[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
You made me so happy when I saw your update in my inbox. I have really missed this story. As usual, you brought the heat, and left us with something to look forward to in the next chapter. I really love your writing, and can't wait for the party in the next update! Thanks for the great chapter.
Date: 13 Aug 2011 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks so much for the update... I have missed this story. I can't wait to find out how the party goes.
I will check out your original romance.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
Glad to have you back... still loving this story.
Date: 13 Aug 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
It's good to see you're back, for however long you're able. Thanksfor sharing this story with us!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love the update!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
is this vamp a threat?????
Date: 13 Aug 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
:)
Date: 13 Aug 2011 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
SOOOOO thrilled your writing on these stories again! This chapter was perfect! Thank you so much for not just bailing completely on us like some out there do, and I can't wait to see a new chapter for The War of the Worlds (my fav story out there by far!) and Realistic Love...such amazing stories! So happy your back with us, and GOOD LUCK on the new book!!! Take care until next time!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wonderful to have you back. I loved this chapter and am so looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
welcome back. hmmm waxing for couples. yum
Date: 13 Aug 2011 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
Congragulations on your books Thanks for coming back to us. I cant wait to find out who it is at the party.
Date: 13 Aug 2011 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
great to see that you are back :) i love this domward and subward and i have missed them.
looking forward to the next chapter ( rushes over to the original contest to vote )
till next time
tigeress
Date: 13 Aug 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
Short but very, very hot....I need a cigarette and glass wine..wow!!
Going to vote now :) Welcome back!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wow, that was amazing :) I am SO happy for updates :D I cannot wait to see if Edward can get her to squirt ;) Pervy me! Hehe. I will def. check out the original story, so glad to have you back :D
Date: 13 Aug 2011 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am so glad your back. Now as for these books you got published, are they Bella and Edward stories that you originally posted here? If so what were the titles before they were published?
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMG! Cant tell ya how excited I am at this update! Looooooooved it!!! I promise to wait patiently for more updates... XoXo
P.S. my vote is in ;-)
Muah - Fangs
Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
i am absolutely loving this story. i really hope you are able to overcome your writers blues soon. i can't wait for more. you are a great writer and i'm about to check out your other stories. sorry if this is a crappy review, it's my very first one.
Date: 26 Jul 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ok Im now caught up on this story, and wow. I love how Edward was battling with him self on if he did or didnt love Bella. Then they actually get to move into a cottage closer to the family, Im thinking Em may like to cause some fun times for them Well fun for him anyways..... Then you go and give us Bellas POV, and that in itself is something. I cant wait to see how she takes to the fact that edward is a vamp and so is everyone else. Looking forward to when u decide to update this story, keep up the great work.
Date: 26 Jul 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
I enjoy ur stories, and i have just now started this one. I had to take a step back from reading so much fanfic. But Im glad to be back, so far u have me interested in this one. This is a total different Edward, and a very different bella I havent seen. Cant wait to see where you go with this story. Keep up the great work. I also enjoy a few other of ur stories, do u know when u maybe updating the third wife again?
Date: 22 Jun 2011 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 15
I just read this whole thing in one sitting... fabulous!
Date: 06 May 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
WOW! this story is wonderful. I do hope you update soon. The way you are developing this Edward and Bella is amazing. Billy though, he had to know what happened to Charlie, why didn't he take Bella in right away? And what about money from Charlie's life insurance - should Bella had a least something to live on? I hope Renee "gets her due" for abandoning Bella after Charlie died. Looks like Bella can hear Edward when they touch now that she has "brought her shield down" and admitted that she loves him and understands that he loves her. Looking forward to the next update!
Date: 06 May 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 6 - I missed you!
I just found this story from the list on the Sunflower awards nominees page. It is wonderful. I will take a guess and say Leah is her Domme with Jacob or Sam as her sub. Billy catches them and kicks her out. Luckily I do not have to wait to find out :)
Date: 06 May 2011 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
Please write more!! We hope edward will punish bella for keeping secrets!! We love this story and hope you will write more!! This story means alot and we hope edwatd takes bella from her booty soon..lol !!! YAY!! your adoring fans, The fanfic girls reading group here at UTEP university , El paso, TX. .. All 45 of us :)
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh NO! I already read this... Oh hell... now I'm totally bummed because this is it... no more until you decide to post. I totally get that you've got 'the writing blues' my last couple of weeks have been hell as well. It took me 3 weeks to post and I was a faithul, once a week poster... LOL
Hang in there kiddo... we'll be here when you are ready. This story is so freakin' awesome! I adore it with all my heart. You are an inspriation to us all!
Also LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE "The Third Wife" I just read that update the other day... it's getting so exciting.
You are talented and wonderful and I am a HUGE fan!
Respectfully,
Tracy
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
BoooHoooo... one more chapter and that's it... please, please, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I don't know how long I'll be able to survive the wait. LOL. Read your outtake on BPOV... thanks for filling in some of the gaps with it.
I do wonder, though, why she hasn't questioned that the Cullen's are different. They're all young and beautiful and 'related' but not because they're also married but they all have the same colored eyes...
I totally get that initally she's think her temperture gauge was off because she was used to the heat from the pack... but by now, she should be used to 'normal' body temperatures. She still doesn't think it's strange that Edward is so much colder than her...???
Just curious. Either way this story RAWKS!!!!
Bowing down gracefully to smooch your little toesies... Thank you for sharing your story with us...
XoXoXo ~ Tracy
Author's Response:
Love your reviews sweetie! and as for the tempurature, shes only know extremes. the very heated pack and cooler cullens. if she was hanging with humans she might have picked up on it earlier. but as of now she has grown acustommed to his body as she did with the pack. as for their eyes, remember she doesn't like to look anyone in the eyes. so shes seen edward and alice mostly and they are "related" feel free to ask me any more questions and if i can answer them i will. xoxoxx michele
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
2 more chapters to go and I'm caught up... somehow that makes me very sad... so much for going slow, LOL
I hope you update quckily. I checked out your book... looks interesting. Is it an original fiction or a rewrite of one of your E/B stories? So many authors here are getting their fanfics turned into book by changing the plots a little and then, of course, the names...
Hope it's a success for you... XoXo ~ Tracy
Author's Response:
thanks for ready and reviewing. No all my published or to be published books a all orginial. i've heard some have redone theirs but not me. I write mostly vamp so it wouldn't work for me. i entered three in the orginials contest all new and never done before. i hope you check it out. you can see the first chapter on my profile for both Mocked by Destiny and Mocked by Faith. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
wow... he's really possessive... and totally HAWT!!!! LOL ... I've always loved a possessive Edward.
*sigh*
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
wow.... diana just about got her ass kicked... LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE Rose and Emmett... LOL
Muah ~ Tracy
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 10 The faux pas
great chapter... only 5 more to go before I'll be just like everyone else... patiently waiting for the next update... sigh...
XoXo
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 9 The apology
OMG. I just don't know where to even start... hahahaha...
I'm just gonna say 10++++++++++++++++++ and move onto the next chatper before I spontaneously combust...
Muah ~ Tracy
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 8 The fixer
OMG... each lemon is so different and so incredibly hawt!!!!
There are no words to truly describe what you're doing her. I just hope you don't ever stop and that you update quickly.
I am also reading your other story, "The Third Wife" and am totally in love with it.
You are one talented woman, that's for sure!!!
XoXoX ~ Tracy
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 7 The punishment served
Ruh~roh! ... That doesn't sound good... gah. I'm so addicted I have to read the next chapter but at the same time I don't want to because that takes me one step closer to the last chapter and then that means I have to wait for updates...
*sigh*
xoxoxo ~ Tracy
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2011 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 6 - I missed you!
OMG. Your lemons are the juiciest... hehehe... you know, you should send her to subspace sometime soon. As intense as their joinings are; it would be fitting for her to experience subspace.
You're doing a pretty damned good job for not living the lifestyle. Lots of research or is this completely from your imagination of what you think D/s relationships are like.
Awesome story! Very well written... totally LOOOOOOOOOOOVING it :)
XoXoXo ~ Tracy
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2011 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom
I have a feeling she can get into a TON of trouble... LOVED the car. I actually went to Volvo and built my own... mine topped out at 52k. I figured since it was all for fun, I might as well get it as loaded as possible... LMAO...
Muah ~ Tracy
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2011 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
Awesome... just awesome. I can't get enough of this. I'm trying to just read a few chapters at a time so I don't come to the end to quickly. LOL. I can't wait for your next update. About how often do you get to update? Just curious... Muah ~ Tracy
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
~Sigh~
wonderful... magnificant... sexy... beautiful
XoXo ~ Tracy
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Gah! Another incredible chapter. I am totally loving this... LOOOOOOVING IT!!!
XoXo ~ Tracy
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
OMG. This is awesome! Wonderful! Insanely HAWT! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Gah... DEFINITELY CONTNUE... CONTINUE AND NEVER STOP!!!!
XxOo ~ Tracy
Date: 29 Apr 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 15
im so sorry that this is y first review i just started readin and couldnt stop it was so good i even read while i went pee. i got referred to this story by another writer and i hadnt even realize you also wrote Mocked by Destiny that awsome. so im so sorry to hear youve got the writin blues right now i wish there was some form of inspiration i could throw your way but just know this is by far one of my fav stories specially a BDSM one good luck writin sweety
Date: 06 Apr 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for giving us Bella's POV on this. So, Jake and the other guys do not know who Bella's Master is. That is interesting. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
Love it so far!!!!! Cant wait to read more!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
You are doing a good job - keep it up, I'm enjoying your story - thanks. K
Date: 02 Apr 2011 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Blue is not a good color on you. This was a great chapter and a neat look into Bella's beginnings.
Date: 28 Mar 2011 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
Don't let the writing blues get you down...sometimes its best to work through it, even though it seems impossible sometimes.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
loved Bella's POV. :) great job!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
Excellent chapter! I'm glad I was finally able to play catch up with this story - school had kept me really busy. I just love this story and would kill to be in Bella's place :)
Looking forward to the next chapter - thank you so much!
Date: 27 Mar 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 15
loved, loved seeing things through Bella's eyes.
Date: 27 Mar 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved reading this the second time. Glad that you posted it here as well. Sorry to hear that you are feeling that you are not getting the love this story deserves! Well I love this story and I am glad that you take the time to write it! Maybe you just need some pimpage. Have you thought about writing a little smexy something for Squeeze My Lemon over at FFn?
I will PM you with some info, m'kay?
Now cheer up!!!! *wink*
Keye
Date: 27 Mar 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
officially a couple, although i got a little confused with the whole "she can hear him thing" and had to re-read it but still liked it. Has that happened before where they were having sex and could read each other minds? not sure how i missed that.
Date: 27 Mar 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
another enjoyable chapter. thank you.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
Great chapter! It was so surprising that they could read each other's minds. What a neat way to work in the ILY's. You are good!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
First I would like to say I dont know why you wouldn't be getting a lot of reviews. Your story is wonderful. I really love it. I usually review each chapter unless I feel like there was nothing really in it. So I hope my reveiws help. As for this chapter, well we already knew all that happened here from her telling Edward about it and from EPOV of when he met her so I really didn't feel like it was a new chapter but I understand that some people wanted to read it from BPOV. It just doesn't do anything for me to read the same thing twice. Dont get discouraged, you are doing a wonderful job.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
I loved reliving that first meeting between her and Edward through her POV. I am curious what holds her back from telling Jake who her Master is.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
I can't believe you don't have more reviews on this story. I know it is one of my favorites and there are probably alot of people reading it. It is a great and different story. I will be more dilligent and review each chapter. Keep up the great work. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
i hope your blues don't last long. this is one of my favorite stories, and i don't just mean that it's on my list. i always look forward to updates from you because you're a lot more consistent than other writers. and you don't need me to tell you that your story rocks!! how many other vampire dom and human sub stories are out there? yours is the first i've discovered. everything's so intense with your characters. how many stories have an esme who oversteps edward's boundaries and tries to force him to mate with tanya? you're an original. be encouraged. i love your story!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hope you get over the "blues" really soon! Your story is facinating. It drew me in from the very first line and has kept me wrapped up in it. I look forward to every update and drop everything to go read each new chapter....even at work. *grin* I know....I'm a naughty girl...hmmmm...wonder if Edward would come and punish me????? Hey! A girl can dream....right???
Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
hey i like your storie
i would like to translate your story be my sub into german
so i would like if you could give me the permission to do it
i hope you answere me back soon
c y iceblossom
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
No writing blues! I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see where it will go. I read this out take on the blog and it did fill in quite a lot. Thanks so much for writing it!
Lisa
Date: 26 Mar 2011 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am really enjoying your story and it's good she already knows about the wolves so when Edward tells her his secret she shouldn't be so suprised, but he better tell her soon. Don't be too discouraged about not receiving reviews maybe the people reading your story just don't know what to say. I love reading the stories but when it comes to leaving reviews I sometimes just don't know what to say, leaving little statements like that was great jujst don't seem sufficient but I guess any comment from people letting you know they are enjoying the story is better than none. Keep up with the writing please I am really enjoying reading it.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
loved it very much thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can....
Date: 26 Mar 2011 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 15
I am sorry you have the writing blues I wish I could help. You are a wonderful writer and I have enjoyed everything you have wrote. I think some people are just not happy with themselves so they try to bring others down. They are the ones with a problem not you. I hope I made you feel a little better??? I enjoyed Bella POV I was wondering if she knew about the wolfs or not so it should not be that hard for her to get when Edward tells her about him and his family. As always I will be waiting for more.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
Hello my lovely! For some reason I haven't been getting updates like normal from TWCS! I missed the last update! Oh well, I can't complain to much when I get to read TWO...well THREE with your update, chapters at once.
So Bella can read thoughts to can she. So she's a shield AND a mind reader? Or does it only work with Edward? That would be kind of cool, just something that they share together.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 15
It was nice to see Bella Pov and th history behinded her Sub personallty. But I like Ed pov.
I hope your get out of your writting blues soon............. Cheer up the words will come.. and even if you don't get a review your story are very well loved.
:)Leona
Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for the update I really enjoyed it.
It's weird how some times stories are good & people read but don't review, not sure why and I'm glad it doesn't stop you from writing;D). I've really enjoyed reading this story & hope you'll continue it to it's end.
Thanks for writing
<3 <3 <3
Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
Though I may not review often, I read very quickly. I greatly enjoy your writing ang want to thank you for sharing your gift with us.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm sorry you have writer's blues. You're such an incredible writer, I hate to think you might have writer's block. I'm reading several of your stories and am loving them all. Like "The Third Wife" & "When The Missing Come Home" & "The War Of The Worlds" as well as this one "Be My Sub".
I'm not much of a reviewer, since all my reviews would likely sound the same over and over again. Please know that those of us that are reading your stories are loving them so much.
You have some other stories you're writing but that I haven't started reading yet. I don't want to have a whole list of WIP's that I need to keep up with. Because then the stories all start to run together and I get confused. But rest assured, I do plan to read everything E/B you write. I seriously wish I had a talent like yours.
By the way, I love all the characters you have created in this story. They are so believable. Edward is to die for. I adore Esme, she definitely loves like a mother. Alice cracked me up at the lesson. Plus I feel really sorry for Bella, now that I know her side of the story. Billy Black is a prick.
Thank you so much for sharing, I do appreciate it.
hugz
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
love the chapter
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
I loved this insight into Bella's history. It was very illuminating. Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 15
Well, I loved hearing Bella's side of her story. I am making an assumption here so bear with me please. This is what Edward heard in the chapter before?
I love your stories. I will admit that sometimes I read and not review, but that is only when I read on my iphone. It just will not let me leave a review. I can write one using my phone on fanfiction. It is wierd.
Anyway, please try to get out of the slump you find yourself in. There are many people who love your stories. I am sorry that they read and do not review, but atleast they are reading. I know that is no consolation, but I think you are a very imaginative, clever, and talented. ;)
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
That was amazing! I really loved it so much! Don't let anyone tell you otherwise, this story is AMAZING!
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
you are doing a great job, but you should write for your own happiness not that of others.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
Interesting insight... poor girl to be unwanted. Thanks for the update, I really enjoy this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 15
thanks awsome chapter
Date: 26 Mar 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
WELL.. I LOVE YOUR WRITTING... and I think you rock... so for what it's worth, I loved the chapter.. Thank you so much...
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
Interesting, why doesn't she want to tell Jake about her Master? Many questions but love this story!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 15
Girl who did it who made you sad tell me I will go and beat them up you are a amazing writer and you shouldn't let anyones else tell you different I dont know who what or why I do know its crap
Date: 22 Mar 2011 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
I just had to look up Bloodwood. That is a very pretty wood!! Love the red hue! Simply beautiful!!
Hmmmm...........so could Bella read Edward's mind or are they just that intune with each other? *Squee* The ILU's have been said!
Cracked me up:
Her eyes twinkled when I held up the ruler paddle. 'Seriously? Nothing says I want to spank you like a new paddle.'
Or you could have said, "Nothing says I love you like a new paddle"!!!! LOL!!
Went and read Bella's POV. I am totally an EPOV kind of girl but reading BPOV added so much to your story. Really enjoyed reading it.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Keye
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2011 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
I loved it!!!! They finally both admitted it and it was perfect!!! I am curious how Bella seemed to hear his thoughts.
Date: 20 Mar 2011 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
AWESOME!!
Date: 19 Mar 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
wonderful chapter! how unique that bella can hear edward's thoughts the same way he hears hers. i really like this story. it's one of my favorites.
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2011 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
I really enjoyed how they spoke with one another and are now a couple, so nice.
Date: 19 Mar 2011 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
* Thud!!!* OMG i realy need to take a cold shower right now i think! I'm about to go food shopping....How will i concentrate on what i have to get with this in my head? I'm amazed i'm so drawn and it's only chapter 1!!!
Date: 19 Mar 2011 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
I think the new play room is going to work just great. I was so happy they told each other how they feel.
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
I am so happy that Edward told Bella that he loved her, and that he wanted a D/s relationship as well as a vanilla one. I am also so glad that Bella agreed.
Edward finally saw into Bella's mind without any cut offs. If the outtake is what he saw, then I agree that it is very informative!
Can Bella hear Edward in her mind? The way that it was 't written seemed like she could, but I am not sure. Maybe they were just thinking the same thing?
I can't wait to see what our favorite couple goes through next...Also I am dying for an update to The Third Wife.
Date: 19 Mar 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
Wow, that was AMAZING! I really loved it so much! I am so happy they finally admitted their love for one another! Cannot wait to see what happens next ;)
Date: 19 Mar 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
Oooh- I'm so happy that they're now a 'couple' and said the 'I love yous'! This is such a great story! Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
the playroom was a success! so now they can enjoy themselves as a couple....hope it works out
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2011 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
as always awsome chapter
Date: 18 Mar 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
another wonderful chapter.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
great chapter, read the outtake, very well done !!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
wow! Loved how he finally revealed how he feels about her, and she heard him too! Interesting twist. The outtake was wonderful, so now I do get that she knows about the Pack and the Shape Shifters, but knows nothing of the Vamps! Interesting!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
As always awesome awesome awesome
Date: 18 Mar 2011 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
Awww... great chapter. They declared themselves. The outtake on our blog answered a lot of questions. I can't wait for more.
Date: 18 Mar 2011 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 10 The faux pas
Totally hot story and it has a plot!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2011 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
Loved the chapter and the outtake. Its really nice to see Edward and Bella, moving closer to each other. Maybe that will ease some of their fears and insecurities. Until the next time.