Date: 19 Apr 2018 5:01 AM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic
The best Edward enternal dialog, and the best freaking Emmeet. Aswesome So well written. I would not have reviewed this mush on completed fic if it didn't move me in some way. This one hit my funny bone. Thanks for writing.
Date: 02 Apr 2016 10:31 PM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy
So sorry about reviewing I read in reader view on my iPad and it doesn't give a review option all the time. Anyway, I think Edward's inner voice is the shiz for real! This is so funny and often so sweet in their cray.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:20 AM Title: The Epilogue
this type of story isnt my thing as a rule but i really enjoyed this some of the others ive read on another site are borderline abuse and offensive but yours is gentler and different and i want to thank u for it
Date: 30 May 2011 11:49 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion
they had sex in the grotto! would have been way better if she wasn't 30 weeks but hey gotta get it in where you can! first time i had sex in a car was the night before my son was born! backseat of a sunbird is seriously not very big!! heehee
Date: 30 May 2011 11:31 PM Title: Ch 17 Jasper is my Hero
i do love your em! he is dreamy and childlike and sexy and yummy!
things are moving forward but she still hasn't said yes! i wonder how the meeting of the families will go? i sure hope eddie's mom and dad never watched a little of charlie's work over the years....
Date: 30 May 2011 10:28 PM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy
ok who saw that coming? everyone but bella and eddie? yup that's what i thought. eddie better man the fuck up and start saying how happy he is so bella doesn't feel bad about this! i mean come on... it's a baby! YAY!!!!!
Date: 01 Jan 2011 4:42 AM Title: The Epilogue
wow .. just finished reading ur fic .. absolutely brilliant ... loved the snarky humour, the storyline and how u made each character come to life .. the nudist colony and edward's 'thoughts' were hilarious not to take away from the relationship edward and emmett share
cant wait to read another of ur fics
thanx for sharing
Date: 18 Dec 2010 4:40 AM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic
I absolutely ADORED the proposal!! What a fabulous touch. Sweet, romantic and just PERFECT.
And the notion Edward should have two rings, well that created a pretty awesome image too.
Thank you for creating this superb gem. I shall miss visiting these two.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 12:01 PM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic
What a wonderful ending!!
I do feel for Bella & her labor though!!! WOW - what 14 hrs or so... poor girl :(
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story & can't wait for more from you soon!!!
Thanks for the story.
Have a great Christmas & New Year with your family...
Date: 05 Dec 2010 5:23 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion
That was a great story to come across. So glad I found it here. It made me laugh and cry and laugh somemore.. Can't wait for the update.
thanks so much for reading!!! so happy to hear I made you laugh!! I giggle a lot writing it
Date: 03 Dec 2010 3:29 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion
Lol! This was a great chapter! Esme and Carlisle finding out about Charlie and Bella was priceless! Great chapter!
FYI! I voted for Play With Me for the Avant Garde awards; good luck!!
Date: 27 Nov 2010 4:38 AM Title: Ch 9 Can I Get an Amen?
wtf is a goat?
If you've never seen the movie Waiting with Ryan Reynolds DO IT, The Goat was introduced to me by that movie. Basically, The Goat is when a guy tucks his dick and balls between his legs and bedns over, showing you the goods from behind. This can only be done if the guy is above average in the size department. I have seen The Goat in real life, it's not pretty. Thanks so much for reading <3