Date: 15 Mar 2014 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 34
I have not read the book you based this story upon, so some of the things you aluded to ws lost to me. I did like the story a great deal even though I probably would have understood some of the details better if I had read the original. To me some of the chapters seemed to jump from the previousleaving me wondering what had happened from the previous chapter until this one began. Though in most cases you attemped to wxplain in a short description at the beginning what had appearently go no, so thank you for that. I guess the story would have been much longer if you had filled in all the blanks in detail for us. Overall a very entertaining story and I look forward to reading the sequal. THANKS FOR YOU HARD WORK - Xanath
Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
The summary said F!Cousland/Alistair, didn't it? This seems to be more F/F so far. Also, I'm having a hard time relating to this heroine, although I can't quite put my finger on exactly why, so I'm afraid I'm not able to offer you any constructive feedback on that point. Still, it was nice to see a full length DA story here!