Date: 04 Mar 2010 7:04 PM Title: Whispering Truths and Facing Inevitability
Son of a bitch! I knew Edward was a lying sack of shit & I knew he had something to do with that headstone! He's a god damn manipulative cocksucker!!!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 5:29 PM Title: Whispering Truths and Facing Inevitability
Jake the dingleberry.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 5:46 AM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers Part Deux
annoyingly good
Date: 04 Mar 2010 1:35 AM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers Part Deux
cant wait to see his reaction to the baby
Date: 03 Mar 2010 11:12 PM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers Part Deux
Hmmm Go Rose making her understand the things what happened earlier with Tanya.... I really think Edward will be hurt about the baby but he will understand eventually.... i think he will be more pissed that she called Emmett.... well lets hope he understands :-) Thanks for the updates :-)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 10:36 PM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers
Oh slap that Vic out of the ballpark! and Jacob is getting better in my books now! LOL its gonna take alot more on his part thou :-)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:47 PM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers Part Deux
Ummm...she still needs to tell him about the baby...I know the truth will out and all that. Just sayin'... :) And that is me talking to the characters, not the author. I tend to do that when reading a really good story :)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:32 PM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers
Victoria is a complete...well, you know! I think I know who the plant is...hope I'm wrong because Bella is gonna go all Volutri if I'm right...
Date: 03 Mar 2010 7:07 PM Title: Confessions and Consequences
Well, no surprises if Edward is telling the truth. Tanya IS a sleazy ho-bag after all.
OK, so if Edward did not cheat, then why has he let himself be photographed with all of those women? Surely he is not so clueless as to not realize what that would have looked like?
LOVE this story!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:35 PM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers Part Deux
I have a bad feeling about this secret Bella is keeping from Edward. Time will tell.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:28 PM Title: Reunion
This story is definitely capturing my attention :) I like that Edward hasn't been heard form yet. I like how you are building up to it :)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:02 PM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers
:-)
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 5:22 PM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers Part Deux
She still hasn't told him about the baby I wonder how he will take that news?
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:33 PM Title: Reservation for Explanations
Another 3 great chapters and I really gon't trust Felix even more than before! Jake seems to switch between trying to keep her to himself and wanting her happy.
I hope Edward handles to babt issue well!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 2:14 PM Title: Reservation for Explanations
I'm SOOO happy that you've posted this story here!! I'm absolutely in LOVE with your banner, and I hope you update soon, because this story ROCKS.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 1:57 AM Title: Reservation for Explanations
Ok so lets get on with the interview and the talk! Please update soon :-)
Author's Response:
I will def update tmrw morning! thank you for taking the time to review!! xoxo--funkyd.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 1:35 AM Title: Reservation for Explanations
cant wait for the big talk
Date: 03 Mar 2010 1:33 AM Title: Deception Unveiled
Jacob needs a smack in the friggen face! OMG this story is mind fuckery! I sure hope someone pays for all this bullcrap! hehehe thanks for the update by the way :-)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 1:05 AM Title: Nostalgic Nightmares
OMG things are heating up :-) I wouldn't let that hunk of a man go either ;-) thanks for the updates * giggles*
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:54 PM Title: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares
So did Edward cheat? Why did it take him a year to start looking for Bella?
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:49 PM Title: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares
Oh sheez so her secrets gonna be out! Oh please update soon :-) Man this is sooooo exciting! who would do some crap like that? Felix the ahole! And why won't she believe Edward unless that Skank ho Tanya is in it with Jacob? Thanks for the updates :-)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:23 PM Title: Confessions and Consequences
Why was Edward stupid enough to be drinking with that bitch Tayna let alone let her stay the night??? Put her in a cab! He was just asking for trouble.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:20 PM Title: Tropical Fruit and Twirling Pastries
Oh geez let them talk just talk it out without her Uncle,Felix or Jacob around cos I know her uncle and jacob are behind everything and when she finds out I hope she destroys them! Thanks so much for the update this is an awesome story ;-)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:17 PM Title: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares
love it,,,,, where is the rest????
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:05 PM Title: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares
OMG!!! Her yelling for Jacob had to about kill Edward!
Who did it?? Felix? He's wierd!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:51 PM Title: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares
omfg that was a brilliant chapter
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:37 PM Title: Reconstructing Bella
Whew! This made me cry! I can't wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:31 PM Title: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares
Someone has a very sick mind to do this to her! I have a feeling her Uncle Aro has something to do with it or even Felix. They need to get her out of there and she is going to have to come clean now about the baby to Edward. She needs to realize that she is going to have to depend an Edward now instead of Jacob.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:51 PM Title: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares
wow cant wait to find out who did it
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:29 PM Title: Confessions and Consequences
No tears this time. But I'm not sure about the Edward and Tanya thing. Did Tanya hear Bella come home and hurry to get in their room so she'd see her and then leave before Edward got out of the shower? And why didn't Edward try to contact her after she left and why was he seen with her in a magazine? Sooo many questions.
Now, Im going to ff to read what else you have posted cause I'm hooked LOL
~Susan
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:12 PM Title: A Turbulent Affair
Woah. More tears. How many more chapters will you have me sobbing?
~Susan
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:03 PM Title: How To Make An Entrance
Yep, I definitely dying with Bella. You are doing a great job with this.
~Susan
Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:39 PM Title: Reunion
Wow. I cried reading the end of this chapter. My heart is breaking for Bella. It's obvious she still loves Edward. Will we hear from him at all during this story?
~Susan
Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:21 PM Title: Reconstructing Bella
I had a feeling she was pregnant when I read the summary. What happened to the baby? And why on earth would Edward cheat on her? Edwad cheating on Bella just makes me furious! LOL
~Susan
Date: 01 Mar 2010 8:52 PM Title: Confessions and Consequences
this is really good
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:05 PM Title: Confessions and Consequences
love it great story
Author's Response:
Thank you soo much for taking the time to review! ;)
Date: 01 Mar 2010 10:54 AM Title: Confessions and Consequences
Felix makes me nervous, what is he after??
Date: 01 Mar 2010 8:07 AM Title: Confessions and Consequences
Oh, wow! This is a great story. Please update soon. Edward seems to be hurting so bad. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 8:06 AM Title: Confessions and Consequences
Oh, wow! This is a great story. Please update soon. Edward seems to be hurting so bad. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:27 AM Title: Confessions and Consequences
Hmmm so he didn't cheat on Bella? So Jacob Black is putting things into her head about Edward and he most proberly pushed her down the stairs to to make her loose her baby? Yup typical Jacob Black shet! Hey thanks for sharing this story its amazing and I love the Bella talking in her head! I really don't think Edward has cheated on her at all throughout the 4 years because if hes fighting with her so much for her to forgive him then hes obviously innocent!
Author's Response:
Edward love bella.. there is no doubt about that... Just remember one thing about this story not everything is as it seems!
:)
Date: 01 Mar 2010 4:54 AM Title: Reconstructing Bella
Hmmm intersting start to the story :-)
Author's Response:
thank you for the review! I hope to update soon in the next few days...
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:54 AM Title: Confessions and Consequences
oh my god that was to good please update soon
Author's Response:
Massy! I will def update and post the next two chapters in the next two days... I apperciate you taking the time to review!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:44 AM Title: A Turbulent Affair
Man, that gets me every time I read it :(
Author's Response:
Rose... I heart you sweetheart!!!!! Thank you for following me as i get everything updated here as well!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2010 7:54 AM Title: Reconstructing Bella
love it
Date: 14 Feb 2010 7:41 AM Title: How To Make An Entrance
AMAZING!! MORE!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! it took longer then i thought to get the next 3 chapter's beta'd! but i will post them as soon as i can!!
xoxo--FunkyD.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 8:15 AM Title: How To Make An Entrance
Ok Hi Im new I have marked your story as a favorite cause i would really like to know where you go with this! I love the story line and its something I can relate too. I have a lying cheating husband(Well he's an ex now) who cheated on me on our honeymoon and then did so repeatedly causing me to have one misscarriage and One still birth and one beautiful daugther that I found out about after I left his sorry ass but apart of me still Loves him cause of our little girl and its been years. (Of course if he looked like Edward and talked like Edward I would probably still be married to him. HAHA Edward and all the twilight MEN are hot ) So please write some more I would love to hear more of this
Author's Response:
Gabrylla!
I am so sorry to hear about all the pain and hardship! It makes it so hard to heart that something i am writing is close the things that caused you stress and pain. I am going to be updating the next set of chapters hopefully soon! Please continue to review and tell me your thoughts!
xoxo-FunkyD.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 6:16 AM Title: How To Make An Entrance
He has to have an explaination. This is Edward. There must have been something ... Gah. Edward POV? I mean, I am so on Team Bella that it's ridiculous. Espec due to the constant Cullen tag teaming. At one point I almost want Felix to outbid Edward. I mean, really? Where does that sort of thing come from? Ridiculous. I love what this story does to me. I want Edward to offer more than a flower to Bella. She deserves more than a flower, no matter how rare it is. I want him to have a very good reason. Okay, I am seriously expecting too much from him, aren't I?
Author's Response:
Thank you Soooo much for your reviews! Well no as a reader you can never really expect tooo much! LOL. Well i hope to have the next set of chapters up soon! just remember one thing when reading this fan fic.... NOT everything is as seems....
Date: 13 Feb 2010 6:14 AM Title: Reunion
Brave little B - playing it all mature and void of all contemptuousness. I love that she wants to protect the Cullens from her sad secret - Alice and Esme is particular. Carlisle knows who Felix is and what he is doing in the suite, or at least he suspects, I think. Does anyone other than Aro (and Felix, I guess) know that Ed cheated? Gah. Quite unnerving.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 6:13 AM Title: Reconstructing Bella
No. No. Oh, no. Dear Bella, poor dear Bella. Edward is so going to regret not ever trying to contact her, I mean one letter in four years? Really? Golly. I am so excited for her inevitable spurning. Will there be spurning? Because I would kind of really like some spurning.
I love Aro. A lot.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 2:52 AM Title: Reconstructing Bella
LOVE THIS STORY...
You are brilliant...
Love ya
Author's Response:
Jenny, i don't think I would have been able to even get this posted the way i have if it wasn't for your and Jen's support and help!! Thank You!!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 2:27 AM Title: How To Make An Entrance
I'm hoping Bella doesn't cave that easily... I'm hoping she walks and tells him about the divorce being filed, clearly he enjoys messing with her
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:47 AM Title: Reunion
I think Carlisle has caught on about Felix, the news should be interesting
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:09 AM Title: Reconstructing Bella
Wow Edward is an ass, I would drop him too. I'm looking forward to seeing how the Gala plays out
Author's Response:
Thank you for you review Rhapsody! I have up to chapter 20 completed! I am just trying to get them over to this site! I hope you enjoy this story!