Date: 04 Jun 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
awesome ;) when she mentioned that she wanted edward to accumpany her to the dungeon on weekends i thought she wanted him to watch so he could learn ;) im so happy we got some imfo on bellas past and what james was to her ;D
Date: 07 Jan 2013 1:02 PM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
hello. I want to ask you for permission to translate this story on Russian I would be glad to see your written permission in the form of letters in the mailbox firstname.lastname@example.org . thank you in advance! and thank you for the beautiful story!
Date: 03 Jul 2012 3:44 PM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful story :)
I'm sad to see it end, it has been such a great read. Thanks :)
Awwww, thank you sooo much, Hun!!! I had a fun time writing it and I hate to end it, too.... Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter Forty-Five - Desire The Fire
edward's playroom scene please
LOL!! Thanks for the review...and I'll get right on that...subward/domward...yum.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter Forty-Five - Desire The Fire
Oh...that was pure evil....evil I say....it was getting SOOOOOOO good!!! Damn it...I can't wait to read more...
I know, I know...but I promise some loving in the epilogue. I'll send CBLW out with a bang. Thanks for reading xoxo
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter Forty-Four - Moving Forward While Standing Still
yeah! shes there! oh my what is going on with her? what was angela trying to tell him?
yes, if bella talks to you, definately a sister story!
until the next one!
Thanks for the review, babe...and yes, if you pay attention very closely, Angela was trying to tell Edward about Bella and her whereabouts...but was bound by a promise to keep her mouth shut ;))
As for sister story...I think I will do some version of that ;))
Have a great weekend!! See ya soon :))
Date: 13 Jun 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter Forty-Three - Shell-shocked
Omg...I have finished your story in like 4 days and I NEVER checked to see if it was finished and after rading through continous chapters and now stopping on such a sorrowful part I'm so depressed lol. Please lets get this HEA on and going!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter Forty-Three - Shell-shocked
Poor, poor Edward. My heart aches for his pain. I kow this is what needs to happen so he can become all that he needs to become and I am sure the next chapter will be Bella's pain and misery being shown to us. I know a HEA is coming so I am just holding my breath, wiping my tears and trying to be patient. I love this story, these two people and your writing. Can't wait for more.
Date: 07 Jun 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter Forty-Three - Shell-shocked
I say they both think way too much! I am going to be optimistic since you say there are only a few chapters left, that one of them will pull their heads out of their asses and fix this mess.
Amen!!! LOL! Thanks for reading.
Date: 29 May 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter Forty-Two - Morbidity is the Omission of Sorrow
I think Edward is right. Bella has to get her head right before she can be with anyone else. She is a mess emotionally. She has major trust issues. They can't start a relationship until she goes through her closet and cleans out all of the skeletons. She needs to learn to love herself before she can love Edward. When she has herself ready, Edward will be waiting. He now has 12 classes and he has to work. He is going to be so tired he won't have time to wallow over Bella. She better take this opportunity.
Exactly!! Edward didn't sign up for those classes just because, he knew he was going to need something to keep him busy, keep him distracted, and keep him from going back to Bella. Ever bone in is body wants to be with her, but he knows that she needs to decide whether or not she can be with him. He deserve so much more than he was getting, and does she.
Thanks for the review, sweets!!! See ya soon.
Date: 26 May 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter Forty-Two - Morbidity is the Omission of Sorrow
You did the right thing, Edward deserves better...
Right? So, sad, I write the worst Bella in the history of fanfic...Hopefully she redeems herself. Thanks for the review, babe!!!
Date: 26 May 2012 12:13 PM Title: Chapter Forty-Two - Morbidity is the Omission of Sorrow
This story is so captivating. I look forward to each and every update and feel so much emotion as I read each chapter. I love these two and can't wait for the HEA. I know Edward needs to do this to become the man he needs to be, for himself and Bella. He will be so much more, in every way once he does. I am so thankful to know we are reaching the end though because it breaks my heart for them to be estranged. And, Bella needs to do some soul searching and growing up too and get herself straightened around so that she can give Edward her best self. I am eagerly awaiting the rest of the story.
Awe, thanks, hun!!! Yeah, I agree. This needed to happen. Bella needs to experience life without Edward. She'll see that she's losing so much and having the upperhand and control in a relationship is not worth it. Thanks for the review, hun!!!
Date: 12 May 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter Forty-One - What Comes Around
Wow, you really had me going with that last chapter. This one was very refreshing in as much as it wasn't at all what I thought it would be. Thank Heavens! It certainly did teach him a lesson and I know he will never forget it. What better way to do it than to make him feel what she felt. Betrayal, hurt, and loss of trust. He learned exactly what she wanted him to. Very effective. I am so thankful and relieved it wasn't for real. I figured it would be cuz that is how most stories go but this one is refreshingly different and I LOVE it. Can't wait for more!
Date: 27 Apr 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter Forty - The Reckoning
Bella is lying. She just wants to hurt Edward like she is hurting. She has been hurt so many times in her life that she can't trust anyone. She is scared to love or be loved. She is a fool. I feel so bad for Edward. He deserves so much more than what Bella has to offer, but his heart loves Bella. I hope she gets her head together before it is too late. Bella can be so cruel. I find that to be true with Dommes. They are so much crueller than Doms. They have usually have been hurt sometime in their past and take it out on their subs.
Date: 21 Apr 2012 12:02 PM Title: Chapter Forty - The Reckoning
Oh my! I am speechless now. Not at all what I expected. I know Bella is lying and just trying to end it but such a cruel way to do it. She doesn't really mean what she said, I know that, but Edward doesn't and he is now offically crushed. I can't wait for more of the story so please update soon. I am really enjoying this story and your writing. Can't wait for the HEA, which I know will come, but not before alot of angst. I really don't like angst and pray it is short lived. My poor old heart can't take much abd I don't think Edward can either.
LMAO!! I hear you on the angst. I usually avoiding reading stories like that, I can't take the sadness. So, I guarantee you, if I have angst in my story, it is very short-lived. I just want happy days, people skipping through a field, and singing 'The fields are a live with the sound of music!' ;))
Thanks for the review!! Have a great weekend!!
Date: 21 Apr 2012 6:48 AM Title: Chapter Forty - The Reckoning
Yup, still reading and wondering where this is gonna' go... please update again soon!
Hi!! I'm glad I still have you, babe...and it's slowly leading to a some sort of a resoluation. An end, I hope ;) Thanks for reviewing, have a great weekend.
Date: 21 Apr 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter Forty - The Reckoning
This chapter broke my heart. Poor Edward. He was only taking a misguided attempt to give her what she lost only to find out it was all a lie. And she was going up and move with no explanation. Nope, not very happy with Bella right now.
I can only imagine the fallout that Edward will have from this betrayal. Kudos to your excellent writing and surprise twist. I thought everything was coming together for these two and then you blew it up. Now I can't wait to see what happens next!
Hey, Hun! Thanks for the review. I bet you're wishing like Edward that Bella would've just gave him the horse. At least there some soothing aftercare in the deal. I sent this chapter to my prereaders with the heading 'Do you trust me?' LOL
Have a great weekend and I'll update soon!
Date: 21 Apr 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter Forty - The Reckoning
OMG i want to cry i feel so much for edward right now. Coldhearted fucking bitch.
Please update again soon
Yeah, Bella is not a fan favorite right now. To have someone love you that much and to crush them? But trust, she's got a plan. Thanks for reviewin, babe! Have a great weekend!
Date: 04 Apr 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Nine - Technicalities
Edward is in deep, but he has to tell Bella the whole story, especially about the creep. He also better tell Emmett the free ride is over. Edward was trying to be so sweet to Bella. I hope she takes that into consideration while she is thinking about his punishment. He loves her so much and he knows she won't be happy without her own dungeon. She needs to see it from his view. She would do anything for him also.
Date: 02 Apr 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Nine - Technicalities
poor edward, not inly did he not get the loan ,but now on his own bella'is gonna kick his ass
aro is a prick!
He is not having a good day. Aro. *sigh* Angela should've killed him.
Thanks for the review!!! :)
Date: 19 Mar 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight- The Proposal
I think Edward should have brought some more details like how many clients Bella has had in the last few years. How profitable her dungeon has been for the last few years. Edward should explain how she lost her business. This is the information you have when you want an investor. Even if the investor is your parents. You have to give them the cold hard facts of the business. You have to keep the emotions out of the tractions. Edward needs to explain why he wants to do this for Bella. That is when he puts his emotions into the presentations, but he has to have the profit margins.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven Auld Lang Syne
Angela is such a brat. Bella really needs to write her off. She will come crawling back when she grows up. Until that time, Bella needs to stop wasting energy on her. She needs it for Edward's and her relationship.
Date: 22 Feb 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven Auld Lang Syne
I loved the chapter. Edward is hilarious bless him. :)
Hey, Roonster!!! Thanks for reading, babe! Yes, he's very sarcastic and has such a dry humor about him. He's fun to write!!!
Date: 20 Feb 2012 11:26 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven Auld Lang Syne
That was awesome! All he wanted was to hear her say it. Great chapter and thanks for the update.
Awe, thank you!!! Yeah, knowing someone loves you and hearing them finally saying it is just...you know ;)))
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! Have a great weekend!! xoxoxoxooxx
Date: 13 Feb 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Six - Plan B
I think Bella should marry Edward. They don't have to marry right this minute, but they could get engaged and marry when he graduates. This will show everyone that they belong to each other in all ways. Bella can dominate in the home, but Edward should be able to show society that they are a married couple.
Date: 28 Jan 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Six - Plan B
Caught me by surprise, didn't expect Victoria to try to lay claim to Edward. Foolish bitch. I loved seeing how childish she could be. Her behaviour clearly showed just how much of Aro's puppet she truly is, and she doesn't even realize!
As much as Bella will always be a Domme at heart, I do not see her allowing Edward to help finance a dungeon for her as that would totally oppose her autonomy. He stands a far greater likelihood of convincing her to marry him.
Yeah, I know. He's going to have to tread lightly and discuss it with her before he goes and does something stupid...but then again, he is who he is anf he wants to save the day. Very impulsive dude.
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 25 Jan 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-five - Four To One
Bella just needs to be glad that she is out of under Aro. She has Edward and can start a new life. She has to realize that is more important than money. She doesn't have to support her sister anymore. If they have to Edward can make Emmett and Rosalie pay for the apartment and he can help pay for her place. They can work it out if she will stop being so stubborn and let him help her.
Date: 09 Jan 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Four - Chutzpah
Bella just needs to get another loan. She doesn't need to be indept to Aro for anything. She has a good job and I am sure she has the books for the the Dungeon to show it is profitable. Edward might have to go to his parents if they can't get a loan at a bank, but they have to get out from under Aro.
Date: 28 Nov 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Two- Redemption
Awww i can't believe they have to be apart while Edwards stiches heal, i bet it'll be torture for them. I hope we get to see them back in the playroom soon.
I can understand Edward being upset with his friends, i would be too. They haven't given his feelings any regard.
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:24 AM Title: Chapter Four- No Longer a Figment of the Imagination
Finally!!! I had a feeling when you focused on Edward's favor that he might find her there.
'She was as cool as a cucumber…' --that just reminded me of the tv show "The Vampire Diaries" when Damon Salvatore said it.
Well done with this chapter!