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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter Thirty One- Dante's Infereno

Edward's family is crazy. I think Edward needs to tell Emmett and Rose that they need to get their own place. They can't live off his parents. His parents are now in the knew. He doesn't have to hide anymore. It is time Emmett and Rose, who is a bitch, gets out of his place.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter Thirty One- Dante's Infereno

loved the chapter looking forward to the enxt chapter 

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad

Send me some red velvet cup cakes, I can't cook for shit!  Awesome as always chapter.  Mudd in you face Rose the itch!  I hope Eddie give them all a mouth full.  Including that Nana.  LOL

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad

Oh snap, the secret is out.  I think it is pretty funny that Bella wants to train Rose to be a Domme, Emmett could be in big trouble.  I love how open Bella is about everything, and I can feel that even though Edward is a bit prone to overreaction, he is correct that his friends are not being very respectful in meeting Bella or inviting themselves to dinner.

"Mind over Cock" too funny, I hope his stiches are okay and he recovers so we can get some more action between these two.  Love it.

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad

I am glad that Edward's friends know now. I just hate how they found out. I would love Bella to train Rose, since a Dom starts out as a Sub. Rose needs her arse beat and Bella could beat some attitude out of her.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad

Hilarious hun. I cannot believe they just turned up "Bella's a dude?!" bwhahahaha Edward did flip his lid but what I really could not believe was Bella outing him. He should have called Red. lol   Excelllent as always.  

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad

:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad

I sooo loved the meeting between Bella and Rose.  Edward should never doubt that Bella controls the situation. ;)



Author's Response:

Exactly! He should know that Bella is way too self-assured to be intimidated by Rose..Hell, she's scares E. He'll learn...hopefully after the stitches are out LOL

Thanks for reading, sweets!!

xoxo

~K

Reviewer: CaraTwlight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 3:18 PM Title: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad

Great chapter. I loved the angst. Red velvet cupcakes, yum. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Oooh, yay!! I actually tried making them and it did not work out. I nearly burnt down the house. I am a horrible cook LOL

Thanks for reading, babe!! Glad you're enjoying the story and I hope to see you next chapter :))

xoxo

~K

Reviewer: cullen-mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 7:19 AM Title: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad

anouther brilliant chapter, love this story and how Edward and Bella come across. keep up the great wrting, cant wait for the next chapter.

Thanks for all you hard work that has gone into the story



Author's Response:

Awww, yay!!! Thank you so much, Hun! I'm stoked that you're liking it! I'll keep it up if you keep reading...deal? ;)

Xoxo

~K

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 5:17 AM Title: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad

great chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you!! See at the next one?

~K

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 1:21 AM Title: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad

looking forward to the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, sweets!!!

xoxo

~K

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine- When it rains, it pours

:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine- When it rains, it pours

Like he said be proud of his choices.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly

I loved the heart to heart that turned into a power struggle between Edward and Carlisle.  

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine- When it rains, it pours

Wonderful chapter, can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine- When it rains, it pours

Perfect as usual, and it was well worth the wait, believe me!  I can´t wait to see if Rose causes any trouble and if Bella finally kills Nana Cullen, she´s reall an old hag! Great chapter bb!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine- When it rains, it pours

I think Bella should flog Nana! Poor Edward he really is such a wuss. Wonderful chapter hun. 

xx



Author's Response:

Hey, Hon!! yeah, I know...whenever he drops his fear of being judge, he'll be a very good and strong sub!

Thanks for reading, sweetie!! We'll porn later? Yes? ;)

 

xoxo

~K

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine- When it rains, it pours

My friend has a mean grandma like that and it amazes me.  I thought all grandma's are sweet and back cookies - I know, I know, a bit of a stereotype there but it is hard to see someone be that rude.  Speaking of Nana Cullen, I LOVED Bella's comment about taking a flogger to her.

I was nervous when Edward and Esme were talking because like Edward thought I figured she was leaning towerds judgement not understanding.  I don't think he needs to be ashamed of the lifestyle or his mistress, but I think it may be best to adopt a don't ask, don't tell policy around family.

Can't wait to see what happens next, will Jasper get with Alice, will Rose spill the beans, and what will Edward's friends think about his Mistress Bella.  Better yet, what will she think about them, maybe she can get Rose in Domme training :)

 



Author's Response:

Hey, Hon!! Thanks for reading. You know, I have never had this sort of Nana and I don't know where she came from. Sometimes characters write themselves. I agree with you, Edward shouldn't be afarid of what people think, but he's ashamed of it for some reason and he shouldn't be. I think he's slowly realizing this fact. He had his self-awareness in this chapter, but we'll see if that carries on. 

Alice has not seen Jasper yet, but when she does, well, you know how it goes ;) Rose needs to get her ass in Domme training. I think that is why she's so intrigued by Bella's lifestyle. It'll be interestin to see what Bella thinks of Edward's friends...dun dun dun!

Anyways, have a great week, and I'll see ya next update!

*mwah*

 

~K

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine- When it rains, it pours

looking fwoard to the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Aww! Thannks for reading!! *mwah*

~K

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 8:32 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly

Oops, is Edward going to have to explain to his mom that Bella broke his dick?  Ouch!  Like that Carlisle and Esme seem to approve of Bella, even if Carlisle cautions about moving too fast.  I just hope Bella learns to deal with Edward and doesn't run away from her feelings.  I love mushy Edward!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly

Edward narced on himself. I can't believe Esme didn't know her kids teacher. That is a sad fact. I am glad that Edward was pretty honest with his Carlisle.



Author's Response:

Hey, Hun, thanks for reading. Yeah, Edward has got a big mouth and you never assume to know something. I'm glad that Edward is being truthful about the way he feels about Bella, even though he's still wary to fully disclose their relationship...and I am not just talking about the D/s aspect of it.

As for Esme knowing who Bella was, she knew she was a teacher at the boys school, but Bella isn't the Twins' teacher. Bella teaches the third grade art class...a few doors down from the twins' kindergarten class. 

Anywhos. Thanks for the review *mwah*

Have a great weekend!!!

~K

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven- Preaching To The Choir

This should be interesting.  

I am glad they are finally going to give this a real chance.  And I am so glad that Edward wants to continue the D/s side of their relationship.  I am patiently waiting for her to push his limits some more. ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

She broke him?!?  I always thought she would break his spirit or maybe his heart, but his dick???  I did not see that one coming.  Sorry, poor choice of words.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly

Well alrighty then E open mouth insert foot!  LOL



Author's Response:

LOL..no kidding. I swear, if he wasn't so blunt all the time, I'm sure he would save himself a lot of grief!

Thanks for reading, Hun!!!

xoxo

~K

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2011 6:44 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly

Awww... shucks, look my name is in the AN! *wipes a single tear*  Love you too bb!  Thanks for the mention!

 

I enjoyed hanging out with Carlisle and spending a few quite minutes with Bella before the kraziness that is Christmas at the Cullen´s commences.  I hope Angie surprises Bella and decides to show up!

Okay, I laughed my a$$ off at the description of Esme´s sweater... hee-lar-i-ous!  And Edward putting his foot in his mouth was cute as usual.  I am so looking forward to what the twins and the Drunk Whitlocks have in store for Christmas dinner, and I´m curious to know will Bella end up handing Rose her a$$ for all her bitchiness?  Don´t keep me in suspense too long!

Glad my favorite sub´s broken peen is on the mend!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hey, Krazi!!

You're welcome! You know I loves you!!! 

I am in the midst of writing the Christmas chapter now and all I can say about it is that...everything that Edward expects to go wrong does. Kind of like that awkward moment when Edward brings Bella home in Twilight, and the look of total embarrassment on his face...yeah, a lot like that. What sounded like a awesome idea will be the worse idea yet. Also, if you think the sweater is funny...you should see how Nana Cullen and Mama Esme treat eachother...Monster-in-law, indeed.

Thanks for always sticking with me on this story..truly. 

Love ya lots!!

~K

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly

:)



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;))

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly

Hey hun, this just gets better and better. I am glad Edward's peen is on the mend. lol He is still such a petulant child, he needs his bottom flogged. ;-))

Hugs.



Author's Response:

Roonster!!!! Thanks for reading, sweets! Yes, subward peen is on the mend and will be in working form very, very soon. I'm sure Bella will be more than willing to flog that bottom..God know, I sure as hell do ;))

xoxo

~K

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 4:52 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly

looking foward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks for reading, Hun!!! Have a great weekend!!

xoxo

~K

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 5:35 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven- Preaching To The Choir

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Five- The Harder They Fall

:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven- Preaching To The Choir

I am so proud of Bella for stepping through her wall and claiming her love of  Edward. Edward will help her figure out how to make it work. He won't let her hide again. Carlisle was so cool. He helped Edward so much in this chapter. There relationship has healed from this experience. Edward had distanced himself from his parents and I think that has ended. He realized he can have them both.



Author's Response:

Hey, Hun!!

Exactly. It's been hard for Bella because she's was taught by Aro to never show emotion and to be a stern Domme, and she has broken more than Edward's peen. She's broken all of her rules because she does love him...more than she wants to. I love Carlisle. He loves his son and I guarantee you that he wouldn't care if Bella was Edward's Dominatrix, just as long Edward was happy. Edward always assumed the worst about everything with his family and friends. 

Hopefully Christmas goes good!!

See ya soon! Thanks for reading!

~K

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven- Preaching To The Choir

I love it.  It was a great chapter as always.  I'm glad they've defined their relationship too!



Author's Response:

Yay!!! Awesome! Thanks, sweetie!!! I'm glad Edward was able to air out his grievances ;)

Thanks for reading!

~K

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven- Preaching To The Choir

Brilliant hun. I feel sorry for poor Edward, if I were he and someone broke my dick I would be really pissed at them. lol    I am so looking forward to the next chapter.  In the meantime, I will  just have to imagine Edward with a splinter on his dick. lol  Hugs



Author's Response:

ROONSTER!!!!

Hey gurl! Thanks so much for reading. LOL! Yeah, I think his dick is too numbed and drugged up to be mad. OMG! That image is hysterical. A splint? Really? 

~K

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven- Preaching To The Choir

thank you for this chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, babe!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven- Preaching To The Choir

im gladthat hes alright ! looking fowardto dinner with the parents ! 



Author's Response:

Awe, thanks. Me too. It should be very entertaining. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2011 3:16 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

holy shit! too fucking funny he broke his dick and now his dad is gonna fix him up! lol what a way for bella to meet the parents!  i just went and googled a penile fracture and that shit is scarey and looks fucking painful! i do not see any happy sexy times for a long time in eddie's future! ouch!!!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Five- The Harder They Fall

eddie is gonna get bella to open up and then she can start to heal herself and they can move forward with their relationship. but first sexy times!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2011 1:23 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four- Pushing Boundaries

well that did not go as planned! but unfortunately some people have to learn shit for themselves and will not learn from your mistakes. i guess this means no angela for christmas. and how bad is the punishment gonna be for ang?

Reviewer: Aisling-91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2011 7:25 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

He broke his dick. Oh, my God.

I don't even know what else I can possibly say besides...He. broke. his. Dick.

Wow.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2011 6:44 AM Title: BPOV - Inescapable Devastation

so aro wants bella and is willing to use angela to get her. yes jane is going to take the punishment this time but what will be waiting for angela when she gets home?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Three- Deuces Are Wild

oh eddie you sure are lucky! she should have beat your ass and then put you on the horse! but very well played with the 'because you want to' so the perfect thing to say to a domme!

time to get ready for christmas! wonder what bella is gonna think of that? and what about eddie's family? the boys will be excited!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2011 10:57 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Two - Risky Business

uh oh eddie is free what will he do/ what will bells do? ride it out and punish him later or stop and punish him now?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter Twenty One - Show and Tell

oh eddie this so does not look good for you. will bella give him a chance to explain? if she does will she believe him? what will she say about the tattoo? shit!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2011 1:26 PM Title: Chapter Twenty - The Devil Is In The Details

for a second there i thought ed might have found another confidant in his new way of life in rose but to think it is all a research paper and what she can get out of it?!? so not cool.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2011 12:42 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen- The Hale Inquisition

well looks like a part of eddie's secret is outta da bag!now will rose be able to keep this a secret? or will eddie just say it was one night of kinky sex?

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2011 8:59 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

A little warning would have been nice.  I never laughed so fu*king hard, no punned intended.  I couldn't get through reading this chapter I laughed so hard.  Amazing, I have never read anything so funny.  LOL This chapter definitely a 10, Great job!!



Author's Response:

Aweee!!! That's awesome. Thanks so much. Hun!! I am so glad that this chapter got the response I wanted...I kind of feared that ppl would hate me for breaking E=man's memeber ;)))

Thank you so much for reading!!

~K

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen - The Plane of Ecliptic

it seems that miss bella is talking herself out of keeping him, but he came back at her and forced her to keep him even if only to prove he doesn't really want this. haha i guess the jokes on her because eddie has found his calling, his destiny... to be bella's sub.

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 7:32 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

great chapter! I laughed my ass off when Carlisle appeared! :)

Author's Response:

Awe, thanks, Hun!! Yeah, I was laughing pretty hard myself..Only Edward's rotten luck.

Thank you for reading <3

~K

Reviewer: kalare Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

hahahaha he broke it  and oh em gee bella said girlfriend!!!!



Author's Response:

*snickers* Right. I wonder what Carlisle's going to think about Edward's girlfriend...oh, and his son's broken love stick ;)

Thanks for reading!!!

 

~K

Reviewer: Chase Corin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

OMFG! I was rolling on the floor with this one, a broken dick, where do you come up with this. If I were Bella I would be adding that to my sexual resume. Don't guys do that? brag to the other guys how good they are in bed? Bella should be bragging that she ruins the men she sleeps with LOL.



Author's Response:

No shit, huh! Those are some bragging rights. She sexed him so good, she broke his love stick ;))

Thanks for reading, Babe!!

~K

Reviewer: cshorte Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

Ouch!!! Poor Edward!!!

Author's Response:

:( I know. He'll be fine...I think. They won;t have to amputate. That I do know ;)

Thanks for reading!!

~K

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

OMFG edwars has the worst luck can't wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

RighT!! I swear, the poor kid can't catch a break...I mean, er...You know what I mean LOL

Thanks for reading, babe!!

~K

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

well at least she is the one that said girlfirend! 



Author's Response:

Exactly!! That answers that question....now, how to explain a broken dick...

Thanks for reading!!

~K

Reviewer: jessee03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

That was very mean ending the chapter there (i'm pouting lol) Aww poor Edward, i'm squirming at the thought of his now broken dick :( i hope it recovers soon.



Author's Response:

Awe, I sorry. I'm too evil...but holy. The chapter was crazy long. Edward can go on forever LOL...I'll update soon ;))

Thanks for reading!!

~K

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

*giggle* Poor Edward *chuckle*
I feel bad for his um, situation, but I couldn't stop laughing at his reaction. I still laughing as I type this review.
I am glad that Bella decided to let Edward in, give him a little of her past. And I totally loved her introduction to his father. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response:

Yes! She finally called herself his girlfriend and I think it was well deserved. She broke his dick. My hub's didn't see the humor in this chapter. I swear, men. They don't get funny ;))

Thanks for reading, Hun!!

 

~K

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2011 10:50 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

She broke his dick and then laughed her head off. Poor Edward. lmaoooooo



Author's Response:

*snort* Why can't I stop laughing at his expense. It's not funny...a broken dick is serious....LOL

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Five- The Harder They Fall

Great chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Five- The Harder They Fall

she opened up a little ! excited to see whats instore for them next 



Author's Response:

Hey, babe!! Thanks for the review!! Heres a little sneak peek into the next chapter :)

 

 

Chapter Twenty Six

~Around and Around We Go~

Bella led me upstairs towards her room, and as I stared at her swaying ass in front of me, I wondered what she was planning. When we were down in the living room, the tone of her voice and the way she grabbed me had led me to believe that she had some naughty things on her mind.

However, when she overshot her bed and took me straight to her closet, I was a little disappointed by her turn of direction...albeit confused.

Keeping quiet, I watched as she reached in behind some of her hanging cloths and pulled out a little step ladder. She then brought it to the other side of her walk-in and unfolded it. After she positioned the ladder where she wanted it, I looked up and saw where her main focus lied.

There in the far left of her closet were countless shoeboxes, stacked high to the ceilings, and what seemed like a chaotic system to me was, somehow, oddly uniformed.

The questions were now just rolling through my mind at an endless succession and planting themselves on my tongue...

What is she doing?

Bella gave me a sideways glance as she climbed to the top step and reached up to one of the plentiful boxes. She looked unsteady as she raised herself to her tippy toes, and I was suddenly overcome with panic as I imagined her losing her balance and crashing to the floor. So, I walked over to her, casually, and situated myself directly under her...just in case she fell.

Finally after a few worrisome minutes, Bella obtained what she was looking for and pulled down a large Steve Madden shoebox.

"Here, take this," she instructed as she handed the box to me.

The weight of it was slightly heavy, and I could only imagine what sort of hidden secrets were stored in there...Well, that was if they were secrets at all. Hell, for all I knew, this box could be filled with cuffs and vibrating dildos.

However, the way she was looking at me, all nervous and uneasy like, I had a feeling that it was something else entirely.

"What is this?" I asked, curious.

"It's everything you asked for, Edward," she replied somberly. "It's the good and the bad."

"Should I be scared?" I joked to ease the tension.

"I don't know," she said cocking her eyebrow at me. "Do you scare easily?"

I shook my head. "Not usually."

"I think you just open it and find out," she said encouragingly. "This is the good."

"Okay," I said as I flicked the top of the box off with my thumb.

As I stared down at the inner contents, I realized that I wasn't going to get time in the playroom like I originally hoped; instead I was going to get something far more lasting...

I was getting her.

 

 

Reviewer: CaraTwlight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 3:52 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Five- The Harder They Fall

This story is such a paradym shift for me. Even so, it is truely and amazing story and I love it. Thanks for writing it.



Author's Response:

 

Hey, Hun!! Thank you for the review and reading this story! Here's a little teaser for the next chapter. Now, it was hard to find something to tease because I didn't want to give too much away...Here we go.

Excerpt from Chapter 26 -Around and Around We Go.

Bella led me upstairs towards her room, and as I stared at her swaying ass in front of me, I wondered what she was planning. When we were down in the living room, the tone of her voice and the way she grabbed me had led me to believe that she had some naughty things on her mind, but when she overshot her bed and took me straight to her closet instead, I was a little disappointed...albeit confused.

Keeping quiet, I watched as she reached in behind some of her hanging cloths and pulled out a little step ladder. She then brought it to the other side of her walk-in and unfolded it. After she positioned the ladder where she wanted it, I looked up and saw where her main focus lied.

There in the far right of her closet were countless shoeboxes, stacked high to the ceilings, and what seemed like a chaotic system to me was, somehow, oddly uniformed.

The questions were now just rolling through my mind at an endless succession and planting themselves on my tongue...

What is she doing?

Bella gave me a sideways glance as she climbed to the top step and reached up to one of the plentiful boxes. She looked unsteady as she raised herself to her tippy toes, and I was suddenly overcome with panic as I imagined her losing her balance and crashing to the floor. So, I walked over to her, casually, and situated myself directly under her...just in case she fell.

Finally after a few worrisome minutes, Bella obtained what she was looking for and pulled down a large Steve Madden shoebox.

"Here, take this," she said as she handed the box to me.

The weight of it was slightly heavy, and I could only imagine what sort of hidden secrets were stored in there...Well, that was if they were secrets at all. Hell, for all I knew, this box could be filled with cuffs and vibrating dildos.

However, the way she was looking at me, all nervous and uneasy like, I had a feeling that it was something else entirely.

"What is this?" I asked, curious.

"It's everything you asked for, Edward," she replied somberly. "It's the good and the bad."

"Should I be scared?" I joked to ease the tension.

"I don't know," she said cocking her eyebrow at me. "Do you scare easily?"

I shook my head. "Not usually."

"I think you just open it and find out," she said encouragingly.

"Okay," I said as I flicked the top of the box off with my thumb.

As I stared down at the inner contents, I realized that I wasn't going to get time in the playroom like I originally hoped; instead I was going to get something far more lasting...

I was getting her.

 

 

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 3:55 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Five- The Harder They Fall

I'm glad that got over that hurtle!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 2:56 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four- Pushing Boundaries

Damn that was brutal on all parts!



Author's Response:

Oh, man, I hear ya, Hun!!! Thanks for reading, babe!!!

~K

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 2:09 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four- Pushing Boundaries

Angela is such a baby and needs to grow up. There was no need to say what she did at the end. Bella was only trying to help her. Angela is ungratful for all Bella has done for her. Bella could have thrown her in foster care. Angela is a spoiled brat. I hope Edward can calm her down and explain that he did not say anything to Angela to make her say that she was good to him. Edward loves Bella.



Author's Response:

Hey, Hun! Sorry for the late reply and I agree that she is in for a roud awakening. She's barely even twenty and she needs to learn that she's not always right and her feeling aren't always going to be legit. I don't think A is ungrateful, I just think she's being stubborn and wants to do what she wants to do. We'll see what happens with ExB...

 

;)) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~K

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four- Pushing Boundaries

well im excited to see how this plays out 



Author's Response:

:)) Thanks, Hun!!!! 

~K

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four- Pushing Boundaries

great chapter

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Thanks for reading and reviewing :))

~K

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 9:24 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four- Pushing Boundaries

OOOOO angela really is stiring the pot. I hope she hasn't done any irreperable harm



Author's Response:

Hi, babe!!!

Thanks for reading and I agree with ya, Angela is sure causing some grief, but I am an HEA kind of gal and I think things will work themselves out...God willing ;)

~K

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four- Pushing Boundaries

Wow.... that was some heavy shit, Mama!  I kind of see all sides, but I´m really disappointed in Angela, because when no one was there, Bella was.  She put her life on hold to take care of her sister, so she just has her best interest at heart.  Also, it really sucked how Ang threw Edward under the bust at the end.  I just hope that Bella dosen´t clam up and go back to giving Edward the cold shoulder.  They´ve made some good strides and I would hate for this to be a major or minor setback for them.  Great as always hon!  See ya next time!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Oh, Krazi!!

I don't know what to say to this awesome review, mama ;) You rock my socks off!! After reading this and knowing what I just updated, I know that you'll be very happy my dear :)))

Thanks for reading, per usual, and I'll talk to you soon!!

 

*mwah*

~K

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four- Pushing Boundaries

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Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:38 PM Title: BPOV - Inescapable Devastation

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Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Three- Deuces Are Wild

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Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Two - Risky Business

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Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter Twenty One - Show and Tell

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Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:34 PM Title: Chapter Twenty - The Devil Is In The Details

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Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:33 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen- The Hale Inquisition

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Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:32 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen - The Plane of Ecliptic

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Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen-Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips

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Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette

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Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions

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Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:28 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen- Wax On, Wax Off

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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 3:20 PM Title: BPOV - Inescapable Devastation

I hope Bella is not stupid enough to trade places with Angela. Angela chose to be with Aro. She knew what she was getting into with him. Bella needs to stop mothering her. Angela will come to her when she needs  her help. Bella needs to concentrate on her and Edward.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 5:24 AM Title: BPOV - Inescapable Devastation

WOW, so he doubled cross B intentionally.  Deal with the devil or loss her sister.  He will probably make A suffer too!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2011 10:21 PM Title: BPOV - Inescapable Devastation

well aro kinda creeps me out 

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Date: 24 Jun 2011 5:40 PM Title: BPOV - Inescapable Devastation

This is getting so VERY interesting. Will have more about Bella's time with Aro? Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Three- Deuces Are Wild

OMG!  I fucking loved it!!!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Three- Deuces Are Wild

Where is Bella? It is about time that she thought of Edward as more than a sub. I don't think Bella has been doing a good job as Edward's dom. She is suppose to take care of him and his needs. She is only making sure her needs are met. A sub is suppose to put the needs of the dom first. This is how both of them will find happiness and both of them will get their needs met. It is just a different perspective. This is the first chapter that she actually thought of Edward. I was proud of her.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Three- Deuces Are Wild

cute chatper im excited to see how their relationship goes on 

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Two - Risky Business

Great chapter!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2011 1:47 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Two - Risky Business

I am glad that Bella finally realized that Edward is more than a sub to her. Angela is pretty stupid to be Aro's sub. I worry about her.



Author's Response:

Hey, Hun!!! Yeah, Bella's admitting of her feelings has been a long time coming, but she's stubborn...just like Angela. Who is getting herself mixed in with something bad. Aro is not a man who believes that sub's have a purpose except for his own enjoyment.

 

Thanks for the review!!

~Krazy

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Two - Risky Business

well im excited for the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Yay!!! I am excited to get it updated. I always am, though ;)) Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Much love,

~Krazy

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter Twenty One - Show and Tell

Oh shit!  Double shit!!!  He is either going to be out on his ass or on the horse faster than he can say 'I'm sorry Mistress'.  Damn he fell in the shit at THAT party.  First Aro outing him on his tattoo and then Victoria?!?  Bella is going to tear him to pieces unless she actually allows him to explain.  He better be honest or he may never cum again!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO...right! That poor boy has the worst luck and it seems like he's always falling into it. Thanks for the review and reading my story. I'll see ya next update ;-)  

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 8:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty One - Show and Tell

OH poor Edward i get the feeling Bella is not going to let him explain, i hope she does though i hope she realises just how he is willing to sacrifice for her.



Author's Response:

I know, he's been trying so hard and things keep on not going hid way. Hopefully, he thinks quick on his feet and gets his self out of the situation. Thanks for reviewing, Hun!! Xoxo

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 2:21 PM Title: Chapter Twenty One - Show and Tell

I think they both need to do some honest talking and as Bella and Edward. What Edward has going for him is that Aro said that the ink was new. For people who want people to mind their own business, this community are very gossipy and back biting. They seem very cruel to each other.



Author's Response:

Some serious talking needs to be done with Edward and Bella, and as for Aro, he honestly didn't think much of the tattoo, but he was unapologetic about it as well. Like most places, regardless of circumstances, people are going to be people. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Doll. See you  next update ;-) xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter Twenty One - Show and Tell

Okay, so if my memory serves me correct, you sent me a teaser about Christmas dinner and him being snippy with Alice.  Okay, so you tease me then leave it out of the chapter.  Very clever my dear!  Lol!  I am so unhappy with Victoria´s presence right now!  Argggggh!!! Can´t poor subward catch a break?  Damn, poor boy is catching hell on all sides.  I just hope that Bella let´s him explain.  I´ll being over in the corner, gnawing on my fingernails until the next update!! Lol! Amazing chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hey, Krazi!!

thanks for reading and revieing and your outstanding support. Sorry to tease you like that, but I wanted to give you something. Christmas is right around the corner and depending on how the next chapter goes, we'll see if our fave Domne makes a unexpected appearance. much love. Xoxo 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter Twenty One - Show and Tell

well thats not good im excited to see what happens next 



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter Twenty - The Devil Is In The Details

I think Edward should tell Rose to move out of his apartment. She has some nerve trying to blackmail him. He should just tell the truth and not let her have the upper hand. Rose is evil and I would not let her have the power over me. Edward should probably ask Bella advise on this matter.



Author's Response:

Edward is making Rose believe that she has the upper hand because all he's doing is trying to buy himself some time. The last thing he wants to do is bow down to her. That is why he said that honesty wasn't part of their deal. I'm sure if Rose lived at his apartment he would've kicked her out. It sucks that she is trying to blackmail him so she can get her way, but she isn't really thinking about Edward or Bella.

Thanks for the review, Hun!!! You rock and make me smile!!!

 

Much Love,

K

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter Twenty - The Devil Is In The Details

Rose is a royal Bi'Ch!  I'm glad E and getting to go out with B on a normal outing.  I hope things works out for his parents sake.  



Author's Response:

I agree about Rose and I sooooo want Bella to meet the parents. I mean, even though she isn't his girlfriend...yet ;) I personally believe that Edward shouldn't have to tell anyone about his sexual perference and lifestyle. If it's making him a better person, what's the harm?..Only if I control this world...um, wait. LMAO!

Thanks for the reviews, Hun!!

~K

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter Twenty - The Devil Is In The Details

well i think shes falling for him too ! 



Author's Response:

*whispers* I do too ;)

Thanks for the review!!!

~K

Reviewer: twifam1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter Twenty - The Devil Is In The Details

Loved the chapter and I hope Edward and Bella will be able to talk and clear Edward with his friends some'. I mean how hard would it be for her to be Edwards girl for a few hours?



Author's Response:

Exactly! I mean, no harm no foul, right? As long as Edward gets his head together and figure out the Rose situation, I think things will simmer down...hopefully ;)

Thanks for the review, Hun!!!

~K

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2011 3:52 PM Title: Chapter Twenty - The Devil Is In The Details

Yeah, I wanted to smack Rose in the face, she was being a real bitch!  If she was interested in getting into the lifestyle I could understand a bit more, but just to find out if it was one of her subjects... that was so not cool!

I don´t know if you originally planned it that way, but I love how you made the prologue a dream sequence and not reality.  I love that Bella was in bed with him while he was dreaming of her.

I so can´t wait to see where she´s taking him! Hopefully, there´s a teaser somewhere on the horizon!! hint hint! Lol! Great chapter!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

KRAZI!!

Hey Hun!!! I really, really tried making Rose likeable, but I am a bit biased...just a tad. So, I can't say I fought to hard for her. As for the prologue, yes, I have been planning to make it a dream sequence, I just didn't know where it would ever fit in.

I don't have a teaser for the next chapter, but I do have a peek into the xmas future. You ready? LOL

“Alice, I swear, you don’t need to wait on me. You’re the boy’s nanny, not the fucking maid,” I groaned exasperated.

The little pixie looked up at like I a wounded bird, and I instantly regretted my statement. But fuck, ever since I arrived, she been asking to get me this and get me that, and I wasn’t used to being waited on.

It was driving me up the fucking wall.

“I’m sorry, Mr. Cullen,” Alice said quickly.

She adverted her eyes from mine, bowing her head in a submissive manner, and I panicked. In that simple gesture, she made me feel like the Dominant, and it was the oddest fucking feeling.

 I rushed to correct it.

“Hey, none of that Mr. Cullen bullshit, okay? Call me Edward.”

She nodded as she placed my soda in front of me. The silence grew between us, and I felt like such a fucking dick. All Alice was trying to do was make me feel comfortable and I snapped at her. It wasn’t her fault that I was mentally fucked up and couldn’t handle the idea of somebody submitting to me. My thought process was so twisted anymore, and I knew that shit was going to get worse. How the hell was I expected to act around my parents? How long did I expect to keep my newly acquired lifestyle a secret?

Was I fucking capable of that?

Much love xxxoooxxx

~K

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