Date: 25 Mar 2010 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
Happy Birthday Indeed!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 23
loved it thanks for sharing update when you can.....
Date: 21 Mar 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ha! SubmissiveRulesNazis... that's hilarious - but true. I've been trying to boycott FF because most of my favorite stories are being taken down. I'm glad I found this site. It's much better than Twilighted because the black screen on that sight fucks with my eyes.
Anyway, this has got to be the best chapter 1 I've ever started reading. Most of the time, chapter ones aren't as decscriptive as this one. I usually can't get into a story until about the 4th chapter... this one has sucked me in on the very first chapter. Well, I'm onto the next chapter:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
They set a date Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bless Rose she is really a softy when she is not pissed and thank god she is expecting her own bundle of joy!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 22
That was great thanks for sharing update when you can thanks....
Date: 16 Mar 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
I LOVE IT !!!
:)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
So is the story almost over?
Author's Response:
Nope :)
There are a total of 35 chapters plus and Epi that is actually part of the first chapter of the sequel... If that made any sense at all, LOL.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
Awwww, he's an idiot, but he's our idiot!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
Ugh, I am so disgusted with Edward. I'd like to say I'm suprised Bella forgave him so quickly, but its just like her. Its who she is. She's a better woman than I am...
Author's Response:
She's a better woman than most of us, actually...
Date: 08 Mar 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow he came very very close to screwing up that one, quite literally. But I am soooo glad he didn't! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah for a doctor he really is not thinking straight about what the news could be, Seth pretty much spelled it out.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
Tanya is a skanky whore, I had to rush through that part of the chapter! Glad Assward pulled his head out of his ass before it was too late!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
awesome but I wish we got to hear her tell him she was pregnate..
Date: 07 Mar 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am so pissed at Edward right now. If I were Bella, I'd never forgive him. Ever.
Date: 06 Mar 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
fuck please update ASAP!!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 18
Aw, man, bad timing there...
Date: 05 Mar 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
excellent chapter
Date: 05 Mar 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
how come no chapter 18 .. confused..
Author's Response:
You'll have to come back when they've fixed the site or go to fanfiction.net to read it. Nobody's recent posts are working...
Date: 05 Mar 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
UGH! So much drama! Like you had to see that coming right... Hopefully Edward won't do something stupid like look up Lauren.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward is obviously sleep depraved but he needs toget his head out of his ass. opefully Seth wil find him and knock some sense into him.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward is a fucktard! Seth is right goddammit he's a fool if he thought she wouldn't be faithful to him! ARGGGGHHHHH c'mon update right now lol.....
Date: 05 Mar 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
Darn it!!!! Why did you have to end it there??? I really hope the next chapter comes out soon. Good job!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
Even though Rose was being bitchy, you have to sympathise with her.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
Just finished reading all 17 chapters in 2 days; barely stopping to take care of my family.
Awesome story so far and looking forward to reading more. I decided to use TWCS instead of FFn because like most of us "mature" readers, we like the smut!
Great job and look forward to the update!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks...have fun reading it ;)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
You need to complete story. A lot of writers get to a certain point and just drop it at a climactic point
Author's Response:
There's no way this story's getting dropped!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 17
I like the fact that you protray SM's charater of Roselie.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
When I first found out I was pregnant I instantly knew what sex they were.
Poor Rosalie that has to be difficult to want something and try to make is come true so badly and then someone else comes along and accomplishes it without even trying.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
Gah I hate Rose and her baby issues!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 17
Awww how cute! I wish I could read one story where Bella gets pregnant and Rose doesn't overreact, but I can understand why people put it there. Now why is Jasper the more worried one lately? There cannot be something going on there, thats just weird. Anyways please update soon!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
I really love this story.
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love this story. Will Bella be able to tell Edward her news before he rushes home? Update soon please!!!!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
Good chapter, glad Edward is planning on coming home early. Nice to see Bella having a good time.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love this story.. great chapter
Date: 28 Feb 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
awwwwwwwwwwww so close yet so far away!!! DANG NABIT!~ Update soon....hopefully their time apart will go really quickly!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 16
God I hope he just gets on a plane and heads home now!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
this was always the hard part of this story ans just gets harder from here update when you can thanks....
Date: 27 Feb 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
is this story a little different from the one on ff
Author's Response:
YES! I think I mentioned it in Ch 1 that the story is the same, but I've edited it. It was my first fic, and I felt it could use some improvements. Mainly in the character narratives, and I fixed some of the grammar mistakes I missed before. The only significant difference in the two stories is the first chapter. Instead of it being split into two, I combined it over here and on Twilighted.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
I really liked this chapter, it shows that Bella is not the pathetic fool. I am a little worrried which direction you are going to take the voicemails though. I am hoping it isn't too angsty and will cause me to throw my laptop against the wall. Thanks for the entertainment!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Nope, no angst involving the voicemails. There will be no need to destroy your laptop, lol
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 14
In an earlier chapter Alice told Edward he was going to "fuck it up", is go on this 6month thing with his parents that part? Please tell me you aren't having either of them having an affair. I kind of looks like Bella might be pregnant?
Date: 26 Feb 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
loved the a/n so true about ff love the chapter
Date: 26 Feb 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 15
ooh LOVE this story!!!!!! can't wait for the next update!!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
YAY!!!! Can't wait for more! So he will be home for the birth right? He's only supposed to be gone for 6mths...and she's only 6 weeks...yahoo!
Author's Response:
Yeah, he'll be home... Thanks for the review
Date: 25 Feb 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
I am really enjoying this story. There are so many emotions involved. I love the way you put the elements of the book into the story in a unique and different way.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thank God she gets better!! I hate to get depressed while reading!!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter! I think I started reading this story & lost it. Glad I found it again!
Author's Response:
Don't you just hate that? LOL Thanks for the review...
Date: 23 Feb 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
Rough times ahead. Good chapter.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
can't wait for more...
Date: 23 Feb 2010 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
awww so sad. I hope everything works out when Edward comes home.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
It's going to be a long six months.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
Awww, so sad. I hope everything will be okay...please update soon.
Date: 20 Feb 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
can;t wait for everything......
Date: 19 Feb 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for the fluff....Let's hope that there is not too much angst ahead. Please Please no third parties!!! I hate when they cheat or date others, it tears my heart alittle bit.
Great Job....Great Story....Can't Wait for More
Date: 19 Feb 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Awww, cute. A little worrisome because spending that much time away can change many things, but I'm sure they'll be ok. Please update soon
Date: 19 Feb 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 11
It'll be interesting to see how this all turns out. Please update soon.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
Okay, can blame him for wanting to help his family or do something incredibly selfless or worthwhile. Seriously, it's just six months. They can survive that.
I just hope neither start questioning their commitment to each other since their romance has been so whirlwind and now they'll have time apart to think and process.
I'm assuming since she's moved in with him, she'll stay at the house when he leaves. I could see her offering to leave since they haven't been together that long. It would be a Bella thing to do...
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aw, now I have tears in my eyes too. Everything was falling in to place for them so nicely I kind of forgot that he would eventually leave to do this. Hope they make it.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
another great chapter!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
finally! amazed they held out as long as they did.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
everyone is so happy. hope it lasts a while.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
pretty good second date. wish life for everyone was that great. Oh well, I am satisfied just reading about them. look forward to more.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh they are so sweet! love it.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
crazy man for calling at 2am. very lucky she was awake. was a little scared she would be one of the accident patients brought in to him. whew!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can just imagine him with a goofy grin. great chapter.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
hope she agrees to the date. Really enjoying the story. Well written.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!Love it and Can't wait for more(Lots More)
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
Another great chapter!!!!!! How long do we have until the angst will settle in?
Author's Response:
You don't! It's starts next...
Date: 17 Feb 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
Awwww!!! Just Awww!!!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow!! A great first chapter for sure...I cannot wait to see what you have in store for these two :)
Date: 16 Feb 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great story! Look forward to more!!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
Whoa, craziness! But I got to say, whirlwind or not - I LOVE IT! :) Too cute.
I can't wait to see where you're taking us on this journey - obviously he leaves her at some point, but will she still stay in the house? What is stronger than his love for her that makes him go?
All questions I know I'll get the answer to, but I'm curious! Can't wait! :)
Date: 12 Feb 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds really good so far!! on to the next chapter!!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well, hello holy hot sexing! :)
Date: 12 Feb 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awww...this is so cute!!! I love how Edward has fit right in with Alice, Jasper and Charlie. I'm also glad we know what happened with Jake.
I'm with Alice - he's gonna mess this up. (Of course I know that thanks to the summary when it says he leaves her. He better have a damn good reason!!)
BTW - I think you're a terrific writer. Reading your story has been very enjoyable!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh, things are moving sooo fast. I hope this doesn't end badly!!!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ok, first, Candy the bitch needs to be slapped - repeatedly.
Loved their first kiss - swoon!
Very interested in seeing what happened with Jake and Bella.
I adore how close Edward and Bella are getting already. Of course, I'm also waiting for the other shoe to drop now...
Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
They are too cute!!!! I'm glad Edward called her.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Awww...they're so cute!! Can't wait for the date!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very intriguing!! Can't wait to read more...