[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:35 PM Title: Ch 17 Jasper is my Hero
LOVED IT!
Date: 20 Nov 2010 4:11 PM Title: Ch 17 Jasper is my Hero
Ha Ha What could go wrong? Edward really doesn't have a clue does he. That was totally hillarious when the baby kicked his arm during the sex. I almost fell off my chair when he whispered wondering if the baby knew what they were doing.
Waiting Patiently Impatiently,
OH MIA MYA
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:29 PM Title: Ch 17 Jasper is my Hero
Loved it awesome can't wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 20 Nov 2010 6:46 AM Title: Ch 17 Jasper is my Hero
we will see how Bella loves her natural delivery! What a psycho!
Date: 20 Nov 2010 6:40 AM Title: Ch 17 Jasper is my Hero
woo hoo its a boy
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2010 10:57 AM Title: Ch 16 Sea Monkey
Ohhh, will they get back to the playroom soon, I am loving the fact that Bella keeps saying no.
Loved the chapter, it was fantastic.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
you're one of the few who likes that she keeps saying no, it's a little play on Bella's constant no's in the Twilight series :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2010 2:37 AM Title: Ch 16 Sea Monkey
ok.. I get it... and I trust you... so i´ll be patient.. I promise... a ¨sea monkey¨.. really Edward... lol... as always.. Emmett cracks me up!!! Great Chapter
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
thanks so much for reading <3
Date: 08 Nov 2010 1:00 AM Title: Ch 16 Sea Monkey
Loved it amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 07 Nov 2010 5:57 PM Title: Ch 16 Sea Monkey
awww sweet chapter
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2010 5:44 PM Title: Ch 16 Sea Monkey
Ok, it is a viable reason for her to say no, but I still think she shouldn't care what others think and marry him. I understand of she wants to wait till after the baby so she doesn't look like a float in the Macy's parade, but she could at least say yes.
I loved the scene with the ultrasound. It is sweet how emo Edward gets over all this.
Date: 04 Nov 2010 8:00 AM Title: Ch 8 Is My Toilet Clean?
pool party
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 9:52 AM Title: Ch 15 Eager Beaver
What a wonderful surprise he kept from Bella :)
What a man!!!! I wouldn't kick him out of bed if he ... !!!! LOL
What a gorgeous family they both have.... atleast they weren't naked again :)
But how on earth can you leave me in a cliffie like this???
I have read this story over the past 2 days when I could... in between cooking breakfast, lunch & dinners, taking kids to school, picking them up, house worke went out the window even... etc etc...
So now I get this.... why oh why isn't there another chapter to read...
Of all chapters to read too & then nothing... absolutely nothing :(
PLEASE update soon!!!
T2M x
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for all the wonderful reviews!!! I will try to update soon, hopefully within the next couple of days :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 9:42 AM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy
The very first line of this chapter had me laughing again...
"I was convinced I had broke Bella!!!"
How brilliant is that line.... hysterical :)
Baby on the way - WOOHOO.... normally I don't like babies in these E/B stories but I'm just lovin' this story SO much.. can't wait til he has to tell Charlie!!!! haha....
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 9:40 AM Title: Ch 13 Things That Go Hump in the Night
Ahhh - change of play... nice switch :)
Edward really didn't want to do it though.... interesting!
Funny - she has the dreams of Edwards words... wonder if he'll fill her in at all?
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 9:38 AM Title: Ch 12 Happy Birthday Baby: Part II
Wonderful party - chucking up & all :)
Holding her hair back - now that's love!!!! hehe
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 9:37 AM Title: Ch 11 Happy Birthday Baby: Part I
I nearly died laughing reading this chapter - extremely funny!!!!
I need tissues from all the tears running down my face... I'm laughing that hard :)
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 9:36 AM Title: OT Bella's Interview
That was just great - getting a little bit inside Bella's head :)
Thanks for that!
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 3:47 AM Title: Ch 10 I Have the Best Girlfriend EVER!
Another fantastic chapter -
Playboy mansion to I love you to visiting Daddy dearest in a nudist colony!!!!
HAHA :)
Brilliant just brilliant!!!
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 3:28 AM Title: Ch 9 Can I Get an Amen?
What a brilliant chapter - I know I'm saying this everytime but I just love this story...
Also - WOOHOO!!! Love their new contract :)
Happy days!!!
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 1:52 AM Title: Ch 8 Is My Toilet Clean?
Awwww.... THey're finally realising what's going on between them?!?
I so hope so :)
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 1:29 AM Title: Ch 7 The Happiest Place on Earth
That was one of the hottest chapters I've read in a long time!!!
Gotta love those citrusy lemons :)
T2M x
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!! <3
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 1:17 PM Title: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine
Oops - the "L" word said & in reality Edward means it I'm sure....
Bella does too but they are both too afraid to say it just yet - it's only been just over a week!!!!
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 12:54 PM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
Finally Edward got some.... hehe
She's falling for him BIG TIME!!!!
Oh dear... I just hope it's a good thing :)
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 12:31 PM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
Awww - Bella is totally freaked out by Edward - COOL!!!
OH I just love this story - I know I've told you that already but... geez, it's good :)
Love it, love it, love it!!!!
T2M x
Date: 31 Oct 2010 12:24 PM Title: Ch 15 Eager Beaver
Loved it but she said no OMG OMG!!! poor Edward can't wait for the nxt chapter
Author's Response:
thanks so much for reading!!! I have a plan, no worries :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 12:11 PM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game
How hot was that.... poor Edward blue balls - haha!!!!
I screaming with laughter right now :)
Loving this Bella SO MUCH!!!!!
T2M x
Date: 31 Oct 2010 12:00 PM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy
Loved it amazing I guessed she was pregnant when she started throwing up again lol so awesome
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 11:12 AM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin
OMG - what an awesome change to read this - I have always read about Domward not Domella!!!!
Awesome chapter :)
T2M x
Date: 31 Oct 2010 9:07 AM Title: Ch 13 Things That Go Hump in the Night
Loved it he is such a sweetheart I hope he proposes soon amazing
Date: 31 Oct 2010 8:45 AM Title: Ch 12 Happy Birthday Baby: Part II
Loved it amazing & sweet
Date: 31 Oct 2010 8:24 AM Title: Ch 11 Happy Birthday Baby: Part I
Loved it & trust Emmett to do something like that awesome
Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:58 AM Title: OT Bella's Interview
Awesome nice to know wat going through Bellas head
Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:46 AM Title: Ch 10 I Have the Best Girlfriend EVER!
Loved it amazing nudist colony nice touch
Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:21 AM Title: Ch 9 Can I Get an Amen?
Loved it awesome & hot
Date: 31 Oct 2010 6:19 AM Title: Ch 8 Is My Toilet Clean?
Loved it amazing & hot
Date: 31 Oct 2010 5:38 AM Title: Ch 7 The Happiest Place on Earth
Loved it amazing & freaking hilarious
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 11:50 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
I haven't laughed so hard for a first chapter for so long in a story - that was just brilliant!
Was recommended to this story & glad I decided to read it :)
Bring on more....
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 7:25 PM Title: Ch 15 Eager Beaver
WHAT??? Why would she not marry him?
FYI...Love the family!
Author's Response:
She has her reasons :) how can you not love the Cullens... thanks so much for reading <3
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 7:00 PM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy
It was pretty easy to see where this one was going with the title. I hope Edward takes the news ok.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 6:47 PM Title: Ch 13 Things That Go Hump in the Night
Amazing chapter! Loved the costumes, but loved the playroom more. It was incredibly trusting and hot as hell to have Bella switch with Edward.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 6:25 PM Title: Ch 12 Happy Birthday Baby: Part II
Mmmm, the playroom. Can't wait.
I love the bracelet he gave her. It was very sweet. So, Edward would marry her tomorrow, huh? I wonder if he really meant it?
Excellent chapter. As always, Emmett was too funny for words.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:57 PM Title: Ch 11 Happy Birthday Baby: Part I
OMG!!! Emmett has me PMSL!!! That was hilareous!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:48 PM Title: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine
Loved it awesome but I get the feeling they are falling for each other
Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:23 PM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
Loved it amazing
Date: 30 Oct 2010 2:53 PM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
Loved it amazing
Date: 30 Oct 2010 2:30 PM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game
Loved it awesome hot & funny
Date: 30 Oct 2010 2:05 PM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin
Loved it when he got pierced I was laughing so hard hilarious amazing
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 1:54 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
WOW!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 9:55 AM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
Loved it very interesting subward is interesting
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:59 AM Title: OT Bella's Interview
I can not believe she made him get the peen bling as a test!!! That is just mean. LOL Fuck hot, but mean. ;)
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 11:01 PM Title: Ch 10 I Have the Best Girlfriend EVER!
Freakin loved it!!! Charlie was a porn star?!? That is awesome!!! After all, he does have the mustach for it. ;)
This was a fun chapter and I am so glad that they finally said the "L" word. Very cool!
Author's Response:
all i see is porn when i look at Bill Burke with the Charlie stache... this was a must!!! thanks so much for reading <3
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 11:32 AM Title: Ch 15 Eager Beaver
OH, poor Edward, I really do hope Bella says yes, but I can understand why she would not. She might think he is only proposing because she is preggers.
On another note, I am pimping your story out this week in People Like Us, I hope you do not mind. I think it is a wonderful story and more people need to read it.
Author's Response:
I'm flattered that you think it's good enough to pimp, so please... pimp your little heart out!! thanks so much for reading <3
Date: 27 Oct 2010 12:28 AM Title: Ch 15 Eager Beaver
oh my goodness... I can't believe that Bella may say no....they are going to have a baby and they love each other....
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry :) I have a plan if that helps :) thanks so much for reading <3
Date: 26 Oct 2010 10:16 PM Title: Ch 15 Eager Beaver
Sorry. Sorry?? She's not suppose to say 'Sorry'. WTF?? Sorry isn't what our boy needs to hear. How is it she isn't really upset about having his baby but keeps blowing off the idea of marrying him? He loves her. She is his world. She and the teeny baby growing in her.
Bella, marry that man! Is it because of how they met? Is this about her job? Why, why, why??? (sorry for the whiny rant)
Author's Response:
LMAO, I love your little rant... no worries :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2010 8:29 PM Title: Ch 15 Eager Beaver
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN´T BELIEVE YOU JUST DID THAT..... THANKS FOR NOT FORGETTING TO UPDATE FOR US TOOO... YEAH, DIDN´T SEE THAT CLIFFIE COMING... IT WAS A LOW BLOW I TELL YA... BUT NEVER THE LESS IT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER... LOVE LITTLE RILEY... AND THE CULLENS WERE AMAZING AS USUAL... BUT HOW LONG WILL YOU MAKE US SUFFER....HOPEFLLY NOT TOO LONG... SEE YA SOOO!!!*WINKS*
KRAZI
XOXO
Author's Response:
Whoa shouty caps and !!!!!!'s... sorry, I have a plan, promise... and Yay for me for remembering!!! I put TWCS nect to my FFn link so that I can't forget LOL
Date: 26 Oct 2010 8:12 PM Title: Ch 15 Eager Beaver
Please tell me the heartfail isn't permanent...
Author's Response:
how do you know that there will be heartfail? LOL thanks so much for reading <3
Date: 26 Oct 2010 7:53 PM Title: Ch 15 Eager Beaver
Pure evil, leaving us hanging like that! ;-)
Looking forward to the next chapter.
IMO: There's no need to marry just because of a kid on the way. However maybe Bella has other motives for her reaction at first (at least in the bathroom, as we don't know her answer for sure yet). She's not already or still married to someone else, is she?
Date: 26 Oct 2010 6:48 PM Title: Ch 15 Eager Beaver
hmm wonder what the sorry is for.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:36 PM Title: Ch 11 Happy Birthday Baby: Part I
Okay, so I just looked at your dad's dick and your moms tits. I cannot stop laughing....
Author's Response:
I don't laugh while I write but I always giggle a little when I proof it... I think it's more of a "what the fuck am I thinking?" kind of laugh though LOL thanks so much for reading
Date: 24 Oct 2010 8:39 PM Title: Ch 11 Happy Birthday Baby: Part I
okay your interpretation of Emmett's character is hilarious :0). I love love love this story
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!!! <3
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 2:33 AM Title: Ch 9 Can I Get an Amen?
Loved the pool party! I knew Emmett and Jasper would stumble across B&E's little recording. That was too funny. But nothing was funnier than everyone's reaction to Edward's peen bling. That was fucking hilarious! Oh, and I love the knew contract. ;)
Author's Response:
I just lol'd hard at the 'peen bling' I love that!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 1:18 AM Title: Ch 8 Is My Toilet Clean?
They are totally falling in love and I love it!!! The recorded piano sex is fucking hot!!!
Author's Response:
thanks so much for reading!!! <3
Date: 22 Oct 2010 10:47 PM Title: Ch 7 The Happiest Place on Earth
I want to go to Disneyland too!!! But only with Edward. LOL. That was hot! And funny as hell.
Author's Response:
Agreed!!! But Em would have to come too!!!
Date: 22 Oct 2010 8:16 PM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy
What a hot and funny story.. I love it. I really love that Charlie and Renee and all about being naked... to funny. And you make me laugh with Emmett. I hope that Edward makes a honest woman out of Bella...
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the great review!!! Em is my favorite to write because I can get away with just about anything with him :)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 7:40 PM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy
well duh antibiotics and birth control dont mix......doctors should really mention it more than they do
Author's Response:
you'd be surprised how many people don't know that off hand :)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 7:36 PM Title: Ch 13 Things That Go Hump in the Night
ugh must be catching the flu.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 7:28 PM Title: Ch 12 Happy Birthday Baby: Part II
awww eddie's got it bad
Date: 21 Oct 2010 7:21 PM Title: Ch 11 Happy Birthday Baby: Part I
awwww Em is such a big kid
Author's Response:
Em is a giant kid and that's why we love him!!! thanks so much for reading!!
Date: 21 Oct 2010 6:58 PM Title: OT Bella's Interview
interesting.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 6:54 PM Title: Ch 10 I Have the Best Girlfriend EVER!
oh god....charlie as a porn star and lives in a nudist colony???
Date: 21 Oct 2010 6:47 PM Title: Ch 9 Can I Get an Amen?
interesting new contract
Date: 21 Oct 2010 6:37 PM Title: Ch 8 Is My Toilet Clean?
hmmm yummy piano sex
Date: 21 Oct 2010 6:30 PM Title: Ch 7 The Happiest Place on Earth
ROFL kicked out of disney
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:22 PM Title: OT Bella's Interview
this was awesome... and very entertaining... lol... It was nice to get a real take on Bella´s feelings... I really like this Bella alot... Great interview... hope to see more, maybe with both of them!!!
krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
thanks so much for all the sweet reviews!!! sorry that i made you wait so long for updates :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 4:17 AM Title: Ch 10 I Have the Best Girlfriend EVER!
Hahaha!!! you have officially killed me with the fact that Charlie is a retired porn star and he and Renee live on a nudist colony... that was sooooo funny.... I can now stop holding my breathe the I love you´s have been said..... yippieeeeee!!!! I can´t wait to the meet the Swans... this should be extremely interesting... great chapter!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 2:52 AM Title: Ch 9 Can I Get an Amen?
That was pretry hot... I knew when he told Emmett to put on some music the hot piano sex would make an appearance... the new contract was super sweet and made me go awwwww.. all that was missing was circle yes or no...lol... Em was a riot as usual.. and Rose in heels all the time... is there really any other way for Miss Hale to travel.... I mean really...lol... great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:50 AM Title: Ch 8 Is My Toilet Clean?
yeah!!! I´m bouncing up and down like a fool... Bella is letting down her gaurd!!! woo hooolll something more!! i like the sound of that,,,, great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:09 AM Title: Ch 7 The Happiest Place on Earth
I will never see Disneyland the same... lol.... great chapter... thanks for the update.. looks like Christmas came early!!!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:47 AM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy
thanks awsome chapters
Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:11 AM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy
yea i kinda figured after she was getting sick cause of the turkey after getting over being sick. suprising how meny women dont know that if you take antibiotics it pretty much cancels out birth control pills. (meat made me sick with my youngest durring first trimester lol)
Author's Response:
You'd be surprised how often women don't know that LOL thanks so much for reading <3
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:04 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
I'm surprised that Edward didn't have a comeback there..He's nothing like a regular Edward, I didn't see much posessiveness there except his feeling about punching Jake that one time. I don't know if he'd be willing to sit around for 4 weeks while knowing that Bella is still doing Jake while his dick healed...
Date: 25 Aug 2010 9:07 PM Title: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine
awesome
Date: 25 Aug 2010 6:30 PM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
loving it
Date: 25 Aug 2010 6:08 PM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
great job
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:51 PM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game
blue balls galore huh
Date: 25 Aug 2010 12:37 PM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin
lol
Date: 25 Aug 2010 12:02 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
hot stuff
Date: 07 Aug 2010 11:34 AM Title: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine
Bella doesn't seem like a very serious Dom, she is too lenient.
Date: 03 Aug 2010 9:21 AM Title: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine
They are perfet together yah like no one is falling in love lol
Date: 03 Aug 2010 9:21 AM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
Sounds like Bella has more feelings than she wants but fuck that was hot
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2010 6:07 PM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
Awe...confused love...It's a great story. Keep writing...The only thing i would add would be some 'aftercare' when they are done a scene in the playroom. look up this link...it's a quick read and gives you a little advice :)
http://en.academic.ru/dic.nsf/enwik/505410
Author's Response:
The whole point of not having aftercare is because Bella ran out of the room... she kinda lost her way with Edward, not following her own rules really... keep reading she'll explain :)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 1:16 AM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
I dont think he wants to piss her off but I am sure it would be fun
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:35 AM Title: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine
holy crow! that was awesome! edward finally got his! thank you for that. and the movie idea was great. edward's little slip was very sweet. love this story! keep it up!
Date: 23 Jul 2010 8:53 AM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game
she has him were she wants him lol
Date: 23 Jul 2010 6:48 AM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
I love me some subward and dom Bella is just fuck hot. I would love to be a women with that kind of confedence in myself.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 3:47 AM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin
WOW! Thats all i can say....
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 3:44 AM Title: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine
That was an amazing chapter! The way it started left me wondering if Bella was going to try and push him away. When she removed his collar I swear I stopped breathing. The whole thing was very, very hot!
Date: 22 Jul 2010 10:54 PM Title: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine
Looks like Bella is starting to develope feelings for Edward and will still the Dom/Sub thing for awhile longer, or until she fiqures this out. Ditto of Edward as well.
Nice chappy.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2010 10:02 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
Woo-hoo...That was sexy :)
Date: 22 Jul 2010 9:45 PM Title: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine
It seems Bella has lost control of the arrangement, but she isn't too against it, and neither is Edward.
They were too fast and up front in saying they don't love each other, but they never denaied to having feelings. They just don't know how to explain them.
What will they do now? They'll probably have to figure out something.