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Reviewer: kopec82 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 4:54 PM Title: CH28.5 EPOV OUTTAKE

I like it but it's not my favorite the quil POV was not needed! 

Reviewer: moodyval59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 9:22 PM Title: QPOV EPI

I've spent the last two days reading your story. Gloaming is one of the best AU Twilight stories I have read.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It was really fun to write, I'm so glad you enjoyed reading!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 12:24 PM Title: CH31.5 EPOV OUTTAKE

Alice may have started the process, but I'm sure Edward hurried things along by injecting lots of his venom as well. Besides, noe Bella would always smell a little like he does! Thanks for writing  a wonderful story. I really liked the fact of Bella being a mature woman this time around.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all the reviews, I really appreciate them and they were a joy to read.

 

The only thing that I think you had a question about or that I could address for you is when you said it was quick that Quil started the change whent the Cullens moved. I was basing that off Sam in the orginal books the Cullen's had moved to Forks two years before Jake changed, but Sam changed pretty quickly. So it started triggering the wolves right away, it just took a while for all of them to change. In this case, Quill was just the first.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 12:14 PM Title: CH28.5 EPOV OUTTAKE

Bless his sweet, old-fashioned heart, Edward is a never-ending delight! He loves Bella so much, he is willing to suffer any humiliation or difficulty to make her happy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 12:05 PM Title: QPOV EPI

That was a great story and I just loved it. It took a while and a lot of pain and anguish, but Bella finally got her family all together. How neat, to have a son, a daughter-in-law a granddaughter and a vampire daughter and a wolf son-in-law. Add in all the Cullens and you have a wonderful, loving family!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 11:51 AM Title: BPOV EPI

That was a surprise! I never thought about something like this before, but it makes a lot of sense. That will be the oddest pairing, a vampire and a wolf, forever. Wonder what Quil will think of his little sister being what his mother is?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 34

Quil and Claire have had a pretty decent life, so far and are happily awaiting their first child. Charlie is getting old and stove up and Billy is dead. Life goes on. Now, if John and Rebecca can only find Bella.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 33

Lucky Bella, all the way around. Her transformation only took two days and she didn't lose her hunger for Edward. Things weren't good in Forks , but at least Quil wasn't killed, and Alice won't be permanently disfigured. I just wish Edward and Bella could have some peace and security for a while.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 32

Young wolves aren't too long on strategy, or they would have seen the Cullens were trying not to kill them. It's a shame about Rhett, and about Alices arm. I wonder if she can find it to reattach? Bella must have awakened from the change, causing Alice's vision.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 31

Well, I'll be damned! Alice bit Bella  and not Edward, I'm amazed! I thought for sure Carlisle would end up doing the honors. Now all hell is going to break loose, the wolves are coming!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 30

Nothing good will come of this. Quil and his mom really need to talk, a lot, about what's about to happen. I hate to tell him, but sixteen isn't old enough to run your mother's life!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 29

Bella really had a good cover story, too bad John is going to go tattle  to Quil.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 28

Arrogant little pup! It's okay for him to have who he wants, but not his mom! Who the hell does Quil think he is? This is going sideways,and fast!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 27

Lot of difference in the way a seventeen year old looks at life, and the way a thirty-five year old does. Bella said it, if you don't ask for what you want, you don't get it. She has made most of the accomodating, so far, not counting how difficult it is for Edward to be around her. It will be very interesting to see what he decides.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 26

So much for softenig his feelings toward his mother's special friend. This sure puts Bella in an untenable position. How the hell can she choose between Edward and her children?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 25

Good for Bella, standing up to Rosalie's attitude. She is always afraid Bella will betray the Cullens, which is ridiculous. I loved that  Bella called her out about Quil, too. Best not to mess with a mom, concerning her children.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 24

Now that Quil has found his soul mate, maybe he will be more understanding of his mother's feelings for Edward. Christopher is really a good friend and pack-mate. I hope he finds his imprint soon.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 23

She made it through a pretty bad day, which is about all you can hope for. Bella is growing closer to Edward, despite the circumstances, or maybe because of them. She better pay attention when he tells her he likes cougars. She doesn't know they are his favorite food.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 22

It's a tough thing to bury a parent, no matter your age. Quil and Rebecca got  through it pretty well. Telling his little sister the truth, all of it, was easier than I thought it would be. The awful thing is Quil imprinting on Claire. Now what will he do? 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 21

Edward is trying  so hard to ease Bella's grief. I think he would do anything to help her, and she can sure use some distraction right now.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 20

Well, I'm really not too surprised at Bella's choice. She's afraid of Quil now, her husband is dead at his hands and Edward is her only friend. Wonder what she'll do about Rebecca and burying Jake. I feel she won't be welcome in La Push now.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 19

Oh dear lord, how could this have happened? How could Quil have killed his own father? I feel  so bad for that boy, he'll never forgive himself, or his mother, I'm thinking. How absolutely awful.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 18

I'm getting a bad feeling that Quil is about to get a lesson in grown-up relationships. Bella hasn't done anything but text Edward, to let him know she's okay.  Still, I know he doesn't want her to have any contact at all. Since when do children tell their parents what to do?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 17

I knew it! Bella has feelings for Edward and compares him to Jake. Not fair, but there you are. How could you not be drawn to someone who's intelligent, interesting, well-traveled, and drop-dead gorgeous? No pun intended. Bella is loyal, I'll give her that. She believes in her vows and will try her damnedest to keep them.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 16

How mean of Quil to demand his mother not see Edward any more. He can't stand the fact his mom is friends with a Cullen. I don't think he'll be very thrilled with John imprinting on his little sister.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 15

Poor Quil, major guilt over hurting his mom. Poor Bella, not realizing how Edward feels about her. Oh boy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 14

Worried that his mom would be the victim of Edward Cullen, the kid hurts her himself, and then blames it on them. Nothing like a teenaged wolf child! This should be a lot of fun, explaining Bella's injury to Jake.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 13

That's how it always starts, isn't it? Just talking, getting to know one another, becoming interested, then fascinated, then who knows? Be careful, Bella you may become more attracted than you want to be.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 12

Christopher better be watchful. I seem to remember Quil, the one he's named for, was the imprint of Claire. What evil little scheme have you cooked up for this Quil and Claire? No matter, at least he's getting back to school work again, even online is better than not attending.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 11

Trust me, Bella, Edward wants to be more than just your friend, married though you are! I can see why Bella would be fascinated, just a little. Think of the things he's seen, the places he's been and the things he's done. Boggles my mind!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all the reviews and for letting me know about the first chapter. The last three lines actually were part of the prologue and were split by chapter 1 somehow, so i think it should be fixed now. It's funny that I have had no one esle notice that. LOL

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 10

I'm very glad the wolves and the Cullens got through that encounter without bloodshed. Quil still doesn't understand what talents the vampires have, but I bet he will learn.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 9

Thank the Lord Edward was able to stop himself in time. I'll bet he was shocked to realize that Bella knew what he was. If you're the mother of a shapeshifting wolf, it seems to come with the territory.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 8

So, Quil is Alpha and chief, and has two pack-brothers. More than that, they have made their first kill. Nothing like genetic memory, I guess, for knowing what to do.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 7

I'm thinking Quil had a crush on Alice Cullen. That must be why he's not thrilled to find out she's a vampire, his natural enemy. Don't blame Bella one little bit for being hurt Jake never told her about this possibility. It's a lot to process, that's for sure.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 6

Quil's first transformation went pretty well. all things considered. Now comes the informational portion of his new life, where the elders and his dad, fill him in on tribal history and legends. Wonder how Bella is taking all this?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 5

So, daddy Jake is excited about his son becoming a shape-shifter. How nice of him to share with Bella. Jake kind of seems to be all about Jake and the rest of his family is secondary.  I hate to think that, but sometimes very nice people get a bit thoughtless.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 4

After only one day's exposure to vampires, Quil is starting to change. I hoope the tribal elders are going to be able to explain things to him. The kid has a really big surprise coming, and soon!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 3

Sounds to me as if Bella might be a bit dissatisfied with her life, not a lot, just a little. Like something is missing and she's not quite sure what.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 2

Quil sounds like a pretty nice kid. just a little different than his peers. It's so nice that Charlie and Billy come for Sunday dinner. I like families to be close like that, not perfect but doing okay. I wonder who Quil is going to meet at Forks High? heh, heh!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 1:15 AM Title: Prologue/Chapter 1

Did the last couple of sentences get lost from another chapter? Bella is in the shower, and all of a sudden she's facing her angry, bitter son . Kind of a huge leap. Or is it just my stupidity? Never mind, I'll just keep going and find out.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 3:16 PM Title: CH28.5 EPOV OUTTAKE

avoided reading the last few chapters for a few days as I but enjoyed being able to read them all at once.   good story. hope to see more from you.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am working on my next one now and should start posting within a month.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:33 AM Title: CH31.5 EPOV OUTTAKE

I loved this outtake. I remember that I told you how much I loved that he marked her. It was great, I think you did an awesome job with the EPOV.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thanks. The EPOV's were a lot of fun for me. I like writing the boys better than the girls...go figure!

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:29 AM Title: CH28.5 EPOV OUTTAKE

I know I told you already but I loved the EPOV. I thought he was the sweetest thing.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:21 AM Title: QPOV EPI

Perfect. Wonderful. I don't know what other words I could use to describe the ending. I'm so sad to see the story end, but I absolutely loved every minute of it. You already know I think you are a fantastic writer and I look forward to reading more of your work soon.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, your kind words mean so much to me.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 1:55 AM Title: QPOV EPI

What a wonderful ending! You did such a great job. I really enjoyed this story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: ErinCullen77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 12:43 AM Title: QPOV EPI

A perfect ending. Thanks one last time for this great story.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking this journey with me. I really appreciate you taking the time to leave reviews.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 9:21 PM Title: QPOV EPI

AWE That is a beautiful ending.  



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm so glad you liked.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 4:04 PM Title: BPOV EPI

good chapter, surprised by her daughters request and more by what I think is her answer to it.  look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 3:37 PM Title: BPOV EPI

Wow.........did not see that coming!



Author's Response:

Ha ha, if you read my last three reviews, they are like identical!!

 

Thanks for the review. The final Epo should be up soon.

Reviewer: ErinCullen77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 6:12 AM Title: BPOV EPI

WOW!!  Did not see that coming at all.  Great chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: rubyrandom Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 9:18 PM Title: BPOV EPI

Wow!!  Was NOT expecting that.  Can't wait for the last bit.   :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. It should be soon, it's just with the beta

Reviewer: tima Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 8:30 PM Title: BPOV EPI

guh?! I did NOT see that one coming!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I can't believe how many people didn't see that coming. LOL

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 6:38 PM Title: BPOV EPI

Awesome chapter like always. I love that Edward and Bella are happy. Definitely a shock about Rebecca, but then who wouldn't want the chance at forever with their soul mate? Can't wait for the next chapter eventhough it makes me sad that it's the end. Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you, let's just not talk about the end yet though, okay. *Sniff*

Reviewer: rubyrandom Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 34

OMG.  OMG - first of all seven years!!?!?  What have the Cullens been up to??!?Second does Rebecca know?  Third- Quil and Claire are expecting?!?!  LOVE IT!!



Author's Response:

First- can't tell. Second- Does Rebecca know what? Where they are? Yes. Third- yes they are expecting.

 

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 34

Hmmmmmmmmmmm.  Didn't see that cliff coming.  Interesting as always though.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 34

well thats intresting! cant wait till the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 34

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 34

Ugh I don't want this to be over. You've done a wonderful job with this story!! Looking forward to the epilogues :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I hope that you will check out my next stories as well.

Reviewer: tima Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 34

well, that makes me feel a bit better, knowing that Rebecca misses her mother that much, that she would search for her...



Author's Response:

Thank you. And just because Quil hadn't heard from his mom because she left , doesn't mean Rebecca hadn't.

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 34

I can't believe so much time passed. I cried at the beginning of this chapter when Quil was looking for his mom. That was just sad. I never cry when I read. I guess I can't say that anymore. LoL. The fact that you could make me cry speaks volumes about your talent as a writer. I think that first scene just reminded me of how hard it has to have been for Quil. He underwent so many changes in such a short time and suffered so much loss that I actually felt his pain. I hope Rebecca and John do find Bella. Hopefully Quil will get to see her again. I can't wait to read the epi's, although it makes me sad to see the ending.
Love that you made yourself a wolf in the story. Do you end up with your hubby? I think I remember you saying once that you named one of the wolves after him. Could be wrong and it's after 3 in the morning so I'm too lazy to check. If I'm right, I think that's cute and if I'm wrong, sorry I'll try to pay more attention next time. LoL.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Yes, my hubby's name is Chris, so yes, I wrote myself in as his imprint. Tee hee.

Wow, that is quite a compliment, I'm so proud of myself for making you cry.

 

Thank you so much for your review, it was wonderful as always.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 34

Oh wow - Rebecca wants to find bella.  Hopefully, no more confrontations.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review. I can't tell you anything about what Rebecca wants. LOL

Reviewer: tima Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 33

oh boy...what will the future hold for these two? Quil has to eventually forgive and let it go...but how long will it take? Thanks for writing this story. I love iT!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: ErinCullen77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 33

Another great chapter.  Thanks so much!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 33

This has been a really great ride.  I can't wait to see what comes next...



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 32

Now Quil has the moment of clarity?  Gah!



Author's Response:

Yeah, well it takes him a bit. :p

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 31

Holy shit!  Can we cuss in a review?  If  not.  SORRY! 



Author's Response:

You can totally fucking cuss the shit out of your reviews. : )

 

Thanks.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 30

GAh.............I can't take the suspence....you kill me.



Author's Response:

Wow, you are almost caught up.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 28

Theres still so much going on I can't take it!!!!!  Claire is amazing and Quil is .... 16.  You can't really fault him his view on life, the wolf gene didn't just morph him into an all wise and knowing being....but you could still totally smack him!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. So many people are hating Quil, but he is so young.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 25

I love that Rosie got a taste of fire....A laughing Carlisle is too great also!



Author's Response:

Yes, I love to see the jovial side of Carlisle as well.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 33

great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 23

But I would still look like a cougar," I said, laying my fear out there.

A devious smile came across Edward's face and he looked feral. "I like cougars," he purred       Such a good line!



Author's Response:

Thank you. The cougar line came to me VERY early in the writing process. LOL

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wow, I can't believe the turn this has taken...  Gotta hit next now...bye



Author's Response:

Ha ha, thanks.

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 33

Amazing chapter. I absolutely loved Edward and Bella together. I'm so glad they are happy. I hope with time things will work out for Bella and her family. Looking forward to finding out what has been going on with the wolves.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 9

The poop has begunn to hit the proverbial fan. I'm still reading...BTW.



Author's Response:

Ha ha. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 33

lovely chap



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm



Author's Response:

I appreciate the review even though I'm not sure what it means. LOL

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

I laughed at the toothbrush fiasco and Bella wanting to lick Jakes B-fast loud enought my son wanted to know what could be so funny in a boring ole story... Yeah he's 9 and if it doesn't beep, it couldn't possibly be entertaining.  ;-)



Author's Response:

Ha ha, that's awesome. At least it was something clean that you could tell him about, most funny fanfic moments would have been a bit much for a nine year old.

 

Thanks again for reviewing.

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 2

OK...I love this boy Quil and his whole view of the world.  Very funny.  It's true that some of the things you like about a place or thing can be a two edged sword in the long run.  Funny about the PDA of your parents. It's a good read!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am very attached to Quil, I'm glad you like him.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 32

geez.. hopefully Carlisle can re attach Alice's arm or something. Quil is a butthead.. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 32

sad chapter for all that is happening but doesn't have to.



Author's Response:

So true.

 

Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: ErinCullen77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 32

Kind of want to slap Quil up side the head during this chapter.  :) Still loving it.  I know you're getting close to the end though.  Not ready, not ready.



Author's Response:

I'm not ready either!!

 

Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: ErinCullen77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 31

One of my favorite chapters so far.  Love reading this story.  Can't wait for more.  :)

Reviewer: annienow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 32

Another exciting chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 32

I loved this. It was definitely a great chapter. It's sad that one of the wolves had to die in order for Quil to realize that fighting wasn't going to change the fact that Bella had already been bitten. I'm glad Quil realized that the Cullens meant them no harm. If only he had actually taken the time to speak to them the outcome might have been different. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I actually had a different wolf die in my outline but I couldn't do it in the end.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 32

Its unfortunate.  They tried to speak to them.  The Cullens would also have Bella in a moment.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, yes it is unfortunate, but more exciting right? LOL

Reviewer: rubyrandom Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 31

Oh crap!  Not how I expected that to go down...it was much, much better!  Can't wait to see what happens now!!  

 

Didn't realize you were so close to the end.  :(  Do you have any new stories/ideas in the works?

 

-Jen



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I will send the EPOV in a DM.

 

I do have another story that is four chapters and completed that I wrote for a fic exchange, I will begin posting that on June 1st and then I also have another short story that I started that I also expect to be about four chapters that I will post hopefully soon after Gloaming finishes.

Reviewer: Nessa_Yanara Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 31

woa that's amazing! i can't wait for an update.

Hugs

Reviewer: annienow Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 31

Wow.  What an exciting chapter.  Never would of thought Alice would do it.  I really liked Bella's thoughts at the beginning of this chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you, your EPOV is coming.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 31

Goodness me your leaving it at that?!?!?! Can't wait for the next chapter!! :)



Author's Response:

Your EPOV is coming.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 31

Good - Alice changed her.  Hopefully, no dead Edward or Cullens.  IT would be nice to reason with the idiot wolves.  Quil et al are more annoying than Sam's pack.  Sam had a couple of extra years of maturity.  Teens should not have life/death power without someone to balance them.



Author's Response:

So true.

Your EPOV is coming in a DM

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 31

I can't believe she got Alice to bite her. I definitely didn't see that coming. It seems like Rebecca might be more understanding than Quil. Loved the ending. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

Elli :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 30

don't like where quill is taking this. so sad.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, and yes things are going to get worse.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 30

OH GOD - nasty little brat.  I am sorry - the Pack needs to mind their own business.



Author's Response:

Ha ha, killing vampires is their business.

 

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 30

I'm anxious to see what will happen between the wolves and the vampires. I keep wondering if there will be a fight or if it will be something more peaceful. I can't wait to see what you write. I'm sure it will be something great. Looking forward to reading more soon.
I'm curious, is the story near the end? I was just thinking about this so I thought I would ask.

Elli :)

Author's Response:

We are getting closer to the end, I think we will have about thirty four chapters and two epilogues.

 

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 29

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 29

OMG - please no war with the wolves.  Let her leave and be done with it.



Author's Response:

Well that would be kind of anti climactic, don't you think?

 

Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 29

Great chapter as always. The way Edward proposed was so sweet. I love how they both need the other as part of their lives. I'm anxious to see what is going to happen since John was listening to her conversation with Charlie. I can't wait to see Quil's reaction.

Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. So much is about to happen.

Reviewer: jkoch812 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 28

Wow it is sad to me that 16 yr old Quil is getting more action than his 35 yr old mother with a 17 yr old boyfriend.  LOL  Which speaking of - after 28 chapters it is still weird to me to try to think as Bella as the mother of a teenager!  

Hmmmm... Things aren't looking so good for Bella and the Cullens.  Looks like all hell is about to break loose - and I am super excited to see how it all goes down!

An EPOV teaser!!  Sweet!  

Reviewer: jkoch812 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 27

Way to tell it like it is Bella!!  Glad she's not going down without a fight!  Edward will change his mind... *crosses fingers*

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 28

I love your story. I don't however like Quil.. he's a dick. LOL What Bella wants to do is her business, she's the mom... sorry just had to say :)

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