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Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 37

THAT EVIL SON OF A BITCH!!!!!!! oh my god....what a chapter... Oh my god.......I can barely review this I need to reach the next chapter. 

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Date: 16 May 2013 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 36

I've never given up on you guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So my thoughts on this chapter. I think this was utterly incredible. I've read so many fics where sex is like hearts stars and horseshoes, clovers and ballons. When in reality. It really isn't like that sometimes or most of the time. lmfao. Kira's experience made this chapter incredibly fantastic. It was so real and I could relate to the feelings she was having. LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVED IT@



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!!!!! It was a struggle to write such awkwardness, but it really made sense, considering the experiences of these two--meaning, they had none in that department--so I'm very glad you found it worked for the chapter!!

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Date: 16 May 2013 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 34

totally love these two!

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Date: 16 May 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 33

Oh galen..... *swoon*



Author's Response:

This co-writer agrees with you.... Hehehe!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 32

I bet you guys thought you'd never hear from me again! lol nooooooooooooooooooooooooooot! School has been so fucking hectic! I was in the middle of doing a book cover, but I stopped by to let you guys know just how much I absolutely love this story, and i'll be reading and reviewing the next couple of days. I truly hope you two haven't stopped writing. I'd love to read more from you. Later gators!



Author's Response:

AH! Bless you, lovely!! We have not stopped writing... in fact... we're working on a whole rewrite of this story! We visited England last year and it inspired us to put it in a more British setting! And also gives us the opportunity to polish up some plot gaps. :) It's the same characters, but it's going in a much different direction. If you'd be interested, we might start posting it on another writing site! But don't feel obliged. You've been fantastic, sticking with us so far!

How's the book cover going?? I hope school lets up soon! When do you start summer break?

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 31

Sorry I am so late. But do you realize how much I loved this!!!!!! going on to the next chapter

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Date: 07 Aug 2011 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 30

you guys would do this to me again lmao! leave me with a damn cliff hanger *cries* *bats lashes* more? I literally rushed here to read this. I absolutely love it



Author's Response:

We don't proglong your agony on purpose! Okay, maybe a little bit on purpose... but not because we're mean! :P I don't think that made any sense. Aaaanyway, 31 is underway, and we are quite excited for its content. :) Thanks so much for all your reviews!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 29

I'm more than surprised. I'm unsatisfied because there isn't a chapter after this lmmmffaooo!! Oh come on y'all pleaseeeeeee another chapter *bats lashes innocently* Pretty pleeeaasseee????

 

I read this chapter and smiled the whole time I've been waiting for Galen to make some kind of move, and it was adorable and surprising!!!! I can't believe he gave her such a half assed propsal, but it wasn't too far away from melors lmaooo!!!! You guys can't make me wait another week or so for another chapter come on *shamelessly begging* lmao *squeals* i jus tlove everything about this chapter, and i know grigori isn't too far behind!!!!!



Author's Response:

I know, it is cruel to end a chapter that way!! We'd promise another right away if possible, but so far it's not quite 400 words and you'd probably be quite upset for such a short follow up. :P

Oh good! Glad Galen didn't disappoint in the adorable/surprising area. Heheh. He's not really used to this... wooing thing. More of his past shall be revealed in time and should explain his shortcomings in that department. :) Your shameless begging does not fall upon deaf ears! Chapter 30 is being worked upon! May the words flow quickly!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 28

I can not wait to read more!! I totally enjoyed this chapter *pouts* update soooonnnn pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssseeee*



Author's Response:

The next chapter is underway! It gets written as we speak! And by the way, your reviews make us smile. :)

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2011 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 27

wait wait wait now i'm realllllyy excited. grigori is such a tool. I thought for sure he was going to get her. I was yelling at my computer screen (you bet not!) lmao  iS IT WEIRD I KIND OF FEEL SORRY FOR HIM ? i don't hate him, he is a bastard but i can't help but feel sorry for his desperatness. Melor is going to be livid.... i hope you guys have the next chapter written because i can not wait to read more!!!!1 so MORE PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE?



Author's Response:

Well if you need to feel bad then I need to feel bad as well... So let's just agree he's a poor sod who didn't get enough love in his childhood so he doesn't know how to properly love a woman :P

The next chapter is almost written!!! As soon as I'm done typing this response I'll get back to work, promise!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 26

hellloooo dolls!!!! i was so excited to read this and get a glimpse inside of anya's head. The only thing i found a bit off was the  lack of concern, or remorse, or freaking out from either one of them. I expect anya to be a bit off. but James was a bit too passive to say a woman he was getting down with laid on the floor dead. But ignore me, i kinda expected a bit more of an emotional react to the chicks death.

Anya's suicide attempts was perfectly written babes. I visualize everything, i saw it happening. perfection honey bunches! wonderful job babes! now hurry up i wants more!!! lol j/k take ur time!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 25

OH COME ON!!!!!! i can't believe you stopped it here. and it was sooooo goooddd. You guys are gonna keep me waiting huh? Well just so you know missys! I was going through withdrawl lmao!!! I missed this story so much

 

I love this story. the funniest part was melor's mild anger at getting interrupted lmao he's such a man lmao. 300 years no sex he is making up for lost time lmao!!!!

Galen's feelings for kira are developing but that has to be against the rules somehow right? He woulnd't be allowed to be with her would he?

I would love to see how a vampire female is mated. Is it the same process as one of the males finding their mate? Does it take time? If she were to um...look for a mate and the person she was looking for was a vampire, would the process still be as long?

And,

Since she is a single female and tends to be getting ebtter day by day, how does that sit with the single makes in the underground? Will she be sought after?

 

And grigori. poor grigori. I hate but feel sorry for him at the same time. He can not let kira go.

But if he gets her, he's so demented that i'm scared of what he'll do to her.

I really enjoyed this chapter. it was utter perfection and i can not wait for more....I really wish you guys could update soon!!!



Author's Response:

I know!! If I was you I'd be mad at us, too. :P I'm charging right ahead with 26, so it shouldn't be too long before the next update!! Hang in there, friend!

Heheheh. It's amazing he's being as patient as he is.

I don't see how Galen and Kira's relationship would be any kind of rule breaking, except for Galen's personal and over heightened sense of moral duty. The council doesn't take an interest in mates unless it was in some way a risk to their secret. Their main concern is that Kira be kept in control. I don't think they're too worried about HOW Galen keeps her controlled. ;P

As far as female vampires seeking a mate goes, it's generally the same process. We were going to delve more into that for other couples in the underground, but haven't quite got there yet. Maybe if we don't get to it in the actual story, we'll write some outtakes. A vampire coupling with another vampire would be a much shorter process, assuming it was a vampire who'd already been, "assimilated" so to speak. Does that make sense?

I think we may have some interesting things regarding Kira and single male vampires. Perhaps some jealousy would help kick Galen into action. ;)

We're glad you feel sympathy towards Grigori. He's a complex character that brings out conflicted feelings in many. ;)

 

Thank you so much! As always we love your reviews!!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 24

oh my poor kira! this was a very intresting chapter. It was so intresting to see her slipping again. Right back into that confused mode. I can not wait for more i was utterly excited when i saw this updated. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 23

i could've sworn i reviewed this chapter? i don't remember what i said, but it was a wonderful chapter. Beautifully worded i loved it.



Author's Response:

:D You make us happy inside.

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 22

this was a lovely chapter!!!!!! wonderful absolutely wonderful lmao and hilarious. Melor is such a tool lmao but so cute and sweet! Pleeaaassseee update soon!!!!!!!!

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Date: 06 Apr 2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 21

awwww my poor galen! perfect chapter. I loved melor's impatient ass! you guys totally had me giggling at him. he was just too cute. At first when i saw he said something about escaping from his prison my heart dropped i was like " no way grigori!!!!!!" but then i calmed down when i realized it was only melor's impatient" i wanna get married now!" self.  I was laughing my ass off when Galen protect kira from katen' slap but melor's reaction was hilarious. he totally wasn't playing any games. As i said in previous chaptersi love the progress of kira and galen, and well as katen and melor. They are both exciting and addictive but i can't help but wonder...what's going on with Anya? or did i miss it? lovely chapter. UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!



Author's Response:

You are a wonderful person. :) Heeehee. We look forward to each of your reviews so much!

We maaay have written that bit with Melor to be purposefully tricksy. ;) But no! Katen remains peacefully unmolested by that barbaric twin! Melor is quite adorable. I think we'll keep him.

We are dragging our feet about the Anya bits, it's true. But we'll return to her skulking all in due time, we promise. No, you haven't missed anything. We just don't love writing so much angst. :P

Aaand it's back to work!!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 20

wonderful chapter, i loved Melor and kira's little interaction. he doesn't seem as ..put off with her and is intrested in the things she has to say about her and Katen.

love how patient kira was about the blood injection, and how careful galen was.  I'm really really intrested in those two and how their story will play out. I remember one of the coucil members was against galen and kira and i can't help but wonder what was his questionable reasons. Will their be more than one person to vie for kira's affections? Kira and Galen seem t obe developing slow and steady and i love that! Though i don't think bailey would like that at all lmao he reminds me so much of my yorkie tyson. He can't stand it if a guy is too close to me or near me he starts biting hands and feet lmao.

Now katen and melor's ...sex talk was so cute lmao. I found myself going "awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww" their story is something i'm very excted to see. I'm intresting in melors demeanor and how he'll act or respond when it comes to showing husbandly affection towards katen.

you two totally have to  update soon i really love this! can't wait for more babes!

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Date: 30 Mar 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 19

aww this was soo cute. i loved it. only thing i have a uestions about is melor's feelings toward kira he seems a bit cold towards her. But then again most men only care about their "loves" and not thier loves friends lmao. but seriously i loved this *on to the next chapter



Author's Response:

I'm afraid Melor is still a little miffed that Kira bit Katen when she first arrived. But don't worry, he warms up to her quickly :) We've missed you!!!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2011 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 9

Awesome! Loved it!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 18

This was some cliffy! i was glued to the screen. This chapter was perfection.

Staring with anya. What is her problem? I feel for katen. I have alot of friends i just tolerate for the sake of other friends. But Anya really does have some issues. She is so ....bitter. I can understand the turning but wow. Is it jealousy? Is she mad at her because melor's brother took kira as his waif? and treated her better? Or are these underlying feelings she had from before?

I love how strong katen is and how much she loves her friend. But i also love how Melor technically doesn't have to do anything, because Galen is extremely smart/ I love this budding connection between galen and kira. I can't wait to see where things head with those two! *bbouncing with excitment!*

OMG Melor, is becoming so . touchy and  it's cute to see how much he really wants katen. I'm very excited to see their relationship bloom and even more thrilled  that katen is falling for him.

Last but not least. The set up in the coucil room was so visual. i pictured it perfect wonderful job guys you're both so talented. Now use that talent and hurry up!! I'm too excited to see what happens next!!!! lmao j/k take your time i'll be waiting! great job!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

Awesome! Loved it! I'll be back later!

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 7

awww so sad! I wonder who that stranger was...hmm...

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 6

Awesome! I wonder what Kat would say if Galen to Kira as his vamp bride. Hmmm...

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 5

I so wasn't expecting him to bite her all of a sudden. Awesome!!!

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 4

He stole her car!!! OMG! LOL



Author's Response:

Those were Kira's thoughts exactly! :D

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it! =)

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 2

I'm totally hooked. Loooooooving it! I'll be back for more later! =)

~Jells

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thaigher Lillie rec'd this story! I'm really liking it!! =)  I'll be reading and commenting. But it'll take me some time to catch up, classes are a pain. lol

~Jells



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving it a try! Yes, that is always the question, study or read updates.... far too often I choose updates :P

~Kitty

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 17

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! I loved this. now i'm mad i gotta wait for more lmao! This is perfect! I definitely saw the love Katen had for kira, the love a bestfriend has for a person she considers a sister. WOnderful job honeybunnies!



Author's Response:

Yaaaay!! All is right with the world now that One Reviewer is happy! :D Thank you so much. We're so glad you took the time to read the new (REAL) chapter. :) Heehee. We're honeybunnies. XD

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 16

i can't wait fro more this was so good!!!! i'm so happy kira was found. Ya'll really tricked me! i though she was already found lmao



Author's Response:

Hehehe. Thank you ever so much! I look forward to your comments each time a new chapter is posted. And we worry about you whenever it's more than a day before you do. ;) No pressure or anything, we just love that you take the time to review each chapter.

Chapter 17 is currently in progress! :D Thanks again for the response!

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Date: 06 Feb 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 15

so what happened between kira and grigori? Why was anya killed? was it because how... violent she was? I'm assuming. Do the stakes kill them or subdue them? This was really good. like really fucking good. but i read it so fast lmao. i'mma have to read it again



Author's Response:

If you're interested in a more detailed account of Kira and Grigori's... experience, KittyPimms wrote it from Grigori's point of view and it has been posted as "A Turnings Companion". Not to worry though, more details will also be throughout the upcoming chapters. Chapter 16 is currently in the works and aaallll shall be revealed :) Thank you so much for your continued reviews!

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Date: 06 Feb 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

i loveedddthisssssssssssssss!!!! on to next chapter

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Date: 26 Jan 2011 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 13

Awwwwwww that was soo sweet i lovveedddd seeing their relationship bloom! Cant wait for more

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Date: 17 Jan 2011 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 12

awww this was so cutteeeee i love it!! thank you for updating!!

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Date: 12 Jan 2011 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

oohhhhhhh!!! this wass soooooooooo gooooooooooood update soon! you waited to long lmao j/k  i totally squeallled when i saw u guyss update lmao



Author's Response:

Aww, well thank you!! We're so glad you're enjoying it! I made it my new year resolution to have this story finished by the end of the year. I'm going to push for a chapter a week. They may not be released quite that often because of beta time and editing, but I'm hopeful! :)

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

awwwwww you guys totally have to updateee!! i want more!



Author's Response:

It has not been forgotten, and neither have you! :) The editing process is currently hindered by my very long work hours, but perhaps with some large espresso drinks I can get some writing done. ;) Thank you so much for your continual interest!

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 9

intresting chapter i loved it! you should definitely get more reviews. i must be annoying.  this is a really good story.



Author's Response:

Thank you! It is kind of sad... but we do love our one special reviewer! ;)

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 8

LOVVEDDDDD IT I WISH YOU'D UPDATE MORE



Author's Response:

I hope to get two more chapters out before the contest has closed, and once it's over there will be plenty more updates! Thanks so much for sticking with us so far!! You are a faithful reviewer.

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Date: 13 Aug 2010 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 7

awww this was sad! so i'm guessing that guy was katen's future hubby's brother?



Author's Response:

You shall see... ;) The plot, as they say, thickens.

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 6

oh dear, i wonder how katen is going to take the idea of Kira being turned...i have a feeling she won't lie down and take it lmao she's going to give somebody hell lmao j/k loved the chapter can't wait until you update again

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 5

i can't wait until you update..well at least i hope you i really like this story!

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

awww this was so saf...that bastard with his car stealing ass!

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

loved this , i love cats and kittens too! lmao

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

i love this fic! don't get me wrong. but i think melor is too close to Edward. it's only my opinion but i think you should try to give him his own characteristics and gifts. You owe it to him. he's your creation. in one of my fanfics for twilight. i researched a little bit about mythology and created my own characters that were needed for the story.  your story is so sweet i just wish melor had different powers, and characteristics from eddie. but job well done hun!.



Author's Response:

Hm. I get what you're saying but Melor is not at all an Edward. Not the original book Edward, anyway. It probably hasn't come out so distinctly yet because things are going so fast and we swich POV often, but Melor is a completely original character with his own personality and atributes. We didn't want this to be a story with vampires in their mythological sphere, which is why it may seem a little more like Stephenie Meyer than say, Bram Stoker or Anne Rice. Vampirism is more like a disease, a genetic mutation, or a disorder. Like lupus, or the X-Mex. Meyer gave her vampires each different powers and Edward happened to be the one who could mind-read. In our story, all the vampires have the ability to read minds as a means of survival, mutual communication, and hunting. Hang in there, because I think the difference will become more clear as we go along. For example, sunlight is not okay for our vampires to be hanging out in. ;)

Thanks so much for taking the time to review! I really appreciate the feedback. :)

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

i really like this!! i cant wait to read more!

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