Date: 01 Mar 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 32
Bella needs to realize a lot of men freak out about having the first baby. Maybe not as much as Edward did in this story, but it is common. It is the ultimate sign that you have to grow up and be an adult. They also had not been talking about children, so he wasn't prepared at all. It is in most women's nature to be a parent. We can turn on the mom gene very easy. It takes a little longer in men. They have to see a heartbeat or feel the baby move. Some sign that the baby is real is what it takes to turn on the parent gene. I see it often in my ultrasound career.
What you just said was totally what I was feeling when I wrote the last two chaps. ;D
Date: 08 Feb 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 32
II can't ay enough about this story! It's marvelous - rich and intense with characters that are well thought out and multi- faceted. A true gift to your readers. Thank you. I discovered it at 32 chapters and read straight through. ( recharging my IPad along the way.). I'm looking forward to your next update! Again, thank you for a great read!
Thank you so much for the compliment. I'm glad you liked the story. =) *hugs*
Date: 07 Feb 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 32
Rose is a good person and the best best friend Bella could ask for she knows what Bella needs and that is Edward. I am so happy the baby is still ok and Edward gets the conection now.
Yes, Rose has a good heart...and she knows Bella needs Edward.
Anyway, thanks. ;)
Date: 07 Feb 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 32
Did anyone think or guess it would be Rosalie who would help Edward? We knew she has an amazing though selective heart, now Edward knows it too. He ows her much more than a Ferrarri, he knows and will never forget.
The fear Edward saw first and then felt was necessary for him to realize that although it's scary to vring a baby into the world it's also the greatest prove of love there can be. Once Bella saw it in Mase's face she let go of the bitterness.
Look out here comes overprotective Edward!!!
Lol. Totally right - brace yourself for overprotective Edward! =D
Date: 07 Feb 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 32
God, I think my heart just about stopped. I knew if she lost the baby her and Edward would be over. She would have blamed him due to the stress. Maybe its twins!! Im gonna be sooo sad when this is over, I love this story, I love Mobward!!
Thank you. =D
Date: 04 Feb 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 31
I think she needs to kick his ass then maybe she should think about letting him kiss her ass. He would loss control if she filed for divorce not that she should but that would make him think twice about running his mouth.
Yeah, that'll be a good idea. hehehe
Date: 04 Feb 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 31
This is hilarious! Edward is truly paying a penance for his bad behavior! I wonder how much longer Bella will punish him?
We'll see. They'll have their talk next chap and they'll sort things out their way.
Date: 03 Feb 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 31
i'm sorry but she shouldnt forgive him. I have reread the first few chapters of this story and i'm still not happy with the fact that she forgave him NY so easily. She is a swan for god sake she should put a bullet in between the eyes of vicky for her part in ny and for her disrespect when they met again and him aaargh the way he said he fucked others while thinking of her is just sick and than saying it to her as if it is a good thing.Also he was allowed others but he demanded to know if he was the only one talking about double standards. And she is the daughter of a mob boss not a pathetic little girl, but not once did I recognisez a mob boss daughter in her actions the first chapters where is her dignity. I would have liked if she fought him harder and stood more up for herself. So I really hope she does it now. So Go Bella Go
Yeah, sometimes even the toughest girl will bend and forgive without batting an eyelash when it comes to love. I can totally understand your stand for her not to forgive him, though.
Maybe she'll do just that. hehehe
Date: 03 Feb 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 31
Nope, he needs to suffer and wallow a bit more. He went too far this time, not only with what he did, but then just leaving... That was wrong. He then got some really bad luck, true, but still. It's not the first time he has hurt her really bad. He is aware of his temper as he said, but he has to learn.
Bella will forgive him but he needs to sweat it out a bit more. Maybe Vicky could be the one to help Bella. It would be interesting to see them join forces, that would really make Edward tremble.
That's a good idea...Bella and Vicky. hmmm. *grins*
Date: 03 Feb 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 31
an: hell no. Fucktard deserves a long stint in the doghouse. But Bella does need to eat and see a doctor again if she hasnt already. hmm Surprised Alice and/or Jasper hasnt tried to go see her?
Of course Bella is moping, but don't worry they will have their talk next chapter. Let's see what happens.
Date: 30 Jan 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
I think it is more that it was another weakness he had. It was another way someone could hurt him. This is the reason he didn't want a baby at this time. His world was not stable.
You got that right...down to a T.
Date: 22 Jan 2012 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 30
The story needs one or two chapters before the epi.
Edward is angry,mhe didn't want a bay but his reaction was a bit too much and one which I guess he will regret. Bella will have to make tough choices now. Choices that might not include Edward.
Yes, he should have stepped back a little and let his anger fizzle before he reacted. Let's see him grovel for her forgiveness.
Date: 19 Jan 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love the chapter. Poor Bella I know Edward didnt want kids, but to get that angry about it he was an ass. He was acting like it was all her fault he should know that it takes two people to make a baby and birth control is not 100%. Bella needs to stay stong she dont need him.
Yes, he can be an ass sometimes...even to Bella. Let's see him grovel when he realized what he did.
Date: 18 Jan 2012 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 30
I can tell that Edward's freaking out. I believe that the baby would be a welcomed surprise once it finally made it to them.
Yes, once he'll get over his anger...he'll go to ask for forgiveness. Bella won't make it easy...but this story has a HEA...so you can bascially see where I'm going with this. hehehe
Thanks, girl! =)
Date: 18 Jan 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 30
Jesus, he is a freaking asshole. Me being Bella, would've pounced on him right there and smack the shit out of him. I can't believe there's only one regular chapter. Hope to see you soon
Yes, I'll try to not disappoint. ;)
Date: 18 Jan 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 30
Yes I want another chapter one where he begs her forgivens for being such a dick head. Did he forget he was part of the baby making. Is she going to go back with Rose and Emmett??? Cant wait for more
Another chapter it is then. Thanks!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
I knew she would end up pregnant! With the way they go at it, it would only be a matter of time. Can't believe what an ass Edward is about the whole pregnancy. Looking forward the next posting!
Yes, it was inevitable for her to become pregnant.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 30
glad she Is helpIng rose. poor aro...NOT. wow, eddie is an arse
Yes, Edward can be an ass...sometimes even to Bella (just like in this chap.) Make no mistake Bella will make him grovel once he get over his anger.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 30
He better damn well get passed this.. because Bella didn't do this on her own! Edward loves Bella.. he just needs to have some kick his ass for him to see the good in this situation...
Yes, he will soon realize what he did...and he will grovel for her forgiveness.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 30
Yes, the answer to the question more chapters is always yes. He said no kids but he's really good with them.
Yeah, he'd realize soon he fucked up...but the problem is, Bella will make him grovel for what he did.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 30
hope she leaves him what an arse! great story but i really thought that he loved her but he has a funny way of showing it!
Edward can be an ass, even to B. Don't worry, Bella will make him grovel once he realized what he did.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 30
Come on Edward, don't do this. He's gonna mess up and Bella's gonna leave. He better come around soon. Will Bella go back to Seattle to her brother or wait around there for Edward. I think she should leave and let him come to her. Is his anger cause he is scared for Bella's safety or cause hes not ready to share her??
It's a little of everything. Bella will make hime grovel once he realized what he did.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 30
Please post another chapter!There is so much going on right now...the baby, Emmett and Rose, the trial. A sequel would be really nice! ;) Update soon.
Yes, there will be another chapter before the epi. Thanks!
Date: 14 Jan 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
Yes I liked it. I'm dieing to know what the third thing is & am realllly worried about Bella's safety. F'ing James seems kinda scary mean. Aro too. Great chapter.
Thanks for the update & hope you can write more soon, missed reading this story.
Date: 04 Jan 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I won't say Im not disappointed that there wont be a sequel, but it is just because I love the story and its soooo good!! You really did a great job and you should be very proud!! I will be looking for more of your work!!! HAVE A GREAT AND PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR!!!
I'm honored to know you would read my other stories. Thank you. ;) Happy 2012 to you, too. =D
Date: 03 Jan 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 29
I love this story, PLEASE PLEASE Consider a sequel. So much can be discussed. Their marriage, thru the years, kids, life in the mafia, Rose and Em, do they have kids...Im whining, I know, Im just spoiled and wanting more!!!
gosh, I'm so blushing right now. Thank you so much for reading this story. I'm so happy you love it...but as of now, there won't be a sequel. I'll rethink about it in a few months, perhaps. Sorry to disappoint you.
Thank you for all the love you sent this story. I appreciate it. Mwahz! =D
Date: 03 Jan 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 29
I miss Rosalie and Emmett. Happy New Year! How are you? Still need to adjust my body clock from staying up late for the new year.
I'm fine sweets! I missed you. ;) hehehe tweet me if you're not that busy.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 29
Aro is a creepy bastard and Edward should be worried about Bella. Is she going to get away with out him or with out him being so pissed when she sneeks off????
Bella is asking permission to go to Seattle. Whether she goes if E says no is yet to be seen, but at least its a change from before - just doing her thing without thinking of her husband.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 29
Both Bella and Edward know the risks of theirl ives, but still there some that can be more shocking. This is one of them. They worry about each other, knowing that Aro's veiled threat is set on hurting deeply. If either one is hurt it will cause the other pain. Aro is smart and knew how to rattle Edward. And now that Bella is determined to go to Seattle... I wonder if Aro is having her followed.
A threat is always a threat. They should be ready at all times...they should be ready for Aro.
Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
I read the first chapter here at TWCS but something over there messed up when I tried to review. So I read up to 21 at FF. Im gonna leave quick reviews & finish reading now. By the way, I love it so far.
Thank you for reading and taking time to review. =D