Date: 28 Dec 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 28
oh yea em's is goona really be pissed. Uh oh for the Bella comment
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;D
Date: 28 Dec 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 28
well shit!
i loved it and i cant wait for more and to find out the 3rd reason :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 28 Dec 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 28
The meeting ended okay. Things were "settled" though no one is fully trusting the other. As Jasper, Aro gives me the creeps, he is hidding lots of things in my opinion. Emmett won't be too happy, but will agree it's better to take time to plan revenge and to find or figure what was that third thing Aro was supposed to talk about. Something tells me it involves Bella.
Happy Holidays!!!!
Date: 27 Dec 2011 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 27
It was a set up but what happened I am dieing to find out. I hope no one has went after Bella??
Author's Response:
Thanks. ;)
Date: 26 Dec 2011 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 26
I dont think Bella is going to let him go by himself.
Author's Response:
Thanks! ;)
Date: 25 Dec 2011 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
I just found your story and I am so obsessed with this story! I love it and the characters!! Could Bella be pregnant after all? I hope so!!
I have know idea what could happen next, I hope Bella doesn't do something stupid and put herself in harms way or ruin Edward's plan if they have one. I love your Edward and Bella so much!
I hope you are able to post another chapter today! :)
Author's Response:
Hi. Sorry, I went out of town and forgot to post the chap. here in TWCS like I promised, but I'll post it in a while.
Thank you for reading! =)
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 27
nice standoff. and I really dont trust Alice enough in France not to do something stupid.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope you had a fabulous Christmas! =)
Date: 20 Dec 2011 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 27
Yes. Please. Next chapter before Christmas;D)) If you get around to it, I would be so pleased.
So maybe Bella's pregnant? and what is Aro up to?
Author's Response:
Hopefully I can manage to post before or on X'mas. *crosses fingers*
Thanks. Happy holidays to you! =)
Date: 20 Dec 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 27
Once Bella wakes up and doesn't find the guys there, it's going to get loud. She won't stay at the hotel, she will try anything and everything. Will she be able to leave?
As for Edward and Jasper... they aren't worried, which means they have something else prepared.
Author's Response:
Let's see if your guesses/predictions are correct.
Thank you. Happy holidays! =D
Date: 19 Dec 2011 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 27
love jasper he makes me hot and bothered just thinking of him... ed is good but hummm there is just something dangerous about jasper that pulls me in!! can't wait for more..
have a wonderful christmas! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. Happy holidays to you! =)
Date: 19 Dec 2011 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 27
why go and then promise to stay in the hotel I wonder.
Author's Response:
Bella just needs to be close to Edward. It's better to stay in the hotel and be within the same city as Edward than be a thousand miles away.
Date: 19 Dec 2011 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 27
Good thing Bella was asleep.
Author's Response:
Thank you, bb. =)
Date: 18 Dec 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks so much for posting!;~D}
Hope your holidays are great & that you'll get a chance to post again, greedy aren't I?
Author's Response:
Thank you. Happy holidays to you, too. =)
Date: 16 Dec 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 26
Bella is going to want to go to France, so is Alice. She will want to go shopping. The boys better try and sneak off in the middle of the night.
Author's Response:
Lol. You know them very well.
Date: 14 Dec 2011 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh gosh! I wonder if going to Italy is a trap. It could be, couldn't it?
Author's Response:
There's a big possibility that it might. That's why E doesn't want Bella to go.
Date: 14 Dec 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 26
yes pleaseeeeee write the epi. I really enjoy this story.
Author's Response:
Yes, I think I will. Hopefully I can still write it before 2012 arrives. But if not, there's always next year. hehehe
Thanks. ;)
Date: 14 Dec 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 26
yummy times. why do I get the feeling bella will be going whether he likes it or not, even if she follows after?
Author's Response:
You know Bella so well. Lol.
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great, as always. Can't wait to see how Edward talks his way out of this one! Get him Bella!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 13 Dec 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 26
Bella is not going to be happy at all. And Edward can't take her with him. That would make Emmett loose it completely. It's going to take lot of work from Edward to get himself through it with Bella. Then he has to work with the Volturis, Tough week ahead.
Author's Response:
Yes, Edward has to turn on his charm to convince Bella. Let's see if he suceeds. hehehe
Thanks. =D
Date: 13 Dec 2011 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 26
oh boy this doesn't sound good to me it sounds like they are trying to get him out of the country to kill him... hummmm can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you. =D
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 26
Bella is going to kick Edward's butt!
Author's Response:
lol. Yes, she might. =D Thanks.
Date: 03 Nov 2011 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks for the update, good chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;)
Date: 20 Oct 2011 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
Ding, Dong - Jacob's finally dead, and he soooo deserved what he got, gruesome as it may have been. Glad that Edward and Emmett found something to bond over :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 19 Oct 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
Yeah, Jacob is dead. He is always jealous of everyone else. He would never be satisfied with his own life.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he was. Glad yu liked it. Thanks. ;)
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2011 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 25
great death scene. I wasn't sure you would give us answers or not.
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;)
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2011 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
Nope, not crying at all. Think the boys did a good job.
Author's Response:
Thank you. =D
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2011 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 24
*grin*...yup...clear as mud! LOL
Good story, though. I really enjoy the time I spend reading it!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I appreciate you reading it...and reviewing. =D
Date: 15 Oct 2011 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 25
Torture Jacob he did.
Author's Response:
Lol.
Thanks. =)
Date: 15 Oct 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm glad he's dead!
Author's Response:
Thanks. =D
Date: 14 Oct 2011 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
NOPE! im happy hes gone, the slimey little fucker! though it would have been bad ass to see bella fuck him up in some way.! woot woot!
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;D
Date: 14 Oct 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
looking forwardd to the enxt chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2011 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh no ....not ending soon, please say it isn't so!!! This story is sooo good. To be a mafia story it is very realistic, it has just enough romance, and lots of beatings and shootings and explosions!!! All aroung greatness!!! maybe think of a sequel, about Edward and Bellas empire and babies. We all want to hear about their life and especially babies. Continue on please, maybe long enough for their kids to take over the mafia. Please!!!
Author's Response:
Lol.
I'm glad you liked this story enough to ask for a sequel. However, I'm sorry to say...as of this time...a sequel is not in the works.
Don't worry, we still have a few more chapters to go.
Anyway, thank. =)
Date: 14 Oct 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 25
Happy day happy day good ridins to a piece of shit. It was a good bonding time for Emmett and Edward they play well together lol.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. Thank you. =)
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thank goodness!I love how Jacob died!
Author's Response:
*grins* Thank you. =)
Date: 14 Oct 2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
yeah!! he is gone now one to bigger and better things!
Author's Response:
Yes, thank you. ;)
Date: 14 Oct 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 25
nope no crying. jake screwed with the wrong family.
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;)
Date: 21 Sep 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 24
Good to see Emmett and Edward getting along better and looks like Jacob is a dead man walking - can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thanks. =D
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 24
actually I think you are doing a great job of bringing all the loose ends together. I love the passion that Bella has in this story. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you. =D
Date: 15 Sep 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 24
I am glad that Emmett and Edward are on better terms. It will make it easier on Bella. I can't wait until they get Jacob.
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;D
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2011 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wonderful chapter! You go Mase.
Author's Response:
Thanks. =D
Date: 15 Sep 2011 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oohh!!! A vindictive Bella is a sexy Bella. :-)
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks, girl. ;D
Date: 15 Sep 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thanks for the update, good luck on your o.f.
<3
Author's Response:
Thank you. =D
Date: 14 Sep 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 24
So glad that Edward and Emmett are getting along. Wow Bella is a little fireball.
Author's Response:
You know Bella, she's kinda the spontaneous reckless and don't-stop-to-think fireball that she is. That's why Edward is so enamored with her.
Date: 14 Sep 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 24
Good luck with the original fic, even if it takes you away from fanfic ;) Its worth it.
Bella was furious and with good reason. To be betrayed as her family has by someone you've have been so close with has to hurt enough to make her want to go after him personaly. Thankfully Edward was determined to stop her, but still help her. That's what sent him to Emmett. It wasn't easy but it is going to be for the best, just as Edward said. Those two working together will be terrifying, no doubt.
Author's Response:
Writing and posting fanfic is scary....writing original fic is scarier. lol But you're right, it's worth every minute of my time. Thanks. ;)
Jacob should go hide now for he won't have long until those two would find him. He should be scared of the double E. =)
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 24
great chapter can't wait to see what happens
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 24
glad to see you posting again. poor b. can understand her need for.revenge.
Author's Response:
Glad to be updating. I don't want my stories left for so long. Anyway, thanks. =D
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2011 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 24
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks. ;D
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
I loved this chapter and I am glad that Emmett and Edward are getting along better. It will take them working together for the destruction of Black. I think Black will be difficult to finally kill and it will be fun following your chain of events leading up to Black's well deserved end!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked this chapter. Thank you. =)
Date: 14 Sep 2011 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 24
oh boy the crap is going to hit the fan soon. can't wait to see jacob go down. love bella!
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 03 Sep 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
watch it be jacob! OoO edward has all of his information to take down jacob black once and for all update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 03 Sep 2011 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 23
this is really good -is there anymore?
Author's Response:
Yes, definitely there's more. Lol.
Date: 03 Sep 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 13
i review, it kicks me out
Author's Response:
Thank you, bb. =)
Date: 31 Aug 2011 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
i could have told him she wouldn't exactly be flattered that every time he was with another woman he was thinking of her...men!
Author's Response:
Lol. Yeah, sometimes they are just plain clueless...or stupid. hehehe
Date: 31 Aug 2011 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
Rut roh...guessing its victoria
Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
Quite a wake-up call!! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks. =D
Date: 30 Aug 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Jacob's an idiot...you don't piss off a mob boss!
Author's Response:
You're definitely right. =)
Date: 24 Aug 2011 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to find out what the history is!
Author's Response:
=) Thanks again.
Date: 24 Aug 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just found this today. I'm kinda hooked on Mob stories, and was glad to find this one. Looking forward to it.
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 22 Aug 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 23
I also felt that E's instincts were right & that it was Jacob all along but I didn't know he'd be in with the Volturri, it crossed my mind but wasn't sure what he had to gain but revenge for Bella rejecting him.
Bummer, I'm all caught up now, looking forward to next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'll update soon. ;)
Date: 22 Aug 2011 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
What about that white rose? Is it from Jake? Does he have some sort of access to Bella & Edward's place?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing every chapters as you read. I appreciate it. ;)
Date: 22 Aug 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
Serious honey moon action there, like over the moon;D)
Date: 22 Aug 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
What an idiot, telling her he f*cked bunches of girls and came in them thinking about her. I think I'd shoot him or at least kick him a good hard one in the balls.
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks bb. =)
Date: 22 Aug 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
So what is his deal?
Date: 22 Aug 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
Okay I guess I need to wait for the mystery to unfold, but am wondering just what could keep Edward from telling her that he's been pining away for her since he left her, he has right?
Author's Response:
Of course he has. ;)
Date: 22 Aug 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting, looking forward to reading more & unraveling the mystery
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 21 Aug 2011 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks. ;)
Date: 19 Aug 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love this story cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 19 Aug 2011 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 23
So Jacob isn't a nice guy it seems, nor a real friend. Edward is right, it will be a huge shock for Bella and Emmett, a really unpleasant one. He is right though, it must be him who tells Bella all about and with as much proof as possible. She won't have an easy time hearing and then believing what Edward is about to tell her.
I wonder who could it be behind Edward's calls. He seems to have almost no clue... that's scary.
Author's Response:
The mystery texter will be revealed soon, don't worry.
As for Bella, she will be pissed but not as much as Emmett will be when they will find out about their 'supposed friend'.
Date: 18 Aug 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
JUst started reading your story and I love it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 18 Aug 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
Jacob is going to die how is Bella going to react I think she is going to want to do it.
Author's Response:
Bella will be pissed, but not as much as Emmett will.
Date: 18 Aug 2011 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
well well well Jacob is the bad guy bella is going to go crazy. well i hope they don't hurt ed!! can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
Bella, especially Emmett will definitely be pissed when they learn all about their 'supposed friend.'
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 23
WOW, look out Black worst scum then the Swans & Cullen's just because he's a coward!
Author's Response:
lol. Yeah he is.
Thanks. ;)
Date: 18 Aug 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
Jacob?! I can think of several reasons why he'll do that.
Author's Response:
Yay, it's you bb! ;)
Jake needs to go hide now, coz Em and Ed would surely have his head. hehehe
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter! I wonder who the mysterious "hate texter" could be?
Author's Response:
He/she will be revealed soon, don't worry. =)
Date: 17 Aug 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
I can't wait for Bella to find out the truth about her so called friend Jacob Black.
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella will be pissed when she knows. Emmett too.
Jake should go hide now, because they will have his head.
Anyway, thanks. ;)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
Oh jake. Youare going to regret ever screwing with the swans and eddie. Hope bella gets to be in on it.
Author's Response:
Jacob should go run and hide now. lol
Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks. =)
Date: 28 Jul 2011 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 22
I just found this story and it is wonderful. Your plot is intriguing. I am looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great story. I am loving the mystery and well, the lemons. Leah surprised me and Jake too. Can't wait to see what else you have planned.
Author's Response:
Thanks. ;)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
Aww Bella wore out poor Eddie.
Poor Rose and Em.
Author's Response:
Yes, she did. Lol. Thanks. ;)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
Man, they got a lot going on!
Author's Response:
yes, they do. ;) Thanks.
Date: 23 Jul 2011 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 22
excited to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;)
Date: 23 Jul 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow! Edward is overprotective and fierce. He needs to cool down a little and let Bella run the show.
Author's Response:
=) Thanks girl.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 22
I can't wait to find out what information Snake has on who or what group is after the Swan family.
Author's Response:
Next chapter will answer some of your questions. Thanks. =)
Date: 22 Jul 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
Edward needs to get all the facts and tell Bella. He does not want her mad at him again. Bella needs to take care of Emmett and Rosalie right now. They need her.
Author's Response:
E knows he needs to start telling her important things, and not lie anymore. Thanks. ;)
Date: 22 Jul 2011 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 22
thanks for the b-day present of an update!! i love it!!! thanks for the update!!! can't wait to see how this is going to go... so they killled snake did they get the info from him.. i wonder what jasper is going to tell him and what does jacob have to do with it? yeah!!!!
Author's Response:
Happy birthday bb!!! (or is it belated already?)
This story will be around 30-35 chaps. No more than that. We will learn more about what Jasper and Vicky got next chapter. Thanks. =)
Date: 22 Jul 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 22
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks. =)
Date: 22 Jul 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
glad the snake is dead but what did they learn??? Is Edward afraid his dick is going to fall off lol
Author's Response:
Of course, E/B and marathon sex is always good. But even in fanfic, that won't be believable if they kept doing it without tiring. Lol!
And yes, Snake is dead. Vicky got some news. Good or bad? We'll know next chapter.
Thanks bb. =)
Date: 22 Jul 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
i loveeed it
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 22 Jul 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
I agree, it's only half way so far. The information Vicky got from Snake is key but they still need to plan, organize and set things.
Meanwhile, there's Rose to think about.
Author's Response:
Rose will be fine. She just needs time to recuperate and mourn the loss of her baby. Maybe she'll become more bitchy....we'll see. lol
As for the information...Vicky got news. We'll see what that is next chapter. Thanks. ;)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
"For everyone still reading this story..."...how on earth could anyone walk away from this story!?!
Author's Response:
You just freakin' made my day by this review. *grins*
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
Jacob did it, didn't he......
Author's Response:
You'll see....
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
Lucky girl......
Author's Response:
*smiles*
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
*wiping sweat from my brow and breathing hard*....wow. Talented litte devil, aren't ya!
Author's Response:
lol Thank you. =)
Date: 01 Jul 2011 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Bella needs to use her brain instead of her emotions. The way her emotions change so fast I think she may have some mental issues. She wants Edward to tell her everything yet she doesn't tell him everything. Edward doesn't mean to hurt Bella. He just wants to be with her when he tells her because she reacts like a crazy person. Bella doesn't tell Edward things to be sneaky.
Author's Response:
E just makes her act that way. She's trying to be cordial with him, but he goads her until she finally gives into her anger.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 21
Victoria was able to keep Edward at a distance so Bella could do what she needed to. It wasn't easy for either one, but apparently it worked. She got him to take the c. and then she was able to give him the serum also. Now lets hope it does work so Victoria and Seth can get what they need.
As for Bella and Edward, at the moment they are thrilled things are over, and they are together. But this will have to be discussed, a lot. It's going to be an intense discussion.
Author's Response:
Yes, you are definitely right. Let's see what E does next chapter.
Thanks. =)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
Well I didnt expect that. I thought he would have tore threw there like a madman.
Author's Response:
E can contain himself...sometime. lol
Anyway, thanks. =)
Date: 27 Jun 2011 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
they aretotally hot together
Author's Response:
*grins* Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
Bella thats what happens when you play with the big dogs! LOL
Author's Response:
She won't be doing anything like that anytime soon, that's for sure. lol
Date: 27 Jun 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
Edward did good by restraining himself I thought forsure he was going to kill someone but they are not done with snake yet I think he will die. Bella needs a bath
Author's Response:
I agree with you, B needs a bath after Snake had his hands over her. lol Glad you liked E having some control.