Date: 11 Jan 2014 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 36
wow you wrote this a long time ago...as I am reading this now, it has been over a year since BD2 came out...over a year and no more Twilight....anyway, It looks to me like Bella can't keep this inside any longer. She will have to trust Edward or she will self-destruct.....I hope she picks the former rather than the latter. I hope Tanya rots in hell, the fucking bitch!
Date: 11 Jan 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 35
stupendous chapter....and yes, I'm wet.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 34
I am curious about what Stefan said and what it means. I love that Edward let her cum in public with the BFF and I think she loves it too....This nastiness and gossiping by club members about Bella and their relationship pisses me off. What a bunch of jealous cunts! ...and I don't like that word either! Kudos to Edward for reaching out to Leah and Jacob. Their interactions were amusing, for the most part, except when Leah got bitchy...
Date: 10 Jan 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 33
that sounds like one evil little device, that C-grip, if one is not allowed to come. If one IS allowed, then that changes everything....can't wait to hear his reasons.
Date: 10 Jan 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 32
finally...relief.
Date: 10 Jan 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 31
sweet family time, Cullen style. love it!
Date: 10 Jan 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 30
Today, reading this makes me sad. I wish I had someone to care about me as much as Edward cares about and for Bella....
Date: 10 Jan 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 44
I love this story however what i don't understand is if edward is falling in love with bella how could he treat her in the manner of a spoilt brat when she wanted to orgasism as often as possible. I get that he didn't want her spoiled but what he did to her in that scene to me did not represent love.....rather callous......even if he has rules in his playroom......how could he treat her like that if she is unaware of what her actions may mean? How does he figure out to claim her orgasisms when he is not her dominant? He seems to be making the rules up as he goes along and that is not safe maybe safe and consensual but not safe. I understand that she wants to play in the playroom as their scheduled usual but to me he seems to constantly go into being a dominant......and what i don't understand is how is she supposed to know the rules if he keeps withholding them and then changing them to suit him....
Date: 10 Jan 2014 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 29
He is very creative in the things he thinks up to put her in the right frame of mind.
Date: 10 Jan 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 28
what a beautiful and intense scene....with his hand signals, was he teaching her how to act at the club? loved every word of this chapter!
Date: 10 Jan 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 27
I'm reading this so long after you wrote it that I'll never get a teaser....but then again, I have another chapter to read next....I crave that next chapter....
Date: 07 Jan 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 110
Hi Louise. Happy New Year!!
Your story is an involved one and clearly takes a lot of time to work on. Perhaps you can give us a quick post, from time to time, letting us know that you're still working on your story and have not abandoned it.
You have many, many fans, some of whom check frequently for updates on your story.
thank you.
Date: 07 Jan 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 26
I think Jane provides a valuable service to Bella by showing her friendship and by showing her the philosophy behind their lifestyle. I particularly like the quote from that female Indian Guru....and agree with it, although I've never yet been able to live it.
Date: 07 Jan 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm really glad he was honest with her about how having to punish her hurt him too. Why would anyone think he was too hard on her? I don't think he was, not at all. His punishment was well thought out and appropriate to the offense. Love the story. Please finish it someday.
Date: 07 Jan 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
I can feel Edward's anguish from here.....She needs to take care of herself, value herself, like she does others.....
Date: 07 Jan 2014 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm still here, but can only read sometimes. It's OK, I hope maybe that you'll finish this before I get to chapter 110...I'm really enjoying your story here. Please continue it...
Date: 05 Jan 2014 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 109
This may sound weird but does anyone know who the beta is for this story that maybe we can ask her if Louise is ok health wise? It's been close to four months which she has never done but also hasn't answered any reviews which also is weird. If she need prayers or support she has a ton of us in her corner. I'll check back to see if anyone knows. Thanks!! Hoping your well Louise!!
Andie
Date: 05 Jan 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 110
Hello , I have to tell you how much I love this story. And I know that you are working as fast as you can to write the next chapter,just promise me that you will finish this story when you get a chance! thanks
L. Jacox
Date: 05 Jan 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 110
i miss you so much please come back i hope everything is ok i have been reading this story for over 2 years and is one of my favorite please dont leave
Date: 03 Jan 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
I hope your Holiday went well, we miss you here and your wonderful writing and wish so much that you would update this story. Much love!
Date: 01 Jan 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 22
God that was awful, what James did to her. I hope that Edward finds him and castrates the bastard! He loves her! She loves him! What else really matters....
Date: 01 Jan 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 21
Bella seems to be getting kind of passive-aggressive about Edwards requests/commands.....wonder how he'll deal with that besided the pie denial...
Date: 31 Dec 2013 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hi Louise,
I love your story.....ditr.......when can we expect an update....i miss them and your version of lemons.....lol.....
Date: 31 Dec 2013 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
took a break for the holidays now I'm back reading. this will take me a while....I really hope you finish this one day. I'm having a wonderful time savoring this beautiful story...
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2013 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 110
Louise:
Wishing you a happy New Year. It's been three months since you posted this chapter. I know real life gets I'm the was, but I really hope find the time to add to and eventually finish this story. It is a wonderful story. I have just finished my third complete read through. I was hoping chapt. 111 would be posted before I finished but maybe I'll get lucky and you will post soon.
Take care and thanks,
Sue
Date: 31 Dec 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is brilliant, hope you decide to continue x
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Louise,I wasn't sure if you knew that this story was bumped off FF.net. :-( I hope that hasn't stopped your progress at all...and that we can continue toward the end of the mystery soon. I'm glad I have you saved here as well...I don't want to miss what comes next. All my best to your and yours over the holidays. Best. S.
Date: 25 Dec 2013 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just wanted to wish you and your family a very Merry Christmas and all the best for the New Year!
I love you story and hope you will find the time to continue it in the near future.
Take care...
Date: 24 Dec 2013 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
No James stealing the collar, then...what a relief....I don't remember Alec....I really really can't stand Irena and Caius and wonder what their game really is....
Date: 24 Dec 2013 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am wondering what happened to Seth's collar. Is James coming around trying to find Bella? Geez I hope not! How is it that he beat her until she was almost paralyzed and got no jail time at all? How can that happen? It pisses me off royally! I don't like Caius or Irina...at all!
Date: 24 Dec 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
baby got back? no, that wouldn't be it...LOL! i'm no good at guessing. Does Edward hold anything against Bella that she does during their non-usual times when the go back to being dom/sub? I hope not cuz that just doesn't seem fair.... I love how Bella dunked Emmett to get him to shut up about her orgasm standard-writing...
Date: 24 Dec 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
I've often wondered what a clit clamp feels like....it sounds painful, but the way you write it, it doesn't.....until later and when it comes off....I'm immersed in your story, reading it every chance I get, in between and around the WIPs I read....
Date: 23 Dec 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
luscious lemony chapter indeed! I'm not sure if i think it was that fair of him, or if I get the point of him setting her up to fail at stopping her orgasm. I guess it's to learn control....but it seems like manipulation to me....still, I love the story!
Date: 23 Dec 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
loved the collar ceremony, especially what she said at the end. I love reading lemons, but even more so as they fit into the context of the story. I am very much enamored of this story.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
still reading and loving it! do you ever read new reviews like mine?
Date: 22 Dec 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
I think her first scene with him triggered her nightmare. I'm so glad she told him what happened. Yes, I would love to be secured to Edward's ceiling....i'm too old for that now, but in my younger days I would have loved to encounter this lifestyle and someone to care for me like this....you write a spellbinding story!
Date: 22 Dec 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
yeah, he would know if she used her frozen pop.....i wonder who was in that car that tried to run her down...was it james? has he come after her already?
Date: 22 Dec 2013 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
I laughed loudly, all by myself on the couch in my living room as I read this chapter, when she named his penis "Little Eddie", then thinking about the reality of it, renamed it "Mr. Ed". OMG he has a peen the size of a horse, was what I thought. Tickled me to no end! Very nice chapter, I'm glad she is getting more comfortable talking to him, telling him what she is thinking when he asks. I love how his compassionate side shows along with his dominant side....
Date: 22 Dec 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Is this part of the permanent disablilty that Aro was referring to or is that physical disablilty..? Poor baby, she thinks that Edward showing restraint is him not wanting her....I guess that is what she is used to. Haven't a clue what the lock numbers mean, but hope you tell me...
Date: 22 Dec 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
So this will be Edward's first foray into a 24/7 relationship with part dom/sub and part "normal" couple?
Date: 22 Dec 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm wondering what your own personal experience, if any, have you put into this story. This is an ususual request on my part, and one I expect you may not answer. I was just wondering what you know of this world from your real life. I enjoy reading these kinds of stories very much, some more than others. They all seem just a bit different from each other. I have no experience here, only intererst.
Date: 21 Dec 2013 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm a slow reader and that's all I have the time for now. I won't be around tomorrow, but will the next day, Sunday. Loving the story so far.
Date: 21 Dec 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm liking the story a lot....
Date: 21 Dec 2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
what's up with Edward? is she too close to his real life? hmmm....
Date: 21 Dec 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward sounds almost too nice to be a Dom....not that Doms can't be nice. I don't know, I guess something else comes out in him when he plays....love Carlisle!
Date: 21 Dec 2013 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
I decided that I'm in and reading no matter what. I like where I think this is going. It's a plus in my POV that you got kicked of FFN.....or so I heard. I can only read a few chapters a day, but I will keep reading until I finish. I want to hear more....
Date: 21 Dec 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds really promising, but I have a few questions.....well maybe just a couple. First let me say that I love this type of story and find few that I like. I'm hoping this is one of them. I'm concerned that you've been writing this for a LONG time, that it already has 110 chapters, and that it still is not marked complete. Do you intend to finish it? I really want to keep reading, and I probably will, but I would hate to get to chapter 110 and find that it never goes anywhere else....You certainly don't owe me an answer, but I would be very grateful to have one anyway.
Date: 21 Dec 2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 110
I noticed your not on FFnet anymore so will you be posting on TWCS Library for now
on???? I was afraid I had lost you or you dropped your story.....I'm so glad you
are going to keep going with it and I really like your story!!! This site never lets you
know when you have an update :(
Date: 15 Dec 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi there, upon completing your story for the second time I am still in awe. It is fan-damn-tastic. Unbelievable. But please please don't leave us hanging at the end!!!!! It's a great story, entertaining, tittilating... And the shit's just about to hit the fan!!! Plus, who the hell wouldn't want to know Edward's extraction plan?? ;) Seriously, though, I'd love to give you a lengthy review on every detail, but seeing as this is public, and I don't think everyone wants me to bore them by doing that, I'll just take it upon myself to kneel at your feet with clasped hands and plead... PLEASE PLEASE PLSEASE FRKN PRETTY PLEASE WITH EDWARD ON TOP FINISH THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 13 Dec 2013 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
A Christmas present for your loyal readers - a new chapter! How about it? Hope all is well in RL. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Goes without saying that this is one of the most popular stories in the fandom. Please continue it.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2013 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 110
Ive been reading this story non stop and I love it. I was wondering if you were going to keep writing it. Please update or let me know if your not going to continue. Thanks !
Date: 04 Dec 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 110
I can not tell u how much I have enjoyed this story. Thank u so much for sharing with us
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2013 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 110
i hope u havent given up on this story, i have been watching your blog for over 2 months now :( and nothing. i was reading on ff but it got pulled and found it here too, been checking all places non stop and nothing ~~~ just hope all is good in RL and that u are going to continue this GEM
Date: 29 Nov 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 110
hi
dont wanna hassle u but letting u know that i and i'm sure many others are out here desp waiting for more
xo
Date: 29 Nov 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 110
Hhhhh, 110 chapters, that’s a lot. But I did it. I read them all and I am in love with your story.
I love how you take the time to explain the complex relationship that is a Dom/sub relation.
I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Kisses
Date: 25 Nov 2013 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 110
This is a great story. Can't wait to see how this all needs. Thank you for shsring your wonderful talents.
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm not sure why you've been told that the conversations were hard to follow...
This is a promising start to what appears to be a VERY long story!
Date: 19 Nov 2013 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 110
I check your blog and thewriterscoffweshop daily for updates. I can't wait for the next chapter you're such a talented author. I hope everything is going well with you and we get a new update soon.:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2013 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 110
I love this story! Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story! Please update soon! It would be a great way for me to my my college semester ;)
Date: 15 Nov 2013 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 110
Update please? U r reaching the climax dont stop now
Date: 14 Nov 2013 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 110
I noticed DitR got pulled from FF.net, BOOO! I'm just glad I didn't miss a posting here. Any progress on the next chapter? Cause the suspense is killing me!
Date: 09 Nov 2013 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 110
Hey Louise, Just hoping everything is ok, it's been two months since you updated on TWCS or your Blog which isn't like you. I hope everyone is fine health wise. Please let us know!!
Date: 09 Nov 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 110
Are you writing this anymore
Date: 07 Nov 2013 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 110
I really love this book and have read it 3 times. Please update a chapter. I can't wait to see what happens!!
Date: 05 Nov 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 110
Oh my I'm soooooo happy to refind this story! I sooooo love it...its just so complicated and facinating! Emmett was brilliant and now we know why caius salvatore is so angry, but that scholarship is not .75 million dollars...can't wait to see it all work out!
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2013 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 110
That was so good! I loved it
Date: 01 Nov 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 57
I'm curious as to what the bells look like, I've never heard of that one but it sounds interesting. If you can I'd like to see it, if not no worries. Just curious :)
Date: 31 Oct 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 110
as always a great chapter. I have wondered do you have a sequel planned for this story
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2013 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 81
I have ALWAYS loved this story, and the only reason I have an account on this site is because it's not on FF.N anymore, as far as I can tell anywasys. This chapter is so hilarious and embarassing, and incredibly hot! Thank you!
Date: 22 Oct 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 110
Please update I love this story!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 110
I have been reading this story whenever I could make the time for the past three weeks. First I was a bit intimidated by the length of it, but now that I got that far, I have to say it's exactly right. There's not even one boring paragraph.
I started reading it on FFn, then it was deleted. Then I read several chapters on your blog but I missed the author's notes. After signing on here, I finished the rest of the published chapters here.
I really, really love this story and all, well, all the nice characters. Before reading this, I had absolutely no idea what BDSM was all about. I thought it was mainly spreader-bars and floggers. That's why I refused to read Fifty Shades. What you are writing here completely changed my opinion about the whole lifestyle. I never imagined respect to be so fundamental. The way it's mostly portrayed, it seems to be the opposite.
I hope you find the time to write and publish the next chapter soon. And I'm really happy that you're planning to do a sequel. There's so much more interesting things to learn about Edward and Bella. And I want to see them get married. Thanks for writing and sharing such a great story. And I can't wait to find out what's the story behind Bella's scholarship. The only thing I can imagine is, Phil's father paying for her education for some reason. If he's related to Caius, then it would maybe make sense. Please, hurry up and give us the next chapter.
Date: 18 Oct 2013 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. Looking forward to reading the rest :)
Date: 15 Oct 2013 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 110
I love this story!! I've been reading this from start till now for about three weeks. I m obsessed!! Please update soon!!
Date: 15 Oct 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 110
I can't find you on fan fiction. Hope you're back soon. Miss you!
Date: 12 Oct 2013 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 110
Loved it as always can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2013 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 110
i really love reading this story
Date: 11 Oct 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 110
Pllleeeaaassseee update. I'm hooked!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Phil's mom got pregnant from a tea her he did the right thing to stay in the back and take dare of bella by paying for school even if she is not blood related to him (victor). Now is there more money out there waiting for bella that calius wants or does he feel Phil's money should be hid.... hummmm he did say money hes father paying to cover his dirty secret. Alice needs to come to front because he latitude is BS.
Date: 01 Oct 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 109
I think that you are doing an amazing job of writing this story. You have touched on some things that most people would shy away from. The emotional termoil that can go along with this type of abuse can be quite harsh to oneself, let alone the other people around them. I comend you on your writing, and really enjoy your story.
Date: 28 Sep 2013 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just wanted to let you know how much i love this story, I will actually be very sad
when it is over. It's one of the best stories on this site. Just wanted to thank you
for keeping up with the story, i can imagin that it can get tiresome writing such a long story. Keep up the great work. look foward to reading any another stories you might put forth!
Sincerely, L.Jacox
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 110
There must have been some kind of special recommendation from Phil in his will to cover Bella's education at Dartmouth. Could this be from the investments that Mr. Dwyer made? Could this also be a factor in Caius' hatred of Bella?
Will Edward get his time in the playroom to readjust Isabella's distant attitude as well as her little outburst by snapping her fingers?
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2013 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 110
It begins to come clear. A lot of funny stuff going on. You are tying it up well.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 110
Oh you describing Bella eating makes my skin crawl. Lol I have to admit I have food issues. That is so inappropriate touching. LoL
I have to say I was so happy this chapter happened in Edward's POV. To see the level of love, commitment and love he holds for Bella is beautiful. I am so glad the missing piece of Phil was put together a little. Phil is related to Cauis the middle name is to much not to believe it. Phil's mother may not of named her sons father on his birth certificate but she did give him his name. And the way you snuck it in there and tied it to Bella's scholarship was genius.
When and how Edward though about helping Bella and himself with maintance was really sweet, sexy and hot all rolled into one. I love what a positive spin you put on it. There is no way that anyone can even hint that it may be abuse or violence when it's spoken of with such regard to her and his well being.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2013 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 110
Great chapter. Alice needs to grow the F up. B really has some messed up brain stuff huh? LOVED her snapping her fingers at him. Hated that they insinuate Bella didnt deserve college. Can't wait to see where the scholarship thing goes.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 110
Love yr story. Suck at reviewing, wanted to let you know I will stay tuned no matter how long it takes. Sorry some are giving y a hard time. Ignore them. I love yr writing and storyline. Again thanks for the good reading, Pamela Hanley pamhanley@tadaust.org.au.6
Date: 20 Sep 2013 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 110
Great chapter I can't wait for the next one. I'm thinking we have a connection of some sort Caius Salvatore is related to Victor Salvatore.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 110
At least your husband is sweet enough to pull over for you. Mine wouldn't. Great chapter. Alice just ugh. Otherwise great interaction. Btw Bella's food - gross. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2013 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 110
I can't believe Bella didn't check into the scholarship more. She did not get a scholarship. She got a sugardaddy. Someone paid all her expenses to get her out of Washington and away from James. This is probably the money Bella did not know she received. She was very not thinking if she thought her tuition, books, a private apartment, and expenses could be covered by ten thousand dollars. Edward needs to have the private eye look at this "scholarship" Bella received. It sure as hell was not the SANTZ. She could never meet the requirements for it.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2013 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 110
I have been loving this story and encourage you to keep writing. Wonderful... this hits all my favorites. Exppecially the D's relationship. Alice I bate right now mostly because my sister in law is her in attitude. How you are going to wrap this all up. wow. Four days .... cant wait to see ( read) thank you
Date: 19 Sep 2013 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 110
What is the deal with Bella's college??? I am thinking that Phil's will paid for Bella's schooling and was disgused as the scholarship for some reason. I am also thinking that when Edward looks into it, (which we all know he will), he will find something to tie Cauis to Phil and then to Bella. I just want to know why Alice was ok with being close friends with Bella during college and at the beginning of Edward and hers relationship but is not now. I know she knows about Edward/Bella's Dom/sub realationship and she does not like it but that is no reason for her to act like a bitch. And what is the deal with Alice/Jasper not wanting everyone to know about her pregnancy? Loving this story. As for me, I do not care how many more chapters there are in this story. I hope there are a LOT more chapters. I am not ready for this story to end. Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2013 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 110
WOW I REALLY ENJOYED THHIS CHAPTER AND I TOO WOULD LIKE TO KNOW HOW BELLA GOT A BASEBALL SCHOOLARSHIP I THINK IT ALL BECAUSE OF PHIL HE PAID FOR IT ALL. I'M I RIGHT?
Author's Response:
Ummm...I'll tell you this, I think your right about it having to do with Phil, but I don't think he could have paid for it since he was dead..but I guess we'll be finding out how it all fits together in the next chapter.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 110
Thank you for your update. This is great story. I like the way the various layers of Bella's past gets slowly incovered and I'm really curious about what is really going on.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2013 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 110
Thanks good chapter
Date: 19 Sep 2013 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
IF THERE IS A WAY FOR ME TO TALK TO YOU FOR YOUR EYES ONLY WILL YOU PLEASE SEND IT TO ME IN A E-MAIL I HAVE A VERY GOOD REASON FOR ASKING. THANK YOU
Author's Response:
Hi, there is a way, you can IM me on Facebook, I think that is secure or email directly at bonniegirl65@yahoo.com
Date: 19 Sep 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 110
lot of info in this chapter, and I cannot understand Alice, unless her pregnancy has made her bat shit crazy! Wonder if Bella is asking for a punishment to help her calm down?
Date: 19 Sep 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 110
the explanation about the started grill was so good
thank you