Date: 19 Jul 2010 1:49 AM Title: The Apology...
oh so sweet... love it
Date: 19 Jul 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 31
OH .... Daddy Warbucks is GOING DOWN.. it's about TIME.. hahahaha.. I really love this story.. so good.
Makes me hate the VIEW. TMZ and Maurey.. hahah
Date: 18 Jul 2010 2:24 PM Title: Tammy's POV
I KNEW THAT S.O.B was a part of this.. That grumpy old man needs to DIE.. lol
Date: 17 Jul 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
FUCKING JESSICA... she must DIE.. oh.. gosh.. I didn't mean that.. just mame her a bit.
great chapter
Date: 17 Jul 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh no.. not good.. Well.. the chapter was great.. but her boss talking to her.. so not good.
Date: 17 Jul 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh gosh.. I have a bad feeling about this..
OH.. and it is offical.. I hate that CHARLES dude..
Date: 17 Jul 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
awwww.. that is so sweet.. I am glad Edward pulled his head out of his youhaha...
Date: 17 Jul 2010 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
oh man.. that was sad sad sad.. you did a great job with the characterization of each of the characters.. they seem so real... which of course makes it harder on us readers.. hahaha.. great job.
thanks
Date: 17 Jul 2010 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
oh god.. is it the vodka.. or am I crying..
Date: 17 Jul 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
So good.. I love it. I must admit. I was sobbing when it switched pov... I thought like Bella that he was going to deny her.. so sad. Love it
Date: 17 Jul 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 34
I didn't think that we would see the day where Charles Cullen said that he was sorry about everything that he has done to Bella and welcome her to the family.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 34
Only one left??? But I love this story. I don't want to see it end. :(
I thought it was really sweet that Charles gave her the pearl necklace. He has finally come around.
I think it was wrong of Bella to storm off like she did with the baby. She has every right to be upset, but she should have at least clarified that she was only going for a ride. Poor Edward has suffered enough.
Oh, I have started posting a story of my own called "Use Somebody". I would love to hear what you think, if you have a chance to read it. :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 34
:) I'll be sad to see the story end. It's one of the better 'Bella gets pregnant/Edward's and ass' stories I've read. I truly enjoyed it.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
OH WOW.. doucheward at his level best.. (or worst).. haha
Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 34
I am so glad that Charles took this step and made things right with Bella. Bella should feel a part of the family. I am glad she sees that now.
I can't believe there is only one chapter left. I love this story! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 34
well at least charles is trying! cnat wait till the next chpater
Date: 16 Jul 2010 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 34
love the story....
Date: 16 Jul 2010 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 34
awww glad he is making amends to Bella, Charles that is. and eddie too. lol
Date: 09 Jul 2010 12:13 AM Title: EPOV with Caleb
I love this story and this chapter with Edward and Caleb is sooooooo sweet!! Cant wait to read more!!!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
If he has any self respect he will tell her the truth.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2010 2:21 AM Title: EPOV with Caleb
I love how he told Caleb about the first time he saw Bella. But his pain over his initial bad choices is so hard to read.
Date: 07 Jul 2010 1:55 AM Title: EPOV with Caleb
Oh..this was just a lovely lovely well written story. It makes me happy that I still occasionally troll the most recent stories function and don't just go on recommendations because this is a gem. Thank you so much for your sharing your talent. I found this story this afternoon and have been reading this all day.
Date: 07 Jul 2010 1:46 AM Title: The Apology...
That was sweet that Charles was actually holding Caleb. I think that time will tell what is going to happen between him and his family but he is trying to make things better.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 11:28 PM Title: EPOV with Caleb
thats very sweet! but sad at the same time! cant wait til the next chapter
Date: 06 Jul 2010 8:14 PM Title: EPOV with Caleb
It is sad, but I hope something good came of it too. We all make mistakes...some bigger then other. Edward is learning from his mistakes and trying to make it right! Great job...thanks so much!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2010 8:06 PM Title: EPOV with Caleb
That was one of the most beautiful things I've read in a while! Wonderful!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:41 PM Title: EPOV with Caleb
awww that was sweet
Date: 06 Jul 2010 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 31
Why do I think that he is behind this? I really hope that I am wrong but I am think ing that is not going to be the case.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 8:39 AM Title: The Birth
Small steps are what Charles needs right now. At least he came to meet his great grandson. I am happy that he is making steps to relieve the tention that he has caused his family.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oh wow a visit from Charles, a trip to the house of her dreams and Her son coming all in the same day!! That has to be a great day for her.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:59 AM Title: Charles POV
Well that was a much needed chapter so that we could see inside of Charles's head. I am glad that he feels bad and I hope that maybe he can gain his family back but he has to be the one to do that.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 26
Is Charles regretting his decision to cut Edward out of his life? I am hoping that he is and that it is just difficult for him to express that. Meanwhile I can't believe that Edward bought the house that they wanted and hasn't even told her yet.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 25
And Charles Cullen shows that he might actually have a heart in his chest and might actually want Edward to just be happy. I hope that he doesn't try to start anything.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
I am glad that Bella heard everything that was said between Edward and Charles because that was the best thing for them.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 6:48 AM Title: Tammy's POV
Well now we see why she was there and how she found out where he lived. I really hope that Edward never finds out that his grandfather sent her to his house because that would be very bad.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 23
Well I guess that they didn't have to wait too long for the confortation with Jessica. I am glad that Bella didn't lose it when it came to her.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
That is so cute that he gave her a charm braclet. I have one but I haven't worn it for years. I am also glad that they are starting to talk about US!!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 21
I am glad that they are finally going to have a talk about them and their future because they really need to.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow that girl has some balls coming to Edward's home and thinking that something is going to happen between them.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
Well that whole thing went better than I thought that it would. I really hope that she is going to be ok.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
I hope that with that story about his father cheating on his mother helps him a little bit. I also hope that Bella is ok and the baby too.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 3:43 AM Title: The Apology...
I love it!!! I am so glad that Edward is letting go of his guilt. Now they can focus on their little family and be happy together. They have come so far...Edward...Charles...things are finally on the right track!!! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 17
Aww.. That is another amazing thing seeing your child for the first time! I was in wonder when I saw my son for the first time. I am glad that they are sharing this together.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
The first time that you feel a baby move is an amazing thing. I remember that and I was just in awe of it all.
Date: 05 Jul 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh wow I forgot the fact that she had been harassed at work and could sue the company that she worked for! I wonder what Charles is going to do to work all of this out.
Date: 05 Jul 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well I guess that they aren't going to get to live in secret for a while and enjoy this now are they.
Date: 05 Jul 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well I guess that Edward can do whatever he wants to now. I am glad that he is going to tell the world about the baby and Bella!
Date: 05 Jul 2010 7:19 PM Title: Carlisle's POV
So basically Carlisle is telling his father to shove it without really telling him. I am glad that Edward won't have to worry.
Date: 05 Jul 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am surprised even if I really shouldn't be that his Grandfather fired him. I wonder what Carlisle is going to do or say.
Date: 04 Jul 2010 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well at least he is trying. I hope that he doesn't break her again.
Date: 04 Jul 2010 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
He is more torn up about all of this than I thought.
Date: 04 Jul 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
That must be really tough for her to have to keep running into him and dealing with all of that everytime that she turns around.
Date: 04 Jul 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow that was sad. She has to deal with so much crap at work and that sucks.
Date: 04 Jul 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow that kinna sounds like me and my son's father without the whole "I'll give you the money to take care of it." He just told me that it wasn't his and then stopped talking to and about me unless it was to badmouth me to his friends.
Date: 04 Jul 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
well i'm glad there is a little bit left, i love this story!
Date: 04 Jul 2010 2:47 AM Title: The Apology...
i loved this it was so sweet and touching, is it done or not?
Author's Response:
Not done yet... almost though, maybe two chapters but Im leaning toward one long one!
Date: 04 Jul 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 31
wow did not expeect that!
Date: 04 Jul 2010 2:11 AM Title: The Birth
aw i've read so many birth scenes in fanfic but this one had this sense of peace and relief and longing, i loved it!
Date: 04 Jul 2010 1:49 AM Title: The Apology...
that was terrific
Date: 04 Jul 2010 1:02 AM Title: The Apology...
im glad charles turned a new leaf! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 04 Jul 2010 12:26 AM Title: The Apology...
I loved this chapter, It is so wonderful to have the family find some peace...
Date: 03 Jul 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
it was beautiful!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2010 9:28 PM Title: The Apology...
Bella is truli a part of the family now. It is good, that Charles finally sees that too.
Such a sweet chapter. Everyone is so loving now. The switching of POVs of Charles and Bella was good, because to motives especially of Charles were very good descripted. It is also good to see, that Edward forgives himself at least a little bit.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2010 8:41 PM Title: The Apology...
I am so glad that Edward is finally beginning to forgive himself. He is right to be disgusted with himself for what he did, but it is nice to see him embrace the happiness in his life now.
I thought Charles and Bella's meeting of the minds was nice. I liked how Bella stood strong in front of him when he apologized.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2010 7:15 PM Title: The Apology...
Absolutely beautiful!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2010 7:03 PM Title: The Apology...
Awe! I shed a few tears! It's so good!
Date: 03 Jul 2010 3:42 PM Title: Tammy's POV
i actually kind of felt bad for her!
Date: 03 Jul 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
i was scared there for a second!
Date: 02 Jul 2010 9:29 PM Title: Carlisle's POV
wow big shit happening!
Date: 02 Jul 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
poor edward and bella i can feel their pain!
Date: 02 Jul 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
my favorite so far!
Date: 02 Jul 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
what a douche!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 31
Oh hell! Don't even tell me Charles is behind this whole Theresa thing?!? Bella may be polite and calm, but she is going to go rabid on his ass if that is the case.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 9:36 PM Title: The Birth
Edward's POV in this chapter was priceless! Loved every word. I'm glad to see Charles is making an effort and is being nice to Bella.
Date: 30 Jun 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 31
so excited for more. Amazing story!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 27
Here comes baby Cullen!
I thought it was hillarious that Bella saw the similarities between Edward's and Charles' behavior. I really hope he comes around and joins the family.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 6:54 PM Title: Charles POV
Well, maybe the bastard isn't dead inside after all. I think it will take a lot more for the family to forgive him but at least he is headed in the right direction.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 26
Charles seems to be battling some inner demons. At least he isn't being malicious towards E&B. I love that Edward bought her the house he knew she wanted. He really has turned into a fantastic husband.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved their little add ons to the vows. I thought their wedding was perfect. Small and intimate was definately the way to go.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 31
Give them a rest. They deserve to be at least happy for a while. It could also be a longer while.
But the whole family sticks together and fights for their beloved. That is great. Lets see, what Charles has to say. It is good that he finally accepts Bella as a part of the family.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 31
Wow...it is so sad what people will do. I am glad no on ran away. They stayed together and fought. When one needed the othe one to be strong they were. They were just like a family should be. I can't wait to see what Charles says. Great job...thanks so much!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 24
Ahhh, they are getting married! I love how Edward told Charles off. I especially loved how he threw Tammy's sex and drug life at him.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 11:56 AM Title: Tammy's POV
Damn, I alost feel sorry for Tammy being put in that position by Charles. Almost.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 31
So I happened upon your story and I must tell you it's not fan fiction. It's better! You have a gift. You could change the names and this is it's own independent story. Nothing is even borrowed from Twilight! Save the names. You have a gift and I hope someday I will see your stories in print!
~Cassie
Date: 29 Jun 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 31
hmmmm but who paid teresa I wonder.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love hhow Edward can't remember Jessica's name. And the way he verbally slammed her in the restaurant is one for the books.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 22
The charm bracelet is a nice touch.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 21
I am so glad these two are finally finding their way back to each other. But I am also glad that Edward realized that someone could have stepped in as a father to his baby if he had failed to extract his head from his ass.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:13 AM Title: Tammy's POV
poor tammy.....wasnt feeling sorry for her at all until this chapter
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loving the uber protective Edward! I think he would have physically attacked the bimbo if she didn't get the hell away from Bella and the baby.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
How scary. That is every parents worst fear, for something to happen to your child.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
Go Bella with the Darren situation. uh oh on her daddy
Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:12 AM Title: Carlisle's POV
go mama bear
Date: 29 Jun 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'd shoot out a press realease saying why he did it. Make him look like the bastard he is.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 4
at least offer her money or something you arsehole.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 31
Fantastic! Can I kick this Teresa's ass? I'm so glad Charles showed up and is finally willing to apologize. It had to take him a while to overcome his pride and I'm glad he did.