Date: 28 Mar 2010 9:17 PM Title: Welcome Baby Cullen!
definitely enjoyed the birth of their little one!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 7:40 PM Title: A Pain In The Back
im happy for the baby arrival.
cant wait for the next chapter!!! :)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:19 PM Title: A Pain In The Back
I am excited about the birth, but I feel so bad for Edward. He will regret missing this forever. It will take a month for him to even get a picture or word of the birth.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:55 PM Title: The Perfect Beginning
Let's hope her labor is short and Edwards time away is coming to an end. All the boys need to come safely so we can have two more weddings!
I'm praying that Baby "G" is a boy with bronze colored hair and green eyes.
Another great chapter! Thanks!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 9:18 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
I am definitely looking forward to that next chapter!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:43 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
I can't wait for Baby G to be born! I do hold out hope though that Edward will get home safely soon! Loved the update and can't wait until Monday!
Rhonda
Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:02 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
i like that they keep calling the baby Baby G. it sounds soo gangster! hahaha!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:51 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
wow. you must really hate james, or the name james, at least. you used his name twice in this story, both as hateful characters. first, as her old misogynistic (sp??) boss and now as this evil henchmen for the aro and caius.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:13 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
i wonder if edward had the same dream bella had, when he felt the baby kick his hand through her stomach an dwhen they almost shared a kiss in the dream. i really do hope so. it makes me feel so much happier to know that these two are connected in some way.
your stories just keep getting better and better. i'm loving everything that you write!!! keep up the good work! and thanks for your quick updates.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:30 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
Baby G is coming!! I can't wait!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:11 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
awww.... poor edward is missing all of it! :(
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:07 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
Oh my gosh Baby G is coming! I really hope he or she is healthy. I cannot wait for Edward to get home soon to meet him or her. Amazing job! Cannot wait to meet Baby G! :)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:00 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
Poor Bella, back labour is painful. I hope Edward comes back soon, safe and sound.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:59 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
man, i so want him there for the birth! (i know it's not possible ;()isn't she a wee bit early????
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:17 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
I love this story and I can't wait until Edward makes it home to Bella! I would love to see something from his point of view!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:47 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
yes yes yes YES I'm so excited!!! I can't wait for the baby. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:44 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
Aww such a wonderful chapter addition. Love the inclusion of the dream sequences, adds such an emotional touch.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:26 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
Yay Baby G is coming! Great chapter- love that E&B get to visit in their dreams. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:52 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
aww she's having the baby. but it's early. man i really wanted Edward to miraculously show up! this was a fantastic chapter, can't wait for the next one!!!
Kristi
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:20 AM Title: A Pain In The Back
the baby is comming wohoo, update soon
Date: 23 Mar 2010 1:25 AM Title: United Front
Amazing chapter! Beautifully written and I cant wait for the next one!!!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:45 PM Title: United Front
Does Edward feel her presence like she feels his? If he does that is pretty cool.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:40 PM Title: United Front
That was so great! I'm glad that Bella is going to have security around the house and stuff, better safe than sorry. And those dreams! That is definately a connection she's got with Edward because I'd almost bet that it had already happened to him when she dreamed it. Okay I hope that made sense cause I just got home from working overnight and I'm tired, but I had to leave you a note and tell ya how much I enjoyed the chapter!
Rhonda
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:55 AM Title: United Front
So sweet! Could the dream Bella have really happen to Edward and the reason she "saw' it was because of their intense connection??
Hmmm....I wonder! Great job and glad she has protection from those evil men!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:26 AM Title: United Front
The girl has her own army to protect her sounds like. Great chapter, I love how her dreams shadow Edward's experiences, the good and the bad.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:47 AM Title: United Front
Every James I've ever known has been a real jerk, creep, shady character, etc. Not a nice one in the bunch! There must be one out there that has some redeaming qualities, somewhere.
So glad that Bella has protection now for herself and the baby. Edward is going to be sooooooooooo pissed when he finds about the Volturi traitors and their hired goon.
I loved her dream and I'm sure we will find out that it wasn't just a dream. These two have a real connection and I'm wondering if he dreamt about her confrontation with James.
Thanks for another great chapter !
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:24 AM Title: United Front
wow that was a freaking dream. I love that Jake's in the picture now even if its not as a romantic interest, or is he? :) lol I love where this is going and I know life gets in the way so take your time even though inside I'm DYING to see what happens when Edward gets home, take your time. lol thanks again bye
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:32 AM Title: United Front
Wow, that was awesome! I am glad that they are in jail! :) I really cannot wait for Edward to get home! I know Bella cannot wait either and Edward too :) Amazing job! :)
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:32 AM Title: United Front
excellent chapter XD
Date: 22 Mar 2010 12:18 AM Title: United Front
awww... I cant wait for edward to come home! Please tell me he makes it back in time for the birth! I would love for him to see her pregnant with his child! So sweet!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 12:17 AM Title: United Front
that wasn't a dream was it.....they are seriously connected like that.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:24 PM Title: United Front
love it cant wait for more!!
Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:25 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
Heaven help those volturi! They have gone and earned the Ire of Daddy C and Mamma E- btwn Carlisle, Esme, Marcus, Rose& Alice there will not be anything left of Aro or Caius. Cannot wait for the next chapter!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:22 PM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
They need to do some more house cleaning at that company. Bella needs to work from home to keep her blood pressure down. They also need more security.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:13 PM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
I hope Carlisle kicks some ass! I cant wait for the next chapter, Im on the edge of my seat!!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:52 PM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
I have never met a James that didn't make my skin crawl either.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:30 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
Oh boy....wait till Edward finds out Aro sent a "hit man" to ruff up Bella!!!! He may fly all the way from Europe just to bomb Aro's house! Time to get the cops involved, too.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:29 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
excellent chapter
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:37 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
That was Esme right??? OMG when Edward finds out what happened he's gonna take one of those fighter jets and bomb the hell outta James
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:05 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
So glad nothing happened to the baby or Bella because of James. Talk about pure evil!!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:13 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
Ugh! I am dying here. Next chapter please!!! Thank you for not having Bella go into labor. I was afraid of that. I really like the baby names. I hope it is a boy.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:03 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
wow james really is a douche bag. lol I can't believe he'd do that. I mean that halfwit, she's pregnant! I can't wait for more updates thanks again bye
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:55 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
That certainly was intense for a moment there!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:53 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
Oh poor Bella! I love the names for Baby Cullen! Cannot wait for Edward to come home and for this drama to be solved :)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:45 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
Oh my goodness! If I didn't already hate the Volutri brothers in this story I do now! Edward is going to have a cow when he finds out about this. BTW I do love the baby names! See ya next update!
Rhonda
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:09 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
oh those damned Volturi brothers!!!! i just want to knock them out! well are they going to prison now? and she probably shouldn't tell Edward this until he gets back because he will surely freak out and not be able to concentrate. i hope that Harry and Seth were able to beat the living crap out of James! really great chapter, can't wait to read more!!
Kristi
Date: 18 Mar 2010 12:48 AM Title: Unpleasant Surprises
Damn Volturi, hurting pregnant woman they have no principles, update soon
Date: 17 Mar 2010 8:13 PM Title: Transitions
love it cant wait for more!!!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 12:07 AM Title: Transitions
I think this story is AWESOME! Ok seriously, I almost cried reading Edwards last letter to Bella. The names...I think are perfect. I do hope our hero gets to come home before the baby is born. I can't wait for the next update!
Is it Wednesday yet? LOL!
Rhonda :)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 9:31 PM Title: Transitions
Loved the chapter!! Cant wait for the next one.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:36 PM Title: Transitions
Loved the chapter. I laughed at the girl name. One of the bestfriend's name is Cherie. You don't see it spelled that way very often.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:17 AM Title: Transitions
i like Cherie! and for the boy so far Travis or Daniel. i hope he comes back in time
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:24 AM Title: Transitions
No sad endings, right??
BTW - love this story but you already know that!
Author's Response:
I promise...no sad endings. I like to bring you all to the brink of heartfail, but I could never leave it like that...:)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:08 AM Title: Transitions
definitely love the letters... again it just reminds me that it is such a lost art in our culture! :)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:10 AM Title: Transitions
awww. great chapter. i like the name Declan. i can't wait for Edward to come home again. now i'm worried about the next chapter which you say will be stressful. can't wait to read it!
Kristi
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:08 AM Title: Transitions
I liked that chapter. it was short but cute. I can't wait to read the teaser on your blog. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:08 AM Title: Transitions
I liked that chapter. it was short but cute. I can't wait to read the teaser on your blog. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 14 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
Amazing chapter! I was on the edge of my seat the entire time I was reading. I could feel Bella's butterflies. Great writing, and I cant wait to see what happens with Aro!!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 11:25 PM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
woo hoo!! go Bella! in your faces Aro and Caius! man i was all excited in this chapter. really great. can't wait to read more!!!
Kristi
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:03 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
Another great chapter!
Our shy, timid, little wallflower has certainly come out of her shell! Good for her and what she is trying to do to save the company. Aro and Caius got their just desserts but will they end up harming Bella or the baby? Hopefully Edward will return home in time.
I seem to remember reading that there were no set lenghts of time that a serviceman would be deployed during WW II. If they were needed they had to stay and tours were often extended into years instead of months. Ouch!
Come home soon Edward !
Date: 11 Mar 2010 4:43 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
awesome chapter :)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 4:12 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
Excellent chapter! I loved the shareholder meeting - classic!!!
You're doing an wonderful job! I usually read on FFn but with all the issues on mature stories going on and authors having to "edit" their stories, I'll be switching over to TWCS for my fan fiction fix!
Author's Response:
We're glad to have you :) I love it here. It's much more personal here somehow. It's hard to explain, but I enjoy being here.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:17 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
Loved it! Hope to hear from Edward soon, by way of letter of course.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:09 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
Bella has sure changed her life in a short period of time. I hope they have someone to watch over Aro to make sure he doesn't do harm to Bella or any of the girls.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:08 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
Bella has sure changed her life in a short period of time. I hope they have someone to watch over Aro to make sure he doesn't do harm to Bella or any of the girls.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:53 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
Oh I loved seeing Aro get what what coming to him! So great. Worried about how he'll retaliate though. Hopefully whatever he plans on doing won't happen until Edward is almost home, and he can go all protective husband and future father on Aro's greedy butt. I'm also wondering about the whole dream thing with her pretty much watching Edward roam around the ship and then get in bed. Is it one of their awesomely freaky connections? or just a random dream? Can't wait to find out :)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:50 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
What a great board meeting. Love the chapter.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:37 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
Fantastic chapter- Fierce Bella took no prisoners- a little scared of what Aro could do to her, especially being pregnant and stress. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:37 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
Fantastic chapter- Fierce Bella took no prisoners- a little scared of what Aro could do to her, especially being pregnant and stress. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:27 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
That was amazing! So happy to see Aro get his "just desserts". I also loved Edward's house in Chicago. Absolutely beautiful :) Cannot wait for more (but will be patient in doing so).
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:14 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
I love how she took charge and let them have it... can't wait for more!!!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 1:49 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
Fight on Mr Volturi, the fight is on! lol I love it. I cant wait to go to your blogsite and read what happens next. hell I can't wait to read on monday what happens next. :D keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 11 Mar 2010 1:44 AM Title: Corporate Hat Trick
woo hoo, love fiesty Bella, Edward would have been so proud! i'm just hoping Aro won't end up hurting her or the baby
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:15 PM Title: Conundrum
I fell in love with this story over at Twilighted
Date: 09 Mar 2010 3:13 AM Title: The New VIP
awesome, Edward would be so proud! can't wait till the Chicago office get a hold of her
Date: 09 Mar 2010 3:07 AM Title: The New VIP
Yay! Corporate takeover! Cant wait to see the board meeting!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:13 AM Title: The New VIP
I really like the possible names she has thought of and am now looking forward to the Chicago meeting!!! :)
Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:05 AM Title: The New VIP
great chapter
hope that bella can handle the pressure of the company.
:)
Date: 08 Mar 2010 9:07 PM Title: The New VIP
Oh you are so mean....yes, please be on Australian time so we can get the updates sooner!
Revenge is best served cold and with Aro, it should be icy!!
Love this chapter and the teaser is fantastic. It could be a chapter on it's own but I'm hoping you won't be that mean and not leave us hanging. Cannot wait to read Aro's reaction!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 6:51 PM Title: The New VIP
I love how sweet edward is about being a dad ! Aww! And I hope bella goes in guns blazing/ take no prisoners with Aro and his bossy self! :)
Date: 08 Mar 2010 4:50 PM Title: The New VIP
hahaha! show 'em who's boss Bella!!! loved this chapter! i can't wait until Bella shows up at that board meeting. can't wait until Thursday!!
Kristi
Date: 08 Mar 2010 4:49 PM Title: The New VIP
you go girl. lol I love this story and Edwar is too cute. he's such a daddy its funny. :D keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more. thanks again bye
Date: 08 Mar 2010 4:26 PM Title: The New VIP
Nicely done! Now on to Aro to make him eat s--- ! Love it love it love it!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 3:24 PM Title: The New VIP
Cannot wait for Aro to get his ass handed to him, but seeing how this is just the early chapters of the story, dont see it being easy goings just yet. Love the story and cant wait for the next one!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 2:59 PM Title: The New VIP
Ohh this is gonna get better, update soon, can't wait for next chap
Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:38 AM Title: Blessed Revelations
I think I have teared up at nearly every chapter since Edward left. Especially the letters. And man I really wanted her to slap Aro when he shoved everything off her desk. But one, that wouldn't be Bella. And two, he probably would have knocked her to the floor and hurt the baby. So good for her not acting on my instincts, haha. I'm nervous as to how the whole Lauren-walking-into-the-office-and-huffing-out scenario is going to play out. I don't think you're the type of author to throw something like that in there without it having some sort of future meaning. I hope I'm wrong though. Can't wait for the next update! 2 days and counting :)
Author's Response:
Originally I had planned to do something with that, but then, as often happens with me, my mind took another twist from my original idea, but it might not be completely out of the picture yet. We'll have to see how my plan plays out!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 10:33 PM Title: Blessed Revelations
Amazing chapter!! I love this story and cant wait to see what happens in Chicago.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 5:39 PM Title: To Protect
I'm so glad that Marcus is a good guy in this. I always thought he kind of was in the books too. I may have read it wrong, but he just seems like a heartbroken soul who is stuck with the Volturi because he has no place else to go. I'm sure Aro was keeping him around since he has one of Aro's treasured "gifts" as well. But I never really saw Marcus as the hostile, violent hard-hearted character that everyone makes him out to be. Of course, because of the usual characterization of him, I was quick to doubt his true intentions, thinking he was playing Bella, so thanks for the A/N at the bottom to clear it up!!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:00 AM Title: Shaking Off The Dust and Looking To The Future
Awww they're so sweet!! I love the stories where Edward sees her as this goddess/angel that he just can not get enough of (both physically AND emotionally). Makes me kinda sad, because I've yet to witness the existence of a man like that in the real world. Hopefully there's one out there for me. But anyway. I'm kinda mad at Carlisle. He ought to know his son has enough sense not to get ensnared by a gold-digger (cue Kanye). And Renee!! Ugh. She just makes me furious. One second Bella's a two-bit whore and all of a sudden everything's peachy-keen because she married rich. Women like that are disgusting. I don't care if I'm stuck in a matchbox apartment with a 15 year old car forever, as long as I love the man I marry, and he loves me. I mean, what use is all the money is you're miserable anyway?
Date: 04 Mar 2010 11:43 PM Title: Blessed Revelations
I am so happy for them that she could share that news over the phone! :)
Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:07 PM Title: Blessed Revelations
YES this is getting great. Im so glad that they got to talk not only once but twice. soo soo sweet. I love it. keep up the great work. can't wait till monday. thanks again bye
Date: 04 Mar 2010 6:21 PM Title: Blessed Revelations
War is stupid, let Edward come home and we will all live Happily Ever After!!
OK - I know this can't happen and I know you said you have no intention of it being like Pearl Harbor with Ben Affleck and knowing how most stories go, there will be drama and/or angst but I love how you incorporate the love letters ~ such a lost art.
Hope Aro gets what's coming to him. The board meeting should be interesting...what a shocker!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 6:04 PM Title: Blessed Revelations
I am so glad he was able to get the info to her. Now she can step up and kick some Aro butt!!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:57 PM Title: Blessed Revelations
This was very fast-paced and sweet at the same time. Very well done. NavyWard is a definite favourite of mine, by now.
Looking forward to Monday!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:20 PM Title: Blessed Revelations
That was such a good chapter. I could see how excited about the baby and how mad he was at Aro. He is even more determined to get home. I hope all 3 boys get home.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:13 PM Title: Blessed Revelations
greay chap. ;)
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:51 PM Title: Blessed Revelations
ah!! Edward finally knows about the baby!!! yay! I'm so glad that in a few days ella will be running the show (with some help). take that Aro! I'm sure he'll be delighted to find out that he was being so cruel to his bosses wife who is pregnant. i hope he craps his pants when he finds out lol. really really great chapter, can't wait for Monday!!!
Kristi
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:27 PM Title: Blessed Revelations
I am so glad she got to tell him on the phone! Please don't kill Edward or make us or Bella think he is dead or missing. Pretty please with Edward on top...
Date: 01 Mar 2010 10:36 PM Title: Crucial Correspondence
I fel in love with this story when I saw the one shot on The Age of Edward's contest, it was one of my personal favorites, you can only imagine how happy I'm that you decided to turn the one shot in a full story ^^ Thank you for allowing us readers to read your wonderfull writing pieces