to hear how he really feels.
Date: 10 Feb 2016 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 24
How sad how she's been going through.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 12:38 AM Title: Tammy's POV
At least now we know why she thought she'd be welcome.
Date: 05 Feb 2016 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
I want the story to be more interesting
Date: 05 Feb 2016 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 23
I just love how he defended her and handled Jessica.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 22
A www, how sweet are they together.
Date: 24 Jan 2016 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 21
I'm glad she is letting him help her. Do we get to find out who the bimbo was and how she got up to Edward's place?
Date: 20 Jan 2016 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
So glad Bella has decided she doesn't want to fight anymore. I can't wait to see Jessica get what she deserves for causing this entire debacle with her lies.
Date: 16 Jan 2016 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh, my. That can't be good!
Date: 10 Jan 2016 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
I don't understand why Bella is suddenly so upset. She knew he was seeing other people. She should believe him when he told her he hadn't been with Jessica. Hope he sues her for everything she has and black balls her.
Date: 06 Jan 2016 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
What a perfect moment!
Date: 03 Jan 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
I loved reading that Bella had options.
Date: 27 Dec 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
I love what he said to the press! Perfect!
Date: 20 Dec 2015 5:28 AM Title: Carlisle's POV
Who knew that Carlisle was so devious.
Date: 20 Dec 2015 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
Glad he is away from that toxic environment.
Date: 16 Dec 2015 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
This is so great.
Date: 12 Dec 2015 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
Boy, grandpa is a piece of work! Glad Esmeralda threw his stuff at his car!
Date: 09 Dec 2015 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
What a vile man!
Date: 02 Dec 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
So, that meeting with Mother didn't go too badly.
Date: 26 Nov 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well, that was certainly an interesting ending to this chapter.
Date: 26 Nov 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
That was kind of sad. Glad he realizes what he is going to be missing if he doesn't make things right.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
What a sad chapter!
Date: 21 Nov 2015 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
Seems as though he might be ready to accept responsibility for his part in this mess.
Date: 18 Nov 2015 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
What a very emotional scene!
Date: 18 Nov 2015 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was recommended to me by Paola Reyes. Very intriguing first chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 02 Jan 2015 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 37
Really enjoyed the entire story.
Date: 01 Jan 2015 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 31
I can't imagine how awful that would feel when you've just brought your new baby home. Thank goodness Charles has now realised just how wrong he was about Bella.
Date: 01 Jan 2015 5:58 PM Title: Tammy's POV
I almost feel sorry for Tammy, she's not very bright and has been ruthlessly manipulated by Charles!
Date: 01 Jan 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 39
A part 2,would be awesome...
Date: 01 Jan 2015 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
Carlisle has shown how much he loves and supports Edward by exposing his own most shameful secret to show that there is hope.
Date: 01 Jan 2015 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella was so strong and quick thinking standing up to her boss like that!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm rereading this and knew it was coming with Charles but it still upset me, such calm assurance of his own superiority.
Date: 22 Oct 2014 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't know if I'm going to like Edward in this absent fathers wind me up. But I'm looking forward to reading this.
Date: 14 Oct 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 39
I think this is my second time to read this story but it had been a long time ago. I just had to read it again. Thank you for writing it.
Date: 23 Sep 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 39
I hope one day you add to this. I love this family! Finally Edward has grown up.
Date: 23 Sep 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 37
I was wondering if she was going to get pregnant sooner rather than later.
Date: 23 Sep 2014 12:41 AM Title: EPOV with Caleb
The sweetness of Caleb makes me want a newborn again. And I have never had a story make me want that. You describe all the greatness that comes with newborns perfectly.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 11:32 PM Title: The Apology...
Finally he is starting to forgive himself. I'll be glad when her 6 month checkup has come about.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 31
Please do not tell me Charles had anything to do with this Theresa.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:15 PM Title: The Birth
Paddington bear is so cute! It was a perfect description of how a new father falls in love with a newborn son.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 27
I'm glad he broke down & showed his real sadness over how he treated the baby & her.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:24 PM Title: Charles POV
Now Charles is softening too! I'm glad you gave us his POV.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 26
Is Charles regretful or still scheming?
Date: 21 Sep 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 25
So grandpa had to come see for himself. How in the heck did he find out?
Date: 21 Sep 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 24
He finally asked! I can't stop smiling!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 10:23 PM Title: Tammy's POV
The grandfather totally used her!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
Hip hip hooray now they can get layed!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 22
Moving in and in the right direction finally!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
Jacob brought on the green eyed monster. Good stuff!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
So true never ever pray for patience bc if you do you will be given the great oppurtunity to learn it.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
The baby is ok! Shewwww! He needs to tell her about the photo of her he kept in his office.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
That was wise of Carlisle to be honest with Edward.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
They are slowly on heir way to over come this hurdle. What a B Jessica is!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ask her to marry you idiot man
Date: 20 Sep 2014 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
Grandfather better step back!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
Poor Bella! Charles sucks big time!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow he is going full force!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 3:19 AM Title: Carlisle's POV
I'm glad Carlisle is doing good now too!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
Will Carlisle quit?
Date: 20 Sep 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
Finally Edward is getting it right!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
I hope Carlisle isn't planning to back stab him. I'm shocked neither Charles nor Carlisle asked for a paternity test.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
Shockingly the total disregard for the pregnancy is shocking and all the stress it has to be putting on the baby. The sad thing is this does happen in real life where families treat others like this.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
Way to go Edward! Standing up to daddy. Now I wonder what crap carlisle is going to pull at brunch?
Date: 19 Sep 2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
You have A LOT of graveling to do buddy!
Date: 19 Sep 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
Looks like Eddie boy as some daddy issues.
Date: 19 Sep 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
I 'm glad he is starting to realize what he is missing!
Date: 19 Sep 2014 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Yeah dick is still coming to mind.
Date: 19 Sep 2014 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
The word Dick comes to mind.
Date: 04 Apr 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 39
j ai lu Votre histoire et je tiens a vous felicitee ;il ne manque rien ;la peine la douleur l espoir l amour et tout cela est tres bien decrit ,je vous tire mon chapeau bien bas, merci a vous .
Date: 02 Feb 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 37
Ah, really nice story x thanks
Date: 23 Jan 2014 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 39
Great story, just amazing. I absolutely loved your Bella, she was strong but still vunerable. By the way, a part 2 would be awesome, new baby, new business, new rivals? Thank you for sharing this one with us.
Date: 07 Oct 2013 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 39
Awesome story!
Date: 03 Sep 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 39
a part 2 would be lovely beautiful story
Date: 14 Nov 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 39
Followed this story on fanfiction. Loved your writing style, please do a part two.
Thanks