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Reviewer: Queendel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 3:45 AM Title: Epilog - Chapter 27

Very nice.  It is good for people, even different species and normally mortal enemies,  to come to respect, care and love each other and for a fic to show that.



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Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 3:43 AM Title: Epilog - Chapter 27

I loved this story.........so sad it had to end. I really enjoyed it!!!!!!! I read it in 2 days ;-)



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Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 12:49 AM Title: To Sleep, Perchance to Dream- Chapter 11

Sounds like the Voltori are keeping tabs on her. Those are the eyes that Nessie keeps seeing in her vision.



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Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2011 7:28 AM Title: Visions and Dreams-Chapter 3

Oh my........another Alice?



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Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2011 7:15 AM Title: Welcome Home-Chapter 2

I think that was such a nice idea of Nessie having a house built for him and his pack brothers ;-)

Reviewer: Starfish_2014 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 12:14 AM Title: Sharing Strength - Chapter 23

Kinda. Confused me at some parts because its one big paragraph. Can't wait for the next chapter!! Love this story!!

Author's Response:

One big paragraph? Not sure what you mean. Glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2011 12:51 AM Title: Sharing Strength - Chapter 23

so cool!



Author's Response:

Glad you approve. Hope it keeps meeting your expectations

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 3:33 AM Title: Thirst and Addiction - Chapter 22

this story is so fascinating, interesting,  thought provoking!  I have been reading it all day after starting this morning. Not much accomplished today! Cannot wait to have more. Hope RL lets you get more written for us!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much. I hd to walk away for a while, but am determined to complete it now. Thank you for the encouragement.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 8:41 PM Title: Sunshine Can Burn-Chapter 12

interesting direction with this-Aro on the good side?

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 8:02 PM Title: Growth-Chapter 7

yes-now for the good stuff!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 7:52 PM Title: Coupled Off-Chapter 6

yes! she knows!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 7:46 PM Title: Imprint 101-Chapter 5

so sweet to see that Edward and Jake have come the full circle-

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:30 PM Title: Visions and Dreams-Chapter 3

a little bit of Aunt Alice in her!!!!



Author's Response:

Perhaps... but wait and see. It is explained.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:30 PM Title: Welcome Home-Chapter 2

awwww....  so cool. Glad Rosalie is even coming around!



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Time heals all things, even Rosalie. :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:22 PM Title: One Tribe-Chapter 1

What a great beginning!  I am overjoyed to read something different then the same old Bella/Edward stuff. Your writing is so well done, easy to follow but filled with emotions and details!  Anxious to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: Elektralane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:38 AM Title: Round One -Chapter 21

This is an awesome story! I read half of it last night and now finshed what you have up so far. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I am glad you are enjoyng it.

Reviewer: MYSTICPIXIE Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:19 PM Title: Mountain Vistas-Chapter 20

When will you be updating again as it's been a while and i'm wondering what happens next.

Reviewer: dan4u Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 11:48 AM Title: Mountain Vistas-Chapter 20

hey there,

 

Just wanted to let you know I really love your story so far!

 

Thank you for your efforts and sharing your story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Please continue to read and review.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2010 1:08 AM Title: Mountain Vistas-Chapter 20

Sorry I havent been free... School and all but nice chapter!

Author's Response:

Things here have been busy as well, I do hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 1:28 AM Title: Blood and Fear-Chapter 19

Burry Jake Nessie needs you!

Poor demetri

And ha nahuel what a bafoon

Author's Response:

I know, ooe Demitri; glad you think Nahuel deserved what he got. Hold onto your hat; resuce mission coming up soon.

Reviewer: dearjae Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:46 PM Title: Blood and Fear-Chapter 19

Great chapter!  More!



Author's Response:

Thank you. Another chapter will be up soon.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2010 6:41 PM Title: The Heart Knows-Chapter 18

:-0 let's see how this plays out

Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying the story. :)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:23 AM Title: The Heart Knows-Chapter 18

I like that Jane is softening... I can't wait for Jake to rescue her!  Well done!



Author's Response:

familial love will do that to you.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:34 PM Title: Where-so-ever I May Go-Chapter 17

Oh my dude we need more lol

Author's Response:

I am working on thenext update, it is just a hair slow... Want it perfect for ya.

Reviewer: dearjae Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:40 PM Title: Where-so-ever I May Go-Chapter 17

Wow, what a good chapter!  I can't believe he got Ness, can't wait to see how/if they rescue her!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 2:18 AM Title: Kisses and Committments-Chapter 16

What did bag homewrecker message over to her?!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 12:30 AM Title: Kisses and Committments-Chapter 16

Very yummy chapter!  Can't wait to see it play out some more!  Well done!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 7:04 PM Title: Relationship advice-Chapter 15

More good story!  More, more, more!



Author's Response:

It will be coming soon, I promise.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 2:50 PM Title: Relationship advice-Chapter 15

:-) aww how adorable

Shove that in nahuels face and make him eat it

Author's Response:

EXACTLY.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 11:51 PM Title: Science Sucks-Chapter 14

Don't worry take your time! I love this story! :-) and I need pictures of nahuel and gwen so I can put a face on these characters :-)


No more dying wolves please definatly the clearwaters

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 1:33 AM Title: A Whisper in My Ear-Chapter 13

Oh no!!!! In need of another chappie!

Author's Response:

I am writing as fast as I can. Keep reviewing and I swear I'll write even faster.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 12:28 PM Title: Sunshine Can Burn-Chapter 12

Freaking Caius!!!
And I can't wait for a Jake vs Nahuel throw down!

Yay yay!

Author's Response:

I am thrilled you are enjoying it, but you will have to wait for a while for that throw down. Please keep telling me what you think.

Reviewer: dearjae Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:51 PM Title: Sunshine Can Burn-Chapter 12

Great story!  Can't wait to see what happens!  Love the voice you gave Nessie and you did a great job of capturing the other's characters true to the original story.  Well written and can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It is my first attempt at fan fic and I am really glad people are responding favoribly.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2010 12:48 PM Title: To Sleep, Perchance to Dream- Chapter 11

What's going on!!

Author's Response:

Little cliffy. It will soon be explained. Hang in there with me, please.

 

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 12:45 AM Title: Through Space and Time- Chapter 10

the voltorri no doubt or some random vamp out for revenge... cantwait for the next update :-)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for the support.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 2:47 AM Title: Through Space and Time- Chapter 10

Nahuel -_-

Author's Response:

Patience, he is coming, but perhaps not as you will expect.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 12:55 AM Title: Crossed Wires-Chapter 9

:-)'yay now when does mr nahuel come to run the happy happy

Author's Response:

Soon... young Paduin soon!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 6:30 PM Title: Heads Up-Chapter 8

:-)
Aww super mushy bromance!

Author's Response:

I have always thought that w/o the complication of Bella they would be freinds.

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 5:59 PM Title: Coupled Off-Chapter 6

:-)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 5:58 PM Title: Imprint 101-Chapter 5

great update

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 5:42 PM Title: Visions and Dreams-Chapter 3

Great update!! I hope she has a new power!!!

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 5:24 PM Title: One Tribe-Chapter 1

I like the start of this story



Author's Response:

I am so glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:03 PM Title: Growth-Chapter 7

Fathers!!!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:51 PM Title: Coupled Off-Chapter 6

I think shell be super pissed when he confess's
Cuz he could have saved her from wondering deeply even with this talk

Author's Response:

oh yeah, there are some misunderstandings coming.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:22 AM Title: Imprint 101-Chapter 5

Adorable addition to your story!

Author's Response:

Thank you. We are heading into the Jake/Nessie relatioonship mode for a while. Enjoy.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:15 AM Title: Transmutation-Chapter 4

I think it could come in handy! But if she seen Claire get hurt after she was hurt it could also become a distraction!
Is this what I'm sensing?!

Author's Response:

Well, not exactly, but if she only sees the danger after something has happened... Duh Duh Duh! (Cue the danger music)

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:05 AM Title: Visions and Dreams-Chapter 3

Oh wow this is new and original in all my Nessie readings! Keep it up

Author's Response:

Thankis I am so glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:37 PM Title: Welcome Home-Chapter 2

I didn't understand last paragraph

Author's Response:

Jake feels that Nessie is his home. In her arms he feels most at home.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:10 AM Title: One Tribe-Chapter 1

What an amazing first chapter I will be reading chapter two asap! I'm now sleepy :-)!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I have really connected with the characters and wanted the story to continue. It's my first fan-fic. I hope you continue to enjoy it. I have several chapters ready so will be updating as regularly as I can.

Reviewer: K-princess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 7:43 PM Title: One Tribe-Chapter 1

great beginning. I lie your idea so far and I hope that you'll update the next chapter soon. Jake is realy sweet in your story. Keep the good work up. ;) ^^



Author's Response:

I am so glad you like it. It is the first thing I have written for something like this. Chapter two is up. PLease keep responding.

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