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Reviewer: nikon342 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 3:12 AM Title: Part I

Yes, Edward. Show her over and over. :) love the writing style, the details and descriptions are brilliant! Not just the same shit explained differently. Unique and I very much love it!

Author's Response:

*mwha*  Oh, don't worry... he will!  ;)  

Thank-you very much, both for the high praise, and for the lovely warm fuzzy I have from your review!  Thanks so, for reading!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 10:47 PM Title: Part I

WOW, I can't imagine what Bella's story is.  However, she seems to be dealing well with the purchase of her freedom.  Maybe because Edward treated her like a human being and gave her choices.  I would love to see this story written out.  It seems that it has so much potential.  Thx

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:56 PM Title: Part I

Yes, ease our ache....

Reviewer: Stellarrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:43 PM Title: Part I

Very interesting start....looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!  :D

Reviewer: DuskandDawn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:29 PM Title: Part I

That was wonderful. I can't wait to read more...it should be sooooo much longer then a two-shot :) Very sensual and loving...I love this Edward and Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank-you so much for your high praise! :D

I have promised to try for some inspiration as to where to take these two in the future.  I just don't really have anything significant in that direction at this point.  Maybe after I wrap up some other projects.

Glad you read and enjoyed!!  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:33 PM Title: Part I

wow



Author's Response:

Thanks! ;D

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 2:42 PM Title: Part I

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!  :D

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:05 AM Title: Part I

Amazingly sensual and erotic!  The art of the alluring is tremendous and you have an art for bringing that to the forefront.  I'm looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thank-you so very much! I'm always so excited to see what you have to say, and was certainly not disappointed this time either!  I so appreciate you reading and responding!!! :D

Reviewer: mgg Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:04 AM Title: Part I

WOW, that was incredibly sensual, I love your take on that time period, your attention to detail is quite good, and your writing impeccable, please make it a multichapter, I know you wrote that it would only be until there first time, but they could explore a lot of each other even after there first time, what ever you decide it great, but you know when you find something that just screams "OMG SO GOOD!!!", you can´t let it go, so that´s why I´m making the request.

 

Thanks for sharing this, hopping!!!

Melissa



Author's Response:

Thank-you!!  :D

Your enthusiasm is truely gratifying!  I can promise to try to write more, but it will be as the muse strikes and most likely after all the other projects roaming my head and filling my plate have more resolution.  These two are very near and dear to my heart, so it would be hard to leave them alone completely for always.  Just felt it was only fair to warn people this wasn't headed to a multichapter right out of the gate. 

You might like my multi-chapter Togaward fic, "Forbidden Desire".  It focuses a little more on Bella whereas this is more on E, but is from both their POV's.

Thanks for reading and for the fabulous support!!

Reviewer: lonely_angie17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 2:18 AM Title: Part I

i like how edward in a way saved bella from the men that had her enslaved!! i also like how he is good to her and is taking things slow for her!! letting her make the first move!! really liking the story!! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!! 

I just love the idea of a man who is willing to build the slow burn, too!  So glad you are enjoying my little creation!:D

Reviewer: NYtoLAGirlyx3 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 11:19 PM Title: Part I

i love it... :)

but only 2 parts? :(



Author's Response:

Thanks! :D

That's all that I have a plot for in my head.  If I ever think of where to take the story it's possible I'd continue it, but not right now.  I'm open to suggestions if a plot bunny is hopping up and down on your end! :D  Once I finish Forbodden Desire I might have more impetus to explore their exploration of eachother. ;D

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 10:48 PM Title: Part I

This is a hot piece of fiction...no worries from this reader. lol 



Author's Response:

LOL  THANKS!!

Reviewer: wildhorsespeg Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 9:45 PM Title: Part I

Awesome! So enticing! A great piece of fantasy :) I thinkyou mentioned it being a 2 part story so looking forward to the conclusion.



Author's Response:

Thank-you so much for the lovely words of encouragement!

I'll put up the second half just as soon as it's polished by my lovely beta and prereader! :D

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 9:45 PM Title: Part I

loveeeeeeeeddddddd ittttttttttt



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!! :D

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 9:32 PM Title: Part I

Beautiful. I love the way you write. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, bb!!  :D

Reviewer: SummerMeadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 9:12 PM Title: Part I

 I love it, please contiue it .



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

I'll put the second half up as soon as it's finshed and passed muser with my lovely beta and prereader!  :D

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