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Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 9:17 PM Title: Welcome Baby Cullen!

definitely enjoyed the birth of their little one!

Reviewer: saene Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 7:40 PM Title: A Pain In The Back

im happy for the baby arrival.

cant wait for the next chapter!!! :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:19 PM Title: A Pain In The Back

I am excited about the birth, but I feel so bad for Edward. He will regret missing this forever. It will take a month for him to even get a picture or word of the birth.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:55 PM Title: The Perfect Beginning

Let's hope her labor is short and Edwards time away is coming to an end. All the boys need to come safely so we can have two more weddings!

I'm praying that Baby "G" is a boy with bronze colored hair and green eyes.

Another great chapter! Thanks!!!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 9:18 AM Title: A Pain In The Back

I am definitely looking forward to that next chapter!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:43 AM Title: A Pain In The Back

I can't wait for Baby G to be born!  I do hold out hope though that Edward will get home safely soon!  Loved the update and can't wait until Monday!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: reesessweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:02 AM Title: A Pain In The Back

i like that they keep calling the baby Baby G. it sounds soo gangster! hahaha!

Reviewer: reesessweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:51 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

wow. you must really hate james, or the name james, at least. you used his name twice in this story, both as hateful characters. first, as her old misogynistic (sp??) boss and now as this evil henchmen for the aro and caius.

Reviewer: reesessweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:13 AM Title: A Pain In The Back

i wonder if edward had the same dream bella had, when he felt the baby kick his hand through her stomach an dwhen they almost shared a kiss in the dream. i really do hope so. it makes me feel so much happier to know that these two are connected in some way.

your stories just keep getting better and better. i'm loving everything that you write!!! keep up the good work! and thanks for your quick updates.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:30 AM Title: A Pain In The Back

Baby G is coming!! I can't wait!

Reviewer: tkeaton1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:11 AM Title: A Pain In The Back

awww.... poor edward is missing all of it! :(

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:07 AM Title: A Pain In The Back

Oh my gosh Baby G is coming!  I really hope he or she is healthy.  I cannot wait for Edward to get home soon to meet him or her.  Amazing job!  Cannot wait to meet Baby G! :)

Reviewer: fairytaleland Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:00 AM Title: A Pain In The Back

Poor Bella, back labour is painful.  I hope Edward comes back soon, safe and sound.

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:59 AM Title: A Pain In The Back

man, i so want him there for the birth! (i know it's not possible ;()isn't she a wee bit early????

Reviewer: dkpatton Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:17 AM Title: A Pain In The Back

I love this story and I can't wait until Edward makes it home to Bella!  I would love to see something from his point of view!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:47 AM Title: A Pain In The Back

yes yes yes YES I'm so excited!!! I can't wait for the baby. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: BearMistress Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:44 AM Title: A Pain In The Back

Aww such a wonderful chapter addition.  Love the inclusion of the dream sequences, adds such an emotional touch.

Reviewer: sugunary Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:26 AM Title: A Pain In The Back

Yay Baby G is coming! Great chapter- love that E&B get to visit in their dreams. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:52 AM Title: A Pain In The Back

aww she's having the baby. but it's early. man i really wanted Edward to miraculously show up! this was a fantastic chapter, can't wait for the next one!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: ilovecherrypie Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:20 AM Title: A Pain In The Back

the baby is comming wohoo, update soon

Reviewer: Mortuary_Girl86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 1:25 AM Title: United Front

Amazing chapter! Beautifully written and I cant wait for the next one!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:45 PM Title: United Front

Does Edward feel her presence like she feels his? If he does that is pretty cool.

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:40 PM Title: United Front

That was so great!  I'm glad that Bella is going to have security around the house and stuff, better safe than sorry.  And those dreams!  That is definately a connection she's got with Edward because I'd almost bet that it had already happened to him when she dreamed it.  Okay I hope that made sense cause I just got home from working overnight and I'm tired, but I had to leave you a note and tell ya how much I enjoyed the chapter!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:55 AM Title: United Front

So sweet!  Could the dream Bella have really happen to Edward and the reason she "saw' it was because of their intense connection??

Hmmm....I wonder!  Great job and glad she has protection from those evil men!

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:26 AM Title: United Front

The girl has her own army to protect her sounds like. Great chapter, I love how her dreams shadow Edward's experiences, the good and the bad.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:47 AM Title: United Front

Every James I've ever known has been a real jerk, creep, shady character, etc. Not a nice one in the bunch! There must be one out there that has some redeaming qualities, somewhere.

So glad that Bella has protection now for herself and the baby. Edward is going to be sooooooooooo pissed when he finds about the Volturi traitors and their hired goon.

I loved her dream and I'm sure we will find out that it wasn't just a dream. These two have a real connection and I'm wondering if he dreamt about her confrontation with James.

Thanks for another great chapter !

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:24 AM Title: United Front

wow that was a freaking dream. I love that Jake's in the picture now even if its not as a romantic interest, or is he? :) lol I love where this is going and I know life gets in the way so take your time even though inside I'm DYING to see what happens when Edward gets home, take your time. lol thanks again bye

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:32 AM Title: United Front

Wow, that was awesome!  I am glad that they are in jail!  :)  I really cannot wait for Edward to get home!  I know Bella cannot wait either and Edward too :)  Amazing job! :)

Reviewer: saene Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:32 AM Title: United Front

excellent chapter XD

Reviewer: tkeaton1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 12:18 AM Title: United Front

awww...  I cant wait for edward to come home! Please tell me he makes it back in time for the birth! I would love for him to see her pregnant with his child! So sweet!

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 12:17 AM Title: United Front

that wasn't a dream was it.....they are seriously connected like that.

Reviewer: xxxlookingformyedwardxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:24 PM Title: United Front

love it cant wait for more!!

Reviewer: sugunary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:25 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

Heaven help those volturi! They have gone and earned the Ire of Daddy C and Mamma E- btwn Carlisle, Esme, Marcus, Rose& Alice there will not be anything left of Aro or Caius. Cannot wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:22 PM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

They need to do some more house cleaning at that company. Bella needs to work from home to keep her blood pressure down. They also need more security.

Reviewer: Mortuary_Girl86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:13 PM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

I hope Carlisle kicks some ass! I cant wait for the next chapter, Im on the edge of my seat!!

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:52 PM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

I have never met a James that didn't make my skin crawl either.

Reviewer: Stellarrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:30 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

Oh boy....wait till Edward finds out Aro sent a "hit man" to ruff up Bella!!!! He may fly all the way from Europe just to bomb Aro's house!  Time to get the cops involved, too.

Reviewer: saene Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:29 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

excellent chapter

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:37 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

That was Esme right??? OMG when Edward finds out what happened he's gonna take one of those fighter jets and bomb the hell outta James

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:05 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

So glad nothing happened to the baby or Bella because of James.  Talk about pure evil!!

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:13 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

Ugh! I am dying here. Next chapter please!!! Thank you for not having Bella go into labor. I was afraid of that. I really like the baby names. I hope it is a boy.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:03 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

wow james really is a douche bag. lol I can't believe he'd do that. I mean that halfwit, she's pregnant! I can't wait for more updates thanks again bye

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:55 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

That certainly was intense for a moment there!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:53 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

Oh poor Bella! I love the names for Baby Cullen!  Cannot wait for Edward to come home and for this drama to be solved :)

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:45 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

Oh my goodness!  If I didn't already hate the Volutri brothers in this story I do now!  Edward is going to have a cow when he finds out about this.  BTW I do love the baby names!  See ya next update!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:09 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

oh those damned Volturi brothers!!!! i just want to knock them out! well are they going to prison now? and she probably shouldn't tell Edward this until he gets back because he will surely freak out and not be able to concentrate. i hope that Harry and Seth were able to beat the living crap out of James! really great chapter, can't wait to read more!!

Kristi

Reviewer: ilovecherrypie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 12:48 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises

Damn Volturi, hurting pregnant woman they have no principles, update soon

Reviewer: xxxlookingformyedwardxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 8:13 PM Title: Transitions

love it cant wait for more!!!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2010 12:07 AM Title: Transitions

I think this story is AWESOME!  Ok seriously, I almost cried reading Edwards last letter to Bella.  The names...I think are perfect.  I do hope our hero gets to come home before the baby is born.  I can't wait for the next update! 

Is it Wednesday yet? LOL!

Rhonda :)

Reviewer: Mortuary_Girl86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 9:31 PM Title: Transitions

Loved the chapter!! Cant wait for the next one.

Reviewer: saene Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 8:58 PM Title: Transitions

lovely chapter.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:36 PM Title: Transitions

Loved the chapter. I laughed at the girl name. One of the bestfriend's name is Cherie. You don't see it spelled that way very often.

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:17 AM Title: Transitions

i like Cherie! and for the boy so far Travis or Daniel. i hope he comes back in time

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:24 AM Title: Transitions

No sad endings, right??

BTW - love this story but you already know that!



Author's Response:

I promise...no sad endings.  I like to bring you all to the brink of heartfail, but I could never leave it like that...:)

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:08 AM Title: Transitions

definitely love the letters... again it just reminds me that it is such a lost art in our culture!  :)

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:10 AM Title: Transitions

awww. great chapter. i like the name Declan. i can't wait for Edward to come home again. now i'm worried about the next chapter which you say will be stressful. can't wait to read it!

Kristi

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:08 AM Title: Transitions

I liked that chapter. it was short but cute. I can't wait to read the teaser on your blog. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:08 AM Title: Transitions

I liked that chapter. it was short but cute. I can't wait to read the teaser on your blog. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: Mortuary_Girl86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

Amazing chapter! I was on the edge of my seat the entire time I was reading. I could feel Bella's butterflies. Great writing, and I cant wait to see what happens with Aro!!

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 11:25 PM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

woo hoo!! go Bella! in your faces Aro and Caius! man i was all excited in this chapter. really great. can't wait to read more!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:03 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

Another great chapter!

Our shy, timid, little wallflower has certainly come out of her shell! Good for her and what she is trying to do to save the company. Aro and Caius got their just desserts but will they end up harming Bella or the baby? Hopefully Edward will return home in time.

I seem to remember reading that there were no set lenghts of time that a serviceman would be deployed during WW II. If they were needed they had to stay and tours were often extended into years instead of months. Ouch!

Come home soon Edward !

Reviewer: saene Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 4:43 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

awesome chapter :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 4:12 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

Excellent chapter!  I loved the shareholder meeting - classic!!!

You're doing an wonderful job!  I usually read on FFn but with all the issues on mature stories going on and authors having to "edit" their stories, I'll be switching over to TWCS for my fan fiction fix!

 



Author's Response:

We're glad to have you :)  I love it here.  It's much more personal here somehow.  It's hard to explain, but I enjoy being here.

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:17 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

Loved it! Hope to hear from Edward soon, by way of letter of course.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:09 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

Bella has sure changed her life in a short period of time. I hope they have someone to watch over Aro to make sure he doesn't do harm to Bella or any of the girls.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:08 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

Bella has sure changed her life in a short period of time. I hope they have someone to watch over Aro to make sure he doesn't do harm to Bella or any of the girls.

Reviewer: IrishArtist25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:53 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

Oh I loved seeing Aro get what what coming to him!  So great.  Worried about how he'll retaliate though.  Hopefully whatever he plans on doing won't happen until Edward is almost home, and he can go all protective husband and future father on Aro's greedy butt.  I'm also wondering about the whole dream thing with her pretty much watching Edward roam around the ship and then get in bed.  Is it one of their awesomely freaky connections?  or just a random dream?  Can't wait to find out :)

Reviewer: fairytaleland Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:50 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

What a great board meeting.  Love the chapter.

Reviewer: sugunary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:37 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

Fantastic chapter- Fierce Bella took no prisoners- a little scared of what Aro could do to her, especially being pregnant and stress. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: sugunary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:37 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

Fantastic chapter- Fierce Bella took no prisoners- a little scared of what Aro could do to her, especially being pregnant and stress. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:27 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

That was amazing!  So happy to see Aro get his "just desserts".  I also loved Edward's house in Chicago.  Absolutely beautiful :)  Cannot wait for more (but will be patient in doing so). 

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:14 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

I love how she took charge and let them have it... can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 1:49 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

Fight on Mr Volturi, the fight is on! lol I love it. I cant wait to go to your blogsite and read what happens next. hell I can't wait to read on monday what happens next. :D keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 1:44 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick

woo hoo, love fiesty Bella, Edward would have been so proud! i'm just hoping Aro won't end up hurting her or the baby

Reviewer: Heatherstwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:15 PM Title: Conundrum

I fell in love with this story over at Twilighted

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 3:13 AM Title: The New VIP

awesome, Edward would be so proud! can't wait till the Chicago office get a hold of her

Reviewer: Mortuary_Girl86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 3:07 AM Title: The New VIP

Yay! Corporate takeover! Cant wait to see the board meeting!!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:13 AM Title: The New VIP

I really like the possible names she has thought of and am now looking forward to the Chicago meeting!!!  :)

Reviewer: saene Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:05 AM Title: The New VIP

great chapter

hope that bella can handle the pressure of the company.

:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2010 9:07 PM Title: The New VIP

Oh you are so mean....yes, please be on Australian time so we can get the updates sooner!

Revenge is best served cold and with Aro, it should be icy!!

Love this chapter and the teaser is fantastic.  It could be a chapter on it's own but I'm hoping you won't be that mean and not leave us hanging.  Cannot wait to read Aro's reaction!!! 

Reviewer: tkeaton1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2010 6:51 PM Title: The New VIP

I love how sweet edward is about being a dad ! Aww! And I hope bella goes in guns blazing/ take no prisoners with Aro and his bossy self! :)

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2010 4:50 PM Title: The New VIP

hahaha! show 'em who's boss Bella!!! loved this chapter! i can't wait until Bella shows up at that board meeting. can't wait until Thursday!!

Kristi

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2010 4:49 PM Title: The New VIP

you go girl. lol I love this story and Edwar is too cute. he's such a daddy its funny. :D keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2010 4:26 PM Title: The New VIP

Nicely done! Now on to Aro to make him eat s--- ! Love it love it love it!!!

Reviewer: sugunary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2010 3:24 PM Title: The New VIP

Cannot wait for Aro to get his ass handed to him, but seeing how this is just the early chapters of the story, dont see it being easy goings just yet. Love the story and cant wait for the next one!

Reviewer: ilovecherrypie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2010 2:59 PM Title: The New VIP

Ohh this is gonna get better, update soon, can't wait for next chap

Reviewer: IrishArtist25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:38 AM Title: Blessed Revelations

I think I have teared up at nearly every chapter since Edward left.  Especially the letters.  And man I really wanted her to slap Aro when he shoved everything off her desk.  But one, that wouldn't be Bella.  And two, he probably would have knocked her to the floor and hurt the baby.  So good for her not acting on my instincts, haha.  I'm nervous as to how the whole Lauren-walking-into-the-office-and-huffing-out scenario is going to play out.  I don't think you're the type of author to throw something like that in there without it having some sort of future meaning.  I hope I'm wrong though.  Can't wait for the next update! 2 days and counting :)



Author's Response:

Originally I had planned to do something with that, but then, as often happens with me, my mind took another twist from my original idea, but it might not be completely out of the picture yet.  We'll have to see how my plan plays out!

Reviewer: Mortuary_Girl86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 10:33 PM Title: Blessed Revelations

Amazing chapter!! I love this story and cant wait to see what happens in Chicago.

Reviewer: IrishArtist25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 5:39 PM Title: To Protect

I'm so glad that Marcus is a good guy in this.  I always thought he kind of was in the books too.  I may have read it wrong, but he just seems like a heartbroken soul who is stuck with the Volturi because he has no place else to go.  I'm sure Aro was keeping him around since he has one of Aro's treasured "gifts" as well.  But I never really saw Marcus as the hostile, violent hard-hearted character that everyone makes him out to be.  Of course, because of the usual characterization of him, I was quick to doubt his true intentions, thinking he was playing Bella, so thanks for the A/N at the bottom to clear it up!!

Reviewer: IrishArtist25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:00 AM Title: Shaking Off The Dust and Looking To The Future

Awww they're so sweet!! I love the stories where Edward sees her as this goddess/angel that he just can not get enough of (both physically AND emotionally).  Makes me kinda sad, because I've yet to witness the existence of a man like that in the real world. Hopefully there's one out there for me.  But anyway.  I'm kinda mad at Carlisle.  He ought to know his son has enough sense not to get ensnared by a gold-digger (cue Kanye).  And Renee!! Ugh.  She just makes me furious. One second Bella's a two-bit whore and all of a sudden everything's peachy-keen because she married rich.  Women like that are disgusting.  I don't care if I'm stuck in a matchbox apartment with a 15 year old car forever, as long as I love the man I marry, and he loves me.  I mean, what use is all the money is you're miserable anyway?

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 11:43 PM Title: Blessed Revelations

I am so happy for them that she could share that news over the phone!  :)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:07 PM Title: Blessed Revelations

YES this is getting great. Im so glad that they got to talk not only once but twice. soo soo sweet. I love it. keep up the great work. can't wait till monday. thanks again bye

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 6:21 PM Title: Blessed Revelations

War is stupid, let Edward come home and we will all live Happily Ever After!!

OK - I know this can't happen and I know you said you have no intention of it being like Pearl Harbor with Ben Affleck and knowing how most stories go, there will be drama and/or angst but I love how you incorporate the love letters ~ such a lost art.

Hope Aro gets what's coming to him.  The board meeting should be interesting...what a shocker! 

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 6:04 PM Title: Blessed Revelations

I am so glad he was able to get the info to her. Now she can step up and kick some Aro butt!!

Reviewer: LaMomo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:57 PM Title: Blessed Revelations

This was very fast-paced and sweet at the same time. Very well done. NavyWard is a definite favourite of mine, by now.

Looking forward to Monday!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:20 PM Title: Blessed Revelations

That was such a good chapter. I could see how excited about the baby and how mad he was at Aro. He is even more determined to get home. I hope all 3 boys get home.

Reviewer: saene Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:13 PM Title: Blessed Revelations

greay chap. ;)

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:51 PM Title: Blessed Revelations

ah!! Edward finally knows about the baby!!! yay! I'm so glad that in a few days ella will be running the show (with some help). take that Aro! I'm sure he'll be delighted to find out that he was being so cruel to his bosses wife who is pregnant. i hope he craps his pants when he finds out lol. really really great chapter, can't wait for Monday!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:27 PM Title: Blessed Revelations

I am so glad she got to tell him on the phone! Please don't kill Edward or make us or Bella think he is dead or missing. Pretty please with Edward on top...

Reviewer: ilovecherrypie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 10:36 PM Title: Crucial Correspondence

I fel in love with this story when I saw the one shot on The Age of Edward's contest, it was one of my personal favorites, you can only imagine how happy I'm that you decided to turn the one shot in a full story ^^ Thank you for allowing us readers to read your wonderfull writing pieces

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