[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2015 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 13 BPOV
i loved these o/t i especially liked the jenks pov ;D
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 13 BPOV
I don't know how Edward did not completely lose it with Bella. Now being in her head and seeing that she was playing games with him when she really, really wanted him make me want t smack him around. I like being in Edward's head better. ;)
Author's Response:
Hmm well I think she was justified in her behavior. He fucked with her head first, she just did it back. Maybe she took it too far but he kinda deserved it as well, in my mind. I like being in his head the most too.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
God, yes, high school kids can be so effing cruel. All hail Smugward for taking revenge.
And as nasty as he is, he's actually really, really sweet. I'm sure he'd just HATE that I said that... lol
Author's Response:
Haha he is very sweet when it comes to his Bella. He'd deny it to the grave but we all see it and he even knows it :) Glad you liked the revenge, I got requests for more so we'll see :)
Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 12 Outtake, Jenks POV
Jaws, heh. That's some funny shit.
Author's Response:
Haha Glad you liked it :) Poor Jenks!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Unfortunately, I know how real this situation is (as a high school teacher). While I am not allowed to feel emotion about these situations professionally, I'm glad this has given an outlet in the fantasy world. Thank you for unleashing Smugward and Possessiveward on their depraved asses!
Great outtake....very powerful.
And, OMG...will he just say the 4 letter world already?!?!?!? (I'm not really angry; it's more entertaining to have him battle his inner jiminy cricket!)
Author's Response:
Yeah, you definitely see a bunch of stuff I don't want to think about. It seemed fitting to do something like that, with all the cell phone pervasiveness these days. It was very hurtful but Smugs was a good boyfriend, controlling his anger pretty well all things considered.
I already have demands for more revenge, seeing what he does to Tyler and Eric and how Mike reacts to his sudden failing and no money. So another outtake is probably in the planning stages!
He's getting close! I promise :) haha I like the inner voice too much to have him give in just yet but we're close :) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love Smugward! He is the best vamp boyfriend a girl could ask for. I love that he worked around Bella's request to not kill Mike. He is smart and devious and I just love his evil ass!
Author's Response:
:) Haha Thank you! He's a very good boyfriend and he's come a long way in a short amount of time, managing to contain his anger and comfort her instead of rampaging through the house. Not that he wasn't going to get his revenge, mind you. I've had a request to do another outtake of said revenge taking place and I have some ideas so yeah, it'll come ;) So glad you liked it!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
This was a great chapter. It really added to the story line. Thanks for posting this! I love outtakes.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm going to post it into the main story since so many more people follow that but it'll wait til after the next chapter on Monday. I'm really glad you liked it :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 12 Outtake, Jenks POV
Jenks is a sad little man, but he is pretty damn funny too.
Author's Response:
Haha yes, he's both of those things. He's chosen his life and it's not that fun but he does find comfort in his power and money I guess. To each their own!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved reading Bella's POV for this part of the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks! It was surprisingly easy to slip into her head. I was afraid I didn't understand her since I see her through E's eyes but I do :)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 12 Outtake, Jenks POV
Poor Jenks is scared shitless of Edward.. Wonder if Edward ever had anything to do with Jane.
Author's Response:
Haha No, Edward never did anything with Jane, though he probably would have to punish Jenks at some point. I don't put it past him!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
UGH!! POOR BELLA!! :-( I'm not sure I like the selfish Edward of this story, but VampirElla is DAMN sexy!! :-P
Author's Response:
Haha Smugs takes a little getting used to be he's actually quite charming and quite taken by Bella :) Glad you like her!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was amazing....reading Bella's pov through that night. Incredible chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! It was fun thinking like she does for once...not as scary as I feared but she wasn't vamped out yet! We'll see what the other chapters are like! :)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
OH THIS IS GOOD.. I like her point of view.. NICE JOB..
Author's Response:
Thank you! There's a couple more to come and I'm working on a Jenks outtake right now :) Glad you liked it, getting in her head was surprisingly easy! Guess I know her better than Smugs does!