Date: 03 Mar 2021 3:22 AM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
A lovely story and its ending, but sad to hear that Esme and Carlisle have both passed away. Thank you for writing
Date: 28 Apr 2017 2:32 PM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
Sweetest story
Date: 28 Apr 2017 2:31 PM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
Sweetest story
Date: 21 Sep 2015 11:20 PM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
i think this is the first ww2 fanfiction i have read and let me say brava! it was brilliant. i know a little bit about what happened then from my grandparents. living here in alaska things were a little easier to deal with as my grandmother found a job out of high school and met my grandfather. i cant even imagine how it was to be alive during those times. thank you for making it like a movie for me.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 1:33 AM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
awesome little story ;) thanks so much for posting it on here ;D
Date: 10 Feb 2015 12:56 AM Title: The Perfect Beginning
awesome start ;) i loved how he is 'uncut' ;D
Date: 06 Feb 2015 6:00 PM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
I loved this story. Good read!
Date: 19 Sep 2014 4:41 PM Title: Chaotic Days and Lonely Nights
I just found your story the other day & started reading it. I don't review often, but have to say I am loving this story. Also, I love that Edward's ship is the USS Ranger. My dad was in the Navy during Vietnam and was stationed on the Ranger. Brings a smile to my face. :)
Date: 29 Apr 2014 5:49 PM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
Enjoyed this story!!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:01 PM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
:) loved this story
Date: 22 Sep 2012 12:24 AM Title: The Eyes of A Soulless Man
:)
Date: 21 Sep 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chaotic Days and Lonely Nights
:)
Date: 21 Sep 2012 3:03 PM Title: Shaking Off The Dust and Looking To The Future
:)
Date: 28 Jun 2012 10:47 PM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
Loved this story!!!!
Date: 01 May 2012 2:16 AM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
Really enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 30 Jan 2012 9:04 PM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
Loved this story as well!
Date: 30 Jan 2012 2:21 PM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
O my gosh! Wow! Two awful, awful James in your story! Lol!!!
Date: 01 Jan 2012 10:51 PM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
Loved the story! Great job. I prefer ff.net over twcs, but I love how you can add pictures in the story, as opposed to adding links.
Date: 01 Jan 2012 8:58 AM Title: Savoring Every Moment
You definitely captured the emotions. I have been there... It's one of the worst things I've ever had to do.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 10:58 PM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
What a neat and precious tale. I am a bit sad here to see that Esne and Carlisle were stolen away much too soon. This story was so well-written and done in a way that transports the reader back in time.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 8:43 PM Title: Evil Brown Envelopes
The slow communication and the lack of technology that we take for granted today, must have truly made lives miserable during this time. You have done a great job of staying with the historical period here. Cigarette advertisements in women's magazines promised benefits to digestive health with smoking! I have a few of those old magazines in my collection and they are a hoot to read. LOL.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 8:10 PM Title: Welcome Baby Cullen!
Great chapter!! And I was surprised at the baby's sex.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 4:52 PM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
Love it when the bad boys get their comeuppance! Can't wait to see what's next in store!
Date: 21 Nov 2011 3:42 PM Title: The New VIP
This story rocks. You have a great story plot going here and I am just reading away to find out what happens next. Kind of like a good cheesy movie-- I absolutely can not pass one of those up. This story is adorable.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 1:49 PM Title: Savoring Every Moment
I have cried so much since the beginning of this story and have used a whole box of tissue and started on my 2nd box...
Date: 27 Dec 2010 9:21 AM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
I am sad to see this story go but it was a wonderful story!
Date: 27 Dec 2010 9:00 AM Title: It All Comes Together
It is great that Emmett and Jasper came home safe too and that they are all staying in Chicago.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 8:52 AM Title: A Clean Start
Aww... Kids amaze me every day! At least I know that mine does!!
Date: 27 Dec 2010 8:33 AM Title: The Foreign Familiar
That had to be hard for Edward. To see your child and she doesn't even know who he is I really hope that Cherie bonds with Edward.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 8:14 AM Title: Birthday Party
While it is sad that Edward missed the first year of his daughters life it is good that he is going to be home soon and will get to see her.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 8:04 AM Title: Safe
YEA!!! I am really glad that Edward is going to come home even if it is because he got hurt.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 7:54 AM Title: The Mysteries of Time
I guess that they need to take more truth to Bella's dreams than they have been. I really hope that Edward gets home to meet his little girl.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 7:39 AM Title: Evil Brown Envelopes
I was scared there for a minuet because I thought that something was wrong with Edward. I am glad that it was just a telegram wishing her a happy anniversary!
Date: 27 Dec 2010 7:25 AM Title: Back Home
I really hope that Bella's dreams about Edward being a POW aren't real because then he may never get a chance to meet his little girl.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 7:15 AM Title: Welcome Baby Cullen!
I want to strangle that nurse. I had a nurse that I had to have removed and couldn't come back into my room after a car accident because she wouldn't listen to me that she was hurting me and my family could hear me telling her to stop what she was doing outside. I hope that this news reaches Edward soon.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 7:00 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
Aww.. The baby is here!!! It is exciting that the next letter that Edward will get from her will probally include a picture of his daughter or son in it.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 6:46 AM Title: United Front
It is kinna scary that Bella is having dreams like that about Edward and something is telling me that they are dead on in what he is dealing with.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 6:36 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
Wow I guess that Aro and his brother are stupid. Sending someone to attack the one person who can bury them was a stupid move which I am sure that they will pay dearly for and I bet they should be glad that Edward isn't home to deal with them.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 6:24 AM Title: Transitions
It is so sweet that Edward wants to honor the people that he was close to that have passed. I wonder if any of their names will be used.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 6:04 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
I have seen that house and it is beautiful to see! I don't think that is the last of Aro that we have seen but hopefully he has learned not to mess with one Isabella Cullen.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:36 AM Title: The New VIP
Oh I can't wait for this meeting it is sure to be an amusing one because I am thinking that Aro is going to try to throw weight around that he doesn't have anymore.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:27 AM Title: Blessed Revelations
I am glad that everything is in motion and I can't wait to see how Aro deals with this because I am thinking that he isn't going to be real happy about this.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:16 AM Title: Crucial Correspondence
Lets hope that the Admiral is understanding and that he allows Edward to send word to Bella. I can't wait until he reads the other two letters that he has because one of them will change his life forever.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:06 AM Title: The Eyes of A Soulless Man
I think that Bella needs to tell Carlisle what is going on at the office and see what he has to say about getting Bella and Marcus the help that they need right now to keep the company floating in Edward's absence.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 4:49 AM Title: Good News and Bad News
Bella and Marcus need to find a way to gain the controling factors of Cullen steel before his father run it int o the ground. Oh and Yea!!! Bella and Edward are gong to have a baby even if he isn't going to know it for a few weeks!
Date: 27 Dec 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chaotic Days and Lonely Nights
I hope that Bella gets what she wishes for even though it would be hard to do it by herself.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 4:01 AM Title: Secretive Provisions
I am loving this story and I can't wait to see what happens. It is good that the girls found somewhere else to live because that should make Edward feel a little better.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 3:35 AM Title: Savoring Every Moment
That was really sad! I hope that the boys get back soon and safe! It is amazing to think about all of those guys leaving for war and it isn't unlike today when they leave.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 3:18 AM Title: To Protect
It is good that Bella is able to help Edward and still have her independence while he is gone!
Date: 27 Dec 2010 3:03 AM Title: Conundrum
I am really glad that Bella met Esme like that because it gave her a look into her true character and let her see that she isn't after Edward's money she really truly loves him.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 2:33 AM Title: Shaking Off The Dust and Looking To The Future
Wow I really hope that they are going to be nice to Bella when they meet her. Her mother was verry terrible to both of them on the phone and I wonder what her father thinks about all of this.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 2:15 AM Title: The Perfect Beginning
I don't know what it is but I am very intreged by this story because of the time frame of it all. Back then it is amazing how many people got married like Bella and Edward did and when they came back they lived long happy lives together even if they hadn't known each other but days when they got married.
Date: 17 Nov 2010 2:57 PM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
You write the BEST stories! I love how romantic this was, and "period" stories are my favorite. You did a great job with all the facts & research, and I really liked that you included photos. Thank you so much for the fantastic writing! :)
Author's Response:
Awww...thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 11:18 AM Title: The Perfect Beginning
I really loved your story and was sad for it to come to the end. Keep up the good work !!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:11 AM Title: Savoring Every Moment
Gut wrenching, yet still beautiful. ;)
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:12 AM Title: Conundrum
I fell in love with Esme immediately. Knew it was her right away. So glad Carlisle's not a tyrant in this fic. Great job. ;)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:52 PM Title: Shaking Off The Dust and Looking To The Future
Excellent job, I'm loving it already. ;)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:31 PM Title: The Perfect Beginning
Wanted to find a period fic that was authentic, so far so good. Great job. ;)
Date: 11 Aug 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chaotic Days and Lonely Nights
Gosh, I haven't cried like this in a while! Every letter he wrote made me cry harder. I've seen many documentaries about WWI and remember the letters that the men would write to their wives, girlfriends, and families. I'm such a hopeless romantic and it breaks my heart. Hopefully she is pregnant and he does come home.
You have again caught my full attention with another awesome story that I won't stop reading till I have to.
thank you!
Author's Response:
I hope you like the rest! Happy to entertain you :D
Date: 29 Jul 2010 1:42 AM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
This is a beautiful story. You did wonderful.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:25 AM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
I was so tickled when I found this! I loved FDKK, so I couldn't resist this one either. Now I am harping on my hubby to start reading as he also loved FDKK. I think you have a true talent and should look to getting published. I think that you would do well. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Author's Response:
Thank you. REviews like this always make this so worth it and really encourages me to keep going. Thanks again for the review!
Date: 30 Jun 2010 2:28 PM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
that was a good story and i liked how u wrote it and teh happy ending
Date: 19 Jun 2010 5:31 AM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
What a wonderful, romantic and exciting story! Thank you for sharing it with all the rest of us!
Date: 18 May 2010 12:08 AM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
I really enjoyed your story!
Date: 11 May 2010 1:03 AM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
Such a great story. I so loved it. Kept thinking that Renee would come and stir up trouble, but they seemed to find enough without her. Great job on this. :)
Date: 11 May 2010 12:57 AM Title: It All Comes Together
Loved this chapter, but just have to say that Wrigley Field didn't get lights until 1988. :)
Date: 07 May 2010 3:58 PM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
I have been reading this story and truly loving it. I just had to comment about the Strauss building. It was the original headquarters for the insurance company my hubby works for. He works in the red building just behind the Stauss.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 3:08 PM Title: Secretive Provisions
Ok I'm truly not going to get any work done today. Lol. The letter he wrote was the most sweetest. I love love letters.
Angel
Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:32 PM Title: Savoring Every Moment
Me bawling first thing in the morning....not a pretty sight. Lol
Angel
Date: 30 Apr 2010 8:49 AM Title: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
This was an amazing story!! I loved every single chapter and had to read straight through!!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:36 AM Title: To Protect
I'm glad that your author notes are so thorough cause it really answered my question before I had to ask!
Angel
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:18 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
LOVED IT
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:12 AM Title: The New VIP
I need to go to bed but have to read the next chapter lol
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:09 AM Title: Blessed Revelations
again, love the story
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:03 AM Title: Crucial Correspondence
Such a great story
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:00 AM Title: The Eyes of A Soulless Man
Aro is on my hit list
Date: 30 Apr 2010 3:57 AM Title: Good News and Bad News
Yes, I hate him. Bella needs to give him a pink slip....and a kick in the you know what.