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Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 10:02 PM Title: Come Together

Aw - sorry to see it end but greatful you didn't abandon it like many others would have done.... :-)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 7:47 PM Title: Come Together

sweet ending.  TY for writing and sharing with us all.

ty

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 3:42 AM Title: After All This Time

they are too cute together

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 8:08 PM Title: After All This Time

It was O.K, I guess....... I didn't really like it but I guess it's more 'cause I don't like to think of Angela this way.....

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:18 PM Title: Something Like That

Errrm I dunno - they're both being so ridiculous about this I'd like to slap 'em both - but I'd rather not have two angry vamps after me, LOL!! :-P

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:07 AM Title: Something Like That

Yay!  Now  they can be happy (i hope)!  Loved it!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 1:29 AM Title: Something Like That

loved it-so touching-just as you would expect from Ben and Angela

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 1:20 AM Title: Something Like That

woo hoo   Ang and Ben together again

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2011 11:14 PM Title: A Whole New World

Good  Q. mutt!! What do y'all think?!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 8:50 PM Title: A Whole New World

glad ben made it through the first hunt ok.

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 4:47 AM Title: A Whole New World

Another great chapter!  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2011 3:07 AM Title: Vengeance

Go Esme!  I love that she gave Ang a verbal beatdown on this issue.  Cannot wait for the reunion scene :-) Another job well done.

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 4:38 AM Title: Vengeance

Love Esme's talk with Angela!  This is what they should have done with Edward & Bella instead of the entire family abondoning her!  Anyway, great chapter!  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 12:59 AM Title: Vengeance

poor confused angela.   Gotta love esme

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:37 AM Title: Livin' On the Edge

Great chapter!  Looking foward to seeing if they can all manage to get out of this alive!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 3:37 AM Title: Livin' On the Edge

uh oh   guess ang caught up to them

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:21 AM Title: Livin' On the Edge

Oh-oh..... :-( Sounds like the "angry vampire" mentioned is a certain Angela Cullen(neé Webber)!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 2:41 AM Title: Remember Me

It's kind of cool that he can remember everything.  It will hopefully help him adjust to his new life.

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 4:02 AM Title: Remember Me

Cool gift! Ben seemed to take to the change pretty well for the most part. Hope that they find Angela soon!  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:26 AM Title: Remember Me

interesting gift.  hope ang comes back soon.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 3:20 AM Title: Remember Me

oh how i wish this chapter was longer

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 4:06 AM Title: Darkness Falls

Ah wow, they are both is so much pain!  I can only hope that Ang will find her way back to them to find out that he isn't really gone.  I feel for Leah too, the  girl just can't catch a break can she?  Great chapter!

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2011 4:26 AM Title: Darkness Falls

yikes

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2011 9:14 PM Title: Darkness Falls

poor girls.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2011 3:46 AM Title: It Should Happen This Way

Angela is probably resigned to the idea that Ben is dead, so she will most likely be relieved that he is alive in a sense.

I can't believe that Bella bit him and Jacob was the one who asked her to do it.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2011 3:34 AM Title: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

Holy hell!  That was quite the action packed chapter.  Loved it!  So, did Angela bite him?  What happened to Leah? 

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2011 3:29 AM Title: Ain't Nobody's Business

Wow, I wonder if the self hatred and loathing Angela carries are inherant to Edward's venom?  She is more like him than I ever realized.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2011 3:15 AM Title: Ain't No Sunshine...

I wonder of Alice has shared a vision with JAsper.  He seems pretty sure of himself.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2011 11:29 PM Title: It Should Happen This Way

pissed but happy i hope

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 5:40 PM Title: It Should Happen This Way

WOW

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 5:39 PM Title: It Should Happen This Way

I was wrong...I thought that Angela changed him.  Makes so much more sense now because I knew that Leah wouldn't just stand there and let Ang do that.  Thanks for the update...I'm not sure how Angela will react.  Really it's kind of a 50 50 shot that it could go either way for me.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 5:20 AM Title: It Should Happen This Way

She would be pissed that leah would do this.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 6:00 AM Title: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

;)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 12:41 AM Title: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

jeez Leah.....cant you tell when someone is not ready to let go of the past yet.   Poor Girl.

Hmmm   Jealous Angela is hawt.

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 12:19 AM Title: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

GO ANG!!!!!!! I'm sorry that Ben got stuck in the middle of two fighting mythical characters, but I love the result.

Great job and happy birthday.

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 12:03 AM Title: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

Oh wow...she turned him?  What happened to Leah? Did Angela kill her?  I can't imagine that she would have let her just change or run off with Ben.  I can't wait for your next update!  Great chapter and Happy Birthday!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 6:16 PM Title: Ain't Nobody's Business

edward is so self deprocating.

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 3:40 PM Title: Ain't Nobody's Business

Once again...Jasper the wise one.  But, I understand where Ang is coming from.  She needs to do this her own way, without the influence of others.  And...if anyone should understand the pain Ben could go thru, it's Bella and Edward should understand Ang's mixed emotions.  The situations are so similar!  Loved it!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 3:26 PM Title: Ain't No Sunshine...

Jasper is so wise.  You just gotta love the man!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 1:13 AM Title: Ain't Nobody's Business

I love the story

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 9:57 PM Title: Ain't No Sunshine...

GO GET HIM, ANG!!!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:10 PM Title: Ain't No Sunshine...

sinceboth of his parents are gone who would she be takung him from?

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 4:54 PM Title: Take A Look At Me Now

Jake is such an ass.  I always thought he was

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 4:51 AM Title: Take A Look At Me Now

Jake is always a little harsh.  He is a real pain in the ass, if you ask me.  I do however love how Edward tries to taunt him.

So, is Ben going to go all vamp and be Angela's true mate or is she really going to high tail it back to Scotland?  Can't wait to see. :)

PS.  LOVE the new banner!!!  It is fabulous! 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:02 AM Title: Take A Look At Me Now

jake always was an arse.

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 12:45 AM Title: Take A Look At Me Now

A little harsh is a bit of an understatment!  Cause this was all her fault right?  Stupid freaking mutt!  The was about the last thing she needed with all that she is dealing with right now!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:56 PM Title: Even Now

Alright, I am putting my foot down...no hurting Edward!  That is not allowed.  Othter than that, it was a very good chapter.

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 2:53 PM Title: Even Now

Ah, so he is with Jacob...from the end of his POV and now Alice can't see him!  Are they just talking?  Let's hope so!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 1:13 PM Title: Even Now

Jake went to confront him.  I hope they save him.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:27 AM Title: Even Now

glad to have you back-really enjoy the story! Just want a longer chapter next time!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 6:49 AM Title: Even Now

oh eddie  what are you up too now

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 4:17 AM Title: Tough Talk

Wow, can't beleive Jake told the secret, although I'm not sure he had much of a choice in the matter.  So...does he know about the Cullens?

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 3:59 AM Title: Tough Talk

humm and the plot thickens...cant wait for more

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 3:41 AM Title: Tough Talk

I think Anglea should let Ben go and find a nice vampire to settle down with.  Ben will look like her sugar daddy since he is 33 and she is forever 18.  Just a thought.

Thanks for the history on how Jake and Ben becane so close.  That clears up a lot of questions from the last chapter.

Have a nice vacation. :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 5:50 PM Title: What Might Have Been

hmmm ben huh

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 2:17 PM Title: What Might Have Been

hummmmm

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 4:54 AM Title: What Might Have Been

Wow.  I never expected it to be Ben in the cemetary.  I wonder if Jake told him the legends.  Because why else would Ben not be thrown by the fact that Angela had not aged since the last time he saw her?

Great chapter.  I am intrieged to see how Jake fits in all this.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2010 4:26 AM Title: Peace

hmmmm wonder who it is

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2010 2:53 AM Title: Peace

Mmmm, that could be fun to read.  But honestly, I am dying to know who spotted Angela.  Her mom?  One of her brothers?  Can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2010 2:51 AM Title: Peace

great chapter and I would love a J&A outtake.

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 4:59 PM Title: Peace

Hmm...who was at the funeral...Ben maybe?  I could just see Alice plotting to pull that off!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 9:10 AM Title: Peace

Oh my

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 2:30 AM Title: Fly Away

It was so sad and so beautiful all at the same time.  I love the fact that Edward was there to convey her father's final thoughts.  Perfect.



Author's Response:

thanks so much for your kind comments - really glad you enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 11:12 PM Title: Fly Away

AMAZING chapter!  I'm so glad that he awoke for a short time before he passed and she was able to converse with him via Edward.  He was able to let go being able to say goodbye to his daugher.  Loved it!



Author's Response:

so glad you enjoyed it!! It was a tough one to write but I am glad that everyone has responded so positively!! More coming soon!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 7:35 PM Title: Fly Away

glad her dad got to "talk" to her at the end.



Author's Response:

Me too!! thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 10:41 AM Title: Fly Away

very sad indeed..thank you 4 giving her father a little closer .. still a little to emotional to give a better review



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments!  Glad you enjoyed it and I promise it won't all be sad!! More coming soon!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2010 8:29 PM Title: Home

poor thing



Author's Response:

I promise it will get better :)

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 2:52 AM Title: Home

Really liking the family dynamic with adding Ang to the Cullen mix.  That even though Edward is her sire, she still sees Carlisle as the father figure, as it should be!  Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I know alot of people were worried how Ang would fit in...I am hoping to show alot more of how she got to where she is.....thanks for the great comments!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 10:54 PM Title: Home

ahhhhhhhhhhh! Please update soon



Author's Response:

:O) The next chapter is up now and the next one is coming soon!  Trying to post weekly!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 10:44 PM Title: Home

The reason behind it is sad, but I am so glad the Cullens are back!!!  I love how Edward is with Angela.  I worried that their connection might in some way hurt his relationship with Bella.  But he seems to love her in a completely different way.  Kinda like a father, but not.  I also love to see how Carlisle and Esme are with her.  It is very sweet.



Author's Response:

Hi Nickey! Thanks for the comments!  I am glad they are back too!! :)  Although Angela has a lot to say...the rest of the family will definitely be involved and I hope to show how she has fit in...really glad you are enjoying it!!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  More coming soon!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 9:10 PM Title: Remembering When...

Wow, poor Ang!  I'm just glad that he didn't take his own life.  That would be much more difficult for her to get past I think.  I think a part of me is wish he is somewhat coherent for her visit.  I can't imagine her father would ever think her a monster even with his beliefs.

Thanks for a great update!



Author's Response:

And now I am caught up! :) I just want to thank you again for taking the time to review each chapter as you read - it means so much!  I agree...it would have been tough for her to get past and I couldn't bring myself for that to happen, but I did want to show the stress he was under and how neither of her parents have really moved on.

More coming towards the end of the week...thanks again!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 5:20 PM Title: Remembering When...

poor ang.....always a tought thing to go through



Author's Response: I know..but things will get better!! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 4:58 AM Title: Remembering When...

I hope he thinks that he is seeing an angel beckoning him home.  I think that would at least give Angela some sense of peace.

Excellent, but sad chapter.



Author's Response:

That is a nice way to think of it...hopefully it won't be too traumatic for her.  Glad you enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: frekles Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:03 AM Title: Remembering When...

seems a little short but well written. I think unfortunately that Rev. Weber would not approve as he is to much of a tradionalist and this is just not what his beliefs and the literal Bible would have supported.



Author's Response: It was a little shorter...but unfortunately to keep the flow - it seemed like the spot to do it. Have to say it has been a very interesting split on how Angela's Dad will react...hope I don't disappoint!! More coming towards the end of the week....Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 1:04 AM Title: Remembering When...

I more than believe he will see her as a miracle.  What another incredibly powerful chapter.  Thank you so much for making my eyes burn with tears, you evil genius.  Grrrrr!



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much!! I know that the chapters are pretty dark currently but they won't stay that way forever.  I never like to make someone cry but when it comes to writing - if I have even come close to capturing your emotions that way - it is a thrill.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...more coming soon!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 9:10 PM Title: Learning to Fly

hmmm her parents are hurt???



Author's Response: :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 3:32 AM Title: Learning to Fly

love the new story! Something different, I am so tired of everything Edward and Bella with Jasper and Alice occasionally thrown in. Even Rsalie being such a big part is different and good. Always have loved your writing style as I also read the original story.



Author's Response: Wow!! Thank you so much for your comments! Really glad you stuck with me and followed through from ADKOM! Hoping to have a chap up a week so more coming soon! Thanks again!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 3:28 AM Title: Learning to Fly

I hate cliffies!  But I am liking this story.  I love how Rosalie was the one to really take charge with Angela and lay down the law.  As much as I love an E&B story (which is what honestly drew me to the original story), I am enjoying seeing this all from Angela's POV.  Can't wait to read more and find out what Alice told her.



Author's Response: LOL...I do apologize about the cliffie..just had to do it! You don't know how much it means that you are enjoying the story even though it isn't just about Edward and Bella - I was really afraid that this one would go largely un-noticed because I was going in a different direction. To be honest the one thing I would have enjoyed more about Twilight is if there had been more focus on the Cullens ensemble and I hope to capture a bit of that with this story... Thanks so much for sticking with it and more coming soon!!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 3:02 AM Title: Learning to Fly

Uh oh, did her father take his life?  I love hearing the back stories here.  And its nice hearing it from Angela's POV...different and new!  Loving it!



Author's Response:

As you can see, I am catching up on reviews...lol!!  Glad you are liking Angela's POV....the rest of the clan will continue to have their say as well....but she seems to want to be the key speaker right now!!

thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 2:41 AM Title: Broken Wing

poor dad



Author's Response:

I know...it was a tough one to write!! But I promise it won't be all sad!!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:47 PM Title: Broken Wing

Oh all of Bella's friends, Angela would have been the last one I would have chosen for this life only because of her religious background.  I can only imagine the torment she went through when she was told she was a vampire.  It is sad to see her alone, but understandable.  Hopefully she can find a mate that will make her happy.

My heart breaks for her dad.  It was so hard to read his POV.



Author's Response:

Hi Nickey

Thanks for taking the time to read and review!!   I agree...Angela was a difficult choice but don't forget that Carlisle comes from a very similar background and he has adapted.  I promise this story won't be all doom and gloom...and hope you stick with me!!

More coming soon!!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:53 AM Title: Broken Wing

Angela is feeling so much of what Edward seemed to pre-Bella and it's so understandable.  Would like to know how she reacted toward Edward after finding out that he was the one to change her.

The part at the end with her father was very sad.  Was there a Cullen stopping him with the "breeze" that he felt or was it just a reaction or a natural breeze that saved his life?

Really liking this!



Author's Response:

Hi Sara, I don't want to give a whole lot away but we will continue to see flashbacks from Angela throughout the story and it will cover alot of how she felt as she learns about life as a vampire as well as how everything happened.

As for your question about her Dad....I would be inclined to say that it was his own faith that made him stop.....

Glad you are enjoying it!!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 5:31 AM Title: By Myself

Like it so far!  Great to hear from Angela!  You so very rarely do in fic!  Can't wait to see where this is headed.

Sarah



Author's Response: Hi Sarah, Thanks for the feedback and so glad you are enjoying it!! :o)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 5:15 AM Title: By Myself

I think Esme may need to trust her intuition on this one. ;)

Excellent beginning.  Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response: Thanks so much...glad you are enjoying so far...and yep...could be rough waters ahead...

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 5:08 AM Title: By Myself

of course they are right or you wouldnt have much of a story ..*giggle*

but so far I am lovin this one as much as the first.



Author's Response: Hehehe...so true! Thanks for sticking with me and the review! Much appreciated!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 4:49 AM Title: By Myself

Awww Jazz taking care of Ang.  that's sweet.  I can sooooo see him as a big brother.



Author's Response:

:) Totally!!!   Thanks for the feedback!!

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 1:10 AM Title: Prologue

Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response: :) More went up last night...not sure if you saw it or not? Thanks so much for the feedback!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 8:08 PM Title: Prologue

I am so excited to read this story!  I can't wait till you start posting. :)



Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! means alot!!

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