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Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 1:43 PM Title: Peanut

Great chapter. I'm so glad they've made up and I really am into the kids stories now too.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 4:41 AM Title: Unchained Melody

Great chapter, the angst was getting to me thoug., I'm so glad they've kissed & made up;-))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 3:00 AM Title: Choices

Wow, that was heart breaking & the fight escalated really fast to something very ugly when all thatEdward was saying (I thought) to Michael was he loved the sex with Bella so much he always wanted more.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 12:10 AM Title: That's Amore

;-))

Im glad EJ took a little break from the third person discussion. He's pretty adorable & Debbie seems like the one to tame the savage beast. I'm so glad this is a completed fic and I get to go read the next chapter now*=))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 9:43 PM Title: Party like a Rock star

Great fun reading this chapter. Laughed @ the kids yelling for Bella to take off her top.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 5:55 PM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen

Great start, I'm really excited to be reading more of these two & their 4 kids:-))

Reviewer: summerj01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2012 1:40 PM Title: Epilogue

I am so sad that the story is over, I have fallen in love with all of them (and your writing.) Where can I find the outtakes?

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2012 10:57 PM Title: Peanut

You know you made the cuff scene ecotic...   and I loved that when Edward asked to be let go, she did..    

I love that they do kink stuff.  will stop if asked..  That is true devossion.. 

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2012 9:08 PM Title: Unchained Melody

I would Have to agree  with you on the last statement..  When aboused you might get over it.  But there is always a trigger that can send you back..  and like bella found out.  Edward grabing her was her trigger.. 

But the fight was 50/50 with the being mean part.  Edward did go a little more..    But Like I say..   Just because your ready to quick fighting doesn't mean the other person is. 

It sucks.  My sister wants she starts your can't stop her.  Even if you say nothing and agree..  Until it runs it course.   It who she is..  and would never change her..

Oh and Bella hits the kids is just has if Edward does.  But has mom we protected even from their dads..     Has far has I'm concerned.  they should not touch the kids..  find other  means.. 

and why is it okay for a women to smacke the husband and it not wrong?  I really like to know.    But I hate vilence and what everyone writes is funny with the girls smacking the guys..  But that me.    I have to admit..  some of it funny..  But most is just wrong.  But I have my own personal reason for my reactions.. 

But the main reason I 'm leaving you a review it that your a fantastisc writer.. 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2012 4:42 AM Title: Epilogue

Wow, your story is so fantastic!!!  I am late to this party and just spent the past week propping my eyes open with toothpicks every night just so I could keep reading.  Your characters are so fun and I love how much you developed them; I don't want to say goodbye to them yet! I think you should consider one more story of this family, and make it an even trilogy :)

EJ is such a man-whore I have trouble liking him some of the time, but I LOVE CC and I want to see Alex and Michael all grown up.  And Edward could finally have his hood of the car sex!!! (poor guy).  If not a full story, then at least we get a few outtakes (soon I hope, hint hint).

You are one of my new favorite authors, off to read more of your stories....Love you!!!

Reviewer: icefrog Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2011 7:36 AM Title: Epilogue

BEST STORY IN A LONG TIME. I would like to know how their lifes will continue.

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 5:07 AM Title: The Best Years

it sounds like you have enough material for another sequel!!!

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 9:15 PM Title: love taps

some of the strongest, best relationships are may-december ones.

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 6:01 PM Title: Shut up and Drive part two

I hope that EJ and Cecilia get together as I get the feeling that she is his Bella

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 3:57 AM Title: The Hills Have Thighs

I need bariatric surgery ... what are my chances that Dr. Cullen would be my surgeon? lol

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 9:07 PM Title: Long Day

I think they need to get over themselves and get on with it lol

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 10:26 PM Title: BIG girl panties

bad Edward ... Bella did go to save him and CC ... but I can also see Edwards side and say bad Bella... She should have respected his wishes!

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 7:37 PM Title: Choices

bad form, Edward!

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 2:13 AM Title: Party like a Rock star

So much like his Dad!!!!

Reviewer: cellibelli85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 1:25 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for writing this story. It was a wonderful read. I'm sorry to hear that your're being attacked. Please don't let it keep you from writing your stories. I can't wait to read the outtakes. I would love to read about poor CC.Glad things seem to be looking up for him. Poor Alex, I hope she fares better in the future. EJ as a dad would be interesting to. I hope his firstborn is a girl. It would serve him right. I suspected that he was going to end up with Cecilia. 

Reviewer: babylou23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 3:21 PM Title: Epilogue

looking forward to outakes. I really want to see what happen to cc, I think you should write a short story about his life lol I just love that boy lol well done.

Reviewer: babylou23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 2:40 PM Title: The Best Years

so glad you are doing outatkes, I really want to the story to keeping going with the kids future

Reviewer: alexandrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 7:34 PM Title: Epilogue

LOVED THIS ENDING!!!!!!  However, I am sad to see this story end.  Keep writing awesome fics!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 6:09 PM Title: Epilogue

I love this family. Of the kids, CC is my favorie. I knew Natalie would be no good for him. She was too clingy and showed no ambition as a teen. She was not Cullen material. I hope he finds happiness this time. He deserves it. You can write as many outtakes as you want and I will always read them.

Reviewer: jessee03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 5:18 PM Title: Epilogue

Wow there's so many of them. I love reading about the kids and now grandkids though.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 3:20 PM Title: Epilogue

loved it , loved it all

Reviewer: Bec2b Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 11:41 AM Title: Epilogue

People are just upset that your story is better then theirs, tell them to move along.  I look forward to outtakes, and anything else you write.  Thank you for a great story.

 

Reviewer: babylou23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 8:18 PM Title: Thump, thump, thump

lol, that was one hell of a thankgiving. gonna love cc

Reviewer: blueschicka Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 4:46 AM Title: Road to redemption

Oh my god. Great Chapter!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 12:47 AM Title: Shut up and Drive part one

yeeah drivers licsence!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 10:29 PM Title: The Hills Have Thighs

okay that chapter is closed

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 9:20 PM Title: Stupid Cupid

i love cc!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 9:01 PM Title: Mr. LoverMan

dont be hard on ej no one is and that's his problem!!  he is a complete asshole!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 8:47 PM Title: Road to redemption

ej is a revolving door... damn!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 7:07 PM Title: Rescue Me

sweeet!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 5:37 PM Title: Long Day

oh boy!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 4:15 PM Title: Flanked by your side

oh a tatoo... fun have 2!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 3:27 PM Title: Back to basics

come on cc just tell her she likes you!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 12:21 PM Title: Baby Got Back

a roaring time at the cullen's as always!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 5:01 AM Title: Holidaze part two

good i am glad they broke up!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 4:03 AM Title: Holidaze part one

oh the cullen men and their sex exploits!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 11:29 PM Title: Flowers in the Attic

grandpa carlisle is something else!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 10:11 PM Title: Gray Matter

okay the only thing i am mad about is bella keeps saying she deserves it... she doesn't and i don't like it.. even ed said it... NO ONE deserves to get hit no matter in a marriage that is just pisswater to say that!!!  and ej shoul stay mad hell bella should too

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 9:15 PM Title: BIG girl panties

oh boy... emo ed on the run what an ass.  he can't see bella's side i would have done the same thing as her.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 8:37 PM Title: Thump, thump, thump

OMG!!  I am laughing so hard i am crying!!! only the cullens!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 7:46 PM Title: DNA

cullens and sex i swear that is all this family does... i am disappointed because it is something that should be shared with someone you love not just hanging out there all the time whenever.  i think as parents they have failed in that way.  yeah they put it out there but the whole situation with both boys pisses me off.  it's ok for ej and cc but heaven forbid alex would want to get it on and they tell her to do it with someone she loves while the two boys can go F anyone they want too.. sorry about the rant but that is something that really pisses me off about this story!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 5:40 PM Title: Saint Corduroy

oh ej you are just as complicated as cc in your own little way!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 4:45 PM Title: At a loss

thought he was going to try that when he told ed it was too late... wow didn't see it coming.  it is horrible that he feels like everyone hates him

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 3:17 AM Title: So cold

poor cc, ed is taking this way too far

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 12:35 AM Title: Wild Thing

oh boy that was realy dumb of cc!!  ohh!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 9:27 PM Title: Half moon

oh what mothers do for their chidren!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 8:15 PM Title: Smells like Teen Spirit Part Two

oh boy.... ej's got it bad!!!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 7:31 PM Title: Smells like Teen Spirit Part One

parents are funny!  too bad they aren't real!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 7:00 PM Title: Kill Bill

that was hot on the desk!!  i wish i had enough balls to go do that at my husband's office!!  cc is being a jerk off now.... well at least ej and cc aren't jerks at the same time!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 5:15 PM Title: The Best Years

I never liked Natalie. She should have been on the shot if she could not be responsible enough to take the pill. I am with Edward in that CC has to get his education. CC is my favorite of the kids.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 4:37 PM Title: Asshole

well  cc glad you think you acted like an asshole cause you did i too would never have the nerve to say anything like that to my parents!  liked the punch ej and i am gald to see you are sort getting it together!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 12:26 PM Title: Big Poppa

oh ej just when i think you turned the corner you make dumb ass remarks.. seth is gay huh,. interesting

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 11:43 PM Title: Peanut

F-ing HOt!!  i hope ej is changing her ways!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 9:34 PM Title: Unchained Melody

EJ stop being a whore and i can't believe his mother doesn't put him in his place about it... i wouldn't be proud or just brush it off!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 8:54 PM Title: Choices

thanks for making it more realistic... ed you made bad choices.. what is up? 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 8:06 PM Title: That's Amore

ej is a man whore i hope he stops soon. yuk! sounds like debbie is his bella!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 4:03 PM Title: The Best Years

I really am going to hate to be without this story! I love it.. The Cullens, especially grandpa Carlisle is too funny! But looking forward to updates to the outtakes and still have QS to look forward to. Just love your writing!

Reviewer: cellibelli85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 8:22 AM Title: The Best Years

Ha I knew one of them would end up knocking a girl up. Poor CC and Natalie. Can't wait to read the outtakes and epi.

Thank you for writing this story. It was definitley a great ride.

Reviewer: Bec2b Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 3:29 AM Title: The Best Years

You could never become redundant.. I love you story and the out takes.  Look forward to more.  Thanks for all your time.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 1:37 AM Title: The Best Years

wow amazing update !!!!  

Reviewer: toYINsmiles Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 2:45 AM Title: That's Amore

I loved this chapter, as I love all of them.  I'm so excited about EJ and Debbie's budding relationship.  She is exactly what he needs.  And she reminds me of Bella.  And that boy loves his mommy!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2011 3:33 AM Title: Party like a Rock star

okay they are the most irresponsible parents i know!! i can't believe all the crap they let go on!!  and i am not falling for the line if they do it at home it's safter...drink together with teenagers are you out of your mind... ej is a butthole and cc is not far behind .. okay sorry had to say all of that!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2011 2:35 AM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen

wow sexy middle aged parent.. wish hubby and i could be soo sexy!! haha!!  wow bella after that kind of a day i surprised you have any energy left you are a super woman

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 1:35 AM Title: West Side Story Part One

oh peanut with her big brothers was funny sweet. I have no brothers... but would probably have loved having EJ and CC around

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 10:51 PM Title: Romeo and Juliet

al is great guy and father..i wish he could pay soon to be ex off and have aj with him

Reviewer: Kittrell-GarciaLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 10:36 PM Title: Long Day

Oooh my Gawd, the food porn & almost having sex in the diner was AHH- MAZING- LY HILARIOUS!! <3 this story so much, it's great!!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 8:55 PM Title: love taps

oh my... Al, only if all us ladies can have a guy like him.... I hope this gets worked out and Emily does not make the mistake of being with gabe

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2011 3:33 AM Title: Shut up and Drive part two

ej loves pleasuring women alot to be so scared of std's...maybe daddy ed needs to have another talk with him

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2011 2:28 AM Title: Shut up and Drive part one

so al and em...hhhmmm???? oh way to man up edward and take care of bella

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 11:37 PM Title: Stupid Cupid

i am actually upset that ej and roni not getting back together. yes i get they are young and probably doing way to much way to early- i liked them

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 4:20 PM Title: Rescue Me

i wonder is roni jake,s daughter that would be a trip

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 5:34 PM Title: Flanked by your side

i wish had a pic of bella's tattoo.. She is such a cool mom.. sex tips with big baby boy cullen and tatto with man child cullen

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 3:12 PM Title: Back to basics

oh momma bella gets the kids back

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 2:33 AM Title: Baby Got Back

CC is funny drunk

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 12:21 AM Title: Holidaze part two

these folks have more fun at family dinners than should be allowed.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2011 2:52 PM Title: Thump, thump, thump

oh that was too funny!!!

Reviewer: Kittrell-GarciaLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2011 3:41 AM Title: That's Amore

Ok, just gotta say, I'm not really into FF's that go a lot into the kids POV, but this story is awesome! It's just so cute getting to know the kids & knowing what they're going through, it's great! :)

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 11:24 PM Title: Saint Corduroy

that was crazy... i hope CC really never tries that again

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2011 12:42 AM Title: Half moon

ok, bella feeding her son lines to his girl is too funny.

hope gpa carlisle gets better...

 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2011 8:49 PM Title: Smells like Teen Spirit Part Two

limo had alot action

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 11:19 PM Title: Unchained Melody

michael is too cute! and glad edward could apologize and tell bella what was really going on with him

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 10:05 PM Title: Choices

intense

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 11:05 AM Title: That's Amore

seems ej found his bella

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 8:18 PM Title: Party like a Rock star

So EJ isn't so bad... and CC seems to be coming out of his shell. Although I doubt i could be that generous to my kids... i do think the relationship B&E have with their kids is cute, very entertaining

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 5:44 PM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen

Daddy edward is hilarious...

Reviewer: cellibelli85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 10:26 PM Title: Thor, Loki, and the gang

Great story! Love the family dynamics and how they are not perfect but still so in love with each other. Big families can be that crazy sometimes.

Usually I don't like multiple POVs but I have to say you did I good job in giving them their individual voices. 

I'm sad you are ending it here but I understand that it has to come to an end eventually. 

Reviewer: chloeswan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 10:31 PM Title: Thor, Loki, and the gang

omg!! i love this story something fierce!!! and i am tooo excited that bella is pregnant again! i love getting your update alerts!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 7:22 PM Title: Thor, Loki, and the gang

Todl you before will tell you again,  love your story.  have you ever doen Michaels pov?  I know he is young but my gosh, the therapy only that boy will need from CC and Alex and EJ's girlfriends.....   Oh well.  REally love your Edward and Bella they rock!!!!!  You do too !!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 6:40 PM Title: Testing Testing

holy crap a baby !!!!!! 

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Date: 01 Apr 2011 2:30 PM Title: Spring is in the air pt one

love your chapters, they go thru everything a-z.  Love your lemons the best thou. !!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2011 3:10 PM Title: Imagine that

really love this chapter, Bella and Edward in bio lab  the best !!!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 2:58 PM Title: Thor, Loki, and the gang

I love this story. I worry about the boys sexual activities. It is going to catch up with them and I would hate for it to ruin their futures. They are basically good kids, but they need to slow down. There is more to life than meaning less sex. I can't stand Nathalie. Does she not have a home? Do her parents hate her? Bella needs to stop being so easy on EJ just because he is 18 doesn't mean you stop being a parent.

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 7:03 AM Title: Thor, Loki, and the gang

I love this story! Keep up the great work. 

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Date: 26 Mar 2011 6:57 AM Title: Thor, Loki, and the gang

 "You went through them all, didn't you? Now you're on repeat."  I flove it.  Since you're doing an unofficial poll  I kinda would like to hear from Carlisle to see what he says about Edward and Bella having a child at this age.  He's old and senile, also he's libel to say antything so I think it would be amusing.  But if your gonna do the people you have already written from I would like to hear from CC. 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:59 AM Title: Gray Matter

i love your crazy cullen family

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