Date: 27 Aug 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 14: Theories
hummm..... well lets hope he is a good guy!
Author's Response:
LOL! I hope so too. Thanks, fanette! :)
Date: 27 Aug 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 14: Theories
Love the tender love scene, wish it had been a little longer, more detailed...
Great job progressing the story and I love Jacob and Nessie's relationship, can't wait to read more and can't wait to see who the mystery person is and what they want!
Author's Response:
Thanks, dearjae! Hope you got the outtake from the last chapter. :) I'm glad you liked the love scene...I thought it would be more tender not to go into too much detail. We'll find out who the mystery person is soon! :)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 13: One Step Closer
Well, another great chapter!! I love that you write nice, long chapters that have lots of "meat" to them. Its so frustrating to read stories that you have to wait and wait for and then its just like 5 paragraphs. Also, you are so good with the lemons! But on top of that, it is a great story, well written, great characters! Well done!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it, dearjae! I really love hearing your thoughts. You are definitely making me blush here. I appreciate you taking the time out to leave me a little love after each chapter. They mean a lot to me. :))
Date: 24 Aug 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 13: One Step Closer
dun dun du....... Great Job!
Author's Response:
Thanks again, fanette! Hope you like what's to come. :)
Date: 24 Aug 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 12: Mea Culpa
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, fanette! :)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 12: Mea Culpa
Wow! Great chapter! You do a good job of keeping the story moving, but also keeping it suspensful. Sometimes people dwell on something too long or they will brush over one suspense after another. You find a good balance. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliments! It's great to hear I find a good balance; I try my best. LOL Thanks again! :)
Date: 22 Aug 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 11: Interrogations
Wow, good stuff! Can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
Should post again tomorrow. I have 2 more completed chapters, and then I'll have to get myself to writing! LOL Thanks!
Date: 21 Aug 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Storm and the Calm
OH MY GOODNESS! What the heck happened? I hope the next chapter will be posted soon!
Author's Response:
Someone's been very bad. LOL Thanks for reading! I love hearing your thoughts. Update tomorrow. :)
Date: 20 Aug 2010 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 9: Only Fools Rush In
don't kill charlie don't kill charlie!
Author's Response:
LOL! We'll see what happens in the next chapter. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: 20 Aug 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 9: Only Fools Rush In
Wow, I love the story, love the smut, love the humor! Great Job on this chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, dearjae! I love hearing what you have to say. ;)
Date: 19 Aug 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 8: Revelations
Oh my goodness! What now!!!! Who is stalking them! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, dearjae! More to come soon. ;)
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 7: Afterglow
WOW! I can't wait to see what happens! Great story, excellent chemistry between Jacob and Ness.
Author's Response:
LOL, I know. Sorry for the cliffie. I should update in a couple of days. ;)
Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 6: Need
Very good smut! Love the way the story is progressing! Can't wait to read more....
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, dearjae! :)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 5: Dreamcatcher
Oh my! Poor Jacob! Man, I would never break his heart! Can't wait to see...
Author's Response:
Yeah, I wouldn't either. LOL Thanks for reading all the chapters and responding! I appreciate it so much. :)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 4: Say Goodnight
more good drama!
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 3: Violent Ends
Wow, what a twist, can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
LOL, just to warn you, it's gets crazier! Thanks again! :)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Black Car
Love the interaction between Ness and Charlie. Wow, great chemistry between her and Jake! Good work, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Their connection is very strong, similar to Edward & Bella's. Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: It Happened One Night
Like the voice you gave Ness. Jacob seems steamy still, thank goodness! Action right of the gate! Can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you like Ness, and I've always been one for action. No stalling; let's get to the good stuff. :)
Date: 06 Aug 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 4: Say Goodnight
Love this story! Cant' wait until the next update! You did a good job of creepy James I feel like he's right outside my door lol
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading! I should update tomorrow. I have 12 chapters written so far. Glad you like my James. :)))
Date: 04 Aug 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: It Happened One Night
I really like this story but I wanted to know if Nessie is 21 how old is Jacob?
Author's Response:
Jacob is 17 years older than her, so he's about 38. Thanks for your interest in this story!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: It Happened One Night
YAY! Dazzy! So glad you're posting here! Let me be the first to tell people how AWESOME this story is!!!!!!!!
Nessie is terrificly portrayed and the relationship between her and Jake is phenominally written by this fantastic author!!!!
LURVE!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks, Jo! Fancy seeing you here! You're so sweet to me. You definitely made my day! :) Love you too, babe! xxoo