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Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 36

ok that is just not fair.



Author's Response:

Wow, you're quick, I just responded to yoru other post! 

Anyway, again, thank you for reviewing and reading.  I promise that there will be resolution and that this isn't the end!

Lisa 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 35

sweet!  this will of course make or break the relationship with alice for carlisle and bella..hopefully she will accept them at some point.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  As I said before, this was my favorite chapter so far to right.  I also liked incoperating the Dave Matthews song into it.

There will be more with Alice coming up.

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 36

wow is all i have to say about this chapter they both cant catch a break but at least they finally found victoria! and ill be on pins an needles till the next chapter i really look foward to the updates on this story ! keep them comming 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for the review.  I promsie to update before the end of the week. :)

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 35

well im happy we got an insite to alices mind. im totally stoked that they are getting married didnt think that he would propose to her! happy for the loop! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading.  I'm glad you liked the chapter.  As I said in teh AN on the site, it was my favorite chapter to write so far!  We will hear a little more from Alice too. I would love to know what you think of the next chapter.

Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 34

good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  The enxt chapter will be posted shortly.

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 34

well i started to tear up when she and alice were going at it ! i would think it would be hard that your father is dating your best friend! i think you should do a pov of alice into her mind just my opionion! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

 I agree it would be hard and strange for your best friend, how is almost like your sister, and your father to date.  I'm not going to pov with Alice, however, I promise LAice will get to exomain her stand on the issue and there will be a resolution.  We  haven't heard the last from her yet!

As always, thank you for reading!  I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 33

great chapter. hope alice will not be a hinderance to their relationship.



Author's Response:

Thanks again foe reading and reviewing. i'm hoping to post the next chapter later today. 

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 33

getting back to every day life! i cant wait to see whats instore for the next chatper 



Author's Response:

Hello,

Thank you for reading and reviewing!  I'm hoping to post the next chapter later today.

 

Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 32

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to comment adn review my story.  I'm reviewing and editing the next chapter and it should be up tonight some time.  Thank you again!

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 32

totally excited that alice and jasper are getting married ! rose and edward are so cute together. and carlisle and bella are just content with each other. i think shes scared to bring up the whole marrage thing to him ... cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Hello,

Thanks again for reviewing the story.  I'm editing the next chapter it should be posted by tonight!  Hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: dna2679 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 31

you did a great job with the entire chapter!!! i can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response:

I'm gald you liked the chapter!  The next chapter will be posted tonight.  Please let me know what you think!

 

Lisa

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 31

Very good chapter and good scene.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment!  I get really nervous about writing scenes like the one in this last one. I never know if they are too long or short, too little detail or too much.  Anyway, thank you for taking the time and letting me know that you are enjoying the story.  The next chapter should be posted tonight some time.

 

Lisa

Reviewer: BabyBennet Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 31

It was a pretty sweet sex scene. You could see how much Bella and Carlisle loved eachother. And it is nice they got to go on a babymoon. Keep up the writing



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment!  I'm glad you liked it.  I get nervous about writing scenes like that.  Again, thanks for taking the time to leave a comment.  Hope you like th enext chapter (It should be posted tonight!).

Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 31

good chapter. wondering if getting married has really occured to either of them? 



Author's Response:

Awww....that topic may or may not be visited in the future.  You'll have to keep reading!

 

Thanks for always poting a comment.  i appreciated it so much!

 

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 31

im enjoying the lemons! cant wait till the next chapter and hes finally starting to open up about whats going on inside himself! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking th time to comment.  I really, really appreciate it!  Hope you like the next chapter.  It should be posted later tonight.

 

Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 30

great chapter. Good for bella doing what she needed to for herself.  Love how sweet edward is with rosalie.



Author's Response:

Hello,

Thanks again fro the review.  Edward was fun to write in this chpater.  This chapter was actually one of my favorites because of the interaction and the things he does for her.  Seriouslly, I don't knwo which image is funnier: him shopping in AMerican Girl or going for a teddy bear lunch/tea! 

Thanks again for reading.  Hope you like the next chapter!

 

Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading it!  Hope you like the rest of the story!

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 30

im happy she got to let him know a piece of her mind but im also happy that shes going to go and get help from an outsider! thanks rose! kept up the good work and cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  It was kind of liberating to write the scene with Mike.  Also, I always wanted Rose to be the one to convience Bella that she needed help.  

The next chapter is up and I hope you enjoy it!

Lisa

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Never mind.  The Library seems to be having trouble with a lot of stories.  My stories are missing their story text now too.  Hopefully the story text will reappear soon.   

Kat

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Kat for the warning.  I actually tried to post the next chapter last night and I couldn't even find my story!  I emailed the site but they never got back to me.  Oh well, the story is back and I hope that you are able to find the stoy and read it.  Please let me know what you think!  

 

Thanks for reading,

 

Lisa 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter Twenty

Hi.  I think you need to check out the chapters on this story - I read through chapter 3 or 4 but all of the other chapters are missing the story text.  It has the Author notes and the chapter notes but not the story text.  Please repost the chapters (just click on Manage stories - and then Edit the story/chapters)  You can then cut and paste the story text into each of the existing chapters. 

Thanks a bunch.  I am looking forward to reading more of this story.

Kat

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 24

That breaks my heart!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.  Some of the chapters were really hard to write, this being one of them.  I hope that you stick with the story and please let me know what you think.

 

Thanks, Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 11:54 AM Title: Chapter Twenty

I think she should have looked at the envelope!!!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 29

great chapter



Author's Response:

As always, thanks for reading!

 

Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

Crazy I really didnt think she would sleep with James!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 29

well i hope in a way that its not victoria but in a way they can finally put the past to bed and start on the future with rose and the new baby! cant wait till the next chapter!



Author's Response:

As always, thank you for reading and reviewing.  The next chapter will be posted shortly.

Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 28

not surprised, was hoping it would go this way but would not have been angry if it didn't.  good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Sorry for the delay in response.  The real world has been a little busy this week.  I just posted the next chapter too.  Thanks again for reading!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 28

im so happy that she didnt go thru with it! i think it will make her so much stronger as a person and i think the baby should come out to look exactly like bella ! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I'm sorry it took me a few days to respond.  Life has been a little crazt to say the least.  I just posted the next chapter (it's a little long).  Let me know what you think!  Thanks again for reading.

Reviewer: ahazen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 27

Awesome story line!  I think she should get an abortation.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  You'll find out in the next chapter what she decides.  Please let me know what you think!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 27

well im sad that mike is the father of the baby in a way i hope she dosent have an abortion. but with her emotional state i  think she needs it ! i know its bad but i only agree with abortions in reasons of rape! i do hope that rose helps bella to get the help she needs also! i cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing the last chapter.  We'll find out in the next chapter what she decides.  PLease keep reading and let me know what you think of the next chapter!

Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 27

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!!  The next chapter is going to be posted in a little bit.  Please let me know what you think!!

 

Lisa

Reviewer: ahazen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 26

Awesome story!! I feel bad for Rose and Bella.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the kind words!  I hoe you keep reading.  I'm about to post the next chapter!

 

Happy reading and thanks again for reading!

 

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 26

well that was quick cant wait to find out who the daddy is ! and the out come from that ! keep them comming! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting and stickign wiht the story!!

Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 26

hoping it's james'



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading...the answer will be in the next chapter.  Thanks for reading!

Lisa

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 25

good chapter



Author's Response:

So I am a dimwit and just noticed the respond button by the reviews.  Anyway, I wanted to thank you for reading the story and sticking with it as well as your comments. I really appreciate the comments.  It is nice toknow some poeple are enjoying the story! 

 

Thanks again,

 

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 25

im happy they made up cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

I hope carlisle doesn't end up in jail when he goes to kill royce.  great chapter.

Reviewer: Jilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 24

Oh my god. So much has happened since I last read the story. I am still getting my head around all that has happened. Bella sleeping with James, then getting kidnapped and abused by Mike, Bella getting pregnant and Charlie ignoring her for choosing Carlisle.

I kind of had the idea that something like this was happening to Rosalie from one of the earlier chapters and I hope this will bring the others closer together again (Charlie - Carlisle - Bella).

I do hope that Bella will keep the baby no matter what the testresults say.

Jilly



Author's Response:

Thanks for lettign me know what you thougth of the chapter.  I'm glad that you are enjoying!!

 

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 24

well i feel sorry for rose cant wait till the next chapter!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 10

the longer they wait the harder it will be.



Author's Response:

Hi,

I feel like a fool because I just noticed the respond button.  I'm so dense sometimes!  Anyway, I wanted to thank you for reading my story, Changes and Surprises.  I appreciate you taking the time to comment on the story.  I hope you will continue reading and comment.  There is a lot more to come!

Thanks!

Lisa



Author's Response:

Hi,

I feel like a fool because I just noticed the respond button.  I'm so dense sometimes!  Anyway, I wanted to thank you for reading my story, Changes and Surprises.  I appreciate you taking the time to comment on the story.  I hope you will continue reading and comment.  There is a lot more to come!

Thanks!

Lisa

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 9

i wonder what is up with eddie? he didn't seem happy to see his dad at all. and i wonder who the next one will be to stumble on bella and carlisle?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 8

i wonder what victoria ment?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

very sweet

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 6

well someone knows. but these 2 will have to be more careful or someone else will walk in on more than just playing around.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 23

great chapter. I can not believe Charlie.  I hope that if he ever does come around Bella and Carlisle and probably Edward will forgive him.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 22

As I suspected. Wouldn't it be nice if it did manage to be carlisle's.  A girl can hope. She needs to go get that ultrasound to find out how pregnant she is.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 5

awwww....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

and the secret is born.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

ohhh looks like daddy c may be fighting the feelings too

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 5

Nice chapter.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, so a little kitchen lip action?  Nice!  I do not see anyone taking this relationship well, besides Renee.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 3

Okay, Bella must have been a fucking fantastic actress to hide all this from both Edward and Jacob.  Poor Bella, how horrible to be in that situation and not feel like she could go to her family for help.  Enter Carlisle!  I love that she confessed her crush to him and then kissed him.  I think he would take her more seriously if she wasn't drunk off her ass.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 2

So Esme is deceased, Emmett is blonde and Rosalie is the illegitmate love child Carlisle and Tanya?  Ok, I think I am up to speed on the families.  I can't wait to see when things heat up.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very good beginning.  I like the family dynamics amungst the characters we have met so far.  I am curious to see how Esme fits in since we know from the story discription that Bella and Carlisle sleep togther.  I can't wait to see if Bella is a home wrecker.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 2

well bella is home and it is time to start a new life.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

bella is such a middle aged momma watvhing over her babies.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 21

so glad they are talking about a future.  Hope her lousy feeling isn't from being pregnant.  look forward to more. Hope if they pursue a real relationship that it is public from the start and that their families are accepting of it this time.

Reviewer: Mrs-Kate-Fuckmenelli Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoy this story. I'm surprised it hasn't gotten more reviews. Keep up the great work :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 18

I can't believe her dad didn't wake her up.  So happy she is back with her family but she definitely can't ust act like it didn't happen.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

Thank god she got away. She is strong. I hope that it is  edward that just got there.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 16

how horrible for her..I hope she gets out or they find her soon.  I was happily surprised to see so many chapters come in on the same day.  Excited to keep reading but also a bit nervous about what will happen.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 15

uh oh.  this is not looking good for her at all. see if she was at home with carlisle where she should be this wouldn't be happening.  get her back safely and soon please.

Reviewer: dna2679 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 15

damn you're good girl.. left me hanging like that. it's safe to say you have a loyal follower in me. great chapter and i can't wait to read more

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

hope it doesn't become more with james. would love to see some of what carlisle has been doing and thinking these past months.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 13

still pissed about carlisle, not letting go of him so easily hope bella doesn't either.  would have much rather seen her end up with edward than james even if he doesn't appear to be a bad guy in you story so far.

Reviewer: dna2679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

i loved it. i love that james isn't a jerk.. or is that coming lol

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

so angry/dissappointed in carlisle right now.  hope he isn't dating someone and having her come to the office.  he is being so hurtful if so.  look forward to next chapter. thanks for the shout out. I don't know why people don't review more.

Reviewer: Jilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 11

So I just finished reading the story and I loved it. Great and powerful chapters, especially the last one. I think it's normal for them to react like that at first, because it isn't also easy to accept and I really liked how you described the emotions in this chapter. Can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep on going!

Jilly

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 11

hope they hold on to their relationship and don't give in to everyones negative response.  I love them together but am REALLY worried for them now.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 10

the fake relationship with emmett just sounds lik a bad idea. hope i am wrong.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 9

I am kind of hoping that edward ends up with emmett. not that there have been any declarations of edward being gay but damn they would be one great looking couple.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 8

loved it. But now i am worried about carlise after what victoria said. hope he is serious about her.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

sweet emmett.  nice that bella has a impartial friend to confide in.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 5

great chapter. Must admit I was hoping for the next step as well but understand she wasn't ready yet. soon i hope.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

yay!  glad he did it.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

and so it begins... i hope.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

great chapter.  wondering how everyone will pair up with rose so young and no mention of jasper yet.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

great first chapter. love the characters already.

Reviewer: ahazen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 8

Perfect Story, cant wait for more. The sex scene is perfect too.

Reviewer: luvrofink Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 2

You know his name is supposed to be Emmett McCarty right?

Reviewer: smartcandies103 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

It's spelled Emmett. but good start anyways. Can't wait for the carlisle and bella romance!!!

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