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Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2017 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 - EPOV

testing reviews

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2015 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

Besides a few tears at Charlie's grave, this has been a great story! Boy, do I love a really happy ending!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all of the reviews for this story. I loved writing it and I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it.

~Jenn

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 4 - BPOV

Now things are back to the way they should be, Bella and Edward are together!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 3 - EPOV

I might have known that asshole would lay hands on Bella for calling Edward and telling him she loved him! I hate men who beat women, they aren't men even, because a real man doesn';t hit those weaker than himself! I'm so glad Edward is in Forks with Bella and her mom!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 - BPOV

Too damn bad about angry blue eyes! If he wasn't such a selfish bastard, she wouldn't have turned to her old love!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 - EPOV

Eavesdroppers never hear anything good, do they? There is something happening here, with them both dreaming of each other like that!

Reviewer: nello1418 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

short and sweet, i really enjoyed reading this.

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2013 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

i love you story. I think you continue it

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2011 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

I guess that's it... sweet story...

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2011 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 3 - EPOV

You know, had he talked to Bella initially and made sure they decided together where they wanted to live before either accepted job offers, they could have eliminated a lot of heartache.  Edward was pretty worried about himself when those early decisions were made... he told her what to do, then made a telling choice for himself... sure hope he's evolved...

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2011 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 2 - BPOV

Wow, I think Bella needs to get out of there fast!  Looks like circumstances may allow them to reunite.  Good story!

Reviewer: linelia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

wow epic



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

aww

Reviewer: EvernightressIris Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - EPOV

when i saw the name lips of an angel it reminded me bout this song tht fits perfestly wit the story! ITs lips of an angel by Hinder and its AWESOME! look it up on youtube! also GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT Story!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this story.  It was an entry into a contest where you write a 5 chapter story using a song as inspiration.  I noted it in my summary and also credited Hinder in the disclaimer.  Had to make sure I gave props to them for the inspiration ;)

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review.

Reviewer: tinhunny Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

awwwww....................nice

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

I just loved this story! 

 

Keye

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

Wonderful story.  I look foward to reading other stories you have written.

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

Okay, I'll admit I was very nervous in the beginning but this was came through in the end!! Thanks for the happy ending! Great job!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you hung in there and liked it in the end :)

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 4 - BPOV

*sighs* I wish they would have been more open and honest, but at least they are now. Thank goodness for that!

Author's Response:

I think Edward always doing what he thinks is best for Bella is one of his tragic character flaws that can't be overlooked.  It fit perfectly into this plot.

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 3 - EPOV

Well I'm not happy about James hurting Bella but at least Edward and Bella are back together. Now i can breathe easy.

Author's Response:

The whole James being abusive was never the plan from the start.  It just evolved into that as I was writing.  I couldn't wait to get B&E back together in this one.  I let out a sigh of releif when I finished writing this chapter.

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 2 - BPOV

So ... Both Tanya and James know about Edward and Bella. Hmmm gotta go to next chapter and find out what happens. See you on the flip side ;-)

Author's Response:

Yeah, E/B were so important to one another that I couldn't see them living a life where they were a dirty little secret.

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 1 - EPOV

Okay ... Not sure what to make of this yet - I get nervous when Bella and Edward aren't together but maybe they're gonna get back together already? Let's see what happens ...(it's a great story, but you know I don't do well with angst *smirks*)

Author's Response:

Yeah, it is a bit angsty but if you know the song then it has to be angsty.  Have faith in me.  I'm a total E/B happy ending kind of gal ;)

Reviewer: charv241 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

enjoyed the story!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked this story :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

~Jenn

Reviewer: halconmia Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

Beautiful ending!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the ending :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

~Jenn

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

Great story! I loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I loved writing it and it makes me so happy to know other people liked it too.

Thank for reading and reviewing :)

~Jenn

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

that was a good story  i liked it

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

~Jenn

Reviewer: LittleMiss1104 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

awww! i love this! this story is probably one of my favorite multi-shots! I want an Edward! lmfao!

hearts!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  This story was so easy to write.  I'm really late to the party and only discovered the song less than a year ago.  The first time I heard it this whole story played out in my head.  I was so happy when this contest happened.  It was the push I needed to finally write it down.  Yes, I think everyone wants an Edward.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: loveofjasper Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

cant wait for the move to NY



Author's Response:

I eventually want to add a few more chapters of them in New York.  Of course I have a long list of things to write, so not sure when that will be.

Thanks so much for reading Lips of an Angel and reviewing!

Reviewer: loveofjasper Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 3 - EPOV

James better be glad Charlie is deceased- because  noone hurts his little girl.



Author's Response:

Oh yeah!  Charlie would've hunted him down if he'd known he treated Bella bad.  I love Charlie :)

Reviewer: loveofjasper Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 2 - BPOV

oh shit now Bella has to deal with the asshole- wonder what all he heard

I love the story swirching pov



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Switching POV seemed the best way to tell the story.

You are an angel for reviewing!

Reviewer: loveofjasper Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - EPOV

Jameas does sound like a true ass- and he will still be one in the morning!  As for Tanya- sorry but the truth hurts sometimes and she had to knoq she did not have his whole heart.



Author's Response:

Yes, James is a true ass.  The morning dos not improve that at all ;)

Yes, Tanya knew but hoped she could change it.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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