Date: 16 Jul 2010 11:23 AM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
This is good cant wait to see what she is going to say to him
Date: 16 Jul 2010 6:04 AM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
I'm not sure exactly where your going with the story, but it appears that Edward is unwinding Bella and she is so unnerved by it, and she doesn't know what the heck to do.
Is it possible that she is developing feelings for Edward and she just doesn't know what to do about it???
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:58 PM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
thanks awsome chapter
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:16 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
hmmm interesting so far
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:10 PM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
Last week-end wasn't what was expected or supposed to happen. Both of them have different conclusions about it. Edward is clueless and wondering, so he tried to be smart again, something that didn't turn to his advantage.
Bella is acting strange, there's something that is bothering her, and Edward has no clue as to what to do or how to act. He wants more with her and is trying, will he be able to?
What does Bella want to talk about.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 6:13 PM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
very good chapter! loved the fun, sexy times. can't wait to see what bella has on her mind! keep up the great work! ;)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2010 3:53 PM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
Oh I love this story! I'm really enjoying it from only EPOV too. Thank you and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2010 1:25 PM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
Is it wrong to say his punishment was hot? I'm sorry but a naked Edward getting paddled is fucking hot! Thier scene in the playroom was awesome too.
I feel bad for Bella because she obviously has feelings for Edward, but doesn't know what to do with them.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:17 AM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game
I don't think I've laughed as hard reading a fic than I have reading only three chapters of yours. This is great!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 6:26 AM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
"When a hot chick tells you to get naked, you get fucking naked"
Best line of the chapter.
This is a great story so far!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 5:41 AM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
loved it
Date: 15 Jul 2010 5:04 AM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella
Well this could be good for Edward if she admits she wants him for more than just a sub. Or this could be bad if she decides to cut him loose because she can't face what she feels.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:03 AM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
So... I'm guessing you've just answered my question, we have no Bella'sPOV. Just what will get passed on. We know very little about her. She didn't share much and her house didn't show much either.
Can it be that Edward got to her? She definitely got to him. What will go on next week-end?
Author's Response:
You'll get more Bella info in the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2010 11:46 PM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game
He knew he was going to get himself in some trouble, and I guess that the uncertainty of what kind of trouble was part of the thrill. He never considered he would like this, but he is enjoying himself. A lot.
Will we get to hear from Bella in this story?
Author's Response:
If I do any BellaPOV it would be in outtakes, I planned this story to be all EdwardPOV because I like the idea of the readers not knowing what Bella is thinking or the reason behind her reactions until Edward does :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2010 11:29 PM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin
I'm liking the comments Edward makes, he can be funny and find the joke in things, even what he went through for someone he just had met.
It is a different kind of agreement, Bella seems to take things light and easy, I like it. And can't wait for breakfast.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 10:49 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
I like the idea of this story. A very confident Bella an also confident Edward, who seems to not think he can get into this. And after what she asked for....
Date: 12 Jul 2010 8:20 PM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
nice! go get her edward! lol! I would love to see Bella's PVO tho!!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:03 AM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
I thought the cheesecake and dining table scene was funny... especially when Maria came in.
Oh, and I so guess the cameras being there...LOL...maybe he might even like that?? Who know's except that he can't masturbate or it will piss her off.
Nice that he drove her to LAX, and that he kissed her goodbye and all...he is wearing her down.
Whoa, sounds like Edward is worming his way into her heart there. She is confessing shit to Rose, and buying lingerie...this is what woman do when they like someone, and they want to impress them. I bet this is making Edward cocky as hell.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 3:37 AM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game
Edward seemed to like his first ass whipping....Hmmmm....wonder what was going through his mind as that was happening.
I liked their banter at breakfast...yes he seems a little of a smart ass, but with humor and wit.
No self play, and she know? Does she have camera's up in the house there and watch him??? Now I"m very curious about this.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 3:06 AM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
ooohhh, bella's getting flustered! awesome! can't wait for the update! ;)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:43 AM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin
So Edward actually goes and gets his dick pierced, and now seems to like it?! I love how he asked Emmett to go to the tatoo shop with him and hold his hand...LOL.
Well in this chappy your just being a tease to us, so I'll wait and see what happens in the next chapter.
See you for breakfast...okay then...we'll see how that goes for Edward and Bella.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 1:58 AM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
Well so far I'm digging this first chappy. Seeing how I love Dom/Sub stories and have tinkered with the stuff...it is a very good start.
Emmett as a Sub....too friggin funny...that is really hard to picture, but I can def see Rose as a Dom!! She has that personality for sure.
Bella seems very Dominant and kick ass...the piercing request would be a little something to think about...*LOL** I love plain ole' Edward...I'd take him anyday! I'm curious to see what he is going to decide.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 8:12 PM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game
i love mistress cock tease!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:55 PM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin
very sexy!!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 2:49 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
this story sounds really good! i'm glad it was rec'd on RAoR. i'll definitely keep reading.... i love it when bella takes control ::wink::
Author's Response:
It was rec'd on a site????? WOW, that's pretty WIN!!! thanks so much for reading!!!!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 1:46 PM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
cant wait till the next one
Date: 11 Jul 2010 1:24 PM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
Really enjoying this!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:42 PM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
I am really liking this story. I kind of figured that Edward was getting under Bella's skin; he's so spontaneous and just does things spur of the moment, which obviously Bella never does, but I'm thinking that this is exactly what she needs. As much as she likes to be in control of Edward, I think she likes the fact that he will up and turn the tables on her at any given time.
Author's Response:
:) I couldn't agree more, thanks so much for reading
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:23 AM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
I swear this Edward is bi-polar. He seems to go from Bella's bitch to cocky ass in not time at all.
I'd like to seem him do a little begginf before Bella gives him what he really wants. She needs to make him see who is in charge here.
Author's Response:
My poor Edward is confused... give him some time to find his place in this situation :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:11 AM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On
wow good chapter thanks
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 3:48 AM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game
I am loving Mistress Cock Tease!!! I was a little leary in the past chapter when she let him get away with mouthing off. I am glad to see she didn't miss a thing!
Author's Response:
No worries, Bella is all knowing and all seeing, it's more when and where she uses her knowledge LOL
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 3:20 AM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin
This chapter started off funny and ended up frustrating. I can't believe she didn't finish what she started. Ugh!
My favorite line was, "I think I scared him so much he went into a cock coma or something." A cock coma? Seriously? Where do you come up with this shit?
Author's Response:
I have no clue... honestly, its how I think on a daily basis LOL
Sorry for the frustration!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 2:08 AM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
Holy shit! That is one hell of an addition to ask of a perfect stranger! I have to say that I think I may love your friends who begged you to write this. Please give them my thanks. ;)
Author's Response:
I'll let her know!!! thanks so much for reading <3
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 1:32 AM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin
thanks good story
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 11:58 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?
Loved Domella, piercing or no piercing is the question!
Author's Response:
it's chapter one, we all know what he's going to do! OUCH!! LOL