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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: LustoftheLibertines Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

Hahaha! I literally loved your last chapter :D 
The story is awesome, but the end is not some cliché, it's refreshing :)
Tha,k you for your imagination!
From France,
Bisous :)

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

What a hilarious way to end it!  Bella was sooo bad!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 65

I am very curious how Emmett will combat these thieves and cattle killers.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 53

Bella was so sweet to hear his confession with such understanding.  

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 33

I was glad that Bella was accepting of Rose.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 24

Love Alice!  I liked how she handled Emmett and gave advice to Bella.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 21

I wonder how the ride will go.  I wonder if Alice sees that Emmett is distracted.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 20

 I wonder what he will say to Jasper.  

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 19

I wonder if Bella and Alice will find out about Rose.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loving the image of a tiny Alice.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 17

I love that Bella can ride a horse.  Edward is certainly stepping in it!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 16

I am enjoying the Spanish lesson.  I am glad Bella is making him grovel.  I like Alice.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love Carmen!  Interesting that you made Alice an orphan here raised by nuns.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 14

I wonder how long Bella will harbor hurt feelings.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 13

I like Carmen and Elezar.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 12

I like Jasper.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 11

That is an awesome entrance for Alice!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 10

What happened to Alice?  I can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 9

That was one crazy scene.  I am glad EEmmett believed Bella.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh this is good!  

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 7

So sweet!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 6

So here is Alice!  I am very curious how she will take to Emmett.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 5

I am very curious how Bella will meet Edward.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 4

And I thought the mail order bride would be Rose.

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

Emmett is cute trying to curb his tongue!

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

Makes me wonder if Jasper will make a play for Bella. 

Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love a period fic!  This is really an interesting start.

Reviewer: archy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

they do have a knack of getting caught at the wrong time,don't they?i can't even imagine how embarrassing it must have been when Charlie reported everything openly.

great read.i am so glad i could read it in full!

Reviewer: mbatter Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 10

Alice?! Hahaha!

Reviewer: mbatter Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 8

uh oh!! lmbo!

Reviewer: mbatter Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

Alright, Edward!

Reviewer: mbatter Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 6

He'll end up w Rosie, and Alice w Jasper. But where is Edward? I can't wait!

Reviewer: mbatter Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 3

I'm really liking Carmen. She brings the Latin flavor

Reviewer: mbatter Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

I knew that was what Jasper was thinking, ha! Love stories set during this time, excited to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

I just love this story. Again.

Reviewer: Jrjones44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

Wow, really loved this story. Thanks for a really good read.

Reviewer: FanOfFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

I joined this cattle drive late,  but I'm sure glad I did. What a great story. Now I'm off to catch up with the sequel. 

Reviewer: Jrjones44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 5

I am loving this story. I am always a sucker for a period piece and a good story line and it looks like I am getting both here.

Reviewer: black sadie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 11

Thank you so much.  I cannot tell you how hard I laughed just picturing the scene of Alice beating down on Eric Yorkie.  I really needed that.  Sunday was my deceased daughter's birthday. She would have been 30.  We lost her almost 3 years ago.  So I have been down with her birthday approaching.  She was a big fan of fanfiction and wrote many stories herself.  Looking forward to reading more. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Sarah Beth Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2011 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 11

I'm an idiot but great story

Reviewer: Sarah Beth Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 10

ch 10 finished

Reviewer: angie_rae Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this story. Thank you for sharing with us.

Reviewer: SummerS2love Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

hi great chapter
His story was amazing
I simply loved it: D
kisses, until the next

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

Awesome story. I started this story today early in the morning and couldn't stop reading it. Thank u very much for giving out a lil piece of urself. I truly loved it

Reviewer: missouriangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

Loved the Story! I'm so excited that you have a sequel!!!

 

 

ANgel

Reviewer: missouriangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 12

poor Jasper....  I hope it works out

 

 

ANgel

Reviewer: missouriangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

I laughed so hard through this chapter!

 

 

Angel

Reviewer: missouriangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh no...Emmetts gonna hurt him!

Loved they way they met.

 

ANgel

Reviewer: missouriangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 7

Yay they have met! And how embarrassing..but I really like that he was enjoying the view...tehee

 

Angel

Reviewer: missouriangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 5

Coward... pricsless!

 

Angel

Reviewer: missouriangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

Awww Poor EM :(

 

Angel

Reviewer: missouriangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

Emmett really cracked me up with the not trying to curse..

 

Angel

Reviewer: missouriangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ok Just started this! Very different read!!!

 

Angel

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

awww poor edward lol.....glad it ended this way!:)

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2011 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

so nice:))

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 33

I know I'm late to the table, but I'm really enjoying this story!

Reviewer: KeeWit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 12

This chapter was really funny!

Reviewer: KeeWit Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 9

Good chapter!

Reviewer: KeeWit Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh boy. That's awkward. I hope Emmett doesn't kill Edward before he and Bella can explain the situation.

Reviewer: Mrs M Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

I just finished reading the entire story and I just wanted to say that I loved it!!!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2011 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

I perposly left this until it was finished and I have to say...LOVED IT!!!!

Wonderful story and I am sure you could have kept going, but I understand it has to end somewhere. 

Thank you for this story.

Reviewer: amhall1977 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

that was to cute i love the way you write  can't wait to see what else you have writen

thank you

angel

Reviewer: Pcdogmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

LOL. Great ending to a great story! Loved the kids names too Charlie, Billy and Harry. Or - charles, william and Harry

Reviewer: bellamamii Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 25

bahahha, Leave it to Em to fart during church.

Reviewer: icequeen83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 17

I really enjoy reading your western story, although the scenerie is normally not my first choice. But as many reviews you got I decided to give your story a chance and I got rewarded. I can not stop me from reading in every free minute.

 

Thanks for writing

All the best from Austria

 

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

God, I loved that.  Sorry I didn't review every chapter, but like I said before, I was too excited to get to the next one.  Off to Untamed Hearts now...promise to review more!

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 70

I'm on pins and needles again!  Thank God I don't have to wait or I'd die!

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 50

I owe you a huge apology.  I had 50 chances to leave a review, but in my owne defense, I was too eager to move on, so I didn't.  Sorry.

I love westerns, but have found over time that I have a hard time reading them, much preferring to watch them.  This story changed that for me.  I actually wrote one and have it waiting to be posted on another site because, aw shucks, ma'am, who don't love a cowboy? 

So, I have to say, I'm so pleasantly surprised that I'm anxious to get on to the next part, but I had to let you know that much like the 2000+ posters, I'm in love!  Can't wait to see how it turns out.

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

Edward will never get to pass the rubbing one out and getting caught will he?!

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 89

Spare any more embarrassment for Edward, he's had quite a bit already!

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 88

Post congrats on your dissertation Dr!!

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Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 86

I had a suspicion that they'd get the ranch from Mallory(bank). Karma

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 85

 

This chap has me laughing out loud in a fit of giggles. At least Rose played off things or else all hell would break loose. Got to luv Em and his big ass mouth coming in buck ass naked.

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 84

A nightmare! Will they get alone time or will everyone be around on their pre-honeymoon time? Rosie's knocked up, but unwed. She sure is stubborn, haha.

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 83

Wow, the story behind James' motive was creative indeed. What a twist.

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 81

So Carmen and Rosie bonded over Mallory, haha. Looks like Alice is leader of the pack to get'R Done!

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 80

Dear Rosie blew that SOB away! His Mexican comment had my rifle aiming into his mouth, glad Rosie pulled the trigger, lol.

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 79

Jenks to the rescue!

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 77

Carmen is pissing me off with her snarky comments! R.I.P. Tyler.

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 75

Yikes...a nightmare, a perv touching her?

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 74

Poor Rosie is tough as nails living a hard knocked life, able to handle Carmen's harsh welcome and insults. But, in charge she is and doing a fine job at that!

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 73

How sweet of Jas kissing Alice's wounded face.

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Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 72

I didn't expect Carmen to respond like that, I wonder what's up?

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 71

Ugh, James is disgusting.

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 70

Alice is badass taking the law into her tiny skilled hands. Rosie to the rescue. Awe Edward thinking of Auntie Esme's pregnancy and not wanting her stressed and the baby too.

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 68

I can't imagine riding a horse full speed for so many hrs full of anxiety not knowing what is happening!

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 67

This is keeping me interested, is El dead? Bella kidnapped... How long before the guys find out what happened? I must read on to find out!

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 66

Oh no the poor animals...

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Date: 28 Jan 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 64

No kidding, their engagement is a surprise. I hope Alice doesn't feel cheated. Damn Emmet's big ass mouth, give him a shiner Alice plz.

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 63

All good in the hood! Except poor Emmy-Bear and Rosie :-(

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 62

Those two shits should drink up that water.

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 61

So now Edward knows he won't be a broke bitch, I mean cowpoke anymore.

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Date: 28 Jan 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 60

Oh my "one shot" Alice Brandon! I was hoping she didn't kill her father, like if he was some perv or something. Glad she blew that dirty fucker away, filthy judge. Go Jasp, standing by his woman. I hope nobody finds her, poor little Ali soon to be Mrs. Whitlock. Not that she couldn't defend herself, haha.

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 59

Yea, the Cullen's are pregos. Awe Edward thinks about making babies with Bella. Now, Alice is engaged, lol!!!

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 58

Sheriff Jasper is frisky!! Shot gun wedding, I always thought it meant when someone was knocked up. But, literally holding a shot gun to Alice's head is f'n hilarious. 

Reviewer: wildboutdacats Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2011 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 56

Edward got caught, and Em saying he better not be thinking about Bella had me giggling. Poor guy must have blue balls, hmm I could help him out, haha. So Edward is a carver, how precious the rose is handmade with love.

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