Date: 07 Jan 2014 2:25 PM Title: Secrets EPOV
Love your writing...any author who could make me pissed at edward, when I normal love him has awesome talent. That being said im going to yell at edward now. Make her suffer like you...you made her suffer for 7 years its pay back for you to suffer jackass! Awesome ottake
Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:08 PM Title: Secrets EPOV
I loved hearing Edward's thoughts. Sometimes I feel like I have this love/hate relationship with this Edward. LoL. I love how he can be so nice and sweet, but there are times like this when he can be such a prick. I'm actually glad you suggested reading the original chapter because he makes up for it in the end. Thanks for the glimpse of Edward's thoughts, I really enjoyed reading it.
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:04 AM Title: Breakdown
Great POV for Bella's breakdown. I would love to read an outtake in Edward's point of view during Jake and Leah's wedding reception when he is speaking with Charlie and dealing with Bella's disappearance and aftermath.
I'll keep that in mind and I'll see what I can do! :)