Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:00 PM Title: Secrets EPOV
i thought these two o/t were great ;) i have a thought for another one maybe you could write a lemon where bella took control ie D/s ? ;)
Date: 07 Jan 2014 2:25 PM Title: Secrets EPOV
Love your writing...any author who could make me pissed at edward, when I normal love him has awesome talent. That being said im going to yell at edward now. Make her suffer like you...you made her suffer for 7 years its pay back for you to suffer jackass! Awesome ottake
Date: 28 Sep 2010 6:45 AM Title: Secrets EPOV
I can see the hurt that Edward is feeling he has been afraid of her walking out on him for so long and he cracked.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 6:27 AM Title: Breakdown
Poor girl so tramatic so lost and not knowing how to get out.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 4:27 AM Title: Secrets EPOV
Oh, poor, stupid, drunk Edward. Keep digging that hole, it's doing wonders, can't you tell? Why don't they ever think you can walk away from the situation without walking away from them? Fools.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 16 Sep 2010 1:55 AM Title: Breakdown
I love the outtakes....so nice have both the POV...I love the facebook page. it's a great ideia...
Date: 15 Sep 2010 11:20 PM Title: Secrets EPOV
well it shows how edward just dose and dosent talkt to her about anything! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 15 Sep 2010 8:10 PM Title: Secrets EPOV
eddie is an idiot
Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:08 PM Title: Secrets EPOV
I loved hearing Edward's thoughts. Sometimes I feel like I have this love/hate relationship with this Edward. LoL. I love how he can be so nice and sweet, but there are times like this when he can be such a prick. I'm actually glad you suggested reading the original chapter because he makes up for it in the end. Thanks for the glimpse of Edward's thoughts, I really enjoyed reading it.
Elli :)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:46 AM Title: Breakdown
good job, now i understand a little more
Date: 22 Jul 2010 1:46 AM Title: Breakdown
Heartbreakingly beautiful.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:04 AM Title: Breakdown
Great POV for Bella's breakdown. I would love to read an outtake in Edward's point of view during Jake and Leah's wedding reception when he is speaking with Charlie and dealing with Bella's disappearance and aftermath.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I'll keep that in mind and I'll see what I can do! :)
xx
Gelix