Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
Dam you write the best lemons. lol. I love this possesive Edward soooooo much. But shit I would have loved for Bella to get a few punches into that bitch Victoria even if Edward had to break them up. That shit would not stand. I mean he beat Jacob up why not let Bella have her revenge too?
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
ughhh ohhhh I think Edward is in trouble. lol.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
WOW that was fucking amazing. I love it. I love that he made her cum so many times. and in different positions. THat was great truely.
Author's Response:
LOL! You truly amaze me with all these reviews! Really appreciate it bb! =)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh shit that was awesome. I loved it. I love that he canceled the flight cause he couldn't wait to have her. And I love that she woke him up with a knife to his throat. lol.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
I knew Jake was going to be in deep shit cause I had a feeling Edward was going to walk in on that shit. Well he got what he deserved, shit Bella told him that she didn't feel that way about him but NO he had to be all stupid and kiss her anyway infront of Edward. What the hell was he thinking? lol.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
I cant wait to find out why she is so mad at him. lol. But I love it anyway.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just found this story yesterday and I am so impressed. I must say this was an amazing first chapter. Obviously Edward and Bella have a past and I love me a possesive Edward.
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
I don't trust Jake for nothing. He's really not playing with a full deck. How many times does Bella need to tell him "no" before he finally gets a clue and realizes that doesn't want him.
Author's Response:
All I can say is, he is a pretty determined guy. He knows what he wants and works to get it. Even several 'No's' don't placate him. ;)
Anyway, thanks for this bb! Appreciate it much! =)
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
This was very intense. Edward is going to blow a load if he don't calm down!
Author's Response:
LOL!
Anyway, thanks for this bb! Appreciate it much! =)
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
ThANK GOD SHE IS ALIVE, Jacob is freaking me out.
Author's Response:
LOL!
Thanks bb for always making time to review! Appreciate it so much! =) Kisses!
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
Jacob must have made a threat to her or something. If she had to be sedated after his visit it had to be because of what he said. I am really getting addicted to this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much sweets! ;) see yah next update!
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
Omg! I think Jake has something to do with it. Who opened the door??
Author's Response:
damn girl, I think I luv yah right now! =) lmao! You just made me grin stupidly by making a review for each chapter that you read, considering you read it in one go. =)
Really appreciate it! Kisses! ;D
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
She sure got her way, lol. She plan the whole thing and he still gave in.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
Who is making a threat against him??? Is it about Bella or something else?
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hmm... I find it very interesting that Bella had a panic attack when she was visited by Jacob, what could he possibly have told her that freaked her out. For some reason I just can't see Jacob putting Bella in danger like that so I'm thinking it wasn't him, but who knows. Can't wait for Bella to wake up and see of she tells Edward what cause her to be sedated.
Author's Response:
I won't say much coz i might say something that I shouldn't. ;)
But thank you for reviewing! =) Kisses!
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
They clearly have a love/hate relationship. I just love those.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
I hope she punches the girl a good one. lol
Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
hmm not Jacob.. He wants to marry her. It is someone else!
LOL
Author's Response:
LOL!
Thanks bb! ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
I think Jake is up to something. I dont trust him. Love possesive Edward!
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
She told him, lol. He was to wait and he is not happy.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
She is not over what happened between them. I guess he went by another name and that why she didnt know it was him.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
That was hot and steamy.
Author's Response:
Thanks bb! ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
What a way to wake up, go Bella!
Author's Response:
Thanks sweets! =)
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
Jacob visited. Bella had a panic attack. Sounds like guilt to me.
Author's Response:
LOL.
thanks bb! =)
Date: 09 Oct 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
poor quil hope he and b will be ok.
Author's Response:
Yes, I make damn sure he will be! ;) lol
Anyway, thanks for this bb! =)
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
It's about time! I was going crazy! lol I am glad yu didn't delete this chapter it is realy good!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'm so glad I didn't either. ;)
Anyway, thanks as always for reviewing! Appreciate it so much! =)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow, that was amazing! I am so happy Bella is ok. I cannot wait to see how everything turns out!
Author's Response:
Thanks sweets! =)
Date: 05 Oct 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG thats crazy up date soon
Author's Response:
thank you for reading! =)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
Good chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next, so please update soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Hope you stick with this story. =)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh crap Edward is not going to like that one bit. I am wondering WTF happened to make the car spin
Author's Response:
Yes, Edward will be pissed! Next chapter will be in his pov so that'll be interesting.
Thanks and see you next update bb! =)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
WOW!!!! What the hell happend???? Can't wait to find out and Edward's reactions : )
Author's Response:
You will see Edward's reaction coz next chapter will be in his pov.
Anyway, thanks! =)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
wow they got ambushed. that bites. make me thing jake is in on it though
Author's Response:
Yes and Edward will be pissed! Next chapter will be in his pov.
Anyway, thanks! =)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
very good update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
OH NO!@ This is not good! I really hope Bella is ok! Please? Amazing job, once again. I loved it all so much. I loved the smuttiness :) I am sad that it won't be happening again for a while but I understand. I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
So sorry for that cliffy. I'll try and make it up to you next chapter. It'll be in EPOV. ;)
Thanks for all the love dear. I really appreciate it! =) See you next update.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
omg! cant wait 4 more!
Author's Response:
Thank you! =)
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
You are so wrong with the cliffee. Pleas update soon!!!!!
Author's Response:
So sorry about the cliffy. I'll try to make it up to you next chapter. ;)
Thanks and see you next update! =)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
I wonder if its Jacob or the Volturi?
Author's Response:
Well, you just have to wait and see who really is responsible. ;)
Anyway, thanks and see you next update.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 10
wow .....nice cliffy
B
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
Holly shit is this something to do with Jacob if it is he will be a dead man.
Author's Response:
Edward will be pissed when he finds out about the accident. Next chapter will be in his pov so that'll be interesting.
Anyway, thanks and see you next update! =)
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 10
On pins and needles here, hurry and post soon.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, I will. =)
Thanks and see you next update! ;D
Date: 21 Sep 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
i wonder how she is going to be able to meet jacob
Author's Response:
Their meeting is one you will not expect and it will happen very soon.
Thanks for reading. Until next update. =)
Date: 20 Sep 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love what I've read so far.... Can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks you. See you next chapter. =)
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks! =)
Date: 19 Sep 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
What is Jacob trying to do? Sending the flowers wasn't a really good idea. All he accomplished was to make Bella mad. So much she is willing to take some action to stop all of this.
Bella knew it wouldn't be easy getting Edward to agree on the trip, so she pulled out the big guns and disarmed him until she got what she wanted, even if she has to take Seth, she is going.
What happened that Edward had to leave in such haste? It can't be that bad if he said they will talk after Seattle.
She called him Mase, was it to get him to comply easier?
Author's Response:
Yeah, you got that right. She pulled out the 'big guns' coz that's the only way she could let him to agree with her, that's for sure.
I don't like Jacob so I'm portraying him as the bad guy here. I guess I'm succeeding. =) lol
As for Edward having that call-in, it was directly linked to that text message he received.
And Bella, if you hadn't yet noticed, has been calling him Masen-the name she used to call him in NY.
I hope I answered all your questions. PM me if you have more.
Thanks for reading! =)
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
I started reading this at 3:00am, it is one of the best Mafia stories I have ever read. I know when B, goes home and see Jacob there will be hell to pay. I am so looking forward to that. I am so a Team Edward fan.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the compliment sweets. Glad you're loving this. =) lol
Jacob and Bella's meeting is one you will not expect. :)
Anyway, see you next update. =)
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
When will Jacob learn? hurry and post again.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he still hadn't learned anything. =) lol
Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 Sep 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
hmmm lovely distractions.
Author's Response:
=) Thanks!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
She is going to be in so much trouble when he finds out she is seeing Jacob shit will hit the fan and Jacob will be hoping to say alive. That is a fuck hot song.
Author's Response:
I love that song. =) I put it there because it was appropriate for the striptease. Happy you liked it. =)
Thanks for reading! Until next update.
Date: 17 Sep 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
good story more soon
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 17 Sep 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, that was amazing! I love the dance Bella did for Edward (and what followed it, hehe) ;) I really don't like Jacob and hope Bella and he can be over with (so she never sees him again). Amazing job, once again :)
Author's Response:
Yes, I'm portraying Jacob as the bad guy here. =) lol
I loved writing this chap so I'm happy you liked it. Thanks! =)
Date: 12 Sep 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
wow cant wait to c what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thanks! =)
Date: 10 Sep 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
great! Im loving this
Author's Response:
Thanks! =)
Date: 10 Sep 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great story, love mob Edward and the fact that he isn't overly sensitive.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear you. Thanks! =)
Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
things that make you go hmmm...
Author's Response:
=) thanks.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward used Victoria to get Bella to leave. He knew Victoria wouldn't grow that kind of attachment to him, however, she has it for Bella. That doesn't make Edward too happy, but he knows things won't go anywhere.
He is a happy man who can't hide it. He i still able to do his job, but after it's done he goes back to his happy mode. Jasper is happy to see that.
So Bella and Alice went out, and Bella decided to do things her way instead of his. Something that really got Edward angry, he might have reason to be concerned, but he didn't handle things correctly.
That last text is proof of his anxiousness. Who is threatening him?
Author's Response:
Yes, Edward is overly protective of Bella especially since they are in the mob. However, our Bella is a feisty and stubborn character that don't allow Edward to make decisions for her. This alone makes interactions between them interesting. =)
Something's up, that is for sure. Don't worry, I will reveal who sent the text as soon as I can. =)
Thanks!
Date: 10 Sep 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 8
hmmm gotta love seth
Author's Response:
Yeah, I kind of like Seth in the books so I made his character here a lovable one. =)
Date: 10 Sep 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh my gosh! I wonder who sent the text? Will Edward tell Bella about Victoria's true attraction? Loved it all, so much! Cannot wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Bella will learn about Victoria's attraction to the same sex soon. It'll be interesting to see Bella's reaction. =)
Thanks for the love hon! Kisses to you! ;)
Date: 10 Sep 2010 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh shit so someone is telling him they are going to take him out???? He is going to have to kiss her ass major.
Author's Response:
Yes, something like that. =)
Edward needs to make it up to her, for being an ass earlier. At least there is a possibility of make up sex. =) *whoop whoop* lmao
Date: 10 Sep 2010 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm waiting for this story to ignite...please hurry.
Author's Response:
hey. what kind of ignition do you mean hon? PM me so we could discuss further. Thanks! =)
Date: 30 Aug 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
very good story
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;D
Date: 29 Aug 2010 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
very good story
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;D
Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks! ;)
Date: 27 Aug 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
I really hope she doesnt forgive him so easily . He flipped when he thought she slept around why should it be so easy for him? She needs to let him SUFFER DAMMIT!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'll see what I can do in the future chaps, but I can't promise anything. ;D
Date: 27 Aug 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward gave his explanation, and it seemed accurate. However, it didn't make Bella feel better. She saw his reasons but didn't agree with his actions. Then what he said, I would have been as angry as Bella was. Edward really shouldn't have said it like that.
He got angry too, and that lead to... it seems reconciliation.
Author's Response:
Edward thinks that he can get away with everything. :) lol
At least he got to profess his love for Bella, so that would redeem him a little. Their future together at this point looks good, don't you think? :D
Anyway, thank you for your thoughts. Until next update sweets! ;)
Date: 27 Aug 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella had every right to freak out she handled it very well I think LOL
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. ;)
This story isn't an angsty one so I didn't want to drag out their personal conflict. Some people wanted it though. *sigh*
Anyway, thank you for the love. :D Until next update.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, that was amazing! I loved it all so, so much. I really hope Bella can understand what Edward meant and can forgive him, eventually :)
Author's Response:
Glad you loved it! Every time somebody does, it makes me giddy! ;D
Edward was/is an asshole but he was able to profess his love to Bella so their future together looks really good. :) Trust, Bella is well on her way to forgiveness.
Thanks for your thoughts. Until next update!
Date: 27 Aug 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
loved the chapter dose edward have a way with words or what
can't wait for the next update
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it. ;) Thanks for this sweets! :D
Date: 27 Aug 2010 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
eddie is such an idiot.
Author's Response:
;) lol I guess you can say he is an asshole.
But at least he got to profess his love for her which redeemed him a little. ;D
Date: 27 Aug 2010 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
Disappointing!!!!!!!!!!! Bella should have kicked his ass!!!!!!!!!!! Maybe in the next chapter, you will let Bella release her inner Bitch!!!!!!!!! His excuse was pathetic.........typical loser male stereotype........
Author's Response:
So sorry to hear that this chapter disappointed you. :(
I'll see what I can do in the future chapters, though I can't promise anything. ;)
Anyway, thanks for your thoughts. It shows me your view of the story. Until next update. :)
Date: 27 Aug 2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
:)
Author's Response: ;D thanks!
Date: 24 Aug 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
short but sweet.
Author's Response:
Yes, it was short and I guess sweet :) lol
I hope you stick around. Anyways, thanks! :)
Date: 24 Aug 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
I liked it! I totally didn't think the girl would be the one from NY that he had slept with. Ooooh, the **** is going to hit the fan now.
Author's Response:
Yes. The confrontation will be next chapter and it will definitely be interesting to see! ;)
Anyway, thanks for this review. Glad to hear your liking this!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
good story update often and soon
Author's Response:
Thank you. Hope you stick with this.
I try to update at least once a week, just sayin'. :)
Anyway, thanks again. Until next update.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my gosh! I wonder what Bella will do now? I love that Bella got a break from Edward (not that it is a bad thing to be having sex all the time, but sometimes you need a break). I hope Edward goes with Bella to her parents' graves. I cannot wait to see what else happens next :)
Author's Response:
Yes, she definitely needed a break! :) lol
Edward might go visit the graves with her in the future....I'll see what I can do. :)
Anyway, thank you for telling me what you think. Really appreciate it!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
This won't be the reunion Bella and Edward wanted, it's going to get ugly. Bella isn't happy, at all, and she is going to make sure everyone there realizes it.
She is trying to completely settle into her new life, some parts are easier than others. Missing her family is one of the hardest, but she knows the reasons for the choices made and she will go on, even if it hurts at time. She is a strong and brave girl.
Author's Response:
Yes, that's one way to look at her new life in Chicago. But as you said, she is strong so she will be able to handle it. :)
As for the girl...hmmm...we'll see what Bella will do to her. :) Next chapter will be an interesting read.
Anyway, thank you for making time to tell me what you think. Really appreciate it! :D
Date: 20 Aug 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
Shit is going to hit the fan I think Bella is going to go ape shit on this women :)
Author's Response:
That's one suggestion I should keep in mind when doing the next chapter. :D lol
Anyway, thanks for this! :)
Date: 20 Aug 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
uoh edward messed up!
Author's Response:
Edward will definitely be making his explanation next chapter so that should be interesting. :)
Anyway, thanks for this! :D
Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hmm wonder if B will go after the girl or Edward first. Cant wait for Edwards explanation on why she there..
Author's Response:
Well, we'll see what she'll do to the two of them next chapter. That should be interesting. :)
Thanks for this review! ;D
Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 6
omg..some drama.. i hope bella kicks her ass..lol
Author's Response:
;) Next chapter will be an interesting read since the woman's identity will be revealed, and we might once again see the bitchy side of Bella. :)
Anyway, thanks for this review. ;D
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella needs to slap the crap out of the skank in black. Also, she needs to maintain her own means of self protection. No matter what Edward may intend or feel for her, she needs to remember what happened to Charlie and rely on herself...not E.
Author's Response:
Yes, definitely. In their situation, she needs to protect herself even around Edward. ;)
As for slappin' the skank.....hmmmm....you're giving me ideas here. ;) lol.
Anyway, thanks for this review. Really appreciated it!
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love it!!
Author's Response:
Good to hear. :) Next chapter will have some revelations that I am sure will be interesting.
Anyway, thanks for this review. Really appreciate it!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
How can she deni her feelings???? So why did he do what he did to her???? Why wont she lisen to him???? So many ????? LOL
Author's Response:
She still is in denial that's why she is not ready to hear him out.
He really did think that he had a good reason for what he did to her in NYC.
And don't worry about asking questions, I'll try to answer as best I can. The number of questions will not bother me in the least. :)
Thank you for this. ;D
Date: 14 Aug 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
It will be interesting to see how Bella will handle any feelings she may be feeling for Edward. The fact that Edward treated Bella the way he did in the past was awful. I wonder if he knows about her drug overdose and if he doesn't will he find out? I do love that she pulled the knife on him and humbled him a bit. I look forward to updates.
Author's Response:
He doesn't have any idea yet that she overdosed, but he will know about it. And trust me, he will feel more regret than ever of what he did when he does know.
The knife thing was only a show of her taking control. Their relationship will always be interesting, so that will be something to watch/wait for. ;)
Thanks for your thoughts on this chapter. :D
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
Definitely the best lemons I've read in several months. Good job.
And I'm interested to see where the plot is headed.
Author's Response:
Thank you! ;) I hope you stick around for this. See yah next update.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMG! I am LOVING this fic!!! Keep up w/ the awesome job of writing coz' you so rock!!!
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you for this awesome review. Greatly appreciated. ;)
See yah next update. Thanks again for this. :)
Date: 13 Aug 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
That was incredible! I loved the start of their honeymoon. Although, like Edward said, they do need to talk eventually. Bella is so sassy, but in a good way ;)
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was. Our Bella is one feisty girl, and Edward loves it. :)
They will soon be talking about what happened, don't worry.
Thanks. See yah next update.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
Uh, I LOVE THIS STORY :)
Great chaoter :)
Author's Response:
Glad to hear you're loving this. :) And I hope that you stick with this. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
i'll beta for you if you haven't found one yet! love the story! it's really hot! i like the fact bella is strong in this story it's really good.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear you're liking this. :)
And I would appreciate it if you would beta for me. ;D How do we do that? Will I be getting your e-mail add.?
Anyway, thanks.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
he is a freak lmao i can't wait to see why he cheated lol
Author's Response:
He already said he didn't cheat. The reason behind is still unknown, as our Bella is so stubborn to hear anything he has to say regarding what happened.
You would know soon enough, don't worry. :)
Until next update. Thanks.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
I flipping love this story! Geat Chapter!! :)
Author's Response:
I also love that you're loving this! ;)
Anyway, thanks for this and see yah next update.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
this is really good i love a mafiaward! i know she didn't like that kiss from Jake he's so pushy lol
Author's Response:
Of course, she didn't like the kiss from Jake. She wasn't even expecting it. :)
Kisses from Edward are a different story though, a whole lot. ;D
Until next update. Thanks.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
haha í can't wait to see how bella is going to use that against him.. and i think i'm in love with your story
Author's Response:
Glad to hear you're liking this story. :)
It is already a given that Bella will be using her new found control, but the real question is when. ;D
Anyway, see yah next update. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
the ending was hot as hell! lol i loved this great chapter sweets!
Author's Response:
Yes, it was hot. :) LOL.
See yah next update. Thanks.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
Bella is a mess, a part of her wants to hate him, or to at least not care for him, while another can't have enough of him. That has to be complicated.
What ever happened in New York, marked Bella deeply. So much, she doesn't want to hear anything about it, at least not yet. It seems Edward thinks he has a reasonable explanation. We'll have to wait and hear about it.
Author's Response:
Yes, she is having an internal crisis. But don't worry she will soon be hearing what our Edward wants to say. :)
Thanks for this. See yah next update.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2010 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Bella needs to clear the air with Edward about their past issues.
Update soon!
Author's Response: Yes, she really needs to do that and she would. Soon, don't worry. ;)
See yah next update. Thanks.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
steamy chapter really good I am so hooked on this story can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
It was hot, wasn't it? :) Im really glad you liked it.
Anyway, thanks for this. Until next update.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, that was amazing! I have a question though, why does Bella call him "Masen" and everyone else calls him "Cullen"? Maybe it was explained earlier and I didn't catch it, sorry :( Anyway, really cannot wait for more of the honeymoon :)
Author's Response:
She knows him as Masen in New York, that's why she didn't make the connection of him being Cullen. The times she used it was when she wanted to spite him, and that time in bed where she accidentally called him that. So there, hope I clarified some things for you.;)
See you on my next update. Thanks for your thoughts!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, this story is amazing so far! I really cannot wait for more ;)
Author's Response:
Glad that you're entertained by this story. Hope to see you next update.
Thanks!;)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
she let's him off the hook too easy
Author's Response:
Well, it is their honeymoon night. That might explain her easiness on him. ;D
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
dang that's what im talking about bella is bad man update soon please and thank you
Author's Response:
yeah, she is one bad ass chick here. ;D Don't worry I'll update soon.