[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 3:51 AM Title: Epilogue
omg you are an excellent writer that deserves a writing reward that story was beautiful if you have anymore love stories of edward and bella let me know so i can read them great story i cried thru the last 4 chapters very moving
Author's Response:
Oh, honey, do I have stories for you!! Check out my page and you will find a slew of Edward and Bella stories.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 12:57 AM Title: Epilogue
YES the first epilogue I think I might have read that has a lemon....a RAUCHY pregnant sex lemon but still a lemon in it. lol thanks again. Where's my preview of the next story? lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
LOL, just go read the first chapter!! It's up!! ;)
Date: 25 Sep 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 46
wow that made me weepy. lol seriously though. what a powerful ending. I can't wait to read your new story fighting for love. :D thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Sep 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 46
The wedding was so beautiful.
I can't believe its almost over.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 46
ok it might be the wine talking,but OMG, the tears came full force i think i am overly emotional,due to the fact that 2 of your stories are ending, any way, sorry to see this ending soon too,can't wait too see what else you come up with next, will keep my eyes peeled, thanks again you are a great author. bye for now.c.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I cried so much during this chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I cried so much during this chapter!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 46
You can just feel the love.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 45
Proposal and engagement party all in one, nice touch.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 44
So glad she could "visit" with Charlie in her dreams. Loved the blue roses and the coke.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 45
So beautiful *wipes eyes to see clearly*
*goes back and fixes typing mistakes*
That was so wonderful.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Sep 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 45
I loved the proposal, it was so wonderful :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 45
aww that was sweet. :) I loved the proposal. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 44
I am glad that Bella and Edward get to stay with their family. They need to be near Carlisle and Esme.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 44
AWWWW... YOU GOT ME AGAIN... THE TEARS CAME WITH THE ROSES!!!! BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER!"!!!
KRAZI
XOXO
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2010 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 44
omg that was so beautiful i cried when they gave her the roses and edward the coke it was so touching i can not wait till the next chapter keep it coming you are a great writer
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 44
Great chapter, I'm so sad this story is almost over.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 44
aww that chapter made me cry. lol I just knew theyd get the part though. great great job. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Sep 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 43
Ah no why did you stop there. I can't wait to find out who got it.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Sep 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 43
aww how much do you SUCK?? lol what a cliffie. I can't wait to read more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
lmao, apparently alot!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 43
no,no,no,stop doing that,i'm glad you up date fast i so want to know who's going where,pleeeaaaassssseeee up date soon again,bye .c.
Author's Response:
lol, I am a tease:) Next chapter will be up tomorrow. Only a few left:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 43
Tough choice, funny how they loved the music and he just happened to be Bellas music.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2010 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 42
Wow!!! This is really a great story...I´ve shed plenty of tears.. I started reading it last nite and couldn´t stop...by 9am I couldn´t keep my eyes open any longer...can´t wait for the next chapter...thanks for writing a great story!!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:O)
Date: 22 Sep 2010 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 42
Great chapter :)
I'm looking forward to seeing how all the performances go.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Sep 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 42
yes you ARE!! lol thanks again I can't wait to see who wins. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 42
omg that was so beautiful i am so excited for the next chapter keep it coming you are a great writer
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 42
Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 8
I´ve been threatening tears since the first chapter...but i couldn´t contain them any longer...you made me boo hooo seriously like snot and all...wow that was painful...phew...you got me good job
krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Sep 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 42
The girls are so funny getting the boys to compete who was manlier. I hope they are all ready to dance their hearts out.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 42
you are a meaney: ) but a fantastic one,oooohhhhh the auditions are next, i can't wait to see how it goes looking forward to next up-date, you got this out really fast,thank you,bye for now.c.
Author's Response:
I am mean but the next chapter will be up tomorrow:)
Date: 21 Sep 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 39
If you didn't cry, you are cold hearted.
Author's Response:
lol, I agree:)
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 41
omg that was so beautiful i really love the way these two interact keep it coming i love your writing i await the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Sep 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 41
that went from fun to just plain sweet. I loved it. especially the end when he said what my bella forever. too sweet. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 40
I cant believe she sold Charlie and her home.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 39
The scrapbook was so perfect for her.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 33
Bella sure does have bad luck or people out to get her.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 32
Someone shot her, was not expecting that. Tanya??
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 31
They should work on their routine harder.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 30
Wow, there is always some kind of petty drama going on. You would think the other girls would learn.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 29
That seems like a crazy idea for them to have. I would think that the fall might pull muscles or something. I guess that itsjust to scary for me, lol.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 40
that was so beautiful i can not wait till they dance together and eventually he proposes and they marry but not for awhile you are a great writer i await the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
Glad she is gone.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 23
SO sad, bring on the kleenex.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 40
Wow, she's letting go of everything in Forks... okay then. :) Good for her. She knows what she wants.
And that was such a nice moment she and Em shared. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 20 Sep 2010 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 40
wow that believe it or not was the hottest lemon in this whole story. what exactly does that say about me? lol I loved this chapter. not much happened but a lot was covered so that's always good. :D thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 39
What a beautiful gift for Bella! *wipes tears, blows nose*
Irena was creepy, lol! And I enjoyed their run around Forks and chat about having kids. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Sep 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 39
Wonderful chapter.
The scrap book was amazing and the picture of Renee was so nice.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
I really thought he parents would wake up.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
Busted again. lol
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
They did that well and didnt get as much practice, they should be a shoe in for some company.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
They didnt get to practice so I hope they do ok.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thats good they are getting the routine down on paper at least.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 38
omg that was so beautiful and sad i am really loving this story more and more hopefully she will have left everything to bella and after they return to do the recital competition eventually after they have their hea
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
Tanya doesnt seem pleased with Madame help.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
Madame has come to check on Bella and put her in line, lol.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
Now they have to worry about practicing.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 39
no but I did get a little weepy so does that count? lol especially with the photo of Renee. too sweet. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Yes, that totally counts!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 39
awww,what an amazing gift from madame,didn't need to cry for this one,although it was sad what was happening it was leaving good memories for bella,always a plus to have something happy to look back on when your sad.
great chapter,can't wait to see how the auditions go!hopefully things will start looking up ? hope you up-date soon,thanks,bye.c.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
I see trouble still finds Bella wherever she goes.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
She needs to tell everyone about Charlie, they can help her.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 38
Just wondering what song Bella played at Madame's funeral?
Maybe after Bella and Edward marry they'll open their own ballet studio in Madame's old place?
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'll say they worked out their issues.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
That must have been one heck of a song.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
Finally she told them, maybe they can help her.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
She is soo sad all the time. Maybe she just hasnt dealt with her father being gone.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
LOL, that was funny at the end.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
I guess Edward is going to act like an ass to Bella because he is attracted to her?
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
I wonder why they all keep staring at her?
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Bella, now she is all alone.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I guess Charlie has died but what about Renee. This seems like an interesting story.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I explain about Renee too:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 38
poor Bella but I have a feeling Madame left EVERYTHING to her. just a hunch I have. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 38
okay if your plan was to have me sobbing mission complete, absolutely beautiful xx
Author's Response:
That wasn't my plan but It had the same effect on me. So thank you:)
Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 37
Bella is doing better than I think she thought she would do. She doesn't feel lost like she did when Charlie died. She has Edward and a family.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 37
well that wasn't so bad. :) luckily its getting better as in happier. thanks again so much. this is going great. thanks bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 36
Man, that was great! Poor Bells, things can only go up from here. Love this story :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 36
omg omg you are a great writer i await the next chapter i love this story it is moving greatly i love edward and bella
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Sep 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 36
Bella needs to get through the funeral and get back to dancing. She will heal through the love that surrounds her.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Sep 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 36
She called Bella my darling an awful lot. lol but I liked it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
That was her nickname for Bella:) and Thank you:)
Date: 15 Sep 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 35
Bella has so much to do to close Madame's estate. It was so nice that her funeral was prearranged. It was one less thing for Bella to worry about.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 35
poor Bella. that girl has pretty much lost everything except Edward. I'm sad but I like where this is going. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Sep 2010 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 35
There was no content in the chapter.
Author's Response:
Fixed it. Not sure what happened there but thank you for pointing it out for me:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 34
omg that was so sad i am so glad they are all there for her as family and hopefully tanya will be in jail for murder for a long time you are a great writer i await the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon:)
Date: 14 Sep 2010 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 34
I cannot believe she would kill Madame out of jealousy. I hope she never sees the light of day again.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 34
:O
WHOA! Tanya!! Oh my...
So sad Madame is gone...
:'(
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Sep 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 34
(GASPS) WHAT? Tanya? oh lord this is getting better and better. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Sep 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 34
Ah I had a feeling it was Tanya.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 33
omg that is so sad please tell me she will realize that it was time for her to go since she had edward and that she will continue with him and they will danced beautifully together and they will have so much emotion in their dancing i await the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Sep 2010 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 33
Can they have anymore tragedy in their short lives? All I can say is that I am so glad that Bella has Edward and her other dance family. She will have a hard time making it as it is, but she will with their love.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Sep 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 33
I knew she wouldn't. poor girl, someone's out there to take everyone. I hope it gets happy soon. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Sep 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 33
Cant bella get a break jesus and it was totally tanya
Author's Response:
Thank you:)