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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 11:47 PM Title: Completion

wow!!! it was like you wrote from a thesaurus but i was very stimulating in deed ;) thanks for sharing ;D



Author's Response:

LOL  Yeah, we had a very definite "style" going on that night. Was another birthday gift. We were going for highly poetic with a side of erotic. :D tee hee

Thanks ever so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 11:16 AM Title: Completion

that was eloquent and sexy all at the same time.

thank you for sharing your story

suzie :)

Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:31 PM Title: Completion

Incredibly poetic! Although, I do have one question...Is she pregnant? I'm really hoping so given the "pleasently plump torso" comment. I lost all inhibitions many years ago, but do think of my "rounder" figure whenever I'm in the position you mentioned. Great job, though!

Author's Response:

Thank-you!  GA has such a touch with the poetic, it was a joy to follow her lead!  

As far as the plump reference.  It is up to the reader to decide.  She could be fully fleshed in a natural way or from... his prior attentions (and so pregancy) - whichever feels more natural to the reader.  And I think we all to (think of it more in that position).  So nice to be adore for it!  :D

Reviewer: frekles Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 2:50 AM Title: Completion

now if it Calisle and Esme doing this-even better!



Author's Response:

I'm actually considering making the necessary changes and posting that alternate as well.  Now just to make the time! ;D

Thanks for reading!!!

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