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Reviewer: Mortuary_Girl86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:04 PM Title: Crucial Correspondence

Awesome chapter!! Im on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter!! Please hurry and update!! :-)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 3:12 PM Title: Crucial Correspondence

aww those two are soo sweet and marcus's relationship with Bella is sweet too. Those girls are ridiculous but I can't wait to see where this progressed. keep up the great work. I can't wait for that call. thanks again bye

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:01 PM Title: Crucial Correspondence

What a teaser of a chapter! Ugh, I am greedy for more! Again, please don't kill Edward or do a MIA.

Reviewer: tkeaton1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:48 PM Title: Crucial Correspondence

oh man, so he still doesnt know yet that he's going to be a dad! cant wait for more!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 5:21 AM Title: Crucial Correspondence

Oh no!!! You can't leave us hanging?!?! I knew Edward was more reliable & conscientious than to leave his company without a contigency plan! Like my previous note.... Bella should have told Carlisle & Esme. Please please update soon!

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 5:07 AM Title: Crucial Correspondence

ahh!! so he did leave plans in place. i knew Edward wasn't that neglectful. oh man i can't wait until he finds out about the baby!! will she tell him over the phone before he gets a chance to read her letter? ok i'm going to go read the teaser now. great chapter, update soon!!

Kristi

Reviewer: fairytaleland Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 5:03 AM Title: Crucial Correspondence

Great chapter.  I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 4:50 AM Title: Crucial Correspondence

thanks for the glimpse into edward's head!

Reviewer: Mortuary_Girl86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 12:31 AM Title: The Eyes of A Soulless Man

Great chapter. Im glad I found you on this site. Cant wait for more!!

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2010 1:23 AM Title: The Eyes of A Soulless Man

Please don't have an Edward death scare or an Edward death.

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 11:45 PM Title: The Eyes of A Soulless Man

Yeah Aro definitely doesn't give off the warm fuzzies... I look forward to how they will deal with the situations he is causing!

Reviewer: avery elisabeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 10:50 PM Title: Savoring Every Moment

It really is sad. It's even sadder when you have actually experienced it. When Navy boys board and prepare to get under way, it's a sight to behold. The emotions,however, are even stronger when it's your loved one and you're future is uncertain. I am really enjoying this story. It's different.

Reviewer: saene Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 7:04 PM Title: The Eyes of A Soulless Man

great chapter!

i hate aro

i hope that nothing happens to edward back there.

see ya next update 

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 5:30 PM Title: The Eyes of A Soulless Man

i want to go punch Aro in the face! seriously!! isn't there any way that they can send Edward something to sign stating that his voting power goes to Bella while he's away. you know i'm kind of annoyed at Edward for not making sure Marcus had his voting power before he left! anyway, really great chapter! i can't wait to see Edward's response to Bella's pregnancy. update soon!

Kristi

Reviewer: tkeaton1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 5:10 PM Title: The Eyes of A Soulless Man

great chapter!!! Aro, ugh!!! lol  Please tell me nothing happens to our sweet Edward... I know you cant really tell me, but that would break our hearts! :)

Reviewer: Drnifer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 2:12 AM Title: Good News and Bad News

I normally shy away from historical pieces, but I've been sucked into this story from the first few paragraphs.  I can't wait to see how things progress, although I sense I may need to keep my tissue supply stocked:)

Reviewer: bernadette3254 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 1:49 AM Title: Good News and Bad News

Can't wait for the next chapter and I hope Bella spits in his coffee..see if he likes that brand of sugar!

Reviewer: fanficreader83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:00 PM Title: Good News and Bad News

That was some good news for bella and I am very interested how they will deal with all that is going on in the company!  :)

Reviewer: saene Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 11:51 AM Title: Good News and Bad News

cant wait :)

Reviewer: tkeaton1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:33 AM Title: Good News and Bad News

gosh it must have been hard to know it took a month to get mail back then! WO! Yeah Aro is an ass and cant wait to see him go down!!!! Come home Edward! LOL 

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:02 AM Title: Good News and Bad News

oh i can't wait for Aro to find out that Bella is his boss' wife. and actually his boss while Edward's away! if Bella wasn't undercover she should've got coffee and then threw it in his face. on a happier note, i'm so glad Bella's pregnant! i really hope that somehow (short of him being seriously injured) Edward is able to come home before she gives birth. really great chapter, can't wait to read more!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: tkeaton1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chaotic Days and Lonely Nights

awww that has to be so hard to be so far apart for such long periods of time! And awwwwww she may be pregnant! I really hope so! :)  Love this story so far

Reviewer: saene Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2010 1:35 PM Title: The Perfect Beginning

beautiful chapter.

Reviewer: courtney1022 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chaotic Days and Lonely Nights

Luv it more please



Author's Response:

I've been too busy moving things over to write more yet, but I hope to get some writing time tonight!

Reviewer: iluvcupcakes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chaotic Days and Lonely Nights

I found this site to read your works unedited and I wasn't disappointed. I love these first seven chapters and can't wait to see where this story goes.

I loved reading your other story - Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights.

Keep up the amazing work and thank you for posting this and all your other stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you...I'm so glad you've enjoyed both stories :)

Reviewer: kt187 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 9:35 AM Title: Chaotic Days and Lonely Nights

It is great to read the newest chapter in this series - It is a pity though that I had to go to another site to do so though.

Question - Does this site have an alert system? I hope it does otherwise it is going to be anoying for you and for us your readers!

 



Author's Response:

yes...you have to go to preferences in account info section and select it to turn on...then faves are delivered. thanks for coming over

Reviewer: fairytaleland Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chaotic Days and Lonely Nights

Really enjoying the story.  Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I hope you keep enjoying it!

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chaotic Days and Lonely Nights

aww i hope Bella is pregnant. they would be so happy. i just hope that Edward is able to come home soon. really great chapter, i'm glad Bella, Alice and eventually Rose are helping with Cullen Steel. update soon!!!

Kristi



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I hope you enjoy the rest of the ride!

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 8:17 AM Title: Secretive Provisions

Okay, that was the sweetest things Edward said to Bella is that letter!  Ugh, they love each other so much!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it!!!

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:56 AM Title: Savoring Every Moment

OMG, that was so heartbreaking!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 2:49 AM Title: The Perfect Beginning

I've told ya more than once that I love this story!  I'm really glad your still posting.  I was starting to get worried with all the crap on FFN.  I can't wait to find out how Bella and Edward make it through the war.

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

Glad you found me here for the full flavored version.  There won't be much smut to be had, but there will be a tad here and there. :)  Thanks hon!

Reviewer: Tina2093 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 2:11 AM Title: To Protect

Im very glad that bella is very independent in this story, and wants to support her self.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I like to write at least somewhat independent Bella's (see Femme Docs and Kevlar knights for an example)  :)  Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

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