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Reviewer: Jessa7635 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2018 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 38

Come back we need more gummy bears 

Reviewer: indian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2017 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 49

Can't wait for the revamp

Reviewer: dinise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a really good story. I hope one day you do a sequel.


Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 48

that was good i liked it and cant wait to see what eles you are going to write and i liked it

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 48

This is the end, isn't it?  Lol well, if it is this was a awesome story :)

I'm so happy that I checked it out.  You're an amazing writer btw 



Author's Response:

it's the end.. for this one.. there will be a sequal. trust me on that!!!  i'm working on a Carlisle/Bella/Emmett/Peter story right now as well as the sequal for this one.  and thank you so much. i look forward to your reviews. you are my favorite lol

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 47

:) Esme had a little boy!  Whoo hoo!  And I'd just like to point out, that my name is Lillian lol

But anyway, Landon imprinting on Lillia was so cute 

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 46

Awwww Leah had a baby girl :)

And Jasper was too funny in this chapter lol

 



Author's Response:

lmfao i know right. jasper always seems really calm, cool, and collected. i thought that he would react exactly the way i had him react if he were going to be a dad

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 45

Kim and Claire got exactly what they deserved.  I can't believe that they were so rude.  They should've been ashamed of themselves.  



Author's Response:

that they should have. sadly they weren't

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 44

They were just rude



Author's Response:

weren't they though... they always kinda bugged me lol

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 46

awesum stury dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

awwwwww thank you so much!!!! you rock

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 43

I love how Landon is a momma's boy and Emmalyn is a daddy's girl.  And I wonder what's up with Kim and Claire  



Author's Response:

yep, just as it should be. imo, anyways lol... yeah those two are a trip

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 42

I'm so happy Emmett and Bella shared their gift with Carlisle and Esme :)



Author's Response:

oh i know right. they were the first ones i thought of that deserved it. i'm on the fence on Eleazar and Carmen.

Reviewer: ju007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 43

Love this song! Can't wait for more!! 



Author's Response:

thanks!!!!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 40

Edward, Rosalie, and Alice were all delusional!  All Edward cared about was having sex with Bella!  I mean really, if he was trying to win her back why would he add "let me make love to you"?!  He should've stayed with Rosalie if that's all he cared about!  But no, he had to die trying to have sex with Bella.  *Sigh*

The blue light thing was soooooooo cool!  I probably sound like a little kid, but it was!  That was amazing!  

I feel really bad about Jasper and Leah's wedding being crashed :( but I'm glad nobody in the family was killed!  Awesome chapter, I loved it :)



Author's Response:

thank you so much. yeah, Edward is a wack-a-doodle for sure. with him it's seems he's wanting what he can't have. the drama queen. lol.  i was hoping you and everyone would like the blue light thing.

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 39

I wonder who the voice was?  Edward?  Ugh, you always leave me needing to read more!  It would really fucking suck if the three ass-hats ruin the most special day in the world for Jasper and Leah.  I really hope they don't.

And idk if I mentioned it before, but I was wondering if Emmett and Bella would share their gift with Carlisle and Esme to conceive a baby.



Author's Response:

i won't say with who they will share their gift but it will be shared

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 39

Aww hell couldn't they wait until after the wedding to show up?



Author's Response:

they wouldn't be living up to the ass-hats they are if they did... the jerks

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 38

Omg, Bella's dress happens to be my favorite color AND my eye color lol.  I think Bella, Emily, and Leah should have girls day often.  It' so sweet... except for the waxing lol.  And OMG I love Bella's hair!  I would soooooo try it, but I love my blonde.  I recently added light pink highlights and they look GREAT, so I won't be changing my hair for a while.  But, when I do, I'm going to add blue highlights.  But, anyway, I think Bella connecting with Paul left Jacob out.  She doesn't really spend time with him anymore :(  



Author's Response:

yeah i know... there is a reason behind that though... all in good time.... plus, he's been building the house with everyone while Paul was Bella-sitting

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

wow like this twist



Author's Response:

thank you!!!!!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 37

OMG I can't wait for the next chapter!  I already KNOW Leah will say yes!  What Jasper did was soooooo sweet!  I wonder when the three ass-hats will show up.



Author's Response:

of course she will say yes, what self respecting woman would say no to all of that lol... yeah we all know that the ass-hats will ruin their happiness. damn those ass-hats

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 36

Awwww the twins sound sooooo cute!  I wonder if there's a reason why Bella's eyes are blue... I know, it's a really random thought lol



Author's Response:

there is a reason, i promise.

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 35

I love the names!  I never would've thought of Landon, and Emmalyn sounds so pretty!



Author's Response:

thank you. i've always loved those names and figured since i can't use them for kids of my own, why not give the names to Bella and Emmett's babies

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 34

OMG I can't believe the vision Emmett and Bella had!  It had me on the edge of my seat lol.  I hope it doesn't happy.  I can't wait to find out what sex the babies are!



Author's Response:

oh i know right... the babies will be here soon... hell they are already here depending on what chapter you're on lol

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 33

Awww this was a really sweet chapter.  

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 32

I loved the last sentence lol.  I can't wait until the gummy bears are born!



Author's Response:

lol thank you!!!

Reviewer: mama4dukes Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 37

Jasper is so romantic!  Why can't he be my mate?



Author's Response:

i know right!!! i am having dreams about fictional characters for crying out loud lmfao!

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 34

im thinking that the babies wanna come early to help with the fight or just dont wanna be taken by rose and alice. but im also thinking that it would be epic if it was the babies that destroyed rose. b/c everyone knows that shes always wanted a baby, and in the end to have the one thing that u have most wanted, to be what destroys u, well to me thats just awesome. it would be what she gets for being such abitch. lol. great chapter. as always



Author's Response:

the way the fight goes down, no one will see coming .... i am all excited

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 35

yay the babies r here!! luv the names and cant wait til next chapter to see who imprinted on emmalyn. i hope it was paul. this was a great chapter. so hurry with the next!! lol. just kidding. have a great day



Author's Response:

you guessed right.... i had him in mind all along. i like him, he's moody but i think, a big softy... thanks for the review

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 35

NO NO NO why did you have to leave a cliffy like that??? I love the names and I am so happy that Jasper and Leah are the godparents. Hmm did she imprint with Jacob or Paul....I'm hoping Paul. Great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

i know. i hated myself for that cliffy lol... thank you so much!!!! i would have uploaded this chapter sooner but for some reason, i couldn't access this site from my laptop or my desk top.. it was pissing me off actually

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 33

this chapter was really great. im thinking that the twins should be girls and one an imprint of paul and the other an imprint of jacob. that way both paul and jacob could understand their feelings of wanting to protect bella even more than normal. its just a thought though. have a great night, til next review, tara



Author's Response:

i already know what sex the twins will be i have that much written already... i woke up a few nights ago and had to write it. now all i have to do is fill in what happens until that happens.......l.  thank you so much for your review

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 32

Luved it. it was great. And yay for bella for buying all the stuff for paul.

Author's Response:

thank you!!!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 31

I can't wait to find out why Bella is so scared.  But, I think I already know.  I don't think Bella's scared of Carlisle at all, I think the gummy bears are scared of Carlisle.  I can't wait to find out if I'm right!  



Author's Response:

you're good.. i already had the chapter written that was explaining things but i was too lazy to get up to upload it. for some reason my lap top doesn't like this site..

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 30

I think Bella and Jacob were a little too hard on poor Paul.  They didn't have to make him bald.



Author's Response:

lol i know right.. but all will be righted

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 29

Emmett and Bella are so goofy!  I just love it!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 28

I can't believe Leah imprinted on Jasper!



Author's Response:

i know right!!!!! i think they fit perfectly

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 31

amazing!!! as always. im on the edge of my seat waiting to see what jasper has figured out about the babies. im thinking one of them may be an empath like him, or at least be ableto absorb others powers. great work!! have a good day, until next review. tara



Author's Response:

thank you tara!!! it means a lot to me!!!

Reviewer: MistyDawn80 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 31

OKay is one of the babies scared of the Cullens House Maybe 'cause they heard Edward and Rose declare war on their parents?  Just taking a guess.  How is it that she is showing so many human emotions is it apart of the prophetcy?  Having any power they want.  Is her babies full blooded vamps or are they human?  so many questions I guess I will have to read to find out huh. LOL  I really enjoy your story.



Author's Response:

no worries, all will be explained!! and thank you so much for your review

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 27

Oh shit, Leah imprinted on Jasper.  I can tell.  I love how Leah loves Bella in this story.  I can't believe their twins!  I wonder what they'll name them.  As for crazy ass Edward, Rosalie, and Alice, they need to be destroyed.  Maybe they should kill Rosalie right after she sees Emmett and Bella's babies.  That would be awesome!



Author's Response:

i will only say this... when stuff really goes down... it will be epic

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 26

Edward is a motherfucking, cocksucking, dumbass, deranged bitch!  How dare he rip off Emmett's arm!

*please excuse my language.  I mean no disrespect.  I'm sorry if I offended anyone.*



Author's Response:

no offense taken here!!! and yes, yes he is... i mean doesn't he believe in karma

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 25

Edward better not touch Emmett.  He has a REALLY fucked up mine.  Its just a shame.



Author's Response:

oh cover your eyes before the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 24

Edward and Rosalie were some evil ass bitches!  WTF was wrong with them!?



Author's Response:

they are EVIL!!!!!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 23

Damn!  Jasper was pissed!  I sooooo didn't see that one coming.  And Alice, not seeing Bella as family!?  Alice ALWAYS loves Bella!  And, that's why I'm glad that she didn't in this story.



Author's Response:

yeah alice always seemed like she could use her visions in an evil way and no one would ever know. after all, they never question her..

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 22

I actually started crying when Emmett started singing his song to Bella.  That was such a perfect song for him to sing.  It was sooooooo sweet :'(



Author's Response:

aww sorry i made you cry but if it helps any.. i did too lol

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 21

Karaoke night can't get any better!!!!!



Author's Response:

lol thanks.. yeah i could actually picture it all happening and i was laughing as i wrote.

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 20

I was right!  This is definitely my favorite chapter!  Bella and Kim did a amazing job, and this is one of my fave songs!



Author's Response:

it was one of my favorites to write

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 19

I can tell that the next chapter is going to be my favorite!  



Author's Response:

i hope it lives up to your expectations!!!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 18

I love how Emmett AND Bella think.  Its so funny how Edward and Rosalie think they can just come running back to Emmett and Bella after everything they did.  



Author's Response:

they are just perfect for each other!!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 17

HA!  Edward thought Bella loved him!  That shit is hilarious!  Emmett and Bella are having the time of their lives while Edward and Rosalie are suffering!  Karma's a bitch, isn't it?  I can't wait for karaoke night!  I hope Emmett and Bella tell the Cullen's their pregnant.



Author's Response:

i know right. he is beyond self absorbed!!!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 16

I thought it was so sweet how Collin called Bella his momma.  I can't wait until the baby gets here!  I love how everyone is really close, just like a happy family should be.



Author's Response:

yeah Collin and Brady needed a momma.  and i can't wait either. yep, i know i wish my family was like that..

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 15

Awwwww, "Our gummy bear".  That's so sweet.  I hope it's a boy!



Author's Response:

oh i know right....

 

 

oh and to answer a review i answered before... no i haven't tried any of these pranks because well... those who know me know better than to mess with me.. they know how my evil mind works lol

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 14

I can't wait until the karaoke throw down!



Author's Response:

it was epic that's for sure!!!!

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 30

i really luved this chapter. i cant wait til everyone comes home and sets down to talk about why they are glowing. i just hope that emmett doesntget the wrong idea about the way bella and jacob are setting. because honestly is sounds as if they are setting in a position that bella nad emmett would set. and the prank against paul. wow, that will be epic!!! lol waiting for the next update. the only thing i have to ask is, are these pranks u have done urself? lol. if so, i would never want to fall victim to ur evil (but funny) pranking mind. lmao!!! have a great night



Author's Response:

thank you!!! oh i know, that will be classic for sure. Emmett and Bella had sat like that before. i would explain more but i don't want to give anything way for the next chapter that i'm working on right now

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 13

I can't belive Sam asked Emmet and Bella to be a part of the pack!  I thought it was really sweet



Author's Response:

yeah, i thought it was too. they are one big happy family

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 12

Why would Bella think Emmett would be upset with her?



Author's Response:

it's just one of those girl things. we all have them. you know you buy some thing for some one. some thing that you know they will love but when it comes down to giving it to them, you start to panic a bit.. at least, i do lol

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 11

I can't wait to see how Edward and Rose react!



Author's Response:

yeah, they are jerks for sure

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 10

They're going to be so happy together :)



Author's Response:

yeah they are... they deserve it

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 9

I love Disney movies too!  One of my FAVORITES is The Beauty And The Beast!  I love that movie.  But anyway, I'm excited to read more!



Author's Response:

me too!!! i cry at most of them. i cried like a baby when we saw lilo and stitch and brother bear in the theaters lol

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 8

That guy was a jerk.  And, of course Bella has to be incredibly beautiful because she's a vampire, and all vampires are beautiful!  



Author's Response:

but of course!!!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 7

I wonder what's wrong with Bella and Emmett.  I mean, why Bella can produce tears, and why Emmett can blush.



Author's Response:

it is explained, no worries!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 6

Okay, I'll admit that I loved how Emmett called Bella "baby bear".  I thought that was sexy... I can't help it.  

*sigh* I need help.



Author's Response:

i know, i love the nick name thing.. how he is black bear and she is brown bear or baby bear..  and you don't need help because if you do, then i do and i happen to think that we rock lol

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 5

Awwwwww, Emmett is so sweet!



Author's Response:

Emmett is perfect so there for he is very sweet.. you know, like a man should be lol

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 4

It is an EmB story!  YAY!!!!!!!  I'm sooooo happy!!!!!!



Author's Response:

i know, me too. i'm so happy that you like it!!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

Going to amusement parks with Emmett sounds like soooooo much fun!  I'm jealous of Bella.  Emmett is my big teddy bear, not her black bear.

I'm kinda crazy when it comes to Emmett, and yes I know he's not real.  I'm weird, I know.   



Author's Response:

i know right, i am too.  and us Emmett lovers have to stick together girl!!! HE IS REAL.. WE'RE JUST THE ONLY ONES WHO KNOW THAT LMFAO

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love it already!  



Author's Response:

thank you!!!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think it's extremely funny how Edward and Rosalie think Emmett and Bella are hurting, when they're not.  I hope this turns into an Em/B story because I've wanted to read a story that involves the two of them in love.  I haven't yet, and I'm so excited.  Btw, I LOVE EMMETT! 



Author's Response:

this is and will stay an Emmett and Bella love story... i don't really like Rosalie.. i think she's a bit*h and doesn't deserve Emmett. he is a much better match for Bella...    i love Emmett too, i love my men BIG lol

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 29

this chapter was great. i was thinking with emmett and bella being unsure and not completely trusting of carlisle and esme, could it be possible for jasper to go in and have the next sit down conversation with them. so maybe he can get a feel of what they are feeling towards them for not wanting to be in the family. then maybe jasper could find a way of letting bella know. and i so cant wait for the family game night. i think its gunnabe extremely funny once the wolves find out about the g.i.d paint. have a great day.



Author's Response:

thank you... i can't wait to write the game night.. i'm laughing just thinking about it. they are going to figure things out shortly. i swear today is dragging so i hope to get the next chapter out in a few hours give or take... thanks for the review!!

 

amanda

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 28

loved it! it was graet as i said it would be. not wanting to rush ya, but i so cant wait for updates anymore. its like i wanna kno what happens now. lol. but i will sit and wait for each and every update. have a great day!!



Author's Response:

lol thanks girl!! i already have the next chapter up and going. so hopefully by dinner time i will have it done.. hopefully a lot sooner...

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 27

yay!! i finally got to read the update.lol. i have been in bed just about all day and didnt want to get up b/c i have a pulled muscle in my back, but i couldnt open this chapter on my cell phone. so, i got up, and im glad i did. this chapter was amazingly big to the story. i mean first with hearing two heart beats realizing its twins. and now with leah imprinting on jasper. the was an awsome chapter. i cant wait for the next, b/c i already know its gunna be amazinly awsome as well. keep up the great work and have a good day!! tara.

Author's Response:

aww i'm sorry to hear about your back. i hope you feel better soon. i've done that myself and i feel your pain.

 

i'm so glad you liked it.. the next chapter is about to go up right after i'm done replying to you.. thank you for your reply

 

amanda

Reviewer: MistyDawn80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 27

OMG Did Leah just imprint on Jasper?  Lucky girl!  I am so jealous.  I love Emmett but Jasper has that whole bad boy under current working for him.  ;) And she is tough as nails.  Two bad asses together I like it.  Of course I could be wrong and Jaz tries to take a bite of her or she tries to make him puppy chow either way can't wait to read the next chapter.  LOL 

??As you write your stories do you plan ahead and already know how it will end twists and all or do you just wing it "Free Write"?  I am only courious of your style either way KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK



Author's Response:

oh i know right... what girl wouldn't love their very own jasper or emmett.

 

as for my writing. basically a bit of both. i know where i want to go with my story.. and some twists. i just write and see how i take it there.. if that makes sense...

 

there are many twists still to come. i can promise that...

Reviewer: MistyDawn80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 26

Grrrrr.  Edward is an ass. "Mine" seriously, she isn't an object or a pet, and IF he really loved her he would have anything to do with Rose concidering she wants to kill her.  Alice, didn't see Jasper leaving her, wtf does she really think that killing his brother and sister will win his heart back.  Stupid pixie.

K done with my rant.  I am so ADDICTED to your story. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

i know right. the three of them seriously need a vampire shrink!!!! i will be updating some time today/tonight... i'm addicted too so i have to keep writing lol

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 26

ok, i have to say i am completely hooked on this story. i feel as if im sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update. i get excited everytime you update because it takes us readers futher into the story. every part of this story has been amazing. i cant wait on the next chapter. when emmett meets up bella, will thisbe when they tell jasper about the gummy bear? i hope so, i cant wait to hear/read jaspers response to the news of him being an uncle. have a great day



Author's Response:

thank you so much!!!!!  i so can't wait to write the next chapter. i think everyone will love it.. at least i hope they will lol

thanks again home skillet

Reviewer: fanficfan1968 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 25

oh come on..... how can you leave me like this....I have to know what is happening...oh my gosh did they see the baby bump...or is it just because they were leaving.... oh your so mean....I can kill ya because then I would not get the rest of the story .. so maybe I'll try and sweet talk ya....

Please please update real soon...I'll give you chocolate and strawberries.... and maybe throw in a manly person as well..come on take your pick....LOL

seriously, great chapter!!! can't wait for more...

Until next time :)

Author's Response:

i'm sorry. lol. i am working on it right now.. as we speak, or type...  well well well, you offered up a manly person to me. how could i refuse. i will stay up until this is finish and post ASAFP...  promise..

 

and thank you so much!!!! you rock.. and i think i will make you my play cousin!!

Reviewer: MistyDawn80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 25

SQUEAL!! I can't wait until the Major comes out to play.  Not to mention Papa Bear.  Yeah don't mess with the wifey/ Mamma Bear.  I can't wait until Rose finds out that Bella is pregs.  When did Alice become such a b*tch?



Author's Response:

oh i have many chapters to go before i even think of a sequal but there will be one!!!     oh, i can't wait either. she is going to lose her freaking mind.... oh and alice is a bit*h and two faced as you can see.. i dunno.. she just always seemed like a closet bit*h to me.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 24

well looks like shit is out in the open now and no one seems to impressed. i think em and bell are gonna leave with most of the family in tact.



Author's Response:

that's for sure. 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 23

oh poor jasper has to feel betrayed. i wonder how daddy c and momma e are taking it?



Author's Response:

i know. Jasper is so great and now he's in the better family

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 22

perfect song for the ousting!



Author's Response:

i love the song and as soon as i thought of the throw down i knew that it was THE song

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 21

everybody is getting a chance to let their hair down, open their hearts, and shake thir booties!



Author's Response:

oh yeah. hell who knew emily had it in her lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 20

that would have been hot hot hot!

i wonder how eddie dances?



Author's Response:

oh he would have no dance skills... he is after all a jerk. lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 19

ro is a ho! heehee. can't wait to see everybody get low low low...



Author's Response:

lmfao.. that was the best wasn't it lol...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 18

perfect song for eddie. i wonder what rose picked? and em and bell?



Author's Response:

thanks. i had fun picking out the songs...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 17

looks like everyone has big plans for kareoke night...



Author's Response:

for sure!! thanks for the review

Reviewer: Kelligurl93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 24

wow edward is such a bastard update soon please



Author's Response:

yes he is..a real douche

Reviewer: fanficfan1968 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 23

oh my gosh, I can't not wait to see what Edward is going to say. this is an awesome story, I am sooo loving it can't wait for more and when i get the notice in my mail box that you have up dated i literally jump in my seat trying to pull it up to read.

Until next time :)

Author's Response:

oh my god.  you are awesome!!  and thank you so much. it's kinda sad but i really have fun writing this story. i laugh out loud when i write some thing funny. you should have seen me when i was writing the throw down

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 16

love gummie bear! the name fits and is too cute



Author's Response:

the gummy bear thing is one of my favorite things in the story.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 15

and a new family is born...



Author's Response:

yep the best family ever. so much stronger than the Cullen's

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 14

the paint  tag was cool and can't wait to see the reaction when everyone is glowing!



Author's Response:

oh i know it's going to be awesome. i already have the idea in my demented mind lol

Reviewer: MistyDawn80 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 23

I am gonna love this next chapter too. I can tell.  What could Edward possibly say now?  What are Esme and C 's thoughts on this?  I knew Alice knew this whole time!!!  Wow.  The Macarty pack just got bigger.  I wasn't expecting Jasper to leave Alice.   



Author's Response:

oh, we are definately gonna hear from the parental units!!!!  and yep the damn pixie knew.. i mean i love jasper and i can't have him with the evil pixie

Reviewer: RayOfHope Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 22

Oh my god I absolutely love your story,Bella and Emmett are so sweet!!And the pack too! I so want to read the reactions of the Cullens when they see the vid!:P



Author's Response:

thank you so much!!! i'm doing my happy dance right now fyi lol.... oh yeah.. i just finished the first part where the video is shown and one thing no one will see coming. but other pov's are coming

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 13

a new family is born.



Author's Response:

yeppers.. much better than the Cullen's if you ask me..

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 12

that was a mean thing for bella to do to the poor wolves, but hey at least they got their food.



Author's Response:

lol i know.  but you're right, they got the hook up so it's all good...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 11

ok the plan is good but how are bella and em on the rez? isn't that breaking the treety?or do they get special treatment because bell is bff's with the alpha?



Author's Response:

well, they are in with the wolves. it's explained in one of the chapters.. promise.. and Sam is the alpha in my story... Jake is her bffe

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 10

married and now off to the honeymoon....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 9

yay it is all now out in the open! the whole picture as the prine and prinsesses thing is just too cool.



Author's Response:

i know it was killing me lol.... and yeah can you imagine a man actually doing that for a woman.. **swoon**

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 8

poor bella having to put up with that shit. but her emmy bear came and saved the day! yay! and the surprise well that is just awesome can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

aww thank you so much. i know right. she is just one of those people think they can walk all over. but that's so not the case with her.. she has Emmett.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 7

i am guessing there is a reason why these 2 are experiencing human moments. like the tears and the blushing... i wonder what will be next and where you are taking us with this...



Author's Response:

yes there is... when they finally gave themselves over to their love for one another brought on the changes.  it's will make more sense in later chapters..

Reviewer: Kelligurl93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 22

DAMN THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL UPDATE SOON PLEASE



Author's Response:

aww thank you!!! i am working on my next chapter so it should be up some time tonight or tomorrow morning...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 6

wow they are just too cute!

wonder were the 'don't leave me' thing came from?



Author's Response:

well it comes from the fact that quite honestly neither is really used to being so in love and loved by anyone and with that comes the fear that they will leave.

 

at least that's how i see it when it comes to this story

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 5

wow you really have made rose into a bitch! how could anyone be so mean to emmy-bear? it is just not right!! i am so glad he has bella.



Author's Response:

see i've always seen Rosalie as a mega bitch!!! in my opinion she doesn't deserve Emmett and i think that he is a perfect match for Bella.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

that sounded like an awesome time! i wonder if news will spread of the amusement park bandits as time goes on?



Author's Response:

Oh i know right. If and when it starts. i am going on the record right now by saying IT WASN'T ME!!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 3

so awesome of emmy to think of jake! and question - does bella still have blue eyes? and did they ever figure out why her eyes were blue after the change and not red?



Author's Response:

yes she does still have her blue eyes and the explanation will be coming up in a future chapter.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 2

oh my! they seriously just left?!?!



Author's Response:

Yes they did. They are excited about the trip and as you noticed, no one seemed to care that they did. Not one of them spoke up or called...

 

not meaning to sound mean if i did... just explaining is all

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