Date: 04 Oct 2015 11:47 PM Title: Completion
wow!!! it was like you wrote from a thesaurus but i was very stimulating in deed ;) thanks for sharing ;D
Author's Response:
LOL Yeah, we had a very definite "style" going on that night. Was another birthday gift. We were going for highly poetic with a side of erotic. :D tee hee
Thanks ever so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 26 Apr 2011 11:16 AM Title: Completion
that was eloquent and sexy all at the same time.
thank you for sharing your story
suzie :)
Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:31 PM Title: Completion
Incredibly poetic! Although, I do have one question...Is she pregnant? I'm really hoping so given the "pleasently plump torso" comment. I lost all inhibitions many years ago, but do think of my "rounder" figure whenever I'm in the position you mentioned. Great job, though!
Author's Response:
Thank-you! GA has such a touch with the poetic, it was a joy to follow her lead!
As far as the plump reference. It is up to the reader to decide. She could be fully fleshed in a natural way or from... his prior attentions (and so pregancy) - whichever feels more natural to the reader. And I think we all to (think of it more in that position). So nice to be adore for it! :D
Date: 13 Aug 2010 2:50 AM Title: Completion
now if it Calisle and Esme doing this-even better!
Author's Response:
I'm actually considering making the necessary changes and posting that alternate as well. Now just to make the time! ;D
Thanks for reading!!!