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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:00 PM Title: Secrets EPOV

i thought these two o/t were great ;) i have a thought for another one maybe you could write a lemon where bella took control ie D/s ? ;)

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 2:25 PM Title: Secrets EPOV

Love your writing...any author who could make me pissed at edward, when I normal love him has awesome talent. That being said im going to yell at edward now. Make her suffer like you...you made her suffer for 7 years its pay back for you to suffer jackass! Awesome ottake

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 6:45 AM Title: Secrets EPOV

I can see the hurt that Edward is feeling he has been afraid of her walking out on him for so long and he cracked.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 6:27 AM Title: Breakdown

Poor girl so tramatic so lost and not knowing how to get out.

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2010 4:27 AM Title: Secrets EPOV

Oh, poor, stupid, drunk Edward. Keep digging that hole, it's doing wonders, can't you tell? Why don't they ever think you can walk away from the situation without walking away from them? Fools.

Cheers, Balti K

Reviewer: lenecarter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 1:55 AM Title: Breakdown

I love the outtakes....so nice have both the POV...I love the facebook page. it's a great ideia...

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 11:20 PM Title: Secrets EPOV

well it shows how edward just dose and dosent talkt to her about anything! cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 8:10 PM Title: Secrets EPOV

eddie is an idiot

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:08 PM Title: Secrets EPOV

I loved hearing Edward's thoughts. Sometimes I feel like I have this love/hate relationship with this Edward. LoL. I love how he can be so nice and sweet, but there are times like this when he can be such a prick. I'm actually glad you suggested reading the original chapter because he makes up for it in the end. Thanks for the glimpse of Edward's thoughts, I really enjoyed reading it.

Elli :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:46 AM Title: Breakdown

good job, now i understand a little more

Reviewer: Ella Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 1:46 AM Title: Breakdown

Heartbreakingly beautiful.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)


Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:04 AM Title: Breakdown

Great POV for Bella's breakdown. I would love to read an outtake in Edward's point of view during Jake and Leah's wedding reception when he is speaking with Charlie and dealing with Bella's disappearance and aftermath.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'll keep that in mind and I'll see what I can do! :)


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